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Posted: 8 years ago
#31
Very cute update..Can't stop laughing
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Superb update...lets see what happens next morning
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Chapter 10

Raj-Naina in room

Rajveer turns around, puts his hand on his eyes and screams "NAHI NAINA YE KIA KAR RAHI HO."
Naina - "aray aap itna chilla kyun rahe ho? Mein toh bus apnay kapde uttar rahi thi."
Raj - in his head "ey baghwaan, maine tera kia bigara tha jo tu mujhe is tarah ki saza de raha hai, Naveen ko pata chala na woh mujhe kacha chaba jayega", then to Naina "Naina dekho tum washroom mein ja ke change karo please."
Naina - "Nahi mujhe dance.bhi karna hai change karte waqt, woh washroom mein main gir jao gi."
Raj - "acha toh phir mein jata hoon."

Naina - "NAHI NAHI NAHI...AP KAHIN NAHI JAOGE."
Raj - slaps his own head "to tum hi batao mein kia karoon?"
Naina - comes closer to him and he moves back "aap na mere.."
Raj - "k-k-kia mere?"
Naina - "Meri zip kholiye na back se."
Raj - "Naina, mujhe kis janam ki saza de rahi ho yaar?"
Naina - shouts "SIRRR"

Rajveer looks at her, she has a cute angry pout face.
Naina - "SIRRR MAINE KAHA MERI ZIP KHOLIYE TOH MATHLAB KHOLIYE."
Raj - in his head "aray yaar ye toh mujhe aasay orders de rahi hai jase mein is ka nahi ye meri senior ho." then to Naina "acha meri mahrani, jo hukam aapka."

Rajveer closes his eyes tightly and getting scared opens her dress's zip. When he open his eyes, he finds Naina is his arms sleeping. He has a sigh of relief. He makes her lay on bed.

Rajveer runs out of the room like a Rabbit. He thinks in his mond "kasam khata hun mein aaj ke baad kabhi kisi or ladki ke sath dance nahi karoonga. Aaj toh meri tan tan phis hone wali thi." He smiles and goes to Dr. Shalini's room.

Raj - "Can I come in doc?"
Shalini - "aray Major aap, aapko kab se knock karne ki zaroorat parne lagi? Please aaye."

Rajveer walks in and sits on a chair.
Shalini - "kahiye mein aapki kia madad kar sakti hoon?"
Raj - "Doc woh Naina apnay room mein drunk so rahi hai, please us ki dress change kar dijiye."

Shalini looks at his face, she understands what would have happened. She is trying hard to control her laughter.
Shalini - "but Major, are you sure mein ye karoon? Or aap nahi karege."
Raj - shockingly looks at her "Doc please."

Shalini burts out laughing and saying "ok theek hai Major." She walks out laughing.

Shalini goes to Naina's room and changes her clothes to night clothes while she is sleeping.

Next Morning -

Naina wakes up with a headache. As soon as she opens her eyes, she sees Rajveer standing in front of her with a smile on his face. He decides to tease her a little. She is shocked and suddenly yells.
Naina - "Aap? Aap yahan kia kar rahe ho? Woh bhi mere kamre mein?"
Raj - "aray tum toh aise baat kar rahi ho jase tumhe kuch yaad hi nahi kal raat ki baat."
Naina - "kal raat? Kia hua kal raat?"
Raj - "tum aase kyun baat kar rahi ho? Or itni pareshaan kyun ho? Wase kafi talent hai tum mein I must say."
Naina - "k-k-kia mathlab? Ye kia bakwas kar rahe ho aap? Kia hua tha kal raat saaf saaf bataye mujhe."
Raj - comes closer to her "kal toh tum bilkul ek jungli billi ki tarah attack kar rahi thi mujhpe."
Naina - about to cry "ye nahi ho sakta aap jhoot bol rahe ho."
Raj - "nahi meri Jangli Billi mein jhoot nahi bol raha, ye dekho lipsticks ke nishaan, kia ye bhi jhoot hai?" He shows her fake lipsticks that he has put on his neck.
Naina - "aap ne mujhe roka kyun nahi?"
Raj - "aray mein kyun rookta, mein toh shikar hone ka maza le raha tha."

Naina starts crying loudly which makes Rajveer sad.
Raj - yells while shacking her "Naina meri baat suno..."
Naina - still crying, pushes him off "Nahi sunni, ye kia kiya aapne, mein aase kase kar sakti hoon."
Raj - shakes her shoulders "Naina.."
Naina - pushes him off "Choriye mujhe..."

