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Posted: 6 years ago
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Superb update dear!!! Loved Dira Ratan moments... Ratan said sorry to Dira...Is Ratan melting??? Flashback scene n bathroom scenes were awesome... DiRa eyelock!!! Little Dira got happy as her father loves her... Dira is making DiRa close... Their night scene... Jealous Diya on seeing Ratan n Aliya together... Aliya doubts about Diya... Eagerly waiting for next part dear... Thanks dear for the PM... Update soon...
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Posted: 6 years ago
#32
Fantastic Part

Ratan and Diya got married but it seems like there is such a great
misunderstanding between them
Diya gets happy whenever Ratan is angry
and he always seem to take his anger out on both Diya and Dira
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Posted: 6 years ago
#33

Thanks a lot guys 4 the support



gopsss, plmzaq, sharda_123, Vampire2468, harshiidiv, vatika_r,

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Is loving you a mistake? Part 5

Aliya:May I know who is this?Is this Ratan's elder sister?
Diya became upset.Gopi was irritated while Ratan was tensed whether his marriage truth will be out before Aliya.
Gopi:This is...
Ratan was tensed.
Diya:I am Ratan's elder sister as you guessed.

Ratan was relieved while Gopi was shocked.
Gopi thought:What did you say now Diya?

Aliya smiled:Nice to meet you.I am Aliya,Ratan's close friend.
Diya gave her a pale smile:I am Diya.Nice to meet you too.
Aliya:I did'nt know that Ratan has an elder sister.

Gopi:No Aliya.It's not like you think.Actually Diya is...
Raran tried to divert Aliya's attention so that she won't listen to Gopi saying the truth about his marriage with Diya.
Ratan:Aliya...you are busy.Right?Guess you want to go for your project work.
Aliya:You are right Ratan.I need to go with Adi for my project work as he is my partner.
Ok..I am going.Bye.
Aliya went out.
Gopi:Why did you say like that Diya?
Diya's eyes were wet.
Diya:Because I knew that Ratan too wished to hear the same answer from me as he did'nt want our marriage to be known to his friends.
Diya walked away weeping silently.
Gopi stared at Ratan:Because of you...for you..Diya lied.
Ratan:What is my fault?I did not make Diya say such a lie?Aliya thought so as Diya looks mature in cfront of me.
Gopi:But you could have corrected her revealing the truth.But you did'nt say it.Even I could'nt tell her the truth.
Ratan:Leave it mom.
Ratan walked away.


Ahem Gopi called Ratan Diya.
Ahem:We have arranged a fancy dinner for you both at the restaurant Blue moon for tonight.So be ready.

Diya was excited.
She thought:My first date with Ratan after marriage.Wow.
Diya:Thank you daddiji.
Ratan:I need to go to my friend's home for combine studies.After that I will come straight to the restaurant at 8 pm. Diya ...be there.
Diya smiled:Ok Ratan.
Gopi:Good that atleast Ratan did not oppose to join Diya for dinner.
Ahem:Yes.That's nice.


Diya was so excited that she wore a shiny black frock and make up.She reached the restaurant.She was surprised to see Ratan there.
Seeing her appearance Ratan was bowled over by her beauty.Diya blushed seeing him gaze at her romantically.
Ratan:Diya...you look gorgeous.
She blushed.

Ratan:May i have a dance with you pretty lady?
She nodded smiling.
Ratan held her hand


and started dancing.

Aate jaate hanste gaate Socha tha maine mann me kahi bar Wo pehli nazar
Halka sa asar karta hai kyun is dil ko Bekrar Rukke challna, challke rukkna Na jane tumhe he kiska intezaar Tera wo yakin Kahi me toh nahi Lagta he yahin kyun mujhko baar baar Ham ham. ham Ham ham. ham

They were immersed in the dance.


Aate jaate hanste gaate Socha tha maine mann me kahi baar Hotho ki kali kuch aur khili Yeh dil pe hua he kiska ikhteyaar Ham.ham .ham Ham ham. ham Woo... woo... woo...( "Golmaal Again").


