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Posted: 7 years ago

Hard as a rock

"You cant do that love Himani was stern

"I cant come home without seeing him atleast one time Maa

"Yes you can, you did your best. You are the best Mommy. He loves you nobody can change that. Its time to let go Himani swallowed tearing up

"Aise kaise aa jaaoon? Itni door itna chalakar aayi hoon, ya to usko lekar jaaoongi yay ahi reh jaaoongi Avantika was adamant

"Abhi raat bahut ho gayi, aap so jao. "Deepak front desk mein hain, he has promised to be there until you leave the hotel in the morning she had showered barely eaten the room service food

Deepak was a Gupta Mills employee's nephew

"I am fine. What if I had become a NGO worker? Tab aap kya kartin? Teeku giggled for the first time

"Oh yes, phir hum saath chal padte aapke, like movie starlets ke Moms Himani giggled

"I will also need my hair dresser and PR person and the rest of the entourage she smiled yawned and lay back

It was midnight, she couldn't sleep

She spent the next hours tossing and turning, texting Devika

When the blue skies peeked through the curtains she jumped off the bed, showered again, and drove down to the JV sahib's residence, drinking her chai on the way

The guards recognized her "Judge sahib to subehahi korat chale gaye she was told at 7:17 AM

She was asked to wait until 9 AM when the waiting room was going to be opened

She still went to the waiting room and was the first one

The guard was missing from the chamber door also

She sat there.

And waited...

And waited

The thought of Chandan making her cry

Around 10 ish she heard footsteps

She stood up in anticipation

A tall man, wearing blue jeans and a black Hard Rock Cafe, Mayfair tee entered the room

"Umm.. excuse me she mumbled "Can I talk to you? she asked seeing the tee and the jeans

"Mera matlab, ek second baat karenge? she changed the language realizing it could be an employee wearing a knockoff

"The judge is at the courthouse he said abruptly in his smooth fluent flow

"Are you family? she asked with a polite half smile

"Umm yes...he said confused

"I want to speak to ... I don't know who brought umm... Chandan Vuh. she didn't say Vaidya

"I did he said firmly

"YOU? she was not prepared to come F2F with the man

"You were told to bring the kid?

"Not TOLD he said

"U see taking him away from school without the mother's permission is unlawful she said loudly

"Are you going to talk about law to an attorney? he scoffed

"You are a lawyer? she was baffled

"I called you didn't I on January 20th? he smiled unamused

"You stole my child!! U had no right to do that she shrieked

"Right? he scoffed again

"Of course right, I AM HIS FAMILY

"His Dad was born here

"Chandan's Dad was thrown out of this very same house she shouted, waving a finger

"You ignored the court order

"You stole the child

"I took whats mine

Saying so, the hard as a rock Harit walked away


Edited by Nisha0604 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Nisha0604

Haha Shru

IKR
SO SO SO HAPPY TO SEE YOU


jeena yahan, marna yahan, iske siwa jaana kahan...
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Posted: 7 years ago
This is superr say bee uparrr. Emotions jai, drama hai aur energy hain
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Posted: 7 years ago
ya to usko lekar jaaoongi yay ahi reh jaaoongi Avantika was adamant

Yes you can live here and we all would love that don't we 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
Feet and Arms

It was all about JV sahib and the lady opposite him down on her knees making a strong emotional plea.

This update gave us so much insight about the honorable man JV sahib is. That he has a reassuring presence speaks for the respect and the position he has today.

There was intense admiration, respect and sympathy for Avantika for her selflessness he sees in her. He definitely understands where she is coming from.

But this is not just a mere court case for him. It's his grand son in question . He makes her a plea bargain as well and shows her his emotions . It was catch 22 and the judge in him came out on top having heard both the sides and looking at the legality of the proceedings but I have no doubt in my mind that when push comes to shove, he will simply not hide behind the comfort of biological relations either as a grandparent or a judge , instead you can count on him doing what's right for the little boy

I am so mighty excited with how each character is getting its shades. Lovely 👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hard as a Rock

Right we get down to Business 😆 .

In contrast to feet and arms, it's avanti taking a wild swing , going boom boom against a man who cast it in stone clinically with minimal fuss saying I took what's mine'. Patthar ki Lakeer. If it was emotional plea from her earlier , now it's all blows accusing him of kidnapping , a court order notwithstanding. 😆

Any chemistry between a man and woman is helped by its initial Shock value. He ruffled her 😆 and she was flaying her arms and legs , different stance of her feet and arms though 😃

Hard as a rock man he might be, but Chandan is key here. He can't buy the affection of a little boy . If he is anywhere in the vicinity when Chandan gets to see Avantika the first second after this mini ordeal he has been through, the pathar is going to show some paani and there in lies Miss. Tiku Gupta's panja 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
"A mother is she who can take the place of all others but whose place no one else can take" - Cardinal Mermillod

Avantika was Chnadhan's mom for a while now. Chachu can't fill that place. I positively hope Chandhan draws Avantika towards the Bareilly lawyer !
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Posted: 7 years ago
Sorry
I had to go to a US citizenship ceremony party for a Gautemalan guy.

Off to write the next chapter

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Posted: 7 years ago

"Losing Pieces

She waited there though she was dismissed by him. She waited until Noon hoping the kind old lady would show. She did around Noon, and was hesitant at first and then walked over to her

"Aap? she asked

"Ma'am can I please meet Chandan one time? she begged

"Umm.. who to ab... so rahe hain she said kindly

"Bus ek baar? Kab uthenge? she asked

"Who raat ko bohot der ho gayi un logon ke aane mein, uske baad who umm.. ro... mera matlab, nayi jagah she checked herself

"He cried? He cried? she began to cry

"Aap ko is se zyaada main kuch nahi keh sakti she said politely wringing her hands helplessly

"Aap jaanti hain who do saal se mere paas raha hai usko kisi aur ki aadat nahi hai siway mere parents ke aur parivar ke, please mujhe us se milne dein aap she begged

Hard as a rock returned, from what looked like a trip to the court, he walked in purposefully


To say he was shocked would be an understatement

She was disheveled and heart broken.

"Khana lagwayen aapke liye?" Mrs Vaidya enquired

"I thought I told you there is nothing to talk about" he said sternly looking at her

"I JUST want to meet him one time. You went to his school grabbed him, and took off, I havent seen him in a day and a half. I dont think Ive had a day the last two years when I havent seen him so long" she explained earnestly wiping her tears

"We hadnt seen him in five" he said expressionlessly

"This is not a tit for tat, please, this is not a tit for tat" she begged holding Mrs Vaidya's hands

"Betaaa.." Mrs Vaidya seemed to be softening

"Ma hum khaana lautkar khaayenge, I have a meeting" he said very softly and politely to his mother

"Dont go before we talk about it" she almost sprinted behind him

The people waiting in the room began to gawk

"No you cannot see him. There! I just said it" he said

"Betaaa... Chandu..." Mrs Vaidya began to say something

"Ma hum abhi oopar hi jaa rahen hain" he was frustrated

It appeared to Avantika the lil boy was inconsolable

She could tell

Yes, she could tell

She wasnt biologically related but she could tell

That poor baby was crying...

Oh! how cruel

"I bet he is crying, woh raha hoga, uska school hai aaj, uska backpack lunch box sab ghar pe hai" she pleaded

"U forgot, I picked him up from his school" he smirked

"His toys, books, clothes, we were reading Shel Silverstien at nights" her eyes sparkled

"we have those books here" he said bluntly and went into what appeared to be a giant home law library

Without being summoned the durban walked up to Mrs Vaidya

"Beta aap jaayen" Mrs Vaidya said with an ache

"Mrs Vaidya PLEEEZ" Avantika held her hand one last time...

She squeezed Avantika's hand lovingly and let go

Deepak was waiting by her car talking to someone

"Uncle ne kaha aap Roorkee chal pado"

"Nahi, main Dilli chali jaaongi" she said in a hoarse voice and got in her car, and slid into the dusty highway in front of the JV sahib residence and drove, utterly devastated...

This would begin what would be weeks of sheer agony and torture for her in Delhi. Not being able to be in that Saket house seeing Chandan's things in there. Not being able to rest in Roorkee.

At first, her mother would sternly insist "get over it" "This was bound to happen at some point" "Your groom would have never accepted you raising your friend's child"

"No man wants to raise another man's child"

"Kab taq karti aap yeh man maani? Just think of it as a painful lesion that got cut off, you will heal eventually"

she argued endlessly that she would have never married if the man didnt agree to her raising the child

"Aaj ke India ki baat karen Teeku. 100 saal ke baad ki nahi. We still have a long way to go. Aap jaanti hain Bareilly mein hi kis had taq yeh baat phail chuki thi ki aap, bina shaadi ke ek bacha paal rahin hain"

"You are trying to use this opportunity to tell me this was wrong all long Maa?" she shrieked

"No, we knew this could come some day beta"

"Bhabhi aap kya kartin?" she challenged Meeta

"Dekho Teeku, between my dentist profession, one kid and another on the way I dont have enough energy for my family"

"To aapke liye bhi Chandan alien hai?"

"Teeku unhoney mana kar diya milwaane se" Meeta was reasonable

"You had so many opportunities to set this right beta. You feared they would take him away and hence didnt respond politely to ANY of their overtures over the two years" Shyam Sundar Gupta pointed

"they treated Srishti and Hemant SO badly!!"

"U are not the judge and jury, u cannot mete out justice to them. He is part of that family"

"IT HURTS SO BAD DAD" she crumbled to a heap on the floor by his chair and rested her head on his knee and sobbed

Unable to bear his daughter's distress he would seek info out

Her Dad would hear from ":sources" in and around the Vaidya family about how terrible life was for Chandan. How despite every intervention and every conceivable form of love affection and care he would not stop crying and continue to miss his "teeku maasi"

He would discuss all of it privately with Himani.

Both families in sheer disbelief over how much these two souls were connected.

Losing Pieces

~ Shel Silverstein

Talked my head off

Worked my tail off

Cried my eyes out

Walked my feet off

Sang my heart out

So you see

There's really not much left of me

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Posted: 7 years ago
Wow, no words, my eyes welled. Such is the power of this episode. Waiting for them to call her back as they are unable to console Chandan. Both the elders of the Vaidya family seem to be understanding except for the dude for sure. This begs the question of why they disowned chandan's father in the first place. They don't seem to be heartless. We will know about it all eventually.
Thank you for this new saga.


On a different note can you please, please let us know what had happened between Ranjan and that woman which led Savi to kill herself. I think that is the only part that seriously needs a closer. However , when you have the time you would continue with their lives. That story is too close to our hearts and is impossible to let go.


Thank you.

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