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Posted: 8 years ago

Thanks 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: yoginisahakari

Too good what to say

Excellent

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Thanks 😳 Didn't want to keep people hanging so I have updated the next part too.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: luvraj4ever

Lovely updates.. Abhimanyu is damn evil and corrupt... I can't imagine that naina ever loved him... I just hope Rajveer comes to know about his plans before he do anything to naina...

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Didn't want to keep people hanging so I have updated the next part. 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Part 13

Note 1; This part will be dark and a bit of a shocker. But it's critical to the storyline.

Note 2: Looks like the update has created quite a stir. So here are some clarifications

Naina only loves Rajveer. She has no feelings for Abhi.

Yes Naina is a deeply flawed human especially in comparison to Raj. Let's not forget she shot Raj in the original show. But as the story progresses she will prove herself worthy of his love.


The more Naina discovered about Lala gehlot, the more she was scared for Rajveer. She kept trying to contact him but he refused to listen to a word against Lala Sahab.

Abhi: Naina those papers have to be in Raj's house and you can get them out, You have the keys to his house.

Naina; I can never betray Raj;s trust,

Abhi: So you would rather letRaj's blind faith in N.D. Gehlot ruin his life. Do you want Raj to end up like Naveen

Naina (panicked): No.. Never. I'll get the papers.

It killed Naina to betray Raj's trust and extricate the papers. But she could do anything to save Raj. She entered the house when Raj wasn't there and got the papers.

She handed the papers over to Abhimanyu.

Abhimanyu (thinks evilly): ALMOST THERE NAINA. ALMOST. Well at least a traitor like Lala Gehlot will end up getting punished. My one good Karma

One week later Lala Gehlot was arrested and dragged unceremoniously from his office. It became the breaking news on all channels. Raj was with Lala when he was arrested. Raj looked horror struck and did his best to shield Lala from the volley of questions. Naina's eyes could only see Raj's pain in the TV coverage. She tried calling him all day and kept trying to meet him. But with no luck.

At 9 pm she got a call. It was Raj.

Raj: I am outside the palace. Come out.

Naina ran to Raj.

Naina: Raj I knoew what yo are going through. But you can see the evidence for yourself.

Raj: After Naveen's situation I would have expected you to understand that evidence can be manipulated as your Abhi has brilliantly done. But I am not here to chat. I have a simple yes/no question. Did you steal the papers from my house?

Naina:Raj.. I...

Raj: Yes or no?

Naina: Yes.

Raj slapped her across her face.

Raj: I had thought I'd die before slapping a woman, you of all women. But you deserve this and much worse. If you weren't Naveen sister I would have...

Naina: Raj listen to me. I am your wife.

Raj: Wife.. Haan. This marriage never meant anything to you and today I am saying this marriage is over. And you... I don't hate you because that would mean having feelings for you. You are dead to me.

Naina hugged him tightly and began sobbing like a child.


Naina: How can you say that? I did all this for you. Your love?

Raj laughed cynically.

Raj: you cant love anybody but yourself you selfish woman. I put everything on the line for you and naveen. And you put the man i worship in jail. And on who's insistence? Abhimanyu? Yout lover

Raj sneered at her.

Raj: You dont deserve my love. You and Abhi are meant fot each other.

She tried holding him. But d he jerlked her hand amd walked away. Naina's legs gave away and she fell down on the ground. It started pouring but the rain made no difference to her. She sat there numb and motionless.

Abhi found her there drenched in rain an hour later. He picked her up and took her inside. Though he had genuinely been worried for her, seeing her drenched aroused the devil in him again. She was wearing a fitted white salwar kameez which had become completely transparent in the rain. His manhood hardened looking at her exposed body and he longed to make it his.

Abhi (thinks): Mine. This body is only mine.


He took her inside and got her dried up. He slowly began kissing her whispering sweet nothings in her ear. He removed her dupatta and kissed the exposed neck and cleavage. She didn't respond. He sat her on the bed and slowly began opening the zip of her kurta. She finally looked at him and shook her head.

Naina: Abhi! What are you doing?

Abhi (thinks): This will take more effort than I thought.

Abhi: What happened with Raj?

Finally he got a response. She started crying and narrated the incident. As he listened to her he also continued opening the zip and of the kurta. He whispered his sympathies to her but at the same time he kept undressing her. Her kurta was hanging lose. He then moved his hands to her waist and loosened the dori of her salwar.

Naina: Abhimanyu he said I am dead for him! I can't bear the pain! This pain will kill me.

Abhimanyu (huskily): Do you want me to relieve the pain?

Naina nodded innocently like a child. She was desperate to get rid of this pain. How could Raj hate her so much.

Abhi: Then give yourself to me.

Naina nodded blankly.

