Arshi SS: In Your Eyes last Part pg14 dt.28.3.18

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Arshifan_priya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#101

Super ... happy ending.. Arshi together... Epilogue??

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amadea

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Posted: 7 years ago

#102

beautiful story i will miss her ,please write another

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Aashisrivastava

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Posted: 7 years ago

#103

Sooo Sweet

Very well written..

Thanx for the pm dear..

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sunitikapoor

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Posted: 7 years ago

#104

Such a beautiful short story.

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Farabi_2424

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Posted: 7 years ago

#105

Loved the story...
Read it in one go...
Loved Arnav & Khushi...

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Breath-Mark

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Posted: 7 years ago

#106

Omg it ended?

Loved your take on it.

Im glad they looked past all of their flaws and mistakes.

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-MIMOSA-

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Posted: 7 years ago

#107

Beautiful and soulful story...

Your words and the depth they carry, never fail to mesmerise...Loved it

Wish to read more...

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amus5

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Posted: 7 years ago

#108

it is said that visually challenged people come with the ability to see thru the mind's eye and that is why they are often referred to as people with special abilities and in this case Arnav's abilities have formed very well.He accepted the help given with an open mind rather than brooding with what was lost. It is difficult to be futuristic.It shows his goodness.

What truly appealed to me is Khushi. Be it an injured cat or a human being - her approach is the same though the colour of the emotion attached is different - In the case of cat it was pity and in the case of Arnav it was guilt. Whatever the emotion the ultimate nature is kindness which is not seen in today's world as often it should be. Every person need not do big charity work to emote kindness but little things in everyday life goes a long way. It maybe a kind word too.

Another important character is Baba. In today's fast world how many parents would be the way he is(not so easy). If Khushi is able to answer her conscience it is solely because of his full support.Kudos to him.

A truly beautiful SS 👏... thank you ... will be awaiting for another SS from you 😃

Edited by amus5 - 7 years ago