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Posted: 8 years ago
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Please don't do that..It's a very nice story.Readers will come slowly
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Thanks Suman and Danish for your comment! and Thanks to those who personally sent me a PM requesting not to stop with the fan-fiction.
So, I have decided that i will continue my fan-fiction!

Thank you everyone for the support!

The next part should be updated soon!!
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No proof read, so, please avoid my mistakes



Chapter 15

Everyone is happy and suddenly everyone is shocked hearing a loud clap'. Everyone looks towards the direction of the clap.

Rajveer, Abhimaniyu and Naveen are all shocked to see the person clapping.

Abhumaniyu - "NANDINI..."

A gorgeous young lady is standing by the door. She is wearing a blue saree with matching jewelry, open hair and with a beautiful smile on her face. She walks towards where Rajveer is standing. Rajveer gets nervous as he sees Nandini walking towards him.

He thinks in his head "ab tum wapis kyun aaye ho Nandini? Jan ke mein itna khush hoon apni zindagi mein toh tum phir meri zindagi barbaad karne aayi ho. Kyun aayi ho tum phir se wapis? Kia chahti ho tum ab? Pehle jo hua woh kafi na tha kia ke ab tum phir se meri zindagi mein laut aayi ho."

His thoughts her interrupted as he sees Nandini passing by him. He looks towards the direction she is going. He, then, looks at his back where Abhimaniyu is standing. He sees Nandini walking towards Abhimaniyu totally ignoring his presence. Nandini goes towards Abhimaniyu and hugs him tightly, completely ignoring Rajveer.

Again Rajveer thinks "ye ab kia game khel rahi ho tum Nandini. Tum aase kase pretend kar sakti ho jase kuch hua hi na ho, jase ke tum mujhe janti hi na ho. Mein tumhari sachai sab ke samne la kar hi rahoon ga. Tumhara asli chehra kia hai woh sirf mein hi janta hoon." Rajveer then looks at Naina who is already looking at him. Naina senses something fishy.

Rajveer's and Naina's eye contact is broken with a voice.

Abhimaniyu - while hugging Nandini "Finally tum aa hi gayi, kab se mein tumhara itnazaar kar raha tha."

Everyone gives Abhi a questioning look.

Abhimaniyu - "Guys, ye hai Major Nandini Rai Chauhan - meri wife."

Everyone is shocked and gives Abhimaniyu the weirdest look ever. A look which he understood perfectly well as everyone is confused and shocked as he got married without even telling his friends or anyone.

Abhi - "guys ab mujhe aase toh mut dekho jase maine pata nai kaisa gunnah kia hai."

Naveen - "Abhi ke bachay tunay hamin bataye bagair shaadi bhi kar li or salay tu pooch raha hai ke hum tujhe aase kyun dekh rahe hain."

Raj - looks at Nandini then looks at Abhi - "Chauhan tunay shaadi bhi Karli or haemin batana zaroori bhi nahi samjha. Ab bataye ga ye kab kase hua ke doon 1 kaan ke nichay?"

Rajveer looks at Nandini angrily while she tries her best to ignore his gaze.

Abhi - "aray yaar kuch bolne ka mouka to do tab hi batao ga na. So guys, Nandini meri, Naveen and Raj ki batch mate thi. Hum charoon ne 1 hi sath pass out kia. Hum dono 1 doosre se pyaar karte thay par kisi misunderstanding ki wajah se hum alag ho gaye." He looks at Raj

Raj - frustrated - "Chauhan sahab aap point pe aanay ka kashat karege?"

Abhi - "phir jab Raj ki maut ki khabar aayi toh hum sab toot chuke thay. Saray Cadets academy se pass out ho chuke thay. Lekin mein us hadsay ko bhula nahi paya tha. Tab 1 din jab mein apnay ghar tha toh mujhe Nandini ki call ayi. Woh mujhse mila chahti thi. Jab hum log mile toh hum dono ne apni sari misunderstandings clear ki or tab hum ne shaadi karne ka sooch lia ussi waqt kyun ke tab hum 1 doosre ko khona nahi chahte thay."

Naveen - "toh salay tune ye baat hamein ab batai?"

Abhi - "aray yaar mein tum logo ko surprise dena chahta tha. Bus perfect moukay ka intzaar kar raha tha."

Naina - "toh Abhimaniyu sir, kia Bhaiya or Raj bhi Nandini ko pehle se hi jante thay. Is ka mathlab aap sab dost thay?"

