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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#171

Thanks for explaining the circumstances where mainly an imposter was used. Makes sense. But now things have changed such a lot. I don't think they are used now still? Even if they are used I think it's exposed very soon.

Of course he is a monster. It's an insult to a fox if I tell him a fox.

People really knew palmistry then? Now most of them are fake and just act as palmists to extract money from unsuspecting victims. Chanakya was really smart and had so many resources. Such a man can never lose.

Yes it happens today too. Just the system has changed a bit.

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AshtaVasus

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Posted: 7 years ago

#172

Originally posted by: JanakNandini
Here comes my review
Malay...I wonder what will be apt for him
DrunkArd
Lusty
Abuser
or spoilt brat.
He reminds me Balki of thirutupayale 2 except Prasanna there is more dangerous than this Malay. Nandini changing her side to sofa is saying a lot about her disgust and hate she feels for him.
Malay taking my nerves when he asks NANDINI to sleep with him before marriage.How dare he ...that too when Chandra is around?
Fantastically scripted. ..
loved it...

If you have loved Prasanna of Anjathey and thirutupayale ... and you have loathed Malay in the CN Show, iam sure you will enjoy the reality of Malay in the next chapter.

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#173

Vaid ji really impressed her in such a short time with his manners conduct words and actions.

Point 1 is valid only when we are ill even now. I should have mentioned Point 3 was only for Malay. To put up an act before him as she showed the princess attitude just before his entry.

Such son in laws should be publicly thrashed

I didn't know Malayketu was Puru's son. Puru was a good king right? As far as I have read though. How is his son so bad then? I'm sure he was a last bencher student.

So here his dad is Parvatak. Hmm.

She showed her attitude to display her dislike of Malay but alas he is so thick in his head that he didn't get it

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#174

Thanks for liking my feeling. Nalini would have have shooed him away. She won't even let him come near the tent forget enter it.

The long dialogues have a charm of their own.

You are a writer you create so well I just comment on the creation so there's a huge difference.

Oh wow good you pricked him. Such men should be taught a hard lesson.

Yes I think she knows she isn't like either of her parents. I think she's like her mom? You can tell better.

Wish we could disown such people from our families.

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#175

Of course a hubby taking care of his wife is very cute. I don't blame her at all for not noticing anything strange about the scent then. It was impossible for her. It's understandable so you don't need to edit it. The reader will know her circumstances very well. I love how you are closing the loops so perfectly.

To write so many people views is impossible I know. Your choice is the best way. It covers all in a crisp manner. He would not have smirked now but maybe later when he is thinking of all this he would have. I'm sure he felt touched when she stood for his honor. I want Chandra to take revenge for each of the words Malay told Nandini.

They really supported each other so well Nandini unaware of his real identity. Their bond is so pure. It's so clear in your writing how they support each other.

Nandini got her answer clearly. He can't stand up on his own two feet forget facing any one else. He can't come even a mile near Chandra.

I love the words you used too.

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#176

We have some really nice proverbs I think

The proverb is Dhori Maachch Na Chui Paani

Dhori - hold / catch Maach - Fish Chui - touch Paani you know

I would love to see Malay as one of the band members in Chandra Nandini marriage

Nalini Malay will be a real perfect pair. Why is Avantika not considering it? She can keep him occupied all day in her bed and he will fulfill all her wishes.

Avantika's and the men's remarks were ringing in my ears for some reason.

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#177

I'm glad to know he will save everyone. I feel so bad for Lopa. I always get deeply involved with the characters in a story/show. At times I want to punish the villain/vamp myself. some of my college mates say I'm too touchy. I know Chandra is very happy to see she truly accepted being his wife now. Chandra Malay difference is like heaven and hell.

I remember his blood had fallen on her forehead so they are bound by blood that way too. But you are saying there are yet other ways too? If a riyal couple want privacy they can close their door and ask the guards to not let anyone disturb them. I saw it in Jodha Akbar. Rajat was there too. I love the way they support each other silently but strongly. Nandini forgot that she was holding Vaid hands. Her soul knew the touch. You are closing the loops so well.

Yes it's very clear that no one knows she is married. No one saw the blood fall on her forehead. The swayamvar was left incomplete too. I think she could have told Lopa though.

Edited by 2filmy - 7 years ago

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#178

I thought of Ganga the minute I read the line the blood washed away his fury.

I felt he is like Krishna to Nandini as Arjun so Malay can be Shishupal. He is insulting Chandra.

They have a silent code language that only they understand

You did right. It wasn't needed. He was drunk so may have overlooked. But even if he saw he didn't care who was there in the room.

I had assumed right then. There is a Shakuni too. Empty vessels do make a lot of noise

Your story is so interesting that it increases my curiosity with each update. I applaud for the research you made for your previous story. Very few do it.

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Neha

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Posted: 7 years ago

#179

Wishing all visitors of this thread and of course Sangeetha,

a very happy new year 2018!!!

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#180

They are really soulmates. I think their level of understanding is absent even in couples living together for long.

I understand she didn't wish to be too direct nor did she want Malay to understand her words truly. She needn't be sophisticated in her words. But she is a princess so has to maintain a protocol and decorum. If he really had mardangi he would have fought Chandra in the field openly. Men who protect women are real mards. I wish to see Malay Nalini marriage. I would personally plan their wedding if needed.

I know normally SIL demands are granted. But there has to be a limit there.

They show their power to Nandini only as Avantika can't overpower Nand and Malay can't overpower his dad.

So show strength over the apparently weak princess and dominate her as you please.

Nandini should give back to them both and pay them in their own coins.