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Posted: 7 years ago

#191

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
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Posted: 7 years ago

#192

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Posted: 7 years ago

#193

Amazinggg update 😳Ohh now I understood why u told Malayketu is just a dummy piece 😛Happy to know that he can't 🤬But I never expected his father to think like this n using girls for his pleasure Just so that his son gets married n no one questions what's going on in that 4 walls 😡Right she has to fight she can't die like that 😒Lovely pics 👍🏼

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AshtaVasus

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Posted: 7 years ago

#194

Originally posted by: JanakNandini
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Nice one..
I have pmed you dear..

Thank you Avant.

You have always been a good friend and a wellwisher.

I have considered what you wrote in PM and will do it shortly.

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AshtaVasus

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Posted: 7 years ago

#195

Originally posted by: Vampire2468
Amazinggg update 😳Ohh now I understood why u told Malayketu is just a dummy piece 😛Happy to know that he can't 🤬But I never expected his father to think like this n using girls for his pleasure Just so that his son gets married n no one questions what's going on in that 4 walls 😡Right she has to fight she can't die like that 😒Lovely pics 👍🏼

Malayketu was a horrible leech in the Show. So I thought of making him a comedy piece in my story 😛

I had said that i will be covering the women during that era. So, the gory details of sacrifice and martyrdom for the Kingdom and greater good, had to be part of the regal political story. Sorry darling !

Edited by FrankPunch - 7 years ago

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AshtaVasus

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Posted: 7 years ago

#196

Originally posted by: LovingAHAA2018
Beautiful Chapter... and you updated pics after my first read, right?... I'm so happy that I didn't post my comments and do away with it... got the pleasure of the pics now... gives a realistic feel... especially the one when she breaks down on his shoulder and he's aghast with shock... that pic portrays perfect emotions...

Yes! Thank you for visiting the page again. I know i am not doing enough justice with the pics. Iam still learning to edit the Promo videos and pick scenes from episodes. Some youtube videos are not getting picked up by Imgur for editing in GIF format. So i am picking some of the pics available on google.
My storyline is not getting the desired matching scene with expressions from the Show.

There was no vaidji ensemble pic in the show I suppose... it must have been your brain idea...is the serial a good watch... give me your honest opinion.

You are spot on, Neha. Thats why i am not posting pics of Vaidji, Lopa, and Neelambari.

Lopa is so cute calling Malay vermin... a perfect use of word when such lecherous men wanna touch your body.

It was beautiful the way Nandini explained... he shrewd ruler mindset and preference for the kingdom safety than her safety is very nicely depicted.

Very nice twist is when the b*****d cannot even do the stuff, then why was he attacking her like that... your picturisation of the lecherous rulers has come out very perfect.

Malay is the proverbial "barking dogs seldom bite" 😆

Raj tantra... the political moves... perfectly portrayed.

While shaping the character for Nandini's gentleness, her political intelligence, bravery and sacrificing nature, I thought of bringing the political climate of THAT era also.

I have always wondered why kings those days fought and why they allowed their people to die both sides. The Reason For Invading A Kingdom Need Not Be always Ambitious. It could be internal rivalry. It could Be For The Reason For A Woman. It Could Be The Reason For Saving The other Kingdom's People Too. So i thought of combining all permutations and combinations here 😉

Oh so Lopa has recognized him and now nandini will also understand it's him... how will they fight then?😆😆

They have done enough fighting in the battlefield... now i will have to struggle to make them fight in bed. 😆

About the serial... Rajat Tokas is a wonder boy of television. He acted in Jodha Akbar serial as Akbar, the age ranging from 20 to 65 year old in that Show... never leaving a doubt in the minds of the viewer, that they are watching a 21 yr old young boy in action. We saw Akbar in his full form through and through.

Star Plus as usual screwed it when the show promo came, we were all set for Chandra and Nandini in the war zone, their strong enmity and how they fall for each other. But star plus cut their budget terribly. So chandragupt maurya grew from a boy to a man under chanakya, waged war against Nand and became king in one month's time. The couples immediately got married as war compensation. The enmity dwindled too fast, they became friends faster and fell in love too fast to keep the TRP Aunties happy. The production cost was also cut ... Rajat Tokas as akbar in jodha akbar show was in such grandeur and extravagance. and Rajat Tokas as chandragupta maurya was a chaprasi king that his palace was without guards, he himself ran from one room to another, no announcer was there when someone walked in the Kings chamber and not a single maid to fetch him water to drink. Worse Was When star Plus sent Them Red Letter To ClOse The Show Or Increase TRP By Bringing New Twist. The Show Killed Nandini, Made Bindusar Grow And Fall In LOve With Dharma And Brought Back Nandini Alive After A 10 Year Leap.

The show purely ran on rajat tokas brilliant acting prowess and his unwavering chemistry with his lead shweta Prasad. They were many scenes in the show without a single dialog and the couple performed wonders with just expressions... and when the wprse dialogs came up, they compensated the filler words with just their actions. Ofcourse There Were Many Pretty Sequences Too.

If you wanna watch, i would suggest watch for the first five months... and then leave...