Abhi - "haan Naina, hum pehle se hi jante thay 1 doosre ko. Bus kuch misundestandings ho gayi thi..."

Raj - giving a disgusted look to Nandini who is completely ignoring him - "woh kia hai na Naina, kuch logon ki adat hoti hai misunderstandings create karna."

Naina is completely confused by sudden change in Rajveer's attitude. She knows for sure that there is something between Rajveer and Naindini that Rajveer is hiding. She feels that Rajveer hates Nandini but she does not know the reason. Naina has many questions that she wants the answer to. Naina is confused why Rajveer never told her about Nandini. Since they were in the same batch, then, why did he never mention Nandini's name ever? What is he hiding from her? Why does he hate Nandini so much? So many questions to be answered.

On the other hand, Rajveer is gazing at Naina. He can read perfectly in her eyes that she is bothered. He knows that she is bothered about his past with Nandini. He also knows that Naina will never ask him about Nandini unless he decides to talk about it in front of her. Rajveer decides to make everything clear to her.

When Rajveer and Naina come back to reality, they see that everyone is happy around them. Rajveer looks at Nadini as she is enjoying with Abhimaniyu. He knows that Nandini is purposely avoiding him. He decides to confront her himself.

On the other hand, Nandini who is enjoying with Abhimaniyu knows exactly what is going on in Rajveer's mind. She wants to avoid him as much as she can as she doesn't want the past to be repeated.

Nandini's Point of View:

"Rajveer tum kyun nahi samajh rahe ke maine tumhe kabhi nahi dhoka diya. Woh sirf ek misunderstanding thi. Mein apni life mein agay badh chuki hoon. Mein nahi chahti ke hamara past hamaray present mein aayi isi liye jitna acha ho mein tumse door rehna chahti hoon. Tum kyun nahi samajhte ke maine sirf Abhimaniyu se hi pyaar kia hai. Mein janti hoon ke tum ne kabhi bhi mujhse pyaar nahi kia or na hi maine kabhi tumse pyaar kia hai. Tumhari galat fehmi hai ke maine tumhe dhoka dia hai. Mein kia karoon, na chahte hue bhi tum mere samne aa hi gaye. Kyun karte ho tum mujhse itni nafrat jab ke mein tumhe abhi bhi apna ek bohut acha dost manti hoon. Mein janti hunk ke tum or Naina ek doosre se bohut pyaar karte ho. Isi liye mein nahi chahoon gi ke tumhe kabhi bhi takleef ho. Mein nahi chahoon gi ke Naina ko kabhi bhi pata chale is bare mein. Mein chahti hoon ke tumhe tumharay pyar se koi juda na kar sakay toh isi liye mein tumhari nafrat bhi bardasht kar loon gi kyunke mein tumhe 1 sacha dost manti hoon."

Everyone leaves to their respected rooms. As Naina is walking towards her room, she is pulled by Rajveer in his room.

Raj-Naina in a room -

Naina - "kia hua Raj, aap itna preshaan kyun lag rahe hain?"

Raj - "Naina, please aise pretend mut karo ke jase kuch hua hina ho."

Naina - "mathlab? Mein kuch samjhi nahi."

Raj - "dekho Naina mein achi tarah se janta hoon ke tumhe pata hai mein kis bare mein baat kar raha hoon. Mein Nandini ki baat kar raha hoon. Mujhe pata hai tumhare mun mein kafi sawal hai."

Naina - "dekhiye Raj, mein janti hun ke agar aapne Nandini ke bare mein nahi bataya toh is ke peechay bhi koi wajah ho gi. Mein aap pe poora bharoosa karti hoon. Mujhe pata hai jab sahi waqt ayega toh aap mujhe khud bata dege."

Raj - amazed and with tears in his eyes - "itna bharoosa karti ho mujhpe tum"

Naina - cups his face with her hands and wipes his tears "khud se bhi zayada."

Raj - " Naina, mein tumhe aaj hi sab kuch batana chahta hoon."

Naina - "toh kahiye Raj, mein hamesha aap ki baat sunoon gi."

Raj - "toh suno Naina...Mein, Naveen, Chauhan and Nandini 1 hi batch se hain. Hum charoon bohut achay dost ban gaye thay. Hum log bohut enjoy or bohut masti karte thay. Phir 1 din mujhe apnay room mein apnay table pe 1 note mila Nandini ki taraf se..."

