Arshi ff I've Had Enough pt 11 updated pg 24

Hey guys m starting a new story...plz bear with my mistakes n help me improve ..comments and advices welcomed :-)

this story begins from when khushi brings Shyam back and Arnav gets angry on her and hurts her..Here Sheetal entry is early and same as in show only difference is Arnav brings her home to get back at Khushi

Character Sketch


Arnav Singh Raizada- same as in the show

Anjali , Nani, Mami , Mama, Akash, Nk - same as in the show


Payal Singh Raizada- same as in the show but educated and a lawyer ( fact unknown to Raizadas)

Lavanya kashyab- same as in the show but there's a twist in her character and related to Khushi

Sheetal kapoor- Arrogant , selfish ,good for nothing sly women

Arav- same as in show

New Characters

Singanias


Arjun Singhania( Shaleen Bhanot)- Business tycoon , rude , arrogant same like ASR and as rich as Raizadas.His only weakness is his younger sister and luv her too core..she is his baby

Viren Singhania(Karan Tacker)- well known Renowned lawyer, soft hearted and calm ..married to his 2 yrs girlfriend jeevika and love her alot..his younger sister is the apple of his eye

Jeevika Singhania- orphan , sweet girl , met karan at function in orphanage and fell in love , considers her sis in law as her own sister and luv her a lot.

Priyadarshini Singhania- dadi of Arjun , viren n Arisha..sweet , Dramaqueen dadi anyone could have ..her granddaughter is her life


Avantika and Harish Singhania- chachi and chachu of Arisha, Arjun and viren..don't have their own child ..treat this three as their own children and to then they are their chotimom and chote papa

Khushi/ Arisha Singhania- princess of Singhanias..their only weakness..bold , charming, sharp and extremely gorgeous ..she's reserved for world but for family she's their sweet 'Ari' called by her chotimom n chotepapa , baccha for her bhaiyas n bhabhi..more about khushi/ Arisha will b revealed in the story ;-)


That's all for today guys..Will update 1st part soon ..good night tc

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Shantivan - Arshi's room

Arnav was getting ready for office and Khushi was busy combing her hairs. Arnav notice khushi and she seems to be lost in some thoughts . Arnav can't bear khushi's ignorance when he is present with her ..he demands her full attention which at present he was not getting . So he calls khushi

Arnav : khushi

Khushi:...
Arnav: what the! Khushi!
Khushi:...

Arnav strode towards her and pulls her towards him . Khushi bangs on his chest and that breaks her chain of thoughts . She luks at Arnav 's face and sees his annoyed look and a bit of concern in his chocolate brown orbs.

Khushi : huh ..Aap kuch keh rahe the?(where u saying something?)

Arnav: tumhara dhyaan kaha tha khushi? Kitni der se bula raha hun sunayi nahi deta? U know jab mein tumhare saath hota hun I need your whole attention on me! U get that?!

Khushi : jj..ji arnavji ( she luks scared a bit)

Arnav : ( realises he did bit too much and softens) hey ( cups her face) don't b scared Jaan ..m sorry k but u know na ki mujhse sahaa nahi jata jab tum mujhe ignore karti ho..accha batao kya hua? Kya soch rahi thi tum? (M sorry k but u know na that I can't bear when u ignore me...k tel me wat happened? Wat were u thinking?)

Khushi : kuch nahi arnavji..woh mein bus aesehi (nothing arnavji..I was jus)

Arnav : jhoot mat bolo khushi..I know tum di ke bare mein soch rahi thi hai na? (Don't lie khushi..I know u were thinking about di..ryt?)

Khushi : hmmm

Arnav : I know iss waqt halath thik nahi hai but u dont worry mein sab kuch thik Kar dunga ..I know di mujhse zyada der naraz nahi reh sakti mein unhe manaa lunga..tum chinta mat karo k? ( I know the situation is not gud ryt now but I will make everything alright u don't worry..I know di can't b angry with me for long I will woo her)

Khushi: humein maaf Kar dijiye arnavji humare wajah se...( Arnav cuts her) ( m sorry arnavji coz of me...)

Arnav : stop it Khushi ..isme tumhari koi galti nahi hai..I know ki meine tumhe bohat hurt kiya hai ..kisi aur ki galti ki saja tumhe di hai and u still forgave me lekin ab bus!U have no fault in all this ! Di has to understand , she have to come out of her fantasy world ! Its my mistake that I have treat her lyk a glass doll n never allowed to her to face difficulties in life . But this tym she has to face it even if she hates me for this ( there's ur no mistake in this .no know I have hurt u..punished u for someone else mistake and still u forgave me but now enough)

Khushi : par Arnavji..( cuts in between)

Arnav : par war kuch nahi..subah subah ab yeh mat shuru karo khushi..mujhe toh laga tha ki tum itni Bollywood films dekhti ho toh tum kuch toh romantic hogi but I guess m wrong ..tum toh apne pati ko morning kiss dene ke bajay iss mein uljhi hui ho..never mind mein khud leta hun ( winks at her) ( no but Wat ..in morning only don't start with all this ..I had thought u watch so many Bollywood films so u will b at least little bit romantic but I was wrong .instead of giving ur hubby morning kiss u r busy thinking this ..never mind I myself will take it)

He wrap his hand around khushi's bare waist and pulls her towards him.khushi's eye pops out of her socket and feels tickilish in her stomach. A deep blush arise on her milky cheeks and Arnav smirks at her. He leans towards her face slowly and Khushi closes her eyes in pleasure due to his naughty fingers which were playing havoc on her stomach. Arnav leans more close towards her lips and capture her soft petals in his. He sucks her lower lip and nibble on it and switches with upper lip. Khushi moans in pleasure and Arnav gets aroused. He is about to deepen the kiss but they are interrupted by knock on door. Arnav gets irritated and breaks the kiss. Khushi giggles looking at his irritated face and Arnav glares at her. He grudgingly opens the door. ( n ...Here comes the queen of interruption :-p)

Hey guys here is the first part..do share your views regarding the update😊 ..I'll continue with this story only if I get good response otherwise there's no meaning updating the story if there are no readers na..so plz comment😊

Congrats 4 ur story. Interesting prologue. Update soon

PART 2



Arnav grudgingly opens the door and finds Anjali . Arnav becomes happy that finally his di came to talk to him but soon the happiness changes into worry when he noticed her tears and ask her.


Arnav : Di Wat happened? Y r u crying?

Anjali: chotte plz bring my shyamji back plz chotte .. there is surely some misunderstanding chotte . My shyamji can never betray me I know him . I have full faith in my luv . Plz chotte.

Arnav : No di that's not possible

Anjali : but y chotte? Till today u have fulfilled all my wishes plz chotte fulfil this also . I can't live without him chotte plz . My rajkumari needs her father . I know I have hurt u by ignoring you but everything will b alright once my shyamji is back I promise u chotte . We all will live lyk before together .

Arnav : u r ryt di.. I fulfilled all ur wishes til now but I can't fulfill ur this wish m sorry di.. he's not a nice guy di . He cheated not only us but guptas too . U don't u understand di , open ur eyes now at least . Don't u trust ur chotte di? Can I do anything that is bad for you?

Anjali : I don't know all that ! I jus want my shamji bus! Plz chotte I beg u ( joins her hands n plead)

Arnav : ( can't c his di begging n softens ) plz di don't do this


Anjali gets hysterical and faints and Arnav holds her . By now everyone else gathers in arshi's room n all become worried . Arnav picks anjali and goes to her room and others follow except payal and Khushi .
hey guys m updating quickly just for u guys plz tel me if It's worth reading or if I should discontinue

Beautiful storyline.

Now the story begins. Go on. Waiting

yes I agree .. please weave a different story yarn than that of the serial... beautiful start.. keep going