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Sanjana

@Siya-Ram

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: shruthiravi
@Rakhee wait all answers are not in one go. Also truth has its own timing of coming😆😆
@Ria the remaining 3 stories, one I wont write, it look too childish and teen fiction kind of thing now😆😆. It was good then when you think as a 17 year old. The other 2 yes I should write. Bangle is a complete medico romantic thriller for which I need to read a bit on medical terms, organ transplant and all. It is people from Kerala but the story is set in Mumbai. Tagline is story of Mahi's love and Gowri's war. I am interested to write this one a lot.

Last one is like Runaway bride, but a bit melodramatic and its a pure love story, Aakash's journey to find out what made his love of 5 years and fiancee run away on the day of the marriage.

What about roots di. U had posted on wattpad

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shruthiravi

@shruthiravi

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Posted: 8 years ago

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@Sanju roots is a completely contemporary story, the idea that got clicked when I visited Goa in December to see some of our communities temples. It is said that my community GSB migrated from Goa fearing the conversion to christianity by Portuguese to protect our culture

Today many in our community dont know language properly, idiots like me dont know to cook half our dishes 😆😆 and many other such things. Roots deal with a girl who has utter disregard to her culture and a boy who values his culture.

It's the love story of a GSB girl and Kashmiri Pandit boy set in the IT capital of India Bangalore. It will be a short story max 20 parts.

When I say it, I mean it because I am not going to delve into any political things or anything. it is just about them.

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Vdvisa

@Vdvisa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Congratulations Shruthi on the new thread. 🥳

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shruthiravi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Thanks vd. You can start posting your comments here.

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shruthiravi

@shruthiravi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

@Sandhya teen story is nothing. 😆😆. Girl and boy betrothed to each other as babies. Boy's family attacked by villian's family as they wanted to have relation with the heroine's family. Everyone believes that family is completely dead.

But the elder girl of the family escapes with her baby brother, hiding the identity. 16 years later they come back. Boy and girl meet in college, fall in love. Obviously he looks from a middle class family. Her brother's oppose. villian intervene. finally truth revealed. Everyone happy 😆😆. It is poora college romance with all duppatta flying, love at first sight, hero wielding the guitar, all the bollywood cliches completely.

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Sanjana

@Siya-Ram

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: shruthiravi
@Sandhya teen story is nothing.😆😆. Girl and boy betrothed to each other as babies. Boy's family attacked by villian's family as they wanted to have relation with the heroine's family. Everyone believes that family is completely dead.
But the elder girl of the family escapes with her baby brother, hiding the identity. 16 years later they come back. Boy and girl meet in college, fall in love. Obviously he looks from a middle class family. Her brother's oppose. villian intervene. finally truth revealed. Everyone happy😆😆. It is poora college romance with all duppatta flying, love at first sight, hero wielding the guitar, all the bollywood cliches completely.

😆 😆 super imagination Di

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Vdvisa

@Vdvisa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Wow! What a Janmashtami it was! I am liking the way the past an present are weaved seamlessly 👍🏼👍🏼 the secret pocket to the card was brilliant one...and when I was thinking how the hug was a possibility...it beautifully unfolded as their performance. 😳

While I was savoring the dal tadka didn't realize will run into a hot mirchi ...now nervous which brother's past is coming up

I liked the reasoning behind Sreedhar's name. Is there a reason behind Suman as well? Will it come up in further chapters?

And one more thing I am loving the chapter titles as well👏

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shruthiravi

@shruthiravi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Thanks Vd. Janmasthami was one part I enjoyed writing a lot. Yes with brother's past unfolding story will move to the social realm. Yes romance will be there, but then others characters will also come.

What is Suman,- Flower right. Her parents didnt meant anything by that name as I say for her father she is a furniture. Doesnt matter her name was Suman or something else 😆😆. But yes I had a reason to keep that name.

An jaded flower in her father's garden, how it blossoms into a beauty in Sreedhar's garden. 😃

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deejagi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Congratulations for the new thread Shruti. Suma4will be the happiest person now that she need not have to pretend on the atrocities of her maternal home.

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sandhya ravichandran

@YongShinSurYa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: shruthiravi
@Sandhya teen story is nothing.😆😆. Girl and boy betrothed to each other as babies. Boy's family attacked by villian's family as they wanted to have relation with the heroine's family. Everyone believes that family is completely dead.
But the elder girl of the family escapes with her baby brother, hiding the identity. 16 years later they come back. Boy and girl meet in college, fall in love. Obviously he looks from a middle class family. Her brother's oppose. villian intervene. finally truth revealed. Everyone happy😆😆. It is poora college romance with all duppatta flying, love at first sight, hero wielding the guitar, all the bollywood cliches completely.

😆 😆