They sat for dinner.They both fed each other.
Suddenly Diya realized that it was her imagination.
Diya:Why Ratan did not reach yet?
Diya rang up Ratan:Ratan...where are you?
Ratan:I am having dinner with my friends.
Diya was shocked.
Diya:But daddyji has arranged dinner for us.Right?
Ratan:How did you even think that I will join you for dinner when I am least interested in you?


Diya's heart was pierced.
Ratan:Guess you are at the restaurant. You enjoy the dinner.Don't waste my dad's money.
He smirked disconnecting the call.Diya was in tears.
She had the dinner alone.


Diya went back home.
Rashi:How was the dinner?

Diya:It was the best.

Ahem smiled:I knew it.
Gopi :Where is Ratan?
Diya lied:After dinner Ratan went back to his friend's house for combined studies.
Rashi thought:Why do I feel that still there is distance between Ratan and Diya?
Diya went to her room.
She caressed the sleeping Dira.
Gopi:Ahemji...why Diya is not looking happy.
Ahem:Seeing her alone I think that Ratan did not join her for dinner.Guess she lied to save him.
Gopi:Oh Diya always lies for Ratan.Infact she even lied to his friend Aaliya that she is his elder sister.
Ahem:What?Diya lied like that?
Gopi:Yes.And Ratan did'nt even correct it.
Ahem:Ratan is crossing his limit.Why did'nt you tell Aaliya the truth?
Gopi:I wanted to.But I was helpless Ahemji.
Ahem:Indirectly you are favouring Ratan's mistakes.That should'nt have happened.
Gopi:You are right Ahemji.I am also at fault.

Ratan came home late night and slept on the bed.Diya opened her eyes and looked at him painfully.


She covered him with the blanket properly.



Edited by jasminerahul - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome superb fabulous fantastic lovely update dear
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Superb update
Love it
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 6 years ago
#36
Superb update dear!!! Poor Diya she lied for Ratan that she is his elder sister...
Ratan didn't correct her... N not allowed Gopi too...
Ahem planned a dinner for DiRa... Diya was happy... I'm wishing Diya's imagination to happen really...
Ratan is getting more... Diya had her dinner alone... She lied to Ahem n Gopi for Ratan...
But they finds her sadness...which she was hiding... Loved it to the core dear... Eagerly waiting for next part... Thanks for the PM... N sorry for late reply...
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome updt
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Is loving you a mistake? Part 5

Aliya:May I know who is this?Is this Ratan's elder sister?
Diya became upset.Gopi was irritated while Ratan was tensed whether his marriage truth will be out before Aliya.
Gopi:This is...
Ratan was tensed.
Diya:I am Ratan's elder sister as you guessed.

😲😲

Ratan was relieved while Gopi was shocked.
Gopi thought:What did you say now Diya?

Yes what did u say Diya 😭

Aliya smiled:Nice to meet you.I am Aliya,Ratan's close friend.
Diya gave her a pale smile:I am Diya.Nice to meet you too.
Aliya:I did'nt know that Ratan has an elder sister.


No he has not 😳

Gopi:No Aliya.It's not like you think.Actually Diya is...
Raran tried to divert Aliya's attention so that she won't listen to Gopi saying the truth about his marriage with Diya.
Ratan:Aliya...you are busy.Right?Guess you want to go for your project work.

O God this Ratan 😡

Aliya:You are right Ratan.I need to go with Adi for my project work as he is my partner.
Ok..I am going.Bye.
Aliya went out.
Gopi:Why did you say like that Diya?

Yes exactly

Diya's eyes were wet.
Diya:Because I knew that Ratan too wished to hear the same answer from me as he did'nt want our marriage to known to his friends.
Diya walked away weeping silently.

Poor Diya 😒

Gopi stared at Ratan:Because of you...for you..Diya lied.
Ratan:What is my fault?I did not make Diya say such a lie?Aliya thought so as Diya looks mature in cfront of me.

This all is ur fault...Understand u better understand 😡

Gopi:But you could have corrected her revealing the truth.But you did'nt say it.Even I could'nt tell her the truth.
Ratan:Leave it mom.
Ratan walked away.


Ahem Gopi called Ratan Diya.
Ahem:We have arranged a fancy dinner for you both at the restaurant Blue moon for tonight.So be ready.


Yaaay

Diya was excited.
She thought:My first date with Ratan after marriage.Wow.

Yes 👏

Diya:Thank you daddiji.

Yes thank u so much 😳

Ratan:I need to go to my friend's home for combine studies.After that I will come straight to the restaurant at 8 pm. Diya ...be there.

🥱

Diya smiled:Ok Ratan.
Gopi:Good that atleast Ratan did not oppose to join Diya for dinner.
Ahem:Yes.That's nice.

Yes it's very nice 😊


Diya was so excited that she wore a shiny black frock and make up.She reached the restaurant.She was surprised to see Ratan there.
Seeing her appearance Ratan was bowled over by her beauty.Diya blushed seeing him gaze at her romantically.

❤️

Diya:Diya...you look gorgeous.

It should've been Ratan not Diya

She blushed.




Ratan:May i have a dance with you pretty lady?
She nodded smiling.


Ratan held her hand


and started dancing.

Aate jaate hanste gaate Socha tha maine mann me kahi bar Wo pehli nazar
Halka sa asar karta hai kyun is dil ko Bekrar Rukke challna, challke rukkna Na jane tumhe he kiska intezaar Tera wo yakin Kahi me toh nahi Lagta he yahin kyun mujhko baar baar Ham ham. ham Ham ham. ham

They were immersed in the dance.

😳😳😳

Aate jaate hanste gaate Socha tha maine mann me kahi baar Hotho ki kali kuch aur khili Yeh dil pe hua he kiska ikhteyaar Ham.ham .ham Ham ham. ham Woo... woo... woo...( "Golmaal Again").


They sat for dinner.They both fed each other.
Suddenly Diya realized that it was her imagination.

🥺🥺

Diya:Why Ratan did not reach yet?
Diya rang up Ratan:Ratan...where are you?
Ratan:I am having dinner with my friends.

Ratan 😡

Diya was shocked.
Diya:But daddyji has arranged dinner for us.Right?
Ratan:How did you even think that I will join you for dinner when I am least interested in you?


Diya's heart was pierced.

🥺

Ratan:Guess you are at the restaurant. You enjoy the dinner.Don't waste my dad's money.
He smirked disconnecting the call.Diya was in tears.
She had the dinner alone.




Diya went back home.
Rashi:How was the dinner?

Diya:It was the best.

Ahem smiled:I knew it.
Gopi :Where is Ratan?
Diya lied:After dinner Ratan went back to his friend's house for combined studies.
Rashi thought:Why do I feel that still there is distance between Ratan and Diya?

She is very unpredictable

Diya went to her room.
She caressed the sleeping Dira.
Gopi:Ahemji...why Diya is not looking happy.
Ahem:Seeing her alone I think that Ratan did not join her for dinner.Guess she lied to save him.
Gopi:Oh Diya always lies for Ratan.Infact she even lied to his friend Aaliya that she is his elder sister.
Ahem:What?Diya lied like that?
Gopi:Yes.And Ratan did'nt even correct it.
Ahem:Ratan is crossing his limit.Why did'nt you tell Aaliya the truth?
Gopi:I wanted to.But I was helpless Ahemji.
Ahem:Indirectly you are favouring Ratan's mistakes.That should'nt have happened.

No it's not Gopi's mistake 😲

Gopi:You are right Ahemji.I am also at fault.


No u are not

Ratan came home late night and slept on the bed.Diya opened her eyes and looked at him painfully.


She covered him with the blanket properly.

When u will understand Ratan 😕


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Posted: 6 years ago
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Sad that Ratan didn't correct Diya when she told aliya that she is Ratan's elder sister. Diya's imaginary date & dance with Ratan was romantic but sad that Ratan became nasty with Diya. Ahem telling Gopi that she has indirectly covered Ratan's mistake was right.
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Posted: 6 years ago
#40
Awesome update!!
Thanx for d pm:)

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