Naina - "kia tha us note mein Raj?"

Raj - "us note mein likha tha..."

Flashback:

When Rajveer came in his room one day, he saw a note on his table. He took that note and started reading it.

The note...

My dear Love,

"Mein tumhe itnay dino se batana chahti thi lekin mauka hi nahi mila. Mein tumhe batana chahti thi ke mein tumhare liye kia feel karti hoon. Academy ke pehle hi din se jab maine tumhe dekha toh mujhe kuch alag hi feel hua. Pehle mujhe laga ke ye sirf 1 attraction hai, lekin nahi. Jase jase din guzarta gaya, meri feelimgs strong ho gayi. Tab mujhe pata chala ke mein tum se kitni mohobatt karti hoon. Mein tumhe apna dil de baithi hoon. Meri himat nahi hui tumhe ye sab face-to-face kehni ki isi liye mein is letter mein likh rahi hoon. Mujhe nahi pata tumhara reaction kia hoga lekin jo bhi tumhara jawab koga who mujhe manzoor hoga"

-Nandini

Flashback ends

Naina - "phir aapne kia kiya?"

Rajveer - "Mein confused tha Naina. Mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha. Maine Nandini ko aisi nazar se kabhi dekha hi nahi tha. Or usne bhi kabhi zahir nahi honay dia tha mere samne. Woh toh hamesha Abhi ke sath hi hoti thi. Phir maine soocha shayad woh zahir nahi karna chahti thi isi liye us ne letter mein apni feelings likhi."

Naina - "Phir? Aapne kia us ki feelings ko accept kia?"

Raj - turning towards Naina "Phir jab meine woh letter para tha mujhe thora acha bhi laga kyunke kabhi bhi mujhe kisi ne itna pyaar nahi kia tha pehle. Mein apni feelimgs ke bare mein confused tha, Phir maine soocha ke mujhe try karna chahiye, mujhe Nandini ko ek mauka dena chahiye, mujhe us se baat karni chahiye. Mein us ko hurt nahi karna chahta tha or us ki feelings ka Mazak nahi banana chahta tha."

Naina - "Phir kia hua? Aapne Nandini se baat ki?"

Raj - "Main baat karnay zaroor gaya tha us ke kamray mein, ussay ek mauka dene. Phir jo maine dekha us din ke baad mein us se nafrat karne laga."

Naina - "aisa kia dekha aapne Raj?"

Raj - "maine dekha..."

Flashback -

As Rajveer was walking towards Nandini's room with the note in his hand, he passed by mess, he suddenly stopped. He was furming with what he saw. He saw that Nandini is hugging Abhimaniyu and said "I love you, Abhi, mein aapse bohut pyaar karti hoon."

Flashback ends -

Naina - "KIAAA? Per us ne aisa kyun kia?"

Raj - "yehi toh mujhe bhi samajh mein nahi aaya Naina. Phir maine soocha ke woh kaisi ladki hai. 1 hi waqt mein 2 ladko ke sath aisa karti hai. Mein phir jaan gaya ke woh kisi se pyaar nahi kar sakti woh toh sirf feelings ke sath kheilna janti hai. 1 taraf mujhse pyaar ka izhaar or doosri taraf Abhumaniyu ke sath..." He closed his eyes, "us din ke baad mera pyaar ke uppar se wishwas uth gaya or phir tum aayi meri zindagi mein Naina."

Naina turned him around and saw that he had tears in his eyes. She wiped his tears.

Raj - "Jab tum aayi toh mujhe pata chala ke sacha pyaar kisse kehte hain. Naina, mein tumse bohut pyaar karta hoon, please mujhe galat na samajhna..."

Naina - "Raj, please aisa mut kahiye, or aapko mujhe koi explanation dene ki koi zaroorat nahi hai, aap kuch galat kar hi nahi sakte. Mujhe aap pe apnay se bhi zayada bharoosa hai."

They both hugged each other lightly

Rajveer then decides to lighten the mood.

When still hugging Naina, he says

Raj - "wase Naina, tum ne mujhe aaj bohut mayoos kia hai?"

Naina - breaks the hugs and looks at him shockingly - "maine? Kab? Kaise?"

Raj - "or nai toh kia? Wase toh tum bada confidently keh rahi thi ke tum shart nahi harogi, toh ab kia hua? Kia ye seekha hai tumne apnay mentor se? I am very disoppinted."

