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Posted: 7 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: Errantnomad

That must have been tough on you all last yr Nisha!! Glad that they could put his ear back together again.
Sugar's the slow poison but the sugar meds industry is a serious racket out there .

Sappy love stories always makes the world a better place. More power to all these stories and all you writers. 😊


I have always been addicted to sugar
I have never gone off sugar, unless it was gestational diabetes testing
So the last 30 hours have been a milestone for me
Since Pongal is over there is a break in festivities so just timepass

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Posted: 7 years ago
#92
Character map so far ...

Roorkee Guptas
Shyam Sundar Gupta /Himani Gupta
Dhruv Gupta/Bani (Vivaan)
Vibhu Gupta/Meeta (Surbhi)
Avantika Gupta

Bareilly Vaidyas
Shyamsunder/Lakshmi Vaidya
Harshal Vaidya
Hemant/Srishti Vaidya (Chandan)
Harit Vaidya


Garima Sood

Nisha, did u mean to name the SR Gupta and SR Vaidya the same or did I misread it ??

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Posted: 7 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: Nisha0604

Thanks Kalps for the vote of confidence

I quit sugar COMPLETELY two days ago. I mean coffee and tea taste like shit now
Sorry

Its true

This gives me something to look forward to

(No I am not diabetic... YET😡 but just thought I would give it a shot since the rate at which I was going was scaring me)

I am too addicted to sweets



I can live without desserts. But absolutely need my filter coffee with atleast one spoon of sugar !
Good luck With your attempt !
Edited by jaschick - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#94
Now that Nisha's new characters are set in my mind, off to reread and analyze !

Thank u Nisha for feast and poetic excerpts !
Edited by jaschick - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#95
Oh beep
Thanks Jas for the summary

Lets name Vaidya as Sita Ram (SR) to keep it aligned with my mis quote earlier?

I mean its a real family now I cant mess with the names too much😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: Nisha0604

Oh beep

Thanks Jas for the summary

Lets name Vaidya as Sita Ram (SR) to keep it aligned with my mis quote earlier?

I mean its a real family now I cant mess with the names too much😳



Jazzy did her homework so well 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
#97

Feet & Arms

She was given chai much like everyone else, and then the second time too as people started to leave

JV or Judge Vaidya sahib appeared almost half hour after 7

There were two other people waiting for him at that time

The assistants brought his bag and gown and he walked in simply with no airs

Looked around the room and paused on her face

He smiled a little politely

She got up immediately

"Hello... Mr. Vaidya? she said nervously

"Please sit... please sit... I will need some time to freshen up and moisten my throat he smiled

She nodded dazedly as if she had heard that voice before

The other two that were waiting woke from their slumber and stiffened...

Over 20 minutes passed and he appeared walking over to the men waiting spoke to them kindly

Held both their hands as they begged and handed the files to his assistant and then made his way to her

"I am Avantika Gupta she said wasting no time

He looked confused at first, then a look of shock passed through his eyes, then a glint of affection, sparkling

"Aap bhi aayin Chandan ke saath? he asked sincerely

"Oh NO... NO sir... I am here looking for Chandan she said dejected that even he didn't have a clue where the lil munchkin was

"Aap nahi laayin? he was shocked

"They took him from his school

"Who "they?

"Umm.. some lawyers and a court employee and some Delhi Police folks "The principal said she began to cry

"Please sit he said

Went inside and returned 15 minutes later

"Ms Gupta, they are on their way. I am sorry this happened

"They were on their way ever since I came here she screeched

"they stopped to buy him clothes and shoes

"Ufff she crashed sobbing, realizing she can never have the kid back

"Ms Gupta, will you have tea?

"I already h... had she fought a lump

"They are almost here he said

"I cant live without him she begged

She fell at his feet, on to her knees, clamped her hands and begged "Please... I am sorry for not letting you see him, can he PLEASE LIVE WITH ME? she begged

"Umm he appeared tearful

He quickly helped her up

"I want to be with him she said firmly wiping her tears

"Ms Gupta

"I am the only family he has she said accidentally

His expression changed to sadness

"He is my grandson he cleared his choked up throat

"I am so sorry... I didn't mean it in a bad way... Srishti asked me to raise him, the doctor at Fortis hospital will vouch for it. I promise she pleaded

"He is the only reminder of my son the judge teared up

"Please sir

He swallowed, grunted... paused.. walked away, turned back... grunted and sighed and "Ms Gupta it's the court's order, he belongs to his biological family he said and walked out

She cried her heart out the next 20 minutes and picked up her purse and walked out the gates

Her mother had sent her details of Sobti Continental

She had also promised Dad's contact in Bareilly would help bring her back to Roorkee in the AM

She read the texts in daze as she started her car completely overlooking the Toyota Camry enter the giant gates with its floodlights on, in the back seat a little 5 year old boy slept in the arms of his chachu Harit Vaidya

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Posted: 7 years ago
#98
hum keh dete hain, yeh kahaani hriday ko cheer kar rakh degi... Nisha , this is turning out to be so devilishly emotional. and I am already hyperventilating about Harit Vaidya. lawyer our wo bhi aristocratic UP waala..UFF
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Posted: 7 years ago
#99
Haha Shru
IKR
SO SO SO HAPPY TO SEE YOU

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Posted: 7 years ago
Glad that she missed harit in her first visit to Bareilly otherwise it would not have been this kind...both vaidyas felt sorry for her.if it was harit,things wouldn't be the same...

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