Rajveef now yells really loudly at her while shaking her shoulder "Naina maine kaha baat suno meri. Kal raat aisa kuch nahi hua tha. Ye nishaan maine tumhari lipstick se banaye hain. Kuch nahi hua tha samjhi tum." Naina shuts up and quickly runs and hugs him.

Naina then comes back to her senses and breaks the hug, and runs out of her room leaving a smirk on Rajveer's face.

In the Evening

Naina is getting ready in her room for a dinner date with Huda. Suddenly someone comes from behind and forcefully puts a piece of cloth over her eyes and forcefully takes her to the jeep, while Naina screams.

When the person and Naina reaches to the jeep, he makes her sit in the jeep forcefully.
Naina - while still a piece of cloth over her eyes "kon hai, choriye mujhe kahan leke ja rahe ho?"

The person takes the cloth off from her eyes. She realizes its Rajveer.
Naina - "ye kia badtameezi hai, kahan leke ja rahe ho aap mujhe, choriye mujhe."
Raj - trying to calm her down "Naina meri baat suno..."
Naina - cuts him off and says "kia suno? Choriye mujhe..."

Suddenly Rajveer places a kiss on her cheeks and says "ab 1 or lafaz nahi, 1 or lafaz kaha toh doosri kiss cheek pe nahi tumhare hoonto pe hogi, ab chup chaap baitho, bohut bolti ho tum." Naina's eyes are wide open.

She tried to speak "par". Rajveer comes closer and says "chup warna kiss aayi." She shuts up and covers her lips with her finger.

End of Chapter
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Hope you guys enjoyed this chapter. Please avoid mistakes, no proof read .
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Posted: 8 years ago
#34
Nice update.Date bhi zabardasti kind.wah Raj..
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Originally posted by: danish1

Nice update.Date bhi zabardasti kind.wah Raj..

Zabardasti nahi Naina ki marzi se hogi :) bus thori dair baad Naina khud kahegi Raj ko ussay date pe lejane ke liye.
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Chapter 11

Raj- Naina in Jeep

Rajveer starts the jeep while Naina sits there quietly with a finger on her lips. They start driving. Rajveer keeps looking at Naina.

Raj - "Naina tumhe pata hai mein tumhe kahan leke ja raha hoon?"
No answer from Naina
Raj - "Naina, tumhe pata hai aaj hamari sari pareshaaniyaan door ho jayegi."
Still no answer from her

Rajveer suddenly stops the jeep and says "NAINA MEIN TUMSE BAAT KAR RAHA HOON, MERI BAAT KA JAWAB TO DO."

Naina finally speaks "aray aap hi ne toh kaha tha ke 1 bhi lafaz na bolon."
Raj - irritated "wase toh tum meri koi baat nahi manti, or Aj maanli."
Naina - "woh kyun ke aapne mujhe woh ki thi."
Raj - smiles "kia kiya tha maine?"
Naina - "Wohi...acha kia keh rahe thay aap or hum kahan ja rahe hain?"
Raj - "tumhe jald hi pata chal jayega ke hum kahan ja rahe hain."
Naina - "lekin sir..."
Raj - cuts her off "RAJ"
Naina - Raj-Rajveer sir, Huda ka or mera aaj dinner tha, aap kyun meri mushkilain badha rahe hain?"
Raj - "Yakeen karo Naina bus thori hi dair mein sab kuch therk ho jayega."
Naina - "Sab kuch theek mathlab? Sab theek hi hai or aisa kia hone wala hai?"
Raj - smiles "bus khud dekh laina."

Raj and Naina finally reach an old house. They walk towards the house. As soon as Rajveer opens the door, Naina is shocked.

Naina is shocked to see Rajveer's "dadaji" inside the house with a big smile on his face. She is more shocked to see Huda, Naveen, Aalekh, Yudi, Pooja, Ali, Dr. Shalini, Major. Abhimaniyu there. She then looks at Rajveer's dadaji and then looks at Rajveer with tears in her eyes.

Naina - "sir aapke dadaji toh.."
Raj - "kidnap hogaye thay Haina? Naina mujhe is bare mein pehle hi pata chal gaya tha."
Naina - tears in her eyes "kab? Kaisay? Aap ne mujhse poocha kyun nahi or na hi kuch bataya. Ye sab kaisay hua?"

Naveen - "Mein batata hun Naina. Mujhe or Raj ko pehle hi pata chal gaya tha is baray mein. Jab tune mujhe bataya us se bhi pehle mujhe pata tha."
Naina - "toh phir bhaiya aap ne kuch zahir kyun nahi hone dia?"
RAj - "kyunke Naina dadaji ke kidnappers ki nazar har waqt tumpe hi thi. Hamsin aisa zahir nahi hone dena tha ke hum sab ko pata hai warna tumhari jaan ko khatra ho sakta tha."
Naina - "per dadaji kase chootay?"
Naveen - "mein or Raj bohut dino se kidnappers ki location ko track kar rahe thay. Aaj hamein finally location ka pata chal gaya or hum wahan ja kar dadaji ko le aaye. Woh kidnappers ab jail mein hain."

