Tanhaaiyan: HaiRa Drabble- Khoya sa woh pal - Page 6

Originally posted by: Gouri_Joshi

Welcome back dear

awesome work

loved it

thanks a lot gouri😛😛

Originally posted by: kabhi_asya

Woww...

Cute story...

thanks a lot😉😉

Originally posted by: tina_1234

Very nicely written

thanku dear😃

Originally posted by: sasir

Nice..
Beautifully written

thanks very much sree😃😃

Originally posted by: -Prinky-

Hellooo Sweetie

I am here 😛

with my detail review 😉

yayyy kb se wait kr ri thi

So first thing the way you presented the concept...so beautiful!!! 👏

yes...kisi ka ek pal ka sath bhi kabhi kabhi kaafi hota hai...wo ek pal mein saari khushiyaan samet jati hai...!!! I loved the convo between HaiRa
thankuu😃 nd it relates to well sort of relate to us too na
😳 like tera saath mere liye boht khaas h...ye cheez mene discuss ki thi jb tujhse tb hi idea aya tha esa kuch tere liye likhne ka😳

And then you portrayed everyone so perfect...be it Raashi...Vishaal yah phir Sid...just perfect...that really gives the feel of the show...
itni baar har ek epi dekhne ka nateeja h😆

I enjoyed Haider...from the start when he said 'Sorry? who?' I totally imagined Haider's expressions from this 'sorry...' And then when he asked, 'Aap bhul gayi kya' and Meera's reply, 'Koshish toh ki thi but nahi bhul payi' Ohh my I feel like I am watching HaiRa ❤️
hehe aww🤪 actually aap bhul gyi kya waale dialougue pe to specially i imagined haider in white hayee tujhe meri siggy kesi lgi bta😉 one to drool for hena😳

He said 'Try me' with twisting his lips and winking... his eyes and his voice...I guess tumne khudki feelings portray ki hai...right?😉
hahhaa☺️ ji haan aahi jaati h bahar nikl ke😆

And the last scene... 'Toh kya keh rahi thi aap' that scene was the cherry on the top ❤️
i wanted to extend that scene abrupt end hua but i was too excited that fir mene song pr hi end kr diya kuch suja nh meko to😕lekin maza bda aya likhne me😳

And about Vishaal... wo scene when he said, 'Yaar tum na yahi pe party karlo, khamkha itne preparations karvaaye maie...' you nailed it... ditto Vishaal...

🤣 vishaal is so laughable nd cool n cute😃😆😆 wo to likhna bnta tha 😉

Ohhh I wanna hug you...for this one...🤗🤗

Thank you sweetie for coming with this...and you totally nailed it...!!! 👏👏

I want you write more on HaiRa...plzzz...

Love you ❤️🤗

i too want to write on haira more 😳 hopefully likhungi mai boht jldi ⭐️
and thankuuu tweetieee fr this wonderful reply
meko boht boht khushi hoying
m sooo happy 🤗


aur mera mumma ka phn repair hone gya h
aj raat tk ajaayega to hopefully agr mumma chalaane ko dede to me aati hu fir watsapp pr😃
miss u 😳

Originally posted by: -Prinky-

iska kya matlab h tweetie🤪

aww so sweet shweet shi tweetie🤗
yaha pronounce hi nh kr paari me ye to 😆 tough h

Originally posted by: -Prinky-

And it made me so much happy that you are thinking about writing more on HaiRa...
I so wanna read HaiRa more after this one...
you made me crave for more 😉

hehe hopefully likhungi coz i loved writing fr them😃

Originally posted by: -Prinky-

Sweetiee 😛
I was waiting and then thought to sneak here...
Chalo you happy toh main bhi...😃

i miss mobile though😭
kb thik hoke aayega 🥱 wait hi kr ri thi
n yaha tere hi wait me ghuming 😆