She was losing control and was reeling against him. Abhi felt boldened because he felt he had Naina's consent to do what he liked.

He pulled the zip of her kurta but it got stuck. he ripped apart her kurta and removed her salwar. Naina shivered both out of getting drenched in the rain and the emotional turmoil he felt. He pushed her on the bed.

Abhi: Naina ill make both your body and heart warm again.

Naina was in a daze. She was aware what was going to happen to her. Every time Abhi touched her, it burned her skin. But that pain felt better than the numbness she felt about Raj's words.

He turned her on her stomach and opened the hook of her bra in one stroke. He kissed her hungrily all over her back and then threw open her panty.

He felt irritated because he felt no movement under him. He got up and removed his jeans and boxers.

He turned her on her back and lay on top of her putting all the pressure on her petite body.

Naina (thinks) : He's everything that Raj isn't. He wants to control my body whereas Raj would have worshipped it.

He kept trying to arouse her by massaging her breasts, rubbing her thighs, kissing her opening. He found that it wasn't wet at all. This angered him. He took two fingers and thrust into her repeatedly.

Naina's eyes were shut and she took Rajs name softly. This angered abhi even more.

Abhi: Open your eyes naina. Look at me when i make love to you. You love me not raj. You hear me.

Naina opend her eyes. She tried moving but he had her pinned to the bed.

Naina: But Raj... how can he hate me?

Abhi realized that he needed to change tactics. Heagain began manipulating her emotionally.

Abhi: Naina, what did he say when you said you did this for the love you felt for him?

Naina (beginning to cry): He said I can never love anyone but myself and I don't deserve anyone's love either. He said that no one will ever love me.

Do I really not deserve love?

Naina was hysterical by now and looked at Abhi pleadinglu.

Abhi (faking sweetness): Dont cry my darling. Hpw could he say that? You deserve all the love in the world. I love you.

He burried his head in the nook of her neck. He made her put her hands around his back and continued speaking sweet words to her. Simultaenously he began entering into her. She began looking anxious and he worried that she would refuse.

Abhi: You want me to relieve your pain don't you? Then let me continue.

Before she could change her mind he held her hands tightly breaking her bangles in the process. He entered her in one strong push and began thrusting inside her rapidly.

Naina (in pain): Abhimanyu! You are hurting me slow down.

Abhimanyu: I bet that Rajveer doesn't give you this.

Finally after he climaxed he collapsed on top of her.

Next morning Naina woke up and instinctively had tears in her eyes. She felt Abhimanyu's cage like grip around her. She remembered the events from last night. She had changed into her clothes and lied down on the edge of the bed. Abhimayu had joined her and held on to her hungrily. She had slipped into an uneasy slumber. A few hours later she had been awoken by Abhi making another desperate attempt to control her by having intercourse with her..

Naina felt disgusted with her body, with herself.

Naina (thinks): Raj's words killed me. All I wanted was relief from the pain, the numbness that I felt. And I ended up violating the bonds of our marriage, cheating Raj.

Edited by paradigm - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
WoW fantastic
Ab RN ka kya hoga.?
Raj will be mad in anger. Cause he is angry because She stole the papers.
Waise Naina, was trying to save him.

Oh god complications badh gaye.

Ab Bhagwan hi bachaye dono ko.

Well loved it


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Posted: 8 years ago
Both the updates are awesome
Abhi is manipulating naina
Feeling bad for raj
Hope naina realize her feelings for raj soon
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hii

I think this part is not touch my heart.
This is some kind off unethical.
I really can't stand this!!

Naina is just out of mind.
I hope when she realised her true love
for Rajj
...
...


Anyway this is your writing style.lets see what next
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Posted: 8 years ago
Frankly speaking...this was not what I hoped for...if u love u can't cheat that person...Naina is acting like a wh**e now...sorry but this is acting like now...she said she was in pain but what about Raj he had been in more pain than her...every one around him seems to betray him...what if he cheats on her...if u love someone physical pleasure don't matter...so I Kanda of not satisfied with this update...but then its upto u...anyway story is amazing
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: yoginisahakari

WoW fantastic

Ab RN ka kya hoga.?
Raj will be mad in anger. Cause he is angry because She stole the papers.
Waise Naina, was trying to save him.

Oh god complications badh gaye.

Ab Bhagwan hi bachaye dono ko.

Well loved it


Update soon
Waiting...




This is the rock bottom of their relationship. Things will only improve 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: plmzaq

Both the updates are awesome

Abhi is manipulating naina
Feeling bad for raj
Hope naina realize her feelings for raj soon
Continue soon
Thanks for pm


Naina already realized her feelings. But with all the mess around Lala Gehlot and Abhimanyu, it will take a lot of effort on her part to restore her relationship with Raj.

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