Naina hears all this and starts crying. Rajveer comes towards her.
Raj - "Naina mujhe pata toh tha ke tum mujhse pyaar karti ho lekin ye nahi pata tha ke tum mujhse itna zayada pyaar karti ho ke tumne mere dadaji ke liye apni khushiyoon ko qurbaan kar dia. Mujhe maaf kardo Naina ke maine tumhe itni takleef di pechle dino."

Naina - still crying "Please aisa mut kahiye sir. Takleef toh maine aapko bohut di thi inh dino. Aapke liye toh mein apni jaan.."

Raj - wipes her tears and says "Bus Naina, is baat ko kabhi apne muh pe kabhi nahi lana. Wase Capt Naina 'ah' Singh, aaj ke baad mein aapki aankhoon mein kabhi bhi aansu nahi dekhoon, samjhi aap?"

Naina runs and hugs Rajveer. Everyone is watching them with tears in their eyes. Naina looks at Huda.

Naina - "Huda woh..."
Huda - "kuch mut keh phoolan, mein bhi sab janta tha. Or mera pyaar itna bhi selfish nahi hai ke mein apni khushiyoon ke liye tujhay dukh doon. Naina mera pyaar toh tere or Rajveer sir ke pyaar ke aagay kuch bhi nahi hai. Chal ab rona band kar or jaldi se mujhe ek hug dede."

Naina runs and hugs Huda tightly. Naveen comes near Raj and Naina.

Naveen - "mein nahi janta tha ke meri behan itni bari hogayi hai ke doosroon ke liye itna sab kuch sooch sakti hai."

Naveen smiles and then says to Raj, "Raj ke bachay, ab meri behan ki zimedari teri hai aajse, khabardaar jo ussay tang kia bilkul bhi, samjha."

Raj - "Naveen, Naina ko or mein tang? Tang toh is ne mujhe kia kal raat..."

Abhimaniyu - "kal raat? Kal raat aisa kia hua tha?"
Poojs - "kal kis ka signal kata tha?"

Raj and Naina are both embarrassed, their faces are red like a tomato. Everyone is trying so hard to control their laughter but eventually, they bursts out laughing. Naina and Raj tightly hugs Naveen.

Everyone is really happy and they return to KMA. Everyone goes towards their rooms. As Naina is going towards her room, Rajveer grabs her arm and drags her towards his room, he locks the door.

End of Chapter
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Hey guys, how did you like this chapter?
I know you all are waiting for RN romance. I promise, there will be lots and lots of romance coming up.
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Yahoo..Truth is out finally.nice update
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Both updates superb
OK cont soon

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Chapter 12

Rajveer grabs Naina's arm and drags her in his room while shutting the door and locking it.

Raj-Naina inside a room -

Naina - walking backwards "ye-ye aap kia kar rahe hain?"

Raj - walking towards her "kyun? maine kia kiya? Maine toh abhi tak kuch bhi nahi kia. Tum kaho toh kuch karoon?" He smiles and winks at her.

Naina - still walking backwards "woh mera kehne ka woh mathlab nai tha." Breathing heavily and unable to make eye contacts with him.

Raj - walking towards her with a flirtatious smile on his face "toh samjhahiye na ke kia mathlab tha aapka Capt Naina 'ah' Singh?"

Now Naina is unable to control herself by their closeness.

Naina - "mm-mm-mein chalti hoon.." she tries to leave from there but, Rajveer catches her arms and pulls her really close to him that she can feel his breath. Her breathing gets heaver and her face turns red.

Raj - in a flirtatious tone "Ab bach ke kahan jaogi? Bohut bhaag li ho tum mujhse. ab mein tumhe apne aapse door jane nahi doonga."

Naina - "Sir...wo..."

Raj - getting even closer "sir nahi...Raj!"

Naina - shivering "Ra-Rajveer sir please mujhe jaane dijiye na."

Raj - "nahi jane doonga."

Naina - "please sir choriye mujhe, koi dekh lega."

Raj - "is ka mathlab tumhe kisi ke dekhne se problem hai, mere yoon tumhe pakarne se nahi."

Naina - "mm-mera wo mathlab nahi tha s-sir."

Raj - "toh kia mathlab tha aapka?"

Naina - "wo sir wo..please mujhe jaane dijiye na."

