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Is loving you a mistake? Part7

Ratan burst out:Yes,she is my daughter Dira.
Diya looked at him in disbelief.



Adi and Aliya were shocked.
Aliya:But how is it possible Ratan?

Ratan:Dira is the result of the mistake I did long ago because of which I had to marry Diya.
They were shocked.
Aliya:Why did you hide such a big thing from us?
Ratan:Then what should I do?Should I have announced that I am a husband and a father of a child at the age of 21?
Suddenly he saw the other students gathering over there and listening.Ratan was embarrassed seeing them laugh.
Ratan stared at Diya:You purposefully brought Dira here to reveal our ugly truth to everyone and insult me.Right?Now happy?You destroyed my image and made me a laughing stock in front of everyone.
Diya became upset:No Ratan.I did'nt do it purposefully.When Dira said she wants to see you I brought her here.

Ratan:Stop telling lies Diya.You know what?I hate you.I am ashamed to say that you are my wife.You know what?Loving you once was my biggest mistake.It's after effects only killed my peace of mind.
Diya was in tears.She could not tolerate it anymore.

Diya:Stop it.Don't say anything more.Now even I doubt whether loving you is a mistake.You hate me.Fine.


Even I don't want to be your wife anymore.I am willing to give you divorce.
Ratan was stunned.



Aliya was crying.

Adi held her closer to console her.
Aliya:Ratan betrayed us and like a fool I loved him.He has no place in my heart anymore.
Adi became upset.

All the family members were shocked to know that Diya and Ratan are getting divorced.
Ahem,Gopi,Shekar,Sharmishtha ,Jigar,Rashi tried to advise them.
Diya:Whatever we have decided to get separated.There is no point in living together when Ratan hates me.We have applied for divorce.

Gopi:But I won't let you and Dira go anywhere.You both have equal right here and I want both of you here.

Gopi hugged Diya and Dira shedding tears.
Ahem stared at Ratan:Shame on you.Can't you maintain your marriage?

Ratan:I knew that I won't be able to maintain this marriage without love.But you all only forced me to marry her.Otherwise this situation would not have come.

Everyone felt really irritated with Ratan's attitude.
Jigar:I never expected this much from you Ratan.

Rashi:What is all this?I can't understand anything.

Ratan did not care as he was only relieved about the divorce.
Sharmishtha:What is happening?
Shekar:This was the fear I was having from the beginning.The result of a silly teenage affair is what we see now.
Sharmishta:Our daughter's life is spoiled.I thought her mistake could be corrected even if its after some years.But her past mistake spoiled her life.
Shekar was in tears.

Ratan was relieved that very soon he can get rid of Diya from his life and felt stress free..

Diya's sister Sanjana entered their house.Ratan was impressed seeing her.Rashi noticed it.
Ratan thought:Unlike Diya Sanjana is cool.During the wedding functions I did'nt notice her due to stress and irritation.Now only I am seeing her properly.
Rashi to Gopi:See how Ratan is looking at Sanju.He always wanted a young stylish girl like Sanju as his wife,not an elderly woman like Diya.
Gopi was upset.

Sanjana screamed:Diya di...
Diya came:Sanju...what happened?
Sanjana:Don't pretend that you don't know anything.
Diya:Sanju...tell me what happened.
Sanjana was in tears:Rakesh...my fiance called off our engagement.
Diya was shocked:What?Why?
Sanjana:Because of you di.His family came to know that you gave birth to a baby out of wedlock and now they came to know of your divorce too.They said they don't want a girl from such an immoral family.
Diya was shocked.Her eyes became teary.
Diya:I am sad that because of me your relationship broke.Sorry Sanju.But the truth is that Rakesh does'nt deserve you.If his love was genuine he would not have left you.
Sanju:Don't put your blame on Rakesh's head.The truth is that you spoiled my life.I hate you di.
Diya was shattered.
All were stunned listening to it.
Ratan:Sorry Sanju.Even I am responsible for what happened with you.

Sanju:The truth is that Diya di is a bad omen.So many lives including ours lost peace because of her.


Diya could'nt control her tears hearing what Sanjana said.
Ratan wiped Sanjana's tears.
Ratan:Don't cry Sanju.
Gopi could'nt bear Ratan touching Sanjana.

May be coincidence Ratan and Sanjana met each other frequently forming a deep friendship.

After 3 months...

Ratan completed engineering and got placed in a company too.Adi and Aliya too joined there.But their friendship has become cold.

In front of everyone Ratan proposed Sanjana with the diamond ring he bought with his own salary.
Ratan:You are my dream girl Sanju.My dream was to marry a girl like you.Will you be mine?

Sanjana smiled:Yes,I am yours Ratan.

Ratan smiled sweetly:You are my luck Sanju.
Sanjana smiled.
Diya could not bear it.Her heart broke into pieces.
She was reminded of how Ratan proposed her during Diwali celebration in school.

Flash back...

The school was decorated to celebrate Diwali.All are in grand clothes.
When all were busy in the main hall celebrating Diwali ,Ratan called Diya to the empty classroom.
Diya:Ratan..why did you call me here?Diwali celebration is in the hall.
Ratan:Don't go Diya.We will celebrate Diwali here.
Diya:Means?

Ratan gave a rose flower bouquet.
Diya:For me?So sweet.
He smiled:One more gift.
She was surprised.
Ratan gave her a box:Happy Diwali to you Diya.These are your favourite sweets.My Diwali gift for you.

Diya was very happy:Thank you so much Ratan.You are so sweet.I love these sweets.
Ratan knelt down before:Diya..I really love you.
Diya was stunned.

Ratan:I never knew that love is so beautiful until I met you.I really love you Diya.Do you love me?

Diya smiled nodding her head:Yes Ratan.I too loved you.But I did'nt have the courage to express it.
Ratan smiled:I am so happy Diya.
They shared a romantic eye lock.

Present...

Ratan who proposed Diya years back proposed her own sister in front of her now which was unbearable for Diya.
Diya:Those beautiful past moments of our love have no value now Ratan.Everything lost its charm.You killed those beautiful moments of ours in a moment.
Tears rolled down her cheeks.
Edited by jasminerahul - 6 years ago
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Nice update
Love it
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thanks for the pm. sad update! well written! Ratan is so mean! he blames Diya! Feeling for Diya and Dira!

Diya decides to divorce Ratan! the family is upset! Ratan now interested in Diya's sister Sanjana and even proposes to her!

wish that Diya gets someone in her life as well! she deserves to be happy!

update soon, thanks for the pm!
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😭

Originally posted by: jasminerahul



Is loving you a mistake? Part7

Ratan burst out:Yes,she is my daughter Dira.

Finally accepted😃

Diya looked at him in disbelief.



Adi and Aliya were shocked.
Aliya:But how is it possible Ratan?

Ratan:Dira is the result of the mistake I did long ago because of which I had to marry Diya.
They were shocked.
Aliya:Why did you hide such a big thing from us?

Exactly🥱

Ratan:Then what should I do?Should I have announced that I am a husband and a father of a child at the age of 21?

Yes!!...

Suddenly he saw the other students gathering over there and listening.Ratan was embarrassed seeing them laugh.
Ratan stared at Diya:You purposefully brought Dira here to reveal our ugly truth to everyone and insult me.Right?Now happy?You destroyed my image and made me a laughing stock in front of everyone.
Diya became upset:No Ratan.I did'nt do it purposefully.When Dira said she wants to see you I brought her here.

Ratan:Stop telling lies Diya.You know what?I hate you.I am ashamed to say that you are my wife.You know what?Loving you once was my biggest mistake.It's after effects only killed my peace of mind.

😭😭

Diya was in tears.She could not tolerate it anymore.

Diya:Stop it.Don't say anything more.Now even I doubt whether loving you is a mistake.You hate me.Fine.

😲😭

Even I don't want to be your wife anymore.I am willing to give you divorce.
Ratan was stunned.



Aliya was crying.

Adi held her closer to console her.
Aliya:Ratan betrayed us and like a fool I loved him.He has no place in my heart anymore.
Adi became upset.

All the family members were shocked to know that Diya and Ratan are getting divorced.
Ahem,Gopi,Shekar,Sharmishtha ,Jigar,Rashi tried to advise them.
Diya:Whatever we have decided to get separated.There is no point in living together when Ratan hates me.We have applied for divorce.

Gopi:But I won't let you and Dira go anywhere.You both have equal right here and I want both of you here.

Gopi hugged Diya and Dira shedding tears.
Ahem stared at Ratan:Shame on you.Can't you maintain your marriage?

Ratan:I knew that I won't be able to maintain this marriage without love.But you all only forced me to marry her.Otherwise this situation would not have come.

Everyone felt really irritated with Ratan's attitude.
Jigar:I never expected this much from you Ratan.

Rashi:What is all this?I can't understand anything.

Ratan did not care as he was only relieved about the divorce.
Sharmishtha:What is happening?
Shekar:This was the fear I was having from the beginning.The result of a silly teenage affair is what we see now.
Sharmishta:Our daughter's life is spoiled.I thought her mistake could be corrected even if its after some years.But her past mistake spoiled her life.
Shekar was in tears.

Ratan was relieved that very soon he can get rid of Diya from his life and felt stress free..



Diya's sister Sanjana entered their house.Ratan was impressed seeing her.Rashi noticed it.
Ratan thought:Unlike Diya Sanjana is cool.During the wedding functions I did'nt notice her due to stress and irritation.Now only I am seeing her properly.
Rashi to Gopi:See how Ratan is looking at Sanju.He always wanted a young stylish girl like Sanju as his wife,not an elderly woman like Diya.
Gopi was upset.

Sanjana screamed:Diya di...
Diya came:Sanju...what happened?
Sanjana:Don't pretend that you don't know anything.
Diya:Sanju...tell me what happened.
Sanjana was in tears:Rakesh...my fiance called off our engagement.
Diya was shocked:What?Why?
Sanjana:Because of you di.His family came to know that you gave birth to a baby out of wedlock and now they came to know of your divorce too.They said they don't want a girl from such an immoral family.
Diya was shocked.Her eyes became teary.
Diya:I am sad that because of me your relationship broke.Sorry Sanju.But the truth is that Rakesh does'nt deserve you.If his love was genuine he would not have left you.

Yes Diya u are right

Sanju:Don't put your blame on Rakesh's head.The truth is that you spoiled my life.I hate you di.
Diya was shattered.
All were stunned listening to it.
Ratan:Sorry Sanju.Even I am responsible for what happened with you.


Tum toh rehne hi do 😡

Sanju:The truth is that Diya di is a bad omen.So many lives including ours lost peace because of her.


Diya could'nt control her tears hearing what Sanjana said.
Ratan wiped Sanjana's tears.
Ratan:Don't cry Sanju.
Gopi could'nt bear Ratan touching Sanjana.

May be coincidence Ratan and Sanjana met each other frequently forming a deep friendship.

🤢

After 3 months...

Ratan completed engineering and got placed in a company too.Adi and Aliya too joined there.But their friendship has become cold.

😭

In front of everyone Ratan proposed Sanjana with the diamond ring he bought with his own salary.
Ratan:You are my dream girl Sanju.My dream was to marry a girl like you.Will you be mine?

Can I slap him😡😡

Sanjana smiled:Yes,I am yours Ratan.


Ratan is only Diya's...Understand u better understand😡😡😡

Ratan smiled sweetly:You are my luck Sanju.
Sanjana smiled.

🤢

Diya could not bear it.Her heart broke into pieces.

My poor Diya

She was reminded of how Ratan proposed her during Diwali celebration in school.

Flash back...

The school was decorated to celebrate Diwali.All are in grand clothes.
When all were busy in the main hall celebrating Diwali ,Ratan called Diya to the empty classroom.
Diya:Ratan..why did you call me here?Diwali celebration is in the hall.
Ratan:Don't go Diya.We will celebrate Diwali here.

😳

Diya:Means?

Ratan gave a rose flower bouquet.
Diya:For me?So sweet.
He smiled:One more gift.
She was surprised.
Ratan gave her a box:Happy Diwali to you Diya.These are your favourite sweets.My Diwali gift for you.

Diya was very happy:Thank you so much Ratan.You are so sweet.I love these sweets.
Ratan knelt down before:Diya..I really love you.
Diya was stunned.

Ratan:I never knew that love is so beautiful until I met you.I really love you Diya.Do you love me?

Diya smiled nodding her head:Yes Ratan.I too loved you.But I did'nt have the courage to express it.
Ratan smiled:I am so happy Diya.
They shared a romantic eye lock.

Sweet and emotional FB😳😭

Present...

Ratan who proposed Diya years back proposed her own sister in front of her now which was unbearable for Diya.
Diya:Those beautiful past moments of our love have no value now Ratan.Everything lost its charm.You killed those beautiful moments of ours in a moment.
Tears rolled down her cheeks.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Fabulous and so Interesting Chapter
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Superb update dear!!! A sad one...
Diya decided to divorce...
Poor Diya n Dira...
Diya's sister Sanjana blames Diya that she destroyed her life...
Ratan proposed Sanjana infront of Diya...
Oh poor Diya...
She remembered how Ratan proposed her in school days...
Loved it to the core dear... Eagerly waiting for next part... Thanks for the PM... N sorry for late...
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Posted: 6 years ago
#59
Awesome Chapter

Ratan is really mean and horrible and I feel so terrible
for both Diya and Dira
oh hell Ratan actually proposes Sanjana but in front of Diya
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Fantastic update...
Thanks for the pm.. 👍🏼

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