Arshi ff I've Had Enough pt 11 updated pg 24 - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting .Thanks for the PM😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting update. By any chance that lady happens to be Khushi???
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hahaha!!
Khushi is an Undercover Agent and the shy Payal as a Criminal lawyer!!
Khushi is a devil in disguise.
Let the lamb enter the lions den.
The trios asses are on fire!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting update
Do pm me pls
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Posted: 8 years ago
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awsome... intriguing ...who is the lady?
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 4

Anjali's room

Arnav lays anjali on her bed and everyone gathers around their porcelain doll. Arnav sprinkles some water on her face and she gains consciousness and murmurs shyams name and again goes back to unconsciousness . Everyone feels sympathetic for her . Akash calls doc.
After some tym doctor arrived and checks Anjali
Doctor : don't worry she fainted coz she has not eaten anything for past few hours and coz of stress . Plz make her eat something and keep her happy. In this situation so much stress is not gud for her n nor for the baby .

Arnav: yes doctor . We will b careful henceforth .
Nk ushers doctor outside. Everyone are tensed for Anjali n don't understand wat to do. Khushi observes everything n her decision to bring back shyam strengthens .

Arnav : m leaving for office . Though I have no mood to go by leaving di in this condition but I have no option . I have every important conference today which I can't afford to miss. But I'll try to come early . Take care of di plz n inform me if there is any problem.

Arnav while going out looks at Khushi and says her to take care of herself n di n that he'll b back soon . He pats her cheeks n leaves .

In other part of the city a man is continuously pacing in his room in a very cheap lodge . N the man is ( no prize for guessing ) SMJ. He is fuming in anger thinking about his failed plan . He's hiding here in a cheap lodge coz he's scared that myt b Arnav knows he is behind his kidnapping n Arnav won't spare him. He is formulating more plan to somehow enter RM again . Well he n his evil brain!

Hey guys m not getting good response for this story🥱...is it bad ? Then m discontinuing it..plz tel me
Edited by angel1cdevil - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17
continue please... they will join slowly...😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Good start of CS...
little twist is waiting
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gupta sisters not who they thought
would be..

possessive arnav

pathetic anjali
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 5

Vishranti Lodge

A car arrives at the lodge . A lady comes out and enters that cheap lodge and enquire about Manohar jawar at the reception . The lady goes to room no. 12 and knocks on the door. A man opens the door.

Man : (surprised) you?!
Lady : (stern voice) m here to take u back to RM
Man :( smirks) oh Khushiji! U r d only one who cares for me and misses my presence.
Khushi : jus shut up ! M not here to listen to ur nonsense ! Don't think I forgot everything ! M here jus for Anjaliji n her baby .Understood? However horrible it may sound but the truth is they need u at present.

Shyam : of course! My dear ranisahiba n our Rajkumari! (Starts laughing lyk a maniac) this ranisahiba is really lyk a ATM machine for me and this rajkumari ATM card!

Khushi : (disgusted by his talks) enough! Pack ur stuff n come out in 10 mins . I don't have whole day to waste on u

In the happiness of sneaking back into RM our poor snakewa didn't even once think that how Khushi came to know where he was hiding n most importantly how she found out his fake identity which he registered in the lodge that is Manohar Jawar!


Arnav came in his cabin after finishing his conference. He sat on his chair and leaned his head back closed his eye n let out a tired sigh. He was thinking about his messed up life. He don't know what to do anymore. On one side was his mother like di and her happiness and on the other side his love his life. He was feeling helpless and ASR was not used to this feeling.

Suddenly he checked his phone n found 20 missed calls from home and 5 from Akash. He got worried . Because of the conference his phone was on silent mode . He immediately called back Akash and Wat he heard from the other side left him in bubbling rage .

Shantivan ( few hours earlier)

Everyone were sitting in living room with worried expression and a crying Anjali whom they have bought down after a lot of pleading. They all were trying to make her eat suddenly door bell rang. Hariprakash went to open the door and was shocked seeing the person standing before him.

Khushi came inside with a stern face but slightly nervous face and Snake followed her with his disgusting fake smile.
Everyone stood up n were rooted to their spot seeing the person before them. All were bubbling with anger n disgust except Anjali of course. They were shocked seeing Khushi with him of all person .

Anjali went running in his arms and snake opened his arm to engulf her with his sickly sweet smile. Everyone cringed at the scene seeing the way that monster was foolish their doll.

Anjali: shyamji ! Aap aagaye , kaha chale gaye the aap humein or hamari rajkumari ko **** ke ( crying) ( shyamji u came? Where u went leaving me n our princess alone )

Shyam : nowhere ranisahiba . .M sorry for leaving u all alone but now I m back na . Now I won't leave u n our rajkumari even for a second n take care of everyone ( with evil smirk luking at the raizadas)

But innocent Anjali didn't get the meaning behind his words as usual and went to Khushi.

Anjali : khushiji thank u very much ! ( cupping her cheek with a smile) I don't know what was the misunderstanding all about but I don't care now all I know is that my husband can never cheat me ..U must have misunderstood khushiji but now lets forget everything now all is well . Now v all will leave together like a happy family . Thank u so much khushiji for giving me back my life!

Khushi : don't thank me di . It is my duty to luk after u n ur happiness . I consider u my own sister di jus lyk jiji and I won't let any harm to come near my loved ones . ( says determined looking in shyams eyes) they have to go through me to reach u! Di at least now have something plz for our princess . It's not gud to stay hungry in this condition.

Shyam : ( with his fake concern) yes ranisahiba c m back na now, come I'll feed u with my own hands .

Anjali smiled happily . Others just felt pity for her and disgust for that snake . But no one was actually angry with Khushi coz they somewhere understood her reason for bringing shyam back. She meant well! Nani had tears in her eyes looking at the selfless girl in front of her b prayed for all happiness in her life but she was unaware that the happiness in the very girl's life is going to b snatched away by her own husband !




Hello my dear readers..here goes chap 5..guys m not getting enough response and its very discouraging but m still updating for those few readers who commented or at least liked and encouraged me to continue😊

Edited by angel1cdevil - 8 years ago

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