Naina - "who kia hai na SIR mein apne mentor ki bohut izzat karti hunt toh unhe kaise harne de sakti hoon?"

Raj - smiles "woh mujhe nai pata lekin is ki saza toh tumhe mile gi.." coming closer

Naina - going back - "kaisi saza?"

Raj -still coming forward "woh tum achi tarah se janti ho. Wase kuch metha taste karne ka man kar raha hai. Kia khayal hai?"

Naina - going back "haw? Sharam nahi aati aapko? Bohut shararati ho gaye ho aap. Hatiye aagay se mujhe jana hai." She pushes him off and tries to leave, just the, Rajveer catches her hand and pulls her in front of him with a jerk.

Naina - trying her best to free her arm but his grip is very strong - "ch-cho-choriya na mera hath."

Naina is trying her best to free her arm but, of course she cannot win from our Rajveer. His grip is way stronger. Naina will not be able to free her hand unless he leaves it, but he won't let her go away from him. He wants to keep her in his arms forever. Naina is constantly struggling to free her hand while Rajveer is just looking at her struggling and he smiles.

Raj - "kia wakai tumhe lagta hai ke itna asan hai apnay aap ko chudwana meri pakad se? Nahi Naina itna asan nahi hai. Tumhari punishment toh tumhe mil kar hi rahe gi chahe jo bhi kuch kar lo tum."

Naina - still struggling - "aray ye kia baat hui? Aap hamesha se hi mujhe apnay kamray mein yoon pakad lete hain... jaise us din padka tha mujhe parday ke peechay se, yaad aaya?"

Raj - "jee haan Cadet.. opps..Capt. Naina 'ah' Singh mujhe sab yaad hai. Woh main kaise bhool sakta hoon."

Naina - "aap ne mujhe jane hi nahi diya tha us din. Us din toh aapne mera hath pakad ke mujhe itni zoor se kamray mein bhi kheencha tha jab ke mujhe rifle ka jhatka laga tha us din."

Raj - "aray maine sorry bhi toh kaha tha na..."

Naina - "sorry kehne se kia hota hai? Us din aapko pata hai mujhe kitna dard hua tha aapke keechne se. phir aapne or kuch bhi kaha tha yaad hai?"

Raj - "kia?"

Naina - "wohi...'offence is the best form of defence, ye kahawat aap bohut follow karti hain'...aapne mujhpe itna shak kia tha..."

Raj - smiles - "wog toh issi liye kyun ke mujhe laga tha ke tum spy ho...Us time mujhe kia pata tha ke tum Naveen ki behan ho or tum mujhse ye chupa rahi ho."

Naina - "acha...ab chodiye mujhe."

Raj - "sorry Naina, woh toh mein nahi kar sakta, punishment toh tumhe millege."

As Naina was about to say something, he didn't let her and stopped her with a kiss. He placed his lip on her lip. He knew it was her first time so he needed to be gentle. He started it gently. He opened his mouth slightly, instead of aggressively going in for a fully open-mouthed kiss, he kept his lips just barely parted enough that a tongue could slip between them.

He locked her lips while Naina's lower lip was between his two lips. Then, he lightly sweept the tip of his tongue over Naina's lower lip. He did one smooth, in swift motion so that the contact lasts for less than a second. Just then, Naina reciprocated with the same intensity.

As they pulled back, Naina was too embarrassed and shy to look into Rajveer's eyes. Not because he did something wrong, but because she was hiding what she felt from this kiss. She felt on the top of the world. It was her first kiss - yet the best one. Rajveer knew it very well what she is feelimg, and to tease her more, he went close to her again and whispered in her ear.

Raj - whispering - "ab hui tumhari saza complete. Wase tum chaho toh aisi saza mein tumhe rooz de sakta hoon. Mujhe koi problem nai hai, infact, ye hua na meetha or meethi wali saza."

Naina could not look at him in the eye as she was too embarrassed. Her cheeks turned red. Rajveer was surely enjoying this. She ran from there towards the door. As she opened the door to run from there, she saw Naveen at the door standing.

Naveen - "Naina, tu yahan?"

Raj - came forward - "haan woh mein Naina ko is ki punishment de raha tha" biting his lip.

Naveen - "huh? Wase tu aase bhaagi hui kyun ja rahi thi? Or tera face itna red kyun hai? Kahin gussa mein toh nahi?"

