~~ Thora Saath Chahiye ~~ [Part 4] # 9 - Page 5

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey great intro.........keep writing 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hi Everyone ! I know it has been long i havn't started this story...i just got too busy with ma life...but as now i got time...i decide to write it...i know most of u wud have forgotten abt it...but still hope u wud read and like it...itz abt complications in relations....do dnt expect too much romance and so on....anyhow herez the 1st part i know itz small but i wud be continuing it till 2morrow hopefully hope u like it 😃
Edited by Adildagr8 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 1



Location : Airport

Time : EVENING

Our story STARTS


We see Kashish standing all really dressed up with flowers in her hands waiting for somone very anixously....she has a wide smile when the passangers start comming out .

Kashish(to herself): Soham ko kuch aur yaad ho ya nahin humari aniversary toh yaad hai....koi baat nahin agr unhoon ne mujhe manaya nahin galti unko hoo ya meri pyar toh dono hee karte hain so mein hee mana loungi....abhi tak mujhe wish nahin kiya...surprise dena chahte honge .

[She is thinking all this that her cell rings itz Soham she picks up being excited ]
Kashish : Hello ! App kaahan....[Soham interups]
Soham:i have a meeting to attend driver ko bolo ghar wapis jaaye.
Kashish: per mein toh khud...[Soham hungs up and Kashish have tears in her eyes] sun toh lete ke mein tumhara yahan khud intezaar kar rahi thee...aniversary hai humari...per tumhein yaad nahin hai na hee itna time hai ke mein wish kar sakoon.....[she turns back with a heavy heart and bumps into Rajeev]
Rajeev:Sorry nahin bolein itz okay !
Kashish(lost):sorry
Rajeev:maine abhi toh kaha tha ke sorry nahin bolna....
Kashish:kia app side per haatein ge
Rajeev:jee zaroor per phele yeh flowers toh dein jo mere liye layen thee
[Kashish ignores him and is abt to leave.....when Rajeev calls her ]
Rajeev:Miss sune...! [When she turns back he clicks he pic of her ] u r beautiful...
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Location : PARTY at Shiv Kapoor's place

Time : Same Nite

We see a Birthday party at its full swing...there are alot of ppl.....all are waiting for the cake to be cut....but the bday boy Arya is waiting for his dear uncle who is as usual late

Kripa:Rajeev aaj phir late hai uska kuch nahin hosakta
Shiv:ab moody hai mil gaya hoga phir koi
Kripa :Mil gaya hoga ??
Shiv :okay Mil gayi hogi....ab he is so popular with girls...
Kripa: and U
Shiv:i thought hum Rajeev ki baat kar rahe thay baat muj per kyun agayi
Kripa:har baat tum per hee ati hai.....bas
Shiv:kis baat ka ghussa kar rahi hooo maine toh kuch kia bhi nahin
Kripa:nahin kia....woh kis ladki ko subah phone per love u bol rahe thay
Shiv :Oh God woh ....
Kripa:haan woh
Shiv:she was just fan i dnt need to give u an explaination for that......
Kripa: u do....
Shiv : i love u yeh bahut hai explain karne ke liye....
[Kripa hugs Shiv]
Shiv:tum bhi na kahan se baat ko kahan le jati hooo
[Rajeev comes and standz behind them with Arya in his arms]
Rajeev:ahem ahem....ap logo ke romance khatam hogaya ho toh.....hum yahan hain
Shiv:Hey Rajeev !
Rajeev:Hii Sweetheart !
Kripa: No ! Hi...tum hamshea late hojate hoo
Rajeev:wohi toh late nahin hota toh tum aaj is langoor ke saath nahin hoti
Kripa:yeah yeah.....tumhara bahane khatam nahin honge....Arya tumhara kabse intezaar kar raha tha
Rajeev:ap apni baat karein...Arya toh mujhe bilkul naraaz nahin hai Kyun Junior....give me a high 5
Shiv:kahan rahe gaye thay
Kripa:kis ke saath thay yeh poachooo
Rajeev:phele cake cut karlein...mujhe bhook lag rahi hai.....
[They cut the cake and the party is set of fire....]
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Location : Kapooor House