Edited by FrankPunch - 7 years ago

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#197

Poor Nandini I feel so bad for her

She had no more energy and weakness is taking over her

I think she just wanted a proof of her belief that Malay is really a coward

She just goaded and provoked him but she knows he still wont fight Chandra

She saved Chandra's honor now too as now he wont dare insult Chandra before her

as she then will retaliate by reminding Malay of this incident

She also ignited a fire in Malay heart that may provoke him to fight against Chandra

What a well played move

She used the word vermin for Malay but I still think she used a very mild word

I feel so bad for her now

Even after knowing she can kill Malay easily she still can't

For her kingdom and her people

She is so helpless even with all her powers

Now I understand how difficult it was even for the princesses

They always had to live on the edge with regard for personal emotions

I think women are always oppressed from times immemorial

Now I really want Malay to fight Chandra and die a slow painful gruesome death

Even his dad is weak against Chandra so can't do anything then

I applaud Nandini's plan she really plays so smart

So she purposely provoked Malay against Chandra

This way both she and Chandra will have their revenge

And there wont be further bloodshed for it too

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#198

I loved the tinge of pride in her voice for Chandra

When she said that Malay will die in her Chandra's hands

Malay and his dad really underestimated Nandini good for her

Wow I just loved her reason to invoke Malay

She knows Malay is a big enemy for Chandra

And such enemies should be nipped in the bud

So she made the chance for Chandra to do so

Malay himself will come and fight Chandra in his vanity

Many of Chandra's men are dying for Malay and his dad too

Wait Nandini is referring to Chandra as her husband to Lopa

So Lopa knows that they married ? I like it then

Nandini indeed created a scope for Chandra to settle scores both ways

It's so clear Chandra is so proud of her now

Nandini acted in such way that all purposes will be fulfilled in a single action

Chandra calls Malay hyena I think he's worse than a hyena

In any challenge between them finally he will get Gandhar

So Chanakya had predicted about Nandini's ability long back ?

He was very wise and insightful then

Lopa is so at ease with the Vaid now that she doesn't hesitate to ask his help to lift Nandini

Poor Nandini saw the wounds her nails had made and was so sorry for it and wanted to remedy it right then but her body gave way then and lost to fatigue

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#199

Vaid tried to reassure her but she was in such a state where the words were blurred to her

Unconsciously she again took support and strength from him this touched my heart

Poor Vaid found it so hard to manage her then as she needed his support more than the paste then

He did both together so had to use both his hands ; it must have been a bit difficult for him

Lopa talked to her more about Malay to keep her conscious but it was equally good for Vaid to get as much info as he could

A coward like Malay wont really want to fight Chandra as I am sure he knows his own strength well

Even a lunatic understands what is good for himself so he will try to avoid open war with Chandra

It is so adorable how Lopa considers Vaid Ji as a team member now and treats him so

Wow so she had a huge load inside her and Vaid ji touch let her free herself of the burden

So Parvatak wanted her body and enjoy her tying her up ? Yuck sicko lecher pervert deranged

Why can't Nandini trap him and give him shock treatment? Better still leave a king cobra in his tent

Pervert made a solid plan to trap her if she didn't eavesdrop she wouldn't have known it too

He was discussing it with his wife and she was enjoying it? enjoying the plight of other women being a woman herself? she is equally sick then

So Malay is impotent and an agent to catch women for the pervert? The pervert enjoys all the women in Malay's chamber? Nandini knew a lot about medicines and she is very observant so must have seen Malay take them and known he can't harm her so agreed to the war. Wow she really had taken a lot of precaution and protection.

I loved Vaid reaction. He is beyond himself in rage. The fire in him now will cool only after killing them both and invading Gandhar. I know he will save the women there. Poor Nandini was in such deep trauma

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#200

I think Lopa heard the sound of the tumbler breaking but she was too shocked with Nandini words to react.

But I am happy she revealed all this now she is light and will feel better

Please explain me something

does Parvatak do it as his son is impotent or as he is just a pervert?

I mean if Malay was normal would he have done it ?

He really has a fool proof policy. A girl will be ashamed to admit her husband is impotent and she was raped by her sasur. Asur rather. Even if she somehow tells it to her dad he would be too weak to react nor can he take help from any other king in the shame. If he is dependent on Asur he wont betray him. Only good solution is a whispering rumor from such a weak king that Malay is impotent and Asur rapes all his wives.

why has no one attempted it yet ? How come no one has thought about it ?

Asking for Nandini was the easiest option as everything was in his favor and no resistance at all.

He played all his moves really well and Nandini was truly trapped here with apparently no way out

I can't decide who is worse Nand or this Asur now

She knew Chandra respected women so will save them all once he invades Gandhar

So the only way to save the women was to incite and provoke Malay against Chandra

I still think someone can go out of Gandhar and spread the news as a whispering rumor

Malay isn't fighting to let Nand's army reduce every day so that there is not army when Malay Nandini marriage happens. Why will they fight unnecessarily

I also feel as it is Malay and his army can't stand against Chandra and his army even for a single day