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Posted: 5 years ago

What shubhra is hurt over and expecting is that let there be civility at least when we meet my parents. IMO the max she can best out of this is meet her parents, keep in touch and it's best to leave Tapan and their equation out of this. That's her curse.

I feel really bad for shubh. Yes, it's not equal, yes it's not ideal . I mean Who wouldn't want their spouse to be cordial with in-laws. If she's at parul's now seeing him make chai for his sister's FIL, she's going to be even more hurt . But...forget making chai for her parents someday ,even expecting him to accompany her and drink chai at her parents , maintain civility is a tough ask now . Good she's at her parents and not with Tapan and parul tonight.

The one thing Tapan can do here though is stop being an ass with her, understand her hurt even if he cannot help do anything about it . Slightest of rest, tiredness, break that his sister needs , he's tuned in to , clued and nice enough to arrange for a social and offer to make dinner, get his sister's mood pepped up, make chai for Gagan's dad so that his sister can lounge a little more... I mean that's so nice of him isn't it?

So he has to learn quickly to be that bit considerate of why his fiancé is hurt now and not completely dismiss it or flick it away like how one would click away a ppt slide . Don't coax her to say something mushy now. Feels out of place honestly .Let her be. She'll most likely be back tmrw , and he can once again plaster and tape mend the hurt coochie cooing . As much as it is her curse, it's his too. Let him not get too comfortable saying oh it's her parents, her problem.

Edited by Errrantnomad - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago

You got it right Errrantnomad.

The equation with the parents will not resolve anytime soon. But at least he can be sensitive towards Shubhra and not keep snubbing her like he does.

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Posted: 5 years ago

I have been reading the first few chapters of the story. When I first picked it up, I had just skimmed through most of it to catch up quickly. So went back to read the early ones


Thats what caused the thread confusion.

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Posted: 5 years ago

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#Bas

Parul was upset that Nitin was leaving without visiting one more time

Tapan was upset over yet another fight with Shubhra

Its like the family could not get a break

"Chachu can you take me to aucquade? (video game arcade)" Arya hung from his arm

"Midget, first learn to say the word" he teased as he swung her

"Can shubaaa come"

"Like I said its ARC-AYDE"

"Acquayde" she repeated

"I am telling you this is going to be a whole new language" he laughed heartily

"Meri beti ko taane mat maaro" Parul curled up like a kitten on the divan

Her in laws were in her bedroom

"Vyas bhai se baat ki?" she whispered

"Did u want me to?"

"YEAH" she was irritated

"I am telling you I CAN GIVE U THE MONEY"

"Nahii aur kitne laakh loon main?" she whisper shouted

"Thats dumb you cant ask your in-laws for anything"

"No I am not asking you dummy... THEY said they were selling the old Haldwani flat, Vyas got a huge chunk, I am just asking you to dig in"

"I am not doing it. I am buying Gagan another car"

She flung the oblong pillow at him

It landed on the fresh flower vase on the coffee table tipping it over

"Tumhari wajah se"

"Nope... you are silly"

"Silly kya hai, its not like I am grabbing the whole thing. Aur TUM meri in-laws ke maamle mein mat pado"

"EXACTLY, So I will not ask Vyas Bhai if he got his share or not"

Tapan rotated Arya like a baton as she giggled and gurgled

"TAPANNNN" Parul hissed

"Zor se baat karo, your whisper is like yelling"

"Aaaah... " she sat up pulling her hair literally

"I will ask Arya"

"You are MAD!" he shook his head disgusted

"Nitin se baat karo"

"Not a chance" he growled

"Arey... Gagan aur meri kal raat ko ladai hui" she whispered again

"Oh boy! Your Mom's whisper is like a decibel sound" he told Arya

"I KNOW DESSIMEL" Arya promised

"Of course you do" he rolled his eyes

"One by one is .5" she said studiously

"Fantastic" he laughed under his breath, exhausted as he hoisted her over his shoulder

"One by TWO" parul whispered

"I doubt your in-laws will care about Math lessons" Tapan laughed at her openly

"TUM NA mujhe agal kar dogey... Please Tapan baat karo Nitin se"

"I am sorry... he is on his self pity road trip now" he grunted as Arya yanked his hair

"TELL him he is a fool Gagan loves him"

"OH YEAH... How could I not remember THAT

" Taan was sarcastic

She flung another pillow at him

This time he caught it

"Pata nahi how she is marrying you" "U are so f---- sarcastic"

"Pehli baat DONT SWEAR, second, she doesnt get sarcasm"

"I promise?" Arya pinched her throat

"Not that swearing midget, the kind your Ma does"

"Meri beti midget nahi hai"

"Hai"

"I am so tired of making everything better between people" Parul began to cry

"OK game over" Tapan brought Arya down and sent her off

"OK listen... how about I invite Mohit Heer and a couple others for dinner tonite main banata hoon Chinese"

"Shubhra?"

"she is going to her parents"

His expression changed

"KYON?"

He shrugged

"TUM?"

"What?"

"WHY did u send her?"

"I didnt, she wanted to go"

"You should go" She whispered as she heard Bauji outside the room

"Nope"

"tapan what if they kidnap her"

"Ive taught her enough so she can get away"

"Tapan mazaak nahi hai"

"Beta chai bana lo" Bauji requested grunting

"Jee jee" she slid her legs off the divan

"I will... lay down"

"Arey nahi not when he is in the living room"

"Go sleep in my room"

Parul looked at him thoughtfully

"Jao" he ordered

She yawned and got up

"Bauji Tapan bana lega chai aapki"

"Saath mein woh bitiya kya laayin woh... strawberry waala woh... kya hai?"

Parul yawned again

"Woh dher saari cheez laayin kaun se cheez"

"Wohi short sa cake hai biskut hai"

"Shortcake?" Parul suppressed laughter

"Do bhai Bauji ko" she instructed Tapan

"Sure" Tapan nodded getting milk out of the frig

"Bauji usme anda hai" Parul declared

"CHALO KOI nahi" Bauji chuckled waving a hand to shush her "Ma ko nahi batana"

"Haye Ram JHOOTH" she egged him on

"To aaj kaun sa mera upwas hai" Bauji was a cool cucumber

"Bauji NOIDA aapko bigaad rahi hai"

"Arey NOIDA ka to pata nahi... haan Tapan ki bahu zaroor bigaade hai hamey"

tapan chuckled

"You and me both grandpa" he whispered

In a surge of love he texted her

"talk?"

He didnt hear a word

6 or so hours later as he chopped bok choy and shitake mushrooms for chowmein, he texted her again

On her new cell phone

No response

He called her

She answered softly

"Phone kyon nahi utha rahi tum"

"What happened"

"Are u... in.."

"I know dont say it, it probably hurts you to say it, yeah in Mehrauli"

"You are right It does" he was bitter

After a long silence

"I am making Chinese, but looks like you are staying over" he said exhaling audibly to exercise self control

"They are my parents"

"Of course"

It was good she didnt get sarcasm

"Keep your phone charged, somewhere hidden and call me in the morning" he ordered hiskily

A wave of thrill swept over her at the possessive diktat

"they won't hurt me" she was sure

"No, they might have the dude chant vows while you are asleep (and u could find yourself married)" he said coldly

"Whoa?"

"Call me in the morning Shubhra"

"Hmm"

"Kaho kuch" he begged tossing the noodles on the wok

"About what?"

"Chalo main kehta hoon" "I am going to put everything you said this morning on hold" " and say" to to miss you tonight" he spoke gruffly

"Uh.. um..K"

"Bas?"

"I was not lashing out Tapan I spoke after much thought"

"Like I said I dont want to talk about our morning fight"

Parul peeked

"Aata hoon ek second"

"Its OK u can go" Shubhra urged

"Thanks... "

"Sure"

Gawd! she didnt get sarcasm

"AND?" he prodded her to say something mushy

"You didnt want to go with me!!!" she reminded deeply hurt

"Theek hai m

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Posted: 5 years ago

Shubhra has to understand that there is no love lost between her parents and Tapan. Her father ordered a hit twice on Gagan, Swindled his father. Her mother insulted the family. They have some serious making up to do to get into the good books of Acharya family.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Just not mine!

"Ek baar jaane se pehle MIL lo" he ordered his brother

"Mushkil hai" Nitin sulked

"KAL taq time tha?"

"Arey aap jaante hain Kusum ki 560 cousins rehti hain yahan NOIDA"

"Aur aapki sirf ek Di hai"

"jaanta hoon tabhi shaadi ke 3 mahiney ke andar aaya bhaagta hua biwi ko lekar" "I dont make big money like u bhai"

"Main tumhe keh raha hoon I am ready to help, College padhaya abhi help nahi kar sakta hoon kya?"

"Arey nahi bhai"

"Flat dekhi ho NOIDA mein to bata... kothi nahi dila sakta Sector 40 ya 40 pe" Tapan laughed "40 crore dono ko alag alag tujhe aur Di ko dene ko mere paas hotey to"

Arey NAHI bhai" Nitin was truly embarrassed

"Dekhi flat?"

"nahi bhai ab to Europe rehna chahti hai Kusum"

"Nice"

"Aata rahoonga India, aya na ab?"

"Thats not a favour Nitin" Tapan was sad

"Meri wajah se to chot nahi lagi na?"

"Maine aapko kal raat ko sab explain kiya, you are using it against me now?" "taana mat maaro yaar I am dealing with some really bad people here"

"Bhai, I dont know kya chakkar hai Grovers aur aapke beech. Main Di ko love karta hoon, but meri bhi ab family hai" "Har baat par nahi aa sakta India"

"I told u honestly kya hai Grovers ke saath"

"AAPNE aisi ladki kyon chuni?" Nitin was baffled

"Maine chuni thi Sanchita Maheshwari yaad hai?"

"Humm" Nitin swallowed

"Kya hua uske saath? Unless I am firing blanks abhi taq ho chuke hotey mere 3 bache. (tapan laughed at himself)We all made sacrifices when Ma Papa left us. Tumhe jata nahi raha hoon Nitin. Tumhari wahah se nahi guzere"

"JINKI wajah se guzre aap unki daughter se shaadi kar rahe hain"

"BATAYA na maine kal raat ko woh aisi nahi hai

“Mere ko saari baaten ajeeb lag rahi hain”

“To theek hai that has nothing to do with you refusing to come over before your departure”

“Umm” Nitin struggled

“I might be doing the most foolish thing marrying Shubhra Nitin, but us baat ko use karke Di to ko mat satao”

“Di ko to main like karta hoon”

“jeeju ne kya bigada, woh ICU mein they 4 din” Tapan was tearful

“Umm.”

“Rehem kar yaar”

“AAP ho na” Nitin spoke gruffly

“He treats us like kids kaise kar sakte ho aise”

“Kyon ki MAIN dekh sakta hoon unki aankhon mein AAP nahi”

“Kuch nahi hai unki aankhon mein, he stayed awake sleepless nights when u got dengue, he worried and borrowed money jab tumhe school se Singapore jaane ka chance mila”

“Jo bhi hai” Nitin mumbled

“care karte hain yaar AA JAA, pair padta hoon” Tapan was tearful

“Arey rey kya baat keh di”

“Sach mein MAIN pad jaoonga tere pair”

“Nahi nahi”

“Aaja please jaane se pehle”

tapan was standing in Parul’s master bedroom balcony whispering agitatedly over the phone

“Koshish kar sakta hoon”

“Nahi, aaja chahe 10 min ke liye”

“Umm”

“Main chahe ghar se bahar chala jaata hoon”

“arey nahi AAP kyon jaaoogey.. jin”(jinko jaana chahiye?)

“Galat baat kar raha hai yaar tu”

“Dubeys aap logon ki feast karna chahte the”

“koi baat nahi”

“nahi nahi... maine kaha mamla thoda sensitive hai” Nitin was mighty proud of himself

“Huh”

“I told them, wahan se to koi aayega nahi... unki mother to bahut hi fi hai, pata nahi khud bhai ko wahan entry milegi ya nahi” Nitin cracked hismelf up

“Yeh baat hai” Tapan nodded carelessly

He was too exhausted to defend himself

“Aap laut rahe ho Green Card chhodkar?” Nitin wanted more tea

“Hmm.. shaayad”

“AREY. ITNE saare paise invest ho gaye batao”

“Koi baat nahi uska kaam hai yaha

"Arey unka kaam to property ka hai"

"To?"

"Umm.. matlab, Kusum ki tarah CA, CPA wagairah karwa lo"

"Woh Kusum ki tarah smart nahi hai"

"Bhai uska ek attempt mein ho jaayega shaayad" Nitin was so proud

"Wow" Tapan was genuinely impressed

"Maine aata hoon thodi der mein"

"flight kitni baje ko hai?"

"Subah 4:17 bhai"

"Usko bhi lekar aa, chow mein banayi hai teri favorite" Tapan enticed him

"Jee aata hoon" Nitin smiled

Tapan texted Shubhra again... it was after 8 PM

His friends were here

"Do u mind if I continue to help my family a bit after we are married?"

She didnt respond for an hour

A strange fear clamped his stomach muscles

Parul's line from the afternoon "Kuch kar denge to?"

He called her

She answered huskily

"where are you?"

"In the shower"

An image of silvery rivulets of water cascading down her glistening body was more unsettling than fear

"Umm.. uh" "Send me a selfie I dont believe it" he demanded

she didnt believe he was doing dirty talk either

"Umm.. no Tapan" her voice trembled

"Aa jao yaar ghar, office mein pull out bed par nahi sona padega" "we can sleep here" he begged

"No Tapan.." she was defiant

He sighed

"CALL to karo"

"I am busy"

"Kitni der se naha rahi ho?"

"None of your business"

"Mohit heer ko kya kahoon"

"Tell them you refused to go with me to my parents so I went alone" in her usual matter of fact way

"Nothing between us is simple... is it?" he growled

"I have to go back to the shower" she reminded "Why did you call?"

"I miss you" he agonized

She sighed

"Will I see you tomorrow?"

"Umm"

"Have a good night... I love you, I bet you look s--- as F in the n---" he said softly

"Umm.. bye"

She saw his text as her teeth chattered in the cold moist bathroom

It was about helping his family

"Sure Tapan... I know you love your family.... just not mine" she said

Her responses were always pithy and to the point

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Posted: 5 years ago

One more update please di.....

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Posted: 5 years ago

Tapan has a good heart. He is literally begging Nitin to come home, so sweet. He is always Parul and Gagans advocate 💕

Edited by jaschick - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago

Well Shubhra, your family has not given him a reason to love them.


Tapan convinced Nitin to show his face before leaving.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Chance Encounter

He dropped family off and parked far away from the bustle of Khan Market. Parul loved the market though Gagan would never allow her to shop there.

Now with him being indisposed she hijacked her in-laws and headed there with Vyas and Tapan

Arya was home too along with Rahul so it was a veritable bounty

Tapan was spending his days tryingt o investigate the hit and run. There were no leads and no one was willing to step up to identify the Tata Sumo

The security footage from the guard station at the gate showed the camera tilted sideways for some reason so it was not capturing cross traffic

He had let the security team be dormant for now, just guarding Gagan for the most part

"Strawberry itni mehangi, hamare haldwani mein itne mein 2 kg mil jaawe hai" MIL was not happy

"Yeah KHAN MARKET hai Ma, yahin se khareedte hain aapke saare pyaare Unnao, Hardoi ke MP, Jai Prakash Rawat, Sakshi Maharaj wagerah

"Unko itna paisa nahi milta" Amma was defensive

"Sure Ma" Parul rolled her eyes

"Yahi rehte hain woh Pandara Rd"

"To Vyas ko kahen Bauji ko milwa laayen" Amma had her agenda

Vyas was shaking with laughter

Parul was his favorite of his two SILs

She was affectionate and simple

Her brother was rolling in money in Chicago but she always dressed simply and gave generous gifts

"Amma Tapan par MP se zyaada Lakshmi ji ka bhaag hai" Vyas teased

"Haan woh to hai, kaam kitna karey hai woh..." Amma loved him too sadly, thank god Nitin was not within ear shot

Parul entered a ice cream shop/cafe and ordered

They ate the ice cream and were stepping out when they ran into Tapan

"40 minute lagey tumhe?" Parul was shocked

"You timed it?" he laughed

"Haan Amma ne tumhare liye kaafi achhi baaten bolin tum to the nahi"

"Amma loves me" he hugged MIL

"Main to iske liye hamesha achhi baat kahoon"

"Oho... Ma aapka ek beta bhi hai yahan" Parul winked at Vyas

"Beta Bauji ko belt leni thi" Amma started showering love on her husband

"Di lets go to Da Milano" Tapan herded the family through crowds

"SHUBHRAAA" Parul yelled

Shubhra had lowered her window and was asking the parking attendant for directions