Time : Mid Nite

Shiv:So london kaisa hai ?
Rajeev:kya zamana gaya hai tu london ka poach raha hai ask me ke Rajeev tu kaisa hai ?
Shiv:acha mere bhai bata tu kaisa hai ?
Rajeev:yeh toh hum Kripa se poachte hain . Miss Kripa....mein apko kaisa lagta hoon ?
Kripa(smiles):tum aur tumhari flirting....
Rajeev:Kia yaar tum ne mujhe khabhi serious hee nahin liya agr liya hota toh...mera bhi kuch hojata....meri feeling ko flirting keha rahi hoooo
Shiv: acha na bata kab tak hai Mumbai mein
Rajeev:pata nahin yaar dil lag gaya toh raha lounga....aya toh mein apna bunglow sale karne aya hoon....
Shiv:iska matlab tum wapis nahin aooge khabhi....
Rajeev:Kia keroonga yaar...mom wahan hain woh akeli hojati hain jab mein nahin hota
Kripa:aur hum...dost hain tumhari...Arya tumhein miss karta hai uska kia...mein toh kehti hoon tum Aunty ko bhi lay aoo yahan....
Rajeev:taake woh meri shadi karwa dein...[he is seeing pics in his camera ]
Kripa:haan na acha toh hai ke woh tumhari shadi karwa dein.....aur tum yehi settle hojao....
Rajeev:nahin jee mein ase hee khush hoon....aage isi topic se bhaag kar yahan aya hoon...nahin karni muje shadi yeh baat samjh kyun nahin ati....[comes across Kashish's pic]
Shiv: So watz new ?
Rajeev:hmmm
Shiv:Kya hmmm ?
Rajeev:kuch nahin...just i met a girl today
Kripa:one more girl
Rajeev:nahin yaar waise met nahin..just airport per dekha tha
Shiv: So ???
Rajeev:so kuch nahin...i just clicked her pic...toh...
Kripa:Kya hua janab ??
Rajeev: bahut udaas aankhein hain....jaise kuch dhoond rahi hoon
Shiv:wah wah kis ladki per app shayar ban rahe hain....
Rajeev:kisi per nahin yaar..[puts the camera aside and talks abt other things ]...
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1 WEEK LATER (SOHAM IS BACK)

Location Doctor's clinic

Time :Morning

[We see Kashish waiting for....doctor]

FLASHBACK
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Kashish is in the kitchen making tea for Soham when she feels dizzy....she goes to Soham who is busy with his files

Kashish: mujhe chakar arahe hain...
Soham:kamzoori hogi
Kashsih:hosakta hai....
Soham:subah doc ke pass chali jana
Kashish(dizzy):hmmm..tum nahin chaloge...
Soham:nahin ek imp meeting hai..mein Dr.ko khud phone kark poach lounga
Kashish:waise toh mere saaath kahin jaate nahin hoo doc ke pass hee chaloo na
Soham: acha we will see abhi...jao sou jao
Kashish:mujse chala nahin jayega....
[Soham gets up and takes Kashish in his arms and takes her to bedroom]
Kashish:i love u
Soham:i love u too..ab sou jao
Kashish:nahin jao na...
Soham:mujhe bahut kaam hai sweetheart
Kashish:bas mere pass rahooo
Soham:bachoo ki tarah zid nahin kerooo
Kashish:ab koi aur nahin hai zid karne wala mujhe hee karne dou na
Soham:Good Nite [kisses her forehead and leaves]

FLASHBACK ENDZ

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Doctor :Mrs. Soham apki reports positive hain Congralutions u r gonna be a mother
Kashish(smiles):thanks alot doc
Doctor:ab apko apna zyda khyaal rakhna hoga...aur next time apne husband ko bhi saath lay kar ayega....
Kashish:jee...per unko yeh news mein khud doungi app kuch nahin batayega...
Doctor: OKay !
Kashish(thinks): kitna khush hoge tum yeh sun ke...kash tum mere saaath hote yahan....kitna imp hai yeh pal hum dono ke...liye....but aaj nahin yeh surprise me tumhein tumhari birthday per doungi....


