SS ~ Remember When.. (Page 10) - Page 7

Originally posted by: chik

Thanks for the PM.. Again an awesome update.. Loved it...

Originally posted by: GOLD3009

Loved it Shanu

Awesome part & after so long 😡

Well I'm think Abeer needs to think about her and Ibaad relationship in a bit serious and practical way

I loved how Abeer didn't hold back to the passion. ... She needs to understand that she and Ibaad are connected strongly not like that chimpanzee mistreating her all the time

Ibaad loved her and still is in love with her and hasn't moved on yet so Abeer should think about her life positively

I loved how you have shown connection between the two

I am glad that Hina and Ashraf both are taking initiative to make them listen to their hearts. .. They might have a long separation but still the love and passion is same

I was giggling reading that Ashraf wants to be a Grand father soon and even demanding openly 😆

Waiting for more

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 😊

Originally posted by: FarhanaKeka03

Hey... hope you are doing well. Thanks for having your patience on me...

Hey Keka, yeah I'm good. Hope your health is good too. 😳

And no worries, if I had known, I would've asked you to take your own time. ❤️

Okay!! So, here I go... I will say about both chapter 4 & 5.

Chapter 4:

Starting with a gratitude hug between Abeer and Ibaad, Abeer genially thanked him for being there with her family in her absence. Ibaad hushed her saying she doesn't have to be. He was still dozed off in their beautiful memories.

But she was insist... so she finally came with the idea of cooking for him next weekend... Aww!! She is so cute...

Haha... he teased her... well it was a date indeed. Liked her shyness.

Hmm... so Heena caught them... so without having breakfast Ibaad won't be able to move out of the place. I loved the way you wrote Abeer pov while she saw Ibaad greeting her parents and her realization how Ibaad did take care of them when she wasn't around. Lovely...

Ibaad Ashraf is the boyfriend every woman wants to have, and it's not just the fact that they are in a relationship, he and Abeer have grown up together since they were kids. So his taking care of her parents in her absence is what any good friend would've done. ❤️

Abeer then get inside and went to get fresh. Another trails of memories flooded in her mind. She was lost in them again... lost in that little jealous Abeer who just got into revenge mood and caused poor Ibaad losing his sanity...lol... this crazy girl...

Finally getting out of the bathroom she was unexpectedly welcomed, by him... all thanks to bud Marino to bring Ibaad there.

Then their little geniue intimacy... Ahem!! I am still a kiddo dear... aise beech mai heart attack maat dia karo... by the way, Ibaad was right... all those years he came to her. Now it's her turn...

She was shocked with herself... lol... this crazy unsettled heart... she was more confused after Samaira's call for the party... one hand she was kind of eager to see HIM, other hand she doesn't want to be unfair with the man who gave her the ring... to be frank... I really wonder what will happen when Ibaad will come to know about her engagement...

Im glad you loved that scene so much. Even after all these years, the passion hasn't faded away from between them. 😳

And home, is that place which makes you nostalgic no matter what, that's what's been happening with Abeer as well.

Abeer's heart and mind are currently in s big turmoil.

Hehe... got ready to see his reaction... be careful my dear Ibaad...

Finally she met the bridegroom, Mr. Scott Waters... lol,,, Ibaad was right... they could spare the details...

Who spelled the magic on whom!! Yes dear... Ibaad Ashraf wasn't a pevert. His gaze seduced women..

Ah ow..!!! That was unexpected... but the pervert got his lesson. Abeer again was dozed in memories... back to the pool side, where teen Abeer was almost successful with her plans.

These boys!! At the end his patience broke out when Martin tried to misbehave with Abeer and then finally Ibaad burst on him... well, he was absolutely right from his side...

When the string of past memories broke down and got mixed up with the same new ones, it really gets hard to hold emotions anymore... and same had happened with her... she first time, after coming back, kissed him without worrying any of other worldly things... lovely...

Beautifully written... liked it...

Im so happy that you loved the flashbacks. Yes, no matter how much one tries, somethings just don't leave your thoughts and that's what memories of Ibaad means to Abeer.

Thank you for your kind words.

Stay Tuned.😊

Originally posted by: FarhanaKeka03

Chapter 5:

Dear, the more I try to be saint the more you driving me crazy...

So, the unexpected' kiss calm both of them down. Abeer still liked his husky voice. Loved Sam's concern... thankfully none was hurt and the environment got easy like before...

Haha... Ibaad still couldn't get over the kiss... but not his fault... whole scene was viewed by half of Houston.

Haha, I'm telling you there will be more such scenes further in the story so giving you a warning beforehand. 😉😆

That kiss was much needed to calm down the storm of emotions going on in thskf heart and mind.

Samaira is a loving sister. ❤️

Sweetie!! Another one! Well... this was really unexpected to me now... but,, I liked his dare. This time it was slow passionate, both gradually tasting each other... too intimate...

Tired Abeer reached home with engrossed in tons of thoughts. She was already very confused and the sudden realization hit her hardly making things more complicated and left her more confused and baffled.

Lol... Heena caught them together again! But I must say she is a best friend more than a mother. I loved that Abeer didn't hide her heart before her mother.

Not just Heena every other elderly character in this story are understanding and broad minded cuz they understand that their children are adults and most importantly trust them. 😳

Let the rain kiss you. Let the rain beat upon your head with silver liquid drops. Let the rain sing you a lullaby.

-Langston Hughes

Bored Abeer finally got out of her room setting her mind about to meet her bestie... while the heart was still chanting only one name, Ibaad.

Haha.. I came to meet Samaira'... trying to fooling Ibaad.. huh?

Aww!! pj and T... I already can imagine her so cute...

Oooh!! Alone at home huh? I better tell my mind before losing my sanity. Lol... just kidding... loved their little banter while enjoying the movie... no one had forgotten each other's likes and taste. So lovely...

I loved when Ibaad expressed himself as a proud teen lover who had found his true love at such a young age.

Hey.. tell me something... why do they caught into wrong time... haan? I mean pahle Heena and now Rifa & Ashraf... I'm holding my tummy for laughing so hard... poor red Abeer... lol

Apparently trying to fool Ibaad won't work at all. 😆

Like said, they have been together since childhood so it will take perhaps another lifetime to make them forget each other's habit. 😳

Rich people and their so called parties!!!

If mother is best friend of her daughter then there is a father for every son. In whole CS I genially love these elder personas... they are so good and understanding parent.

Oh! So Ashraf was the one who proposed Rifa first... indeed Ibaad is the CC of his dad. He assured his father that he will propose Abeer in his way...

Although I am getting cold shoulder thinking about his reaction when he will get to know about Abeer's engagement but,,, let see...

Amazing work... superb!! Do continue...

Im glad you're loving the characters so much. True Ashraf is a cutie and Ibaad definitely takes after him.

Stay Tuned. 😊

Keeping the thread active. ❤

Keeping The Thread Alive. ❤