Raj - "aray Naveen gussa toh is ki naak pe rehta hai. Tujhe pata hai jab ye KMA mein shuru shury aayi hi thi na, ye bohut zayada hi gussa karti thi. Or 1 din jab main tumhare ghar gaya or Naina ko pata chala toh pata hai is ne kia kiya?"

Naina gave the look to Raj and he was unable to control his laugh.

Naveen - "kiya kia?"

Raj - "ye 1 damm gusay meun mere kamray mein aayi puri bheeghi hui or 1 damm say mere room ka darwaza khola jaise abhi mujhe kha jayegi. Yaar mein toh darr gaya tha is ka gussa dekh ke. Phir is ne mere hath se file cheeni or gussay mein kaha mein is academy ki best cadet passout banne aayi hoon jase ke mere bhaiye tha or mein woh ban kar dekhoon gi.' Yaar ye keh kar ye aise gayi jase pata nai kia hogaya ho. Pehi dafa mujhe kisi se itna dar laga."

As Rajveer finished, Naina gave the aapko mein nahi chorrongi' look to Rajveer and on this, Rajveer and Naveen bursts out laughing while Naina ran out the door.



End of Chapter

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How did you guys like the chapter? What do you think is the truth about Raj and Nandini and Abhi? does Raj have any misunderstandings? Or is Nandini pretending to be good? Any guesses?

Recap for next Chapter!

Nandini and Rajveer's confrontation

More romance of Raj-Naina

The party

RN rain dance

And much more!

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Thanks for appriciating my work dear!
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Super update..Looks like Raj has a big misunderstanding about that letter.RN scenes were cute
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Originally posted by: danish1

Super update..Looks like Raj has a big misunderstanding about that letter.RN scenes were cute

Thanks for the appreciation!
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Chapter 16

Raj-Naveen in Raj's room when Naina leaves from there.

Raj - "aray Naveen, tu yahan? Kia baat hai?"

Naveen - "Raj, tu achi tarah se janta hai mein yahan kyun aaya hoon."

Raj - trying to ignore Naveen's gaze - "Naveen mujhe kuch samajh mein nahi aa raha ke tu kia bol raha hai."

Naveen - "dekh Raj, mujhe ghuma phira ke baat nahi karni aati toh mein seedha seedha keh raha hoon ke mein Nandini ke baray mein baat karne aaya hoon."

Raj - "kia poochna chahta hai tu Naveen?"

Naveen - "kia tu ne Nandini ko maaf kiya?"

Raj - "Naveen mujhe is baray mein koi baat nahi karni, dekh mera dimagh kharab mut kar."

Naveen - "akhir kyun nahi Raj? Kyun tu past ko bhula nahi sakta? Kyun tu ussay maaf nahi kar sakta? Akhir woh hamari dost..."

Raj - cuts him off and yells - "Dost? Really Naveen? Ye tu keh raha hai jab ke tu achi tarah se janta hai ke us ne kia kiya tha mere sath. Dhoka diya tha us ne mujhe."

Naveen - " dekh Raj, mein janta hoon lekin tu ye bhi toh sooch na ke woh ab Abhimaniyu ki patni hai, or Abhi hamara b dost hai, humay us ki khushi ke liye Nandini ko maaf karna hoga.. kya tunay Naina se baat ki?"

Raj - "haan Naveen, Naina ko ab sab kuch pata hai or wo ab bhi mujh pe itna bharoosa karti hai."

Naveen - "Dekh Raj, maine tujhay jo kehna tha wo keh dia, ab agay teri marzi. Or rahi Naina ki baat toh mein ussay achi tarah se janta hun, woh bhi Nandini ko maaf kar degi. Mein ab chalta hoon."

After saying all this to Raj, Naveen leaves from his room. Rajveer breaks a glass in anger and thinks in his head "Jawab toh mein tumse leke rahoon ga Nandini, tum mujhe aise ignore nahi kar sakti. Tum nahi janti ab mein tumhara kia haal karoonga, tumhe bhi wo beizati bardasht karni ho gi jo tum ne mujhe di thi."

Next Morning -

Everyone is already present in mess except for Rajveer. Nandini is also there sitting at a table with Abhimaniyu, enjoying her coffee.

Rajveer enters the mess and looks around. He first looks at Naina who is sitting with Naveen and her friends, eating her breakfast. He then looks at Nandini who is sitting with Abhi. He decides to insult Nandini in front of everyone.

