Once Upon a Midnight Part II - Page 54

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Posted: 5 years ago

Tapan wrapped an arm casuallya round Shubhra's waist and steered her


"Chalo"


"hmm"


"Don't say a word" he warned


This was 😍😍😍

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Posted: 5 years ago

Big or small?

Nitin did not have to go there. He is just assuming things now.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Kindred spirit

itin has failed to see what the family has done for him. He thinks he always gets the short end of the stick, which is not true. His lashing out at Gagan was the worst. The man has stood by them selflessly.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Lashing out at subhra was a no ..I mean what did she do

Lashing out at Gangan was worst ..the man who stood by the siblings for so long with love care affection. Not just him his parents too

Nitin his in place can lash out at Tapan maybe for whatever he felt but it should have been private

Our fam calls me and bro the Siamese twins. Since we usually have each others back. But this does not mean we do not have disagreements or arguments in private. We have huge shouting matches. Usually only Bhabhi has been privy to a couple of them. But usually it is in private and in public we do have each others back. Whatever it may be we sort it in private. This was our agreement when he was 16 and I was about 14. Our younger two siblings do not follow this since past few years and have taken a swipe at me or bro sometimes. But I still try resolve in private.

Bhai I guess has more or less given up trying to sort and is just civil and maintains a cordial relationship.

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Posted: 5 years ago

I don't understand why Nitin is so hostile with Gagan. He has been there for them and always supported them if Nitin can't respect Gagan for being a father figure or an elder brother atleast he should respect Gagan as his elder sister's husband.. it hurts parul so much to stuck in the middle. I hope Nitin comes around before things get worse

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Posted: 5 years ago

Please updateeeeee........waiting eagerly..

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Pihu002

Please updateeeeee........waiting eagerly..

Me too waitingggg

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Posted: 5 years ago

Similar Dissimilar

"There is no similarity" Tapan growled flinging his tee shirt on a chair as he changed before her

"You have to give him a chance"

"You think I am not" Tapan argued

"He sounded so emotional" Shubhra tidied an already clean room

"Its not even cluttered" he shouted when he begged for her attention

"You throw things everywhere"

"There we go!" he just crashed on the bed

"Tapannn... remove the top sheet"

"I thought we were arguing over Nitin"

"You dont have to see it from his POV"

"Jeeju put his life on hold for us... he is whining like a baby over Rs 1000?"

"He must be hurt tho.."

"He is ALWAYS hurt... and again NO similarity between you and him"

"You cannot force me to align my thoughts with yours" she told him calmly

"Oh believe me... I am NOT. I dont care pity him as much as you want"

"I am not pitying him"

"You told me on your way up here "If he feels hurt you have to make an extra effort" That reeked of "This is what "I" would have wanted my parents to do but the never did"

"I tell you honestly what my parents have NOT done Tapan" she rubbed lotion on her hands as she leaned on the bathroom door

"I don't have to hide behind Nitin"

He felt awkward for a brief second

"You know how I feel" "i told you that even before I fe"

"KAHO mooh kholkar" he ordered huskily

She gazed down self consciously

"I havent heard one goddamn time" he was being petulant

He shifted the pillows behind his back

"Instead I hear a lot of Nitin this Nitin that"

"Hes your BROTHER for FS" "Are you going to let him get away?"

"Oh please every year when he is here he throws a fit like this"

She turned around shut out all the lights after putting everything back neatly

He turned on the phone light

She didnt appear for a few minutes

"want me to come get you?" he growled

"No" she said coldly still not coming to bed

He got off the bed

Walked over to the supplies room, she was bent over her phone

He hoisted her and carried her back to bed

"You are pretty sick if you think I am projecting my insecurities on Nitin" she panted

He placed her in bed gently and just mounted her

"tapannn"

"ek baar yaar" he growled on her neck

"This is not even about US" gasped

"Thank God" he nodded kissing as he rolled her shorts off

"Your sister and BIL genuinely love YOU over him" she was teary over THAT!

"And YOU love Nitin" he scowled

"Bechaara"

He kissed her senseless, they made love quietly except for her soft whimpers

"Di ke saamne mat kaho she is being unfair to him" he held her in his arms later

"I want him to be close to you"

"That boat has sailed" Tapan said sadly

"Don't say that" she ordered

"I seem to be screwing up over and over again... he knows I was envious of him, he knows I have no self control and could not wait until I got married" he fondled her gently

"he is your BROTHER" she shouted

"this argument is going nowhere" he said yawning

"tapann"

"Unless you want to say you are in love with me dont talk" he growled

"Why would I agree to marry you then?" she asked in shock

"To spite your Mom?" "pawan?" he reminded

"You... use people... not ME" she was hugely offened, she pulled away sitting up

"Go ahead feel superior" he rolled over and slept

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Posted: 5 years ago

I kind feel Nitin here when shub explainded

Maybe sometimes the younger siblings feel left out

Sometimes when we were younger my younger sis would crib that I tell bro first and not her 🤔

No idea how this can be resolved maybe give him some more importance...spend more time. That's what I used to do spend a alone weekend with her or something

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Posted: 5 years ago

I m trying to understand nitin but can't.....

Firstly I thought if tapan will say sorry to him and explain him his point then might be he will understand BUT no his problem is deep rooted, his relationship with gagan is the main issue. He thinks he is neglected by his family members especially gagan and parul. He has developed a lot of insecurities.

But still he can't hide behind all his insecurities and just blame others.Its the best thing in this world to do. Because blaming others is very easy. When their parents died his elder brother and brother in law tried to be a father figure to him. They tried to safeguard him from problems. Why can he see that??? There is a good age gap between him and gagan. He can't be that much friendly to him as he is to tapan. He has to understand this. I agree maybe gagan loves tapan a little more than nitin but it's because they feel for the guy. A guy who was working hard day and night just to provide everything to his family but in his personal life he was so lonely. Now when he is getting his share of happiness they are happy for him. So why can't nitin just put aside all his insecurities for sometime and be happy for his brother once?? Moreover he has now added shubra also in his taunting list..

And I totally agree with tapan that shubra is feeling so much for NITIN and thinking him as a bechara because she is comparing her situation with him. But there is a hell lot of difference between them. And she has to understand it. She is right when she said that tapan should try more in explaining and making nitin understand and may be he should also try to listen to nitin's insecurities. This can help him in resolving them.

Let's see what happens next .

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