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Edited by Adildagr8 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey very very very nice part 😉 cant belive that soham didn't came on their anniversary 😡
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 2


Kashish is very happy with the news that she is gonna be a mother....she decides not to tell this to Soham...until his bday which is next week.Kashish spent all her week planning for Soham bday....she plans to have dinner just for 2 of them.....and decorates home...Soham dnt have time too look arnd him and see the change...but Kashish is doing everything that she thinks wud make Soham happy
On the other hand we see Rajeev completing his phootshoots assignments and it has been a very busy week....

Location : Khanna House

Time :Evening

Soham Birthday !!!
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Kashish is waiting for Soham.....and has cooked dinner for him all his fav dishes....decorated the house with candles as he like it to be.....but there is no sign of Soham yet....she is really sleepy...she sleeps on the table itself.....itz 1 at nite...when she wakes up....and sees Soham....

Kashish:tum kab aye....utha dete na mujhe
Soham:nahin tum itne araam se sou rahi thee so dil nahin kar raha tha
Kashish(smiles): tumhara bday khatam hogaya but still happy bday
Soham: thanks...woh ma friendz gave me a party so wahan tha sorry tumhein batana bhool gaya
Kashish:itz okay ! woh khana
Soham:nahin i m full....bahut neend arahi hai
Kashish: mujhe tumhein kuch batana tha
Soham:abhi nahin Kashish subah baat karte hain
Soham:nahin...please abhi soute hai na...subah waise bhi jaldi uthna hai
Kashish:per sunoo toh [Soham goes to the bedroom]
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MORNING
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[Soham is getting ready for office.....Kashish is helping her put on the tie.....]

Soham:Kia baat karni thee apko ?
Kashish:kuch nahin
Soham:naraaz hooo
Kashish:fariq parhta hai tumhein
Soham:haan na bahut fariq parhta hai...
Kashish:koi fariq nahin parhta tumhine
Soham:parhta hai na yaar i loooooooove u soooo much
Kashish:lagta toh nahin hai
Soham:acha na kia baat thee woh toh bataooo
Kashish:ab tum pyar nahin karte toh maine socha koi aur toh hoo jo mujse pyar kare
Soham:ahaan mera rival....koi mil gaya kia
Kashish:rival nahin hai tum jaisa hee koi
Soham:mujhe late horaha hai Kashish...jo hai use hee bata dou jo batana hai
Kashsih:nahin usk baare mein tumhein batana hai per mujhe jana hai toh jao
Soham:samjha kerooo na acha bolo
Kashish[hugs him] :tum nahin hoge woh toh hoga mere saaath....u r gonna be a father...
Soham(shocked): WHAT !!!!!!!!
Kashish:humari family complete hojayegi...thats mayb wht have been missing in our relation....
Soham: r u serious ?[Soham aparts Kashish]
Kashish:yeh koi mazak karne wali baat hai
Soham:dekhoo Kashish....i dnt know how u tell u this but we are not in a position to have this kid...
Kashish:Soham....i know...but i want a kid....aur intezaar nahin kar sakti mein......2 saal hoge humari shadi hooo...tum nahin hote...kitni akeli ho jati hoon andaza hai tumhein....
Soham:isk matlab yeh toh nahin ke we shud have this kid .
Kashish:kyun nahin.....
Soham:kyun i dnt want kid at this point of time....i have ma career.....i dnt want any responsibilty i have sooo many things planned for us......i can't let it go for just...
Kashish(teary eyes):JUST....its our kid Soham
Soham:yeah but i dnt want....kid...not now..or mayb neva....
Kashish: Neva ?? do u know wht r u saying
Soham:bas maine keha dia na
Kashish:Soham ek bar toh sochoo...this is our baby....asa nahin bolo
Soham:Kashish....be pratical..itni emotional nahin hoo
Kashish:emotional kya matlab ?
Soham:matlab that we dnt want this child
Kashish:Nahin hoga yeh mujse Soham asa nahin kerooo
Soham:zid nahin keroooo mein asa kehna nahin chahta tha but tumhein hum dono mein se ek ko choose karna hoga....kal mein doc se appointment le lete hoon aaj pura din hai tumhare pass sochne ke liye hai...
Kashish(pleading and crying):mujhe majboor nahin kerooo Soham... dont do this to me.....tum jaante hoo mein tumse bahut pyar karti hooon.....
[Soham leaves for office leaving her like that]