Rajveer walks towards Nandini's table while clapping very loudly. Everyone stairs at him in shock. Everyone stops what they are doing and stands up in shock. As he reaches Nandini's table, he looks at her angrily.

Raj - loudly - "wah Nandini wah, besharmi ki bhi Hadh hoti hai. Mujhe nahi pata tha ke itna kuch honay ke baad tum yoon mere samne aao gi or aise pretend karo gi jase kuch hua hi na ho. Kyun aayi ho tum yahan? Tum jaisi aurtoon ko toh..."

Abhi - stands up and cuts Rajveer off - " ye kia badtameezi hai Raj? Aap aise hamari patni se baat nahi kar saktay."

Raj - sarcastically - "OH patni? Chauhan tum samajh kyun nahi rahe ho ye aurat tumhe dhoka de rahi hai. Is jaisi aurtoon ko mein achi tarah se janta hoon jo airf feelings ke sath kheilna janti hai."

Abhi - yells - "enough Raj. aap hamare dost hain is ka mathlab ye nahi ke aap kuch bhi kehe ge or hum sune ge apni biwi ki insult. Apni bakwaas.band kijiye warna hum.."

Rajveer gets angry and grabs Abhi's collar.

Raj - "warna kia? Kia karo ge tum?"

Abhi - "Raj hamara collar choriye warna hum se bura koi nahi hoga."

While all this is happening, Nandini and Naina are just watching the two friends fighting like this in shock. Suddenly, Naina goes up to Raj, and Nandini goes up to Abhimaniyu to break the fight.

Naina - trying to pull Rajveer away- "Raj, ye aap kia kar rahe ho, please choriye Abhimaniyu sir ko. Ye aap ke dost hain."

Raj - "dost? Aisa dost jo ek ladki ke peechay apni sab dosti yaari bhool jata hai."

Abhi - pushes him off and yells - "bohut ho gaya Raj, ab meri bardasht ke bahir ho chuka hai." , looks at Nandini, "tum sach kyun nahi bata deti sab ko ab? Bohut ho gaya?"

Raj - "ye kia sach batayegi...isse sach bolna aata ho toh.."

Suddenly Nandini gets up and yells.

Nandini - yelling - "ENOUGH RAJ."

Everyone is shocked.

Nandini - "mein chup hoon is ka mathlab ye nahi ke tum kuch bhi kaho ge or mein sunti rahoon gi. Tum sach janna chahte ho na?"

Raj - "Sach toh mein batao ga tumhara. Tumhari kahani pe kisi ko wishwaas nahi hai yahan. Kia us letter ki koi explanation hai tumhare pass?"

Nandini - "HAAN HAI...Tum sunno toh phir hi na. Kya sunna chahte ho tum haan? Mein batati hun us letter ka sach tumhe. Woh letter maine tumhe nahi Abhimaniyu ko likha tha."

Raj - "jhoot bol rahi ho tum, wo letter mere table pe tha."

Nandini - "kia us pe tumhara naam likha tha? Nahi na...tu tum kaise sooch sakte ho ke wo letter tumhare liye tha. Haan mein manti hoon ke wo letter tumhare table pe tha, lekin galti se. Tum shayad bhool rahe ho ke tum, Abhimaniyu and Naveen 1 hi room share karte thay...Mujhe nahi pata tha wo desk tumhara hai. Isi liye maine wo letter wahan rakh diya samajh k ke woh desk Abhi ka hai. Kia maine tum se kabhi kaha ke mein tumse pyaar karti hun? Nahi na... tum 1 choti si galti ki wajah ae mujhse itnay saloon se nafrat karte aa rahe ho..lekin mein chup thi ye sooch ke ke tum shayad badal gaye ho. Mein tumhe apna dost manti thi or tumhe koi dukh nahi dena chahti thi isi liye mein chup thi...Per ab nahi..aaj tum ne sab ke samne mera tamasha banaya hai or is ke liye mein tumhe kabhi maaf nahi karoongi. Mein aaj tak isi liye chup thi kyun ke mein tumhari or Naina ki khushi chahti thi, per ab nahi. Bohut ho gaya."

Saying all this, Nandini leaves from there with tears. Rajveer is shocked hearing all this. He is guilty for what he did. He has been hating Nandini for so long just because of one misunderstanding. He wants to stab himself for insulting someone who had always cared for him as a friend. He wants to cry out loud because he has hurt his friends. He had insulted a women's self-respect.

