Tanhaaiyan: HaiRa Drabble- Khoya sa woh pal - Page 5

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Zephyr.

Vaery cute hubby<3 BTW I hate you drooling on anyone😡




anhahahh🤣 this possessive side of u wifey⭐️ i like it😆

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Posted: 8 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: ..Lunatic.Lover

Thank you so much for the shot on Haider.

Loved this.


thankuu so much fr reading😃😃

i am in love with ur siggiee
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Posted: 8 years ago
#44


thanks a lot 😃😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: suearmaniac


thankuu so much fr reading😃😃

i am in love with ur siggiee

thank you credit goes to the maker :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: ..Lunatic.Lover

thank you credit goes to the maker :)


YUP TOTALLY 😳 i hope u dnt mind me keeping the same
i found this on google with written words over it😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: Aanya12

Great work..HaiRa ❤️

thanks a lot 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Welcome back dear
awesome work
loved it
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Posted: 8 years ago
#49
Hellooo Sweetie
I am here 😛
with my detail review 😉

So first thing the way you presented the concept...so beautiful!!! 👏
yes...kisi ka ek pal ka sath bhi kabhi kabhi kaafi hota hai...wo ek pal mein saari khushiyaan samet jati hai...!!! I loved the convo between HaiRa
And then you portrayed everyone so perfect...be it Raashi...Vishaal yah phir Sid...just perfect...that really gives the feel of the show...

I enjoyed Haider...from the start when he said 'Sorry? who?' I totally imagined Haider's expressions from this 'sorry...' And then when he asked, 'Aap bhul gayi kya' and Meera's reply, 'Koshish toh ki thi but nahi bhul payi' Ohh my I feel like I am watching HaiRa ❤️
He said 'Try me' with twisting his lips and winking... his eyes and his voice...I guess tumne khudki feelings portray ki hai...right?😉
And the last scene... 'Toh kya keh rahi thi aap' that scene was the cherry on the top ❤️
And about Vishaal... wo scene when he said, 'Yaar tum na yahi pe party karlo, khamkha itne preparations karvaaye maie...' you nailed it... ditto Vishaal...

Ohhh I wanna hug you...for this one...🤗🤗
Thank you sweetie for coming with this...and you totally nailed it...!!! 👏👏

I want you write more on HaiRa...plzzz...

Love you ❤️🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: suearmaniac



dangsin-eun neomu dalkom

❤️🤗



iska kya matlab h tweetie🤪

Hehhh...it means... You are so sweet 😳
Yaar this is one of the toughest language...😕

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