Raj - "Nahi jaane doonga."

Naina - "please sir"

Raj - in a seductive voice while leaning in very close to her face "1 shart pe jane doonga"

Naina - "k-k-kaisi shart?"

Raj - "shart ye hai ke. Ke tum mujhe..."

Naina - " mein kia?"

Raj - "ke tum mujhe Raj keh ke bulaogi."

Naina - "n-na-nahi... mein aapko ye nahi bula sakti."

Raj - "sooch lo...Raj keh ke bula lo warna yuhi raho meri bahoon mein."

Naina - "Sir please chooriye na."

Raj - "pehle mujhe Raj bulao."

Naina - "sir, aap kyun zid kar rahe hain?"

Raj - "bus yehi hai meri zid. Sooch lo, warna..."

Naina - "w-warna k-kia?"

He has held her very tightly so, there is no chance of her escaping. He leans in to kiss her, but, is interrupted by the knock on the door. They immediately pull back. Raj goes to open the door while Naina hides in the washroom. There is an orderly at the door to inform Rajveer that BC has called him in his cabin in 15 minutes. As soon as the orderly leaves, Naina comes out and runs to leave from his room. Just then, Rajveer calls her from the back.

Raj - "24 ghantay"

Naina - turns around "kia mathlab?"

Raj - "mathlab wohi hai jo aap samajh rahi hain Capt Naina 'ah' Singh. 24 ghantoon mein tum mujhe Raj keh kar bulaogi."

Naina - "Mein? Or aapko? Lagta hai aap din mein bohut sapne dekhte hain. Aisa nahi hoga."

Raj - "Aisa hi hoga. Lagi shart"

Naina - "theek hai.. SIR."

Raj - "sooch lo Naina, mein shart kabhi nahi harta."

Naina - "sooch lia Sir. Mein bhi aap hi ki protege hoon, mein bhi koi shart nahi harti. Mein bhi dekhti hoon ke aap kaisay mere muh se apna naam bulwate ho."

Raj - "1 baar phir sooch lo."

Naina - "Maine sooch lia hai SIR"

Raj - smiles "toh theek hai, ab dekho mein kia karta hoon."

Naina - "dekh lete hain" she runs from there

Rajveer stands in his room with a smirk on his face. He thinks in his head "Oh Naina, Raj toh tum mujhe bulaogi, shart toh tum bohut buri tarah se haarne wali ho." Rajveer leaves to meet BC.

In BC's office -

Raj - "May I come in sir?"

BC - "please come in, Major."

Raj - walks in "Major Rajveer Singh Shikhawat reporting sir!" salutes him

BC - smiles "At ease, Major. Please sit."

Raj - sits "Thank you, sir! Kia baat hai sir? Aapne mujhe yahan bulaya? Koi kaam tha sir?"

BC - smiles "kyun Major? Kia mein aapse aise mil nahi sakta?"

Raj - "nahi sir mera who mathlab nai tha."

BC - "I know, Major! Mein toh sirf aapse Mazak kar raha tha. Mein aapko congratulate karna chahta tha?"

Raj - "Congratulate? Kis baat pe sir?"

BC - "oh c'mon Major? Aap jante hain kis liye. Aapke or Capt Aaluwalia ko leke."

Raj - shyly looks down "Thank you so much sir!"

BC - "wow, Major shikhawat ko sharmana bhi aata hai? Anyways Major, mein aapki or Capt Aaluwalia ke liye 1 party rakhna chahta tha 2 din baad."

Raj - "that's great, sir! Thanks very much!"

BC - "Anytime, Major! Wase aaj aap bohut khush nazar aa rahe hain. Koi khas wajah?"

Raj - "bus sir, 1 mission hai jo 24 ghantoon mein pura karna hai."

BC - "Mission? Toh is mein khushi ki baat kahan se aayi?"

Raj - "bus sir, mission hai kuch aasa hai jis ko pura karne mein mujhe bohut maza aanay wala hai. Anyways sir, I'll take your leave!"

BC - "very well, Major! Goodbye"

Raj - "goodbye, Sir!"

Rajveer leaves from BC's office and walks towards the mess. He sees Naina walking there and he thinks something in his head, smiles and follows her, grabs her arms and takes her in a room.

End of Chapter

Hey guys, I am really very sorry for the late update. I have exams going on right now that's why I have been really busy, but I will try my best to update soon!

So, how did you like the chapter? Anyone wants to guess what Rajveer is thinking to do? How he will complete his mission to make Naina say "Raj"?

Edited by Raj_Naina_LRL - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing update...waiting to see how raj make Naina call him by his name

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