On the other hand, Naina is staring at everything in shock. She understands very well what Rajveer is going through. She knows he is really guilty.

Rajveer bursts out crying and goes down on his knees. Naina runs up to him to comfort him. She takes Rajveer in a room away from everyone.

Raj-Naina in room -

Naina - "Raj, please mut roriye..mein aap ko aise nahi dekh sakti."

Raj - "Naina, aaj maine apne doston ko bohut hurt kia hai. Mein aisa kaise kar sakta hoon? Maine Nandini ki sab ke samne itni insult ki jab ke woh to sirf meri khushi chahti thi. Mein bohut bura hoon Naina." still crying

Naina - wiping his tears - "Nahi Raj, please aisa mut kahiye. Aap bohut achay hain. Or galti toh sab se hoti hai na, sab se bari baat ye hai ke aapne apni galti maan li hai. Aap buray nahi ho. Mein janti hoon ke abhi Nandini or Abhimaniyu sir naraz hain lekin aap unh se baat kijiye woh aap ko zaroor maaf kar deinge."

Raj - while hugging Naina - "thanks Naina, tum nahi janti tum ne kitna bara booj utara hai mere dil se, mein zaroor mafi maango ga un dono se."

After a while Rajveer asks everyone to gather up in mess again. Everyone gathers up including Abhi and Nandini.

Abhi - "abhi bhi kuch baki reh gaya ho toh woh bhi keh diniye.."

Rajveer has tears in his eye. He walks towards where abhi and Nandini are standing. He looks at Nandini who has tears in her eyes and totally ignoring Rajveer.

Rajveer goes down on his knees in front of Nandini and Abhi.

Raj - "Nandini, mein janta hoon mein tumhari maafi ke kabil nahi hoon lekin agar ho sakay toh please mujhe maaf kar do. Mein toh tumhari dosti ke bhi kabil nahi hoon, tum ne toh hamesha se hi mujhe support kiya or maine tumhe itna hurt kiya. Mein bohut bura hoon. Beshak mujhe jo marzi saza dedo lekin mujhse please baat karo, mein apni dost ko wapis pana chahta hoon, apni us dost se wapis wohi mastiya karna chahta hoon. Please Nandini.." he starts crying loudly.

Nandini who is trying to ignore him, is unable to look at Rajveer, her friend, like this. She melts at his apology and suddenly runs up to Rajveer and hugs him.

Nandini - "bus Raj, please aisa mut kaho. Mein kabhi bhi tumhara bura nahi chahoongi. Tumhe apni galti ka ehsaas ho gaya mere liye wo hi kafi hai."

Rajveer hugs her back tightly and they both start crying. While Naina looks at all this and smiles happily that finally all the misunderstandings are clear.

Then, Rajveer, goes towards Abhimaniyu. He bends him hands in front of Abhi and is about to say something when Abhi hugs him.

Abhi - "kuch kehne ki zaroorat nahi hai Raj, hum aap ko aise nahi dekh sakte kabhi."

All three hug together and everyone is happy.

Suddenly a voice comes front the door.

Person - "acha hai Raj, aap log apni dosti nibhahiye or hamay bhool jaiye."

Rajveer looks towards the door and he sees a girl standing in pink saaree with a smile on her face.

Rajveer is shocked, happier to see her. He runs up to her and hugs her.

Raj - hugging her - "KASHISH TUM?? I don"t believe this.. tum kab aayi??"

(You guessed it righ! Kashish - Amna Sharif)

Kashish - "mein tumse bohut naraz hoon Raj, tumhari shaadi hone wali hai or tumne mujhe bataya hi nahi. Wo toh acha hua ke mujhe Naina ne call kar ke bata diya warna tum to jase mujhe bhool hi gaye thay..." makes a sad face.

Rajveer looks at Naina who is smiling already while looking at both of them and their friendship.

Raj - "Naina?? Naina tum Kashish ko kaise janti ho? Maine toh tumhe kabhi bataya hi nahi tha."

Naina - "wo kia hai na SIR aap ki koi baat mujhse chupi nahi hai" smiles "1 baar aap ki almari kholte hue mujhe aap ki or kashish ki bachpan ki photos milli toh mein samajh gayi ke aap dono kitnay achay dost ho. Phir maine soocