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Posted: 7 years ago
#11
Loving this new story. Looking forward to the next update.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#12
hi dear.. hope you're having a great time..
at first I would like to thank you for sharing your nice creation with me..😊
to be frank, I really didn't expect something new in my inbox😳

well, it was lil difficult for me to capture all the characters as they were very new to me.. But it's okay.. later I came in terms with them..
coming to the concept, it was a lil different kind of..
loved the character named Abeer Khan.. a self-made girl with a sweet nature and understanding mentality.. but the most attractive shade of this girl to me was her living nature...
then it comes to Sydney.. a good friend and a supporting hand in foreign land as well as the biggest fan of Abeer I say..
liked the starting convo & their first introduction.. beautifully described Abeer in Sydney's word..
loved the scene with Sasha.. simply beautiful❤️
Miranda seemed to be very typical.. according to Abeer, "she's allergic"..!!😆 really too funny it was..
liked Abeer's presentation of her thoughts to Miranda.. it was bold..👏
and.. Troy,, really a showsha person.. he maybe good looking, rich and so on, but still he is nothing to his heart.. poor Abeer.. got stuck with him.. really sad for his behavior towards Abeer..
at last, all the flashbacks were beautiful as well as magnetic.. at least Abeer's lost state indicates this😆
okkey!! jokes apart.. will love to know about the Mr. Stranger with walnut eyes...😳
overall, it was a beautiful update.. continue soon..
& will be happy if you share that also with me😊
love, Keka❤️


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Posted: 7 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: chik

Great Story.. Shanaya.. Thanks for the PM.. Please continue...Loved the start..


Thank you so much.
Stay Tuned. <3
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Posted: 7 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: coderlady

Abeer should run as fast as possible to the nearest exit.


That she will, quite soon. ;)
Thanks.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: Neha07

Loving this new story. Looking forward to the next update.


Thank you so much.
Stay Tuned.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: LOVE.GOLD

Loved it Shanu dear Awesome start

Congratulations for your new story 😊
Love you lots 🤗
I really love this self made Abeer
She is sweet good hearted and a great friend
Miranda seems to be a typical sadu boss
Good that Abeer gave her a good answer
Her friends are too good and supporting
That Troy seems really a show sha item 😆
He was manipulating Abeer to adapt his ways of life
White wine, Sea food all that she hated a lot ... Abeer should give it a thought
Who is this childhood friend of Abeer ? ... I need to see him soon
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon 😊


Thanks Goldie.
Love you lots too. 🤗

Whether I write Abeer in any of my stories, I love to keep her essence the same as it is in the original. <3
Sweet, Self Made And not conscious about her looks at all, and that's the beauty of her character which everyone loves. 😳

In the history of mankind, bosses have always been rotten.
There are only just a few good genuine ones and everyone is not lucky to have them.

Troy belongs to those category of men who think that a woman is indebted to them after they propose her, and he is a lot more than a showsha. 😡
The next part has all your answers. <3

Stay Tuned.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: Bhatakti_atma

Hello

Happy to see a new work..
The starting is great..
Liked how simple and nice Abeer is..her ideas really highlight how even today people tend to look more at what's on the outside,failing to respect the worth,likes and dislikes of all kinds of people..
Miranda is the kind of women we need to get rid of just to make this world a better place..but uk the number of such people is way too much..
I hope Abeer gets out of this stupid relationship soon,where her personality is being undermined.. hopefully she will realise how she is being oppressed in such a relationship..a relation which seeks to impose restrictions on you, can never be liberating..hope she gets out of it soon..
I guess the childhood friend is ibaad..liked the flashbacks..
Waiting for more
Update soon


Yashfeen, it's so good to see you here! 🤗
Like I always say, no matter where ever I write Abeer, the essence of her character always remains the same. <3

She works in fashion, she is a designer but still she doesn't looks at it through rose tinted glasses. Every woman, every girl deserves to feel beautiful, feel wanted, feel sexy without being judged for their size, color, body type.
Fashion is supposed to make you feel beautiful not make you a victim of body shaming.

Troy belongs to those category of men who believe they've indebted a woman by proposing her.
He never wants a companion, a wife for him. He just wants a trophy!

Stay Tuned.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: FarhanaKeka03

hi dear.. hope you're having a great time..

at first I would like to thank you for sharing your nice creation with me..😊
to be frank, I really didn't expect something new in my inbox😳

Hello Keka. 🤗
Aww, you don't need to mention it, it's actually great to have a new reader on this thread. <3

well, it was lil difficult for me to capture all the characters as they were very new to me.. But it's okay.. later I came in terms with them..


I can understand that new unfamiliarity a reader faces reading a new work for the first time but still I'm glad that you chose to read and comment.

coming to the concept, it was a lil different kind of..
loved the character named Abeer Khan.. a self-made girl with a sweet nature and understanding mentality.. but the most attractive shade of this girl to me was her living nature...
then it comes to Sydney.. a good friend and a supporting hand in foreign land as well as the biggest fan of Abeer I say..
liked the starting convo & their first introduction.. beautifully described Abeer in Sydney's word..
loved the scene with Sasha.. simply beautiful❤️
Miranda seemed to be very typical.. according to Abeer, "she's allergic"..!!😆 really too funny it was..
liked Abeer's presentation of her thoughts to Miranda.. it was bold..👏

Thank you, I'm glad you loved it so much. ❤️
Abeer is a character very close to my heart and I wanted her to be a bit different from others. Sweet, Independent and Loving.
Sydney definitely is the bestest friend Abeer could have in a foreign city and loves her friend dearly.

