Is loving you a mistake? DiRa SS Last part-pg13 - Page 2

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Posted: 6 years ago
#11
u r right,in the original wedding pics too he is not happy.But since its a pre planed wedding I wanted Ratan to be in his wedding attire.And even Diya was'nt happy,but here Diya is happy to wed Ratan.So I did'nt use those pics.I felt the pic i used was perfect for the situation.

Originally posted by: Vampire2468

Yes Ratan is not happy for the wedding...Oh...But in the original wedding pic too he is not happy...Yes he is not dressed properly in RLHN...!!

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Posted: 6 years ago
#12
Nice update
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 6 years ago
#13
Lovely updt
Dira got married but ratan said he didn't love diya
Updt soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

u r right,in the original wedding pics too he is not happy.But since its a pre planed wedding I wanted Ratan to be in his wedding attire.And even Diya was'nt happy,but here Diya is happy to wed Ratan.So I did'nt use those pics.I felt the pic i used was perfect for the situation.

Yes ur right in that...Here it's pre planned wedding...In the original pic Diya is not happy but here she is😊Now I got it...😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Ratan destroy diya's dream of marriage life with
him and dira..

Nice update 👍🏼

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Dira cake feeding moments are cute. Loved Diya accepting the fact that she behaved like a foreigner in India & behaved like an Indian abroad, though Rashi apologized her. Ratan married Diya but is not happy with that marriage. Felt bad for Diya when Ratan told her that he married her only because of the past mistake & does not love her anymore nor can he accept Dira as his daughter.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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The episode was lovely and happening... Loved DiRa scenes... Ratan still regrets to do this and now the outcome is he is having a daughter who calls her papa... Lol btw i got stunned when i saw ratan's stomach : papa...🤣... Then i got that its dira saying😛... Updt soon 😉
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Posted: 6 years ago
#18
Thank you.Which Dira scene did u like?Bcz in my ss no one else likes DiRa scenes as its full of hatred😆.Ya...DiRa's daughter Dira jumped upon Ratan's stomach😃

Originally posted by: Riana31

The episode was lovely and happening... Loved DiRa scenes... Ratan still regrets to do this and now the outcome is he is having a daughter who calls her papa... Lol btw i got stunned when i saw ratan's stomach : papa...🤣... Then i got that its dira saying😛... Updt soon 😉

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Is loving you a mistake? Part 4


Thanks 4 the precious comments friends


Dedicated to Mansi who wants to know in what circumstance DiRa crossed their limit during school days.

Ratan was in the bath room.
Ratan:Oh no..I forgot to take my towel and new clothes inside.
He screamed:Diya...please bring the towel and dress I kept on the bed.
Diya:Ok Ratan.
She took them and went inside the bathroom.
She hanged them there.Suddenly she slipped and fell over Ratan.Ratan held her tight to prevent her fro falling.They both were under the shower.
Both shared an intense eye lock unknowingly.Diya was reminded of their school romantic moments.


Flash back...

The school excursion time.
All were busy enjoying in the place they went.Ratan and Diya moved to a lonely area hiding themselves from others.
Ratan:Here we have privacy.
Diya:And we can talk for a long time without any tension.
Ratan:Exactly.
They both were giggling and talking.
Suddenly it started raining.
Ratan:Oh no..
Diya:We will be completely drenched and catch cold.
Ratan:We already got drenched Diya.Before it becomes worse let's go.
They held each other hand and started running.But they both slipped their feet while running and fell down.Ratan fell over the top of Diya.They shared a passionate eye lock.
Ratan tucked her wet hair strands behind her ears.They both started wiping each others wet face.
They both felt different and nice.

Ratan moved towards her face.They both got into a passionate embrace.

Present...

Suddenly Ratan broke the eye lock.
Ratan:Why are you under the shower with me?Just go away.
Diya:Sorry Ratan.
Diya moved only to slip again and fall over Ratan.They both fell down.And Diya fell over Ratan.




Ratan:Ouch...because of you i too fell on the wet floor.Damn it.
Suddenly their eyes locked onto each others.