There were empty spots "reserved" just like every pl;ace in India

For the wealthy and connected

Being a property dealer and a crook Manik was no stranger to this market

the attendant blew his whistle and moved cars out of the way

"Shubhraaa" Parul yelled

"madam yahan laga lo aap abhi ke liye" the attendant invited her to park in yet another spot

Shubhra's face broke into the biggest smile

"Amma Tapan ki bahu"

Achha jee?" Amma wanted to chat too

Bauji grumbled as he stepped off the corridor... wincing as his knee hurt

Tapan walked around casually and waved

"Hi!"

"I am showing... or should say I showed houses" she mumbled

"Ah"

"Gale nahi lagogi?"

"Tapan I am wearing a dress" she whispered peeking out the window as Tapan bend down

She was indeed he noticed, a grey summer dress with yellow polka dots, unusually bright for her taste he noticed

"Love it" he whispered in her ear

"I cant get off"

"UTROOO!" Parul shrieked

"Tapan"

"I doubt Amma cares"

"Uncle is there nahi?"

"He is too grumpy to look at you" Tapan laughed

She gingerly got off, and hid behind the partially closed door

"Arey?" Parul looked at her curiously

"I am wearing a dress"

"Achhi baat hai na?" Parul mocked

Shubhra did not get sarcasm "Yeah its one of my faves"

"Nobody cares" Tapan gently peeled her off the car door

"I am sorry Aunty" Shubhra mumbled

"Kyon?"

"Maine dress pehani hai"

"Poti ke umar ki ho tum" Amma hugged her tight

Bauji was like "Get me outta here I dont care who wears what"

"You look adorable" Parul was now free to praise Shubhra since Nitin was not in ear shot

"Ghar pe sab log aaye the aap nahi aayin" Vyas enquired

"i went to my Mom and Dad's" she lowered her gaze

"Tumne family reunion miss kar diya" Parul declared

"I heard there was good food" she smiled

"Thanks... finally koi to achhi baat boli" Tapan exclaimed clapping

"Jo HUM boley WOH?" amma pretended to be hurt

"Amma biwi to gussa hai, usko thoda sa mana loon chalkar?"

"You are married?" Shubhra asked the most inane question

Parul and Vyas laughed uncontrollably

Amma did a face palm

"Aapko keh rahe hain shaayad" Vyas explained

"Umm.. OK"

"We have to buy a belt for Bauji and then we plan to eat pizza, care to join?"

"I have dinner plans at home" she said quietly

"JA uske saath, Bhayya hain Bauji ka haath woh pakad lenge" Parul whispered shoving him

"Dono ne ek rang ke kapde pehne hain" Amma pointed to Tapan's tan shorts and lemon yellow tee

"Haan Ma hain to dono romantic"

"See you in 30?" Tapan turned to ask Parul

"30 nahi 3 ghante" Parul ordered

"When is dinner?" he growled grabbing her hand as they snaked through the cars

"Oh no I was not supposed to park there"

"I doubt he would mind it... prin"

"You think my Dad owns the parking lot"

"Oh no... the market? possibly!"

She tried to pull her hand away

"OK I am sorry" he begged

"No" she mumbled stiffly

"Lets go sit down, let me buy you a glass of wine and we can chat? please?"

She let him hold her hand and they walked into a pub

It was still light out the crowd was thin

They found a spot by the windows

On tall bar stools

Ordered wine

"Who did you show the houses to?"

He was clevery drawing her out...

She explained

"I am trying to recuperate some losses" she finished after explaining what she has been doing

"Hmm"

"thanks for the wine" she sipped

"Can I say something?" he nodded in ack

"If u are going to justify why you cannot see my parents..."

"I am not the bad guy Shubhra" he growled

"My parents are?"

"I... I mean... if u want to hear it honestly... then yes"

Her face fell

" I am not going to let him blackmail me" he declared

"Go to dinner" he tapped her finely manicured nails with the glossy silver pink polish

"I am eating at home"

"Then stay here and flirt with me" he ordered

"We are engaged" she said matter of factly

He burst out laughing at her "Yep! romance ends when its all official" tone.......

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