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Posted: 6 years ago
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Is loving you a mistake? Part6

After 2 months...

Ratan kept ignoring Diya.But once in a while when Dira insisted he spent time with her,not as a father,but as a friend.

Now Ratan and Diya are in a resort for their honeymoon.Ratan was not at all interested in honeymoon.But he was sent with Diya for honeymoon forcefully by Ahem and Gopi.
Diya:Ratan..this place is so beautiful.Shall we roam about the place?

Ratan:No way.Why will I accompany you?It will be so boring.
Diya became dull.
Ratan went out.
At midnight Ratan returned.He was drunk.Diya was shocked.
Diya:Ratan...you drank?I have never seen you drunk like this?

Ratan:When people are in depression what else can they do to forget their pain?You put me in pain Diya.Though I did'nt want to I had to marry you and spoil my own life.Why did you come back Diya?Why did you come back to destroy my life Diya?
Diya's heart was pierced terribly.

Suddenly Diya blasted at him:Stop it Ratan.You know very well that I love you.Then why should I destroy your life?I married you as I love you,not to destroy you.And if you did'nt want to marry me you should have told me openly rather than marrying me and blaming me after marriage.
Ratan:I don't want your love Diya.
Ratan fell unconscious on the bed.Diya burst into tears.
Diya:Why our beautiful relationship became like this Ratan?

The next morning Ratan woke up from sleep and recalled their previous night conversation.
He was embarrassed to face Diya.
He thought:Oh no.What did I tell Diya?I should not have been so rude and hurt Diya.I think i should apologize to Diya.
Diya:Ratan...Let us go back.
Ratan:Diya...yesterday night I...
Diya:No need of saying anything.Let us return home.There is no use of staying here.

They returned home.
Gopi:How was the honeymoon?
Ratan walked away ignoring her question.
Diya:Mummiji...there is no point in spending time together.Nothing is working out between us.

Gopi became upset:Don't say like that Diya.
Diya:But that's the truth mummiji.
Diya walked away.
Rashi:It's happening just like I feared.I always feared that even if Ratan marries Diya ,after marriage what will happen to them.I am even worried if Ratan will find true love in some other girl.
Gopi:Stop it Rashi.Nothing like that will happen as Ratan's true love is only Diya.
Rashi:I agree with you.But what if without realizing that Ratan would take a wrong step?
Gopi:No...it can't happen.

After a few days...

Dira:Mumma...now a days very rarely papa is seen at home.

Diya:Papa's exams are coming up.So he is busy.
Dira:I really miss papa.I want to see him.
Diya:But papa is in the college beta.

Dira:Please mumma.Please take me to papa.
Diya:Ok..I will take you there when the college hours get over.




Diya took Dira to Ratan's college.
There they saw Ratan,Adi and Aliya coming out of their classroom.Seeing Ratan,Dira got excited and ran towards him.
Dira:Papaaa
Dira hugged Ratan.
Diya was worried about Ratan's reaction.
Diya:Oh no.Dira addressed Ratan as her father before his friends.Now what will happen to Ratan?God..please make everything alright.

Ratan was frozen seeing Dira's action while Adi and Aliya were confused.
Aliya:Beta...who are you?
Dira:I am Dira.
Aliya:Sweet name.Why are you here?
Dira:I came to see my papa.
Adi:Who is your papa?
Dira:This is my papa.
She touched Ratan.
Adi and Aliya did not believe it.
Aliya:Where is your mumma?
Dira pointed her finger towards Diya.
Ratan stared at Diya angrily.

Aliya:That is Ratan's elder sister Diya.Means Ratan is your Mamu?

Dira:No.She is not my papa's sister.She is my papa's wife.I saw their wedding.Dadi told me that after wedding mumma became papa's wife.
Aliya:What nonsense!
Adi:I can't understand what this kid is saying.
Aliya:Me too.Ratan...why are you not saying anything?
Suddenly Adi remembered something.
Adi:Dira...Diya's Di and Ratan's ra.It means...

Aliya was stunned.
Aliya:Ratan...tell something.What is this kid saying?
Dira:Papa...come..we will go out with mumma.We will go the icecream parlour.Then the toy shop.

Adi:Say Ratan.
Aliya:For God sake say the truth Ratan.


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Posted: 6 years ago
#42
Superb fabulous fantastic lovely update dear
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Posted: 6 years ago
#43
Nice updt
Loved it totally
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Posted: 6 years ago
#44
Awesome update
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Posted: 6 years ago
#45
thanks 4 da pm! Feeling 4 Dia and Dira! Ratan is hurting Dia! what will happen now?

update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice update!!
Thanx for d pm:)
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Superb update dear!!! Ratan being rude to Diya... Gopi n Ahem sents DiRa for honeymoon... Ratan drunk n behaves rudely to Diya... Poor Diya she don't know what to do... Next day Ratan feels like apologize to Diya... But Diya says there is no more reason for staying there... Gopi n Ahem feels bad... Rashi doubts about Ratan... Dira insists to meet Ratan... Diya tries to stop her but last she takes Dira to Ratan's college... Dira calls Ratan papa... Aaliya n Adi stunned by her behaviour... Dira reveals that Diya n Ratan r her parents... Adi n Aliya asks Ratan to say truth... Loved it to the core dear... Is Ratan hates Diya more or he accept Diya n Dira??? Eagerly waiting for next part dear... Thanks for the PM... Update soon...
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice update Di
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Posted: 6 years ago
#49
That was such an Awesome Chapter
even the song choice was just amazing
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Posted: 6 years ago
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I guess Ratan has softened towards Dira but behaved rudely with Diya in the honeymoon. Sad they didn't spend quality time. Diya took Dira to Ratan's college where she called him Dad in front of his friends. Ratan got angrier with Diya. Waiting to see his reaction.

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