Being the bride, Sasha deserved to be felt special and Abeer did just that. 😳

Miranda is a typical boss, who just wants her work to keep bringing her money and fame without being least concerned about anyone's likes or feelings.
And that tonic from Abeer was very much required.

and.. Troy,, really a showsha person.. he maybe good looking, rich and so on, but still he is nothing to his heart.. poor Abeer.. got stuck with him.. really sad for his behavior towards Abeer..
at last, all the flashbacks were beautiful as well as magnetic.. at least Abeer's lost state indicates this😆
okkey!! jokes apart.. will love to know about the Mr. Stranger with walnut eyes...😳
overall, it was a beautiful update.. continue soon..
& will be happy if you share that also with me😊
love, Keka❤️

Troy is the man who believes that after he has proposed to Abeer, she is indebted to him. He can dominate her, tell her to do whatever he wants her to do.

Well, the stranger means a lot to Abeer and you'll get your answers in the next update. <3

Stay Tuned.


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Posted: 7 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: pcnsb

Res/ Unres

And I'm here finally. 😃

After Sealed With A Kiss, when you told me you are planning a full fledged SS on Ibaad Abeer, I was super happy. Like you said, it is one of the most successful crossover by you. The love SWAK recieved was inexplicable and it was all your writing brilliance and creative ideas.

Sweetie. 🤗
Your comments make me so so happy.
The love SWAK received was totally surprising cuz I hadn't imagined ppl would love this crossover between Aabi and Abeer so so much. 😳

So yeah this SS idea had striked me back then and it was different from what I've written on them.
Thank you so much, but you've done a lot of brainstorming for them too. <3

You had briefed me with the basic storyline long back and it was so interesting that I had already started counting days. You wanted to start it on New Year's Eve as a gift for your readers but it somehow didn't happen. But, it's better late than never. 😳

Initially I had planned it according to the lines of the movie I told you about, but had to do some changes.
You know I'm very lazy when it comes to writing and only begin when I feel inspired to do so. 😆😆

The start was awesome with an equally awesome introduction of Abeer Khan. Like all your female protagonists, she too is simple, calorie-un-consicous, make up allergic, and down-to earth, sweet girl. ❤️

Her and Sydney's conversation was perfect to give us an insight to Abeer's characters who keeps going back in past and lose herself there.

Thank you so much. :*
No matter wherever I write Abeer, I always want to keep her essence the same which is the reason why y'all love her.
And most of my protagonist are a reflection of what I am as a woman.

I wanted to keep a portal between the past that she has left and the present she's living now so the conversation is a perfect medium for that. Glad you loved it. <3

My God. Sydney is truly Abeer's fangirl. But all her praises were true. She indeed is a beautiful woman but too modest to accept that. ⭐️⭐️

Ahh, she too hates heels, like you. 😆

Sydney is her bestest friend in that foreign city, True Abeer is too modest or say careless about her beauty.

I don't have anything against women who can carry them off but I personally hate them.

It was actually very sweet of Abeer to get the dress customised for Sasha, the to-be Bride. True, every bride, slim or fat, deserves to look her best on her wedding. ❤️

I second Sydney when she says Miranda is insecure of her coz Abeer's designs are far more stunning than hers.

I know right. Every bride deserves to feel special on her wedding day without being criticised about her body type or skin tone. Abeer understands that and hence decided to go against the store rules.

Abeer has an innovative eye for designs and Miranda knows that if she gives her a chance then her designs would go outdated.😡

There Miranda calls her and in her oh-so-elegant way questions Abeer abt the customised designer dress. Abeer was so on point when she slammed Miranda for being a body shamer. 👏👏

Why designer dresses are only meant for models and hollywood actresses is something that goes beyond my understanding too. It is actually ridiculous.😳

Tell me about it. On one side ppl take out marches for women empowerment and equal rights while on the other hand biggest fashion labels and brands bring out their dresses on just a specific size as if all the women in the world would fit into it.

Miranda belongs to that category who just wants her business, her fashion line to be on top without any second thoughts about the customers that make the brand as it is. She doesn't even wants to order plus sizes cuz they don't have enough customers! Sick!

Troy Adams: Rich, High Class Son of Senator Alicia Adams. *slow claps* 🤔
Well, he seems to be the same self-centred, handsome guy who I don't know how in the world finds a woman like Abeer.

Some men have this habit of being a totally different guy when they're dating a woman and then after she falls in love with and gets engaged, they bring out their totally different side.
Troy is exactly that!

The way he's completely inconsiderate of her likes and dislikes, her wishes, her dreams is actually so irritating that I wanna hit him hard. 😡😡
His constant rant abt how she should adapt to the lifestyle of his family is so off putting. Bhai, find someone else from your so-called high class society who would fit in the mould of your perfect wife and perfect daughter-in-law of Adams household. Spare her!

Men like Troy think that the girl is indebted to him for after all he asked her to marry him and not just that, she's chained to him and he can mould her as he likes! I want to punch such guys right on their face.

And, that mystery guy in Abeer's flashbacks. I know who that is. 😎
But I'm waiting for more.

He is a Hotmess! *Fans myself!*
But you already know all of it. 😉


Update soon.
Nandini

Stay Tuned. ❤️

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Posted: 7 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: pcnsb

Unresd on Pg. 1. 😊


Replied. <3
Love you.

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