~~ Thora Saath Chahiye ~~ [Part 4] # 9

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Adnan

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Posted: 18 years ago

#51

PART 3

Kashish has been crying all day long....and trying to call Soham but he is not taking her calls....the day is passed...Kashish is in a dilema of what to do...on one side...she has her child.....and on her other hand it Soham...it almost nite and there is no sign of Soham.....Kashish sleeps on the sofa waiting for him.....He comes home really late at nite and sees Kashish sleeping and goes to the bedroom and gets changes and sleeps...without even thinking abt once abt Kashish...

MORNING
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Kashish wakes up and wakes to the bedroom and sees that Soham is already awake and is working on a file....Kashish wnts to talk to him to convince him abt the child....but as Soham sees Kashish...he dnt gives her any chance and say
Soham(smiles):Good Morning !!!!....chalu tayyar hojao..
Kashish:Soham meri baat toh sunooo
Soham:puri zindagi pari hai tumhari baatein sune ke liye abhi nahin we are already late...[he goes to the closet and selects a dress for her ] yeh wali tum per achi lagti hai wear this
Kashish:hmmm per tumne ek bar phir socha....
Soham:sochne ko kuch hai hee nahin...just trust me....[hugs her]
[Kashish is all expressionless and gets ready being all quite they reach the hospital she is all quite where as Soham makes all the arrangements and talks to the doctor]
Doctor:Mr.Soham dnt worry ur wife wud be perfectly fine....
Soham:mein ghar kab lay kar jaa sakta hoon Kashish ko
Doctor:aaj shaam ko hee....
Soham:thats great [looks at Kashish]
Doctor:Nurse ! Mrs.Khanna ko operation theatre mein lay jayen....

[All the prepartions are being done...and Kashish is all expressionless....may she choose anyone...loose wud all be hers...she is taken in to operation theatre...]

(SONG AT BACKGROUND)
[Kashish asks doc that she wants Soham to be here with her....whereas nurse informs her that Soham was waiting out when he gots a call from his work he asked Nurse to inform Kashish that he have to leave ]
pyaar hai ya saza, aai mere dil bata
tootata kyon nahi dard ka silsila
is pyaar mein hon kaise kaise imntihaan
ye pyaar likhe kaisi kaisi dastaan
ya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agar
dilbar pe ho na, dilbar pe ho na koi asar
ho ya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agar
dilbar pe ho na, dilbar pe ho na koi asar
pyaar hai ya saja, aai mere dil bata
tootata kyon nahi dard ka silsila

[ Kashish thinks abt her time with soham wen he was never there for her.]

kaisa hai safar wafa ki manjil ka
na hai koi hal dilon ki mushkil ka
dhadkan dhadkan bikhri ranjishein
saansein saansein tooti bandishein
kahi to har lamha honton pe fariyaad hai
kisi ki duniya chaahat mein barbaad hai
ya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agar
dilbar pe ho na, dilbar pe ho na koi asar
ho ya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agar
dilbar pe ho na, dilbar pe ho na koi asar

[ Kashish feels the new life inside her that is only thing she got from the good memories with Soham she don't wana lose it.]

koi na sune sisakati aanhon ko
koi na dhare tadapati baahon ko
aadhi aadhi puri khwaishein
tooti footi sab farmaaishein
kahin shak hain kahin nafrat ki deewaar hai
kahin jeet mein bhi shamil palpal haar hain
ya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agar
dilbar pe ho na, dilbar pe ho na koi asar
ho ya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agar
dilbar pe ho na, dilbar pe ho na koi asar
ho o o pyaar hai ya saja, aai mere dil bata
tootata kyon nahi dard ka silsila
ho o o o ho o o o
na poocho dard bandon se
hansi kaisi khushi kaisi
musibat sar pe rehati hain
kabhi kaisi kabhi kaisi
ho o o o... rabba, rabba ho o o ho
rabba ho o o, ho o ho rabba
[Kashish gets up and tells Doctor she don't wants this abortion and leaves the hospital]
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EVENING
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Soham comes home and sees Kashish sitting in the hall with her face buried in her hands.

Soham:Kashish!!! i m sooooo happy......[hugs him] aaj maine apni manzil ki taraf phele kadam barha lia hai....i got the biggest deal of ma career.....we should celebrate....i m sooo glad ke tumne emotional hokar koi galat fasla nahin liya....u listened to me....
Kashish(firmly):Maine tumhari baat nahin mani Soham...i listen to my heart....our child is still with me....
Soham(shouts): What do u think wht u r doing ??? Tumhein itna samjhaya per tumhein toh kuch samjh nahin ata....humare sab sapno se zyda tumhein yeh bacha pyra hai.....Kashish...wht abt US wht abt ME.......how cud u do this to me.....

[ finally Kashish loses all her patience n says]

Kashish: Soham how could u do this to me..agar yahii sawaal main tumse poochon tho tumhe kaise lagega... tum jaanthe ho ek ladki har rishtha nibathi hai.. ek beti ka , ek behen ka , ek biwi ka....lekin joh rishtha in sabse bada hai woh ek maa aur bachche ka rishtha.... a lady feels complete wen she gives birth to her child.. aur tum mujhse keh rahe ho kii main khud se woh ehsaas cheen loon..kaise kar sakthe ho tum aisa soham... kaise...[she shakes his shoulders]
Soham:theek hai Kashish mein kuch nahin keroonga jo karna hai tum kerooo it is either me or the child....
Kashish:Soham agar baat yaahaan thak aahii gayi hai kii mujhe apne bachche aur tumhare beech kissi ek ko chunna hai then i choose my child.....
Soham:fine theek hai.....so u have time to pack ur stuff....
Kashish:mujhe yakeen hai Soham tum laut kar humare pass hee aoooge....
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NEXT DAY
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RAJEEV ON PHONE
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Rajeev:Mr. Sharma maine apko saaf saaf kaha tha ke mein yahan apni property sale karne aya hoon then app kaise kisi ko woh rent per day sakte hain....
Mr.Sharma:i m sorry Sir maine socha....
Rajeev:kia socha apne...ek toh jab ek ek baat bata nai jati apki samjh mein nahin ati
Mr.Sharma:sorry Sir
Rajeev:call karein unko aur bolein humein woh ghar rent per nahin dena...
Mr:Sharma:per Sir woh loug toh already bunglow dekh rahe honge....
Rajeev:apse nahin hoga kuch mein khud baat karlounga...[takes the key of the car and walks away ]

LOCATION :RAJEEV'S BUNGLOW

[ Rajeev reaches there and sees a girl.....roaming and looking at the bunglow....]

Rajeev:Excuse Me !!!! Yeh ghar....[Kashish turns arnd and Rajeev is lost]
Kashish: haan i like this house...kitna rent hai....
[Rajeev is all lost]
Kashish:Hello !!!! Maine kuch poacha jee
Rajeev(come back to sense):Kya hojata hai mujhe.....jab bhi tumse milta hooon
Kashish:kuch kaha apne nahin
Rajeev:nahin....i mean nahin toh
Kashish:so i like this house...i can't make any contract....theek hai ??
Rajeev:haan theek hai Mam
Kashish:good....mein aaj shaam ko hee shift karloungi yahan....
Rajeev:apka hee ghar hai....
[Kashish leaves and Rajeev calls Sharma....]
Rajeev:Mr. Sharam yeh ghar ab sale nahin horaha
Mr.Sharma:magar Sir !
Rajeev:mujhe bunglow ke pass wale out house ki keys chahiye aaj se mein wohi rahoonga....
Mr.Sharma:okay Sir .
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EVENING
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Rajeev moves in the out house where the view of bunglow is really clear....he sees Kashish.....shifting into the house and is smiling seeing her.....

SONG AT THE BACKGROUND
mere mann ye bata de tu
kis or chala hai tu
kya paya nahi tune
kya dhundh raha hai tu
jo hai ankahee jo hai ansuni
woh baat kya hai bata
Mitwa kahein dharkanein tujhse kya
mitwa yeh khudse toh na tu chhupa

mere mann ye bata de tu
kis or chala hai tu
kya paya nahi tune
kya dhundh raha hai tu
jo hai ankahee jo hai ansuni
woh baat kya hai bata
Mitwa kahein dharkanein tujhse kya
mitwa yeh khudse toh na tu chhupa

jeevan dagar mein prem nagar mein
aaya nazar mein jab se koi hain
tu sochta hain tu puchata hain
jiski kami thi kya yeh wohi hain
haa yeh wohi hain
tu ek pyasa aur yeh nadi hain
kaahe nahi isko tu khulke bataye
jo hai ankahee jo hai ansuni
woh baat kya hai bata
Mitwa kahein dharkanein tujhse kya
mitwa yeh khudse toh na tu chhupa
[He goes and helps Kashish in arranging the stuff in the house]

teri nigaahen, paa gayi rahein
par tu yeh soche jaaun na jaaun
yeh zindagi jo hai naachti toh
kyon bediyon mein hai tere paanv
preet ki dhun par naach le paagal
udta agar hai udne de aanchal
kaahe koi apne ko aaise tarsaaye
jo hai ankahee jo hai ansuni
woh baat kya hai bata
Mitwa kahein dharkanein tujhse kya
mitwa yeh khudse toh na tu chhupa
mere mann ye bata de tu
kis or chala hai tu
kya paya nahi tune
kya dhundh raha hai tu
mitwa...

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Edited by Adildagr8 - 18 years ago

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Samina

@Iqbal Neha1

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Posted: 18 years ago

#52

amazing part
glad that rajeev moved right next 2 kashish hope they become friends
soham will really regret letting kashish but its his loss and i hope its rajeev's gain
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Adnan

@Mischeivous

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Posted: 18 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1
amazing part
glad that rajeev moved right next 2 kashish hope they become friends
soham will really regret letting kashish but its his loss and i hope its rajeev's gain
👏

Hey thanks and i think ur hopes wud be done in next part 😃

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Kaz

@SujalkiDeewani

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 18 years ago

#54

OMG!! OMG!! OMG!! OMG!!

awsum FF aDi........it rrRrRroOoOoOxXxXxXxXx

starting mein hee twist..............😉...wow man....u can right so wellll!!

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Hats Off 2 ur brilliant ideas...n creative mind!!

keep it up!!!!

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Adnan

@Mischeivous

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: SujalkiDeewani

OMG!! OMG!! OMG!! OMG!!

awsum FF aDi........it rrRrRroOoOoOxXxXxXxXx

starting mein hee twist..............😉...wow man....u can right so wellll!!

👍🏼

👍🏼

👍🏼

👍🏼

👍🏼

👏

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Hats Off 2 ur brilliant ideas...n creative mind!!

keep it up!!!!

Hey thanks....Kinzu...ur comment was shoooooooo sweet...hope that u wud be regular in commenting 😳

Edited by Adildagr8 - 18 years ago

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Bhumika amin

@ami_princess

Voyager

Posted: 18 years ago

#56

hey very nice part 👏 .........i am so happy that kashish left the house 😛 ............ans i am so angry that soham could order kashish to abort their child.......... 😡

very nice part ADI 😆

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Hana

@HhAaNnAa

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#57

wow adi gr88 part yaaar tooo goooood gooood soham deserves that acccha hua kashish neh ghar choddia continue sooooon

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 18 years ago

#58

adi dekho me here with my comments on the new part you have posted... woh actually mereko kal hii comment karna tha lekin mera yeh bekaar net screwed-up... anyway ab me coming to the part you posted... tho abhi part mein haal kuch aisa hai kii saara time kashish is udass & crying... she tries to call soham's number saara din par woh hai kii kashish ka phone utatha hii nahii hai..mujhe samaj nahii aatha yeh soham itna bura kyun hai... why is he doing like this... us insaan mein thodi bhii consideration hai bhii yaa nahii... ab saara time kashish is depressed aur rothi hui she spends her time... raat ko late soham aatha hai & kashish tho uska wait kar karke sofa par hii so gayii thi... ab as i told earlier yeh soham ko tho koi bhii consideration hii nahii hai he just without even looking at kashish once goes to his bedroom , changes & sleeps..ufff..yeh soham kitna zyada begairrat hai... he seriously does not deserve a girl like kashish in his life... ab agli subah bhii soham apni decision kashish pe thoptha hai..sayimg her to get ready kyunke unki doctor ke saath appointment hai... yeh kya baat hui.. woh bachcha jitna soham ka hai utna hii kashish ka bhii hai.. tho even kashish has the right to decide kii woh apna bachcha rakhna chahthi hai ya abort karna chahthi hai... actually kashish ka hakh on bachcha is more than that soham... you know what adi i hate soham... ab kashish bechari is just listening to soham.. is soham ne tho kashish ko apne haath mein ek tarah kii puppet bana diya hai... in the hospital bhi kashish is chup... chup kyun na rehthi uska dil joh baita jaa raha tha... soham doc se saari baatein kartha hai..& kashish is taken for the operation... tab dekho kashish is feeling like soham uske saath hoga tho she can face this roughness of her life too.. lekin usko bataya jaatha hai kii soham wahaan hai hii nahii he has left for work... yeh soham na is so irritating... he is getting on my nerves... mere samne aaya na tho i'll thrash him black & blue... ab kashish ko apni poori yaadein with soham yaad aathi hai..& woh yeh tay karthi hai kii she does not want to get abortion done & she leaves.... ab in the evening soham ghar louththa hai.. he is very happy kii usko ek bada contract mila hai..& also happy because she has aborted the kid..listening to him... he says kii ab unke sapne sach honge... well us jaise begairat insaan se aur expect bhii kya kiya jaa saktha hai... he speaks only about his dreams.. kashish ke sapno ko , uski zindagi ko joh har pal apne haatho se kulchal raha hai , round raha hai woh tho usko dikhayi nahii detha..this man is getting on my nerves... 😡 ab kashish ka telling him kii she has not killed their child... ab soham ka cheekna..kashish gave him a proper answer.. well but she is also bebas kyunke she wants soham & does want to kill her child.. lekin soham does not listen..& asks her to choose between him & the child... kashish chooses her child... very good decision taken by kashish...she has chosen what is right for her.. lekin soham ke aankhon par tho paiso kii patti lagi hui hai na... he asks her to leave... anyway soham ka aisa kehna achcha hii hua kyunke kashish ko chutkaara tho mila soham se.. kashish khulli hawa mein saans tho le sakthi hai... azaad hoke..& not bound in her duties... achcha hai yeh scene mast... 👏 ab then coming to the next scene jahaan rajeev is like woh apna bungalow rent ko nahii dena chahtha hai.. & he comes to send away the person.. lekin jab woh wahaan aatha hai he is in for a pleasant shock kyunke he sees kii the persin who wants the home for rent is none other than the girl whom he saw in the airport & who had a impact on him all way long... ab rajeev decides to give the house to kashish.. aur phir uska sochna kii what happens to him when he sees this girl.. well is baat pe mujhko rajeev se kehna hai kii yeh ishq ka jadoo hai.. dheere dheere karke dil ko bechaine aur betaab kar detha hai... agge agge dekho tumhara kya haal hotha hai.. then rajeev calls some one & says kii he will give the house for rent.. & that he wants to stay in the outhouse... jahaan se uske ghar ka view clear hai... rajeev keeps looking at kashish... he goes helps her in moving her samaan & all... how sweet..very cute.... rajeev tho gaya kaam se sachchi... he has been clearly been clean-bowled by kashish... very good going... mazaa aagaya... 😳 hmm..next part se i think bohat hii zyada interesting hone waala hai with rajeev & kashish living pass-pass.. shayad un dono mein dosti bhi ho jaye.. yaa yeh bhii ho saktha hai kii un dono ke beech sharting mein thodi misunderstanding ho..then woh dost bane... yeh mera guess hai... kyun adii main sahii hoon ya ghalat... 😉 adi ab next part jaldi se post karna... me will be eagerly waiting for it.... 😃

Edited by sun_423 - 18 years ago