The credit for this wonderful edit goes to the original editor

They both came back to senses.
Ratan:Get up from my body Diya.I can't bear your weight.



Diya:Sorry.
Ratan:Stop saying sorry and leave.
Diya got up somehow from his chest and moved to the side.

Slowly she got up and left.

Ratan got dressed up and came.
He was shocked to see Dira drawing on the papers of his file.
He screamed:What are you doing?
He beat her shoulders and she cried.
Everyone came inside hearing Dira cry.
Diya:What happened Dira beta?
Dira:Mumma...papa beat me.

All were shocked.
Diya:Why did you beat Dira?
Ratan:These were the papers needed for my presentation .But she spoiled it.

Diya looked at Dira:Dira..why did you do this?Mumma had given you a drawing book.Then why?
Dira:That book is missing.So I took paper from Papa's file.
Diya:That book is in the drawer beta.It's not lost.Don't take papa's papers.Ok?Say sorry to papa.
Dira:Sorry papa.
Ratan did not look at her.Dira ran out crying.Diya ran after her:Dira...
Gopi:Ratan...Diya is small.She does'nt understand anything.She did'nt do it purposefully.She does'nt even know what papers they are.That's why she took the already written papers for scribbling.
Ahem:And you have extra copy of the presentation.Right?

Ratan:Yes.
Ahem:Then why are you angry with Dira?Too bad Ratan.
Jigar:You were cruel to a small child.
Rashi:Poor Dira.

Gopi:That poor innocent girl loves you a lot.She just joined you in this house.But what did you do to her?I know that you have not accepted Dira as your daughter.If you have a heart atleast in the name of humanity go and comfort her.
Ratan felt guilty.

Dira was crying.
Dira:Papa does'nt love me.He hates me.Why mumma?Am i that bad?
Diya felt sad for her.
Diya:No Dira.Your papa loves you a lot.
Suddenly they heard from behind:And you are the best child in this world.
It was Ratan.They were surprised.
Ratan pulled his ears and said:Sorry Dira.Please forgive me.
He caressed her hand where he beat her.
He wiped her tears.
Ratan:You are the cutest child in this world.So tears do not suit you.Your smile makes you a Princess.So smile.
Dira smiled.

Ratan:Yes..that's it.Very sweet.
He pulled her cheeks cutely.They both giggled.Diya smiled.The others who watched it secretly became happy.
Diya:Thank you Ratan for making Dira smile.You don't know how happy she is.
Ratan:No need of thanks.

Ratan walked off.

Night...

Dira lay between Ratan and Diya.
Suddenly she held both of their hands and kept it on her body o feel their presence while sleeping.
Dira:Both of you don't take hands off me.

Ratan:Oh no..what is this?
Diya thought:Hope Ratan does'nt lose his temper because of Dira's tantrums.
Slowly they all slept.
In the morning Diya and Ratan opened their eyes.They were stunned to see their fingers entwined.
They realized that it happened unknowingly while they were sleeping.They were embarrassed and took their hands off.Dira opened her eyes.When they got up Dira purposefully pushed Diya and she fell over Ratan.Ratan held her.

Both became shy and looked at each others eyes.


Dira smiled.Ratan and Diya moved away from each other and smiled at Dira shyly when they saw Dira looking at them with a naughty smile..




Aliya came to Ratan's house.
Gopi came:Hi Aliya...
Aliya:Hello aunty..
Aliya touched her feet.
Gopi:God bless you beta.

Aliya:Actually I had taken Ratan's book to take down notes.I came to return it.

Gopi:Ok.
Ratan came:Hi Aaloo.
They both had a friendly hug.Diya came there watching it.She could not bear it.
Ratan took the book from Aliya.
Suddenly Aliya saw Diya.
Aliya:May I know who is this?Is this Ratan's elder sister?
Diya became upset.Gopi was irritated while Ratan was tensed whether his marriage truth will be out before Aaliya.




Edited by jasminerahul - 6 years ago

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