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Edited by Adildagr8 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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adi kya baat hai.. kya parts post kiye hai tune zabardast... totally too good... sabki zindagiyo ko itne simple tarike se you have portrayed... kashish kii zindagi mein itne problems... aur phir woh soham..he is so bad... apni biwi se pehle apne kaam kii padii hai usse... then kashish aur rajeev kii pehli mulaqat.. rajeev complimenting kashish... wah mazaa aagaya..unki pehli mulaqat aisi thi kii it will have a impact on their lives hamesha... aur dekha rajeev pe kya impact hua hai... photo bhii leliye usne kashish kii apni mobile pe... and the scene between kripa , angad & rajeev.. it was very sweet.. their dosti was nice... tho ab rajeev wahaan has come to sell his ghar... lekin is baat pe i want to tell rajeev kii ab usko us ghar ko sell karne kii koi zaroorat nahii padegi.. kyunke bohat jald us ghar ko sambhal ne waali aayegi.... haha... yeh sab tumne bada hii achche tarike se likha hai adi.... too good..i must say.... 👏 now kashish is pregnant... she is so happy... lekin ab yeh soham kashish kii saari khushyo ko paani mein mila detha hai.. for him work is worship.. mujhko samaj nahii aatha kii if work comes first for him.. then why the he** did he marry.. aur bechari kashish ko aise tadpa raha hai...ab soham has given his decision & left.. i do not understand what this soham thinks of himself.. bachcha kashish ka bhii hai na.. tho she has more right on the child being the mother... yeh soham par tho mujhko fulltoo ghussa aa raha hai.. chance mile tho main usko kheench ke ek zor-dhaar thappad maroongi.... bechari kashish... 😡 adi very simply amazing , rocking , superb... emotions & relationships ko khoob portray kiya hai tune... simply great... mast...amazing.... stupendous...raapchik..bindaas... the story line is very different & also too damn interesting... keep up the good work going.... 👏 ab adi please next part jaldi se post karna..me waitig for the next part... next part mein i wish poore dil se kii kashish soham ko thappad mare... do continue soon... 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#47
my comment on ur first part:

Mindblasting entry...um...sujal gone already.....oh my i missed the lover boy so much now he's baq in ur story!Amazingly written.....and poor kashish!Soham is sooooo meaaaaaannnnn..erghhh!!! 😳 anyways!Dont get lsot and not be active!
Will wait for ur story now on! 😉

Great start 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Now on ur second part:

hmmmm...Soham as usual doesnt care...but still kashish cares for him a little too much...i think Rajeev is gonna save her...when the operation is just about to start...hes gonna teach a great lesson to Soham...why does Soham keep on saying he loves kashish but in real doesnt even care abt her! He wants to kill this child but Rajeev will save the kid...u know...Rajeev on the rescue! 😆 😆
He is soooo meannn! 😭
Greatly written 👏

Continue very sooon! 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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amazing parts
poor kashish i feel really bad 4 her
hope soham changes his mind
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey adi dear awesome part but very sad poor kashish yaaar this soham is getting on my nerves iska jaldi kuch karrro...gr88 part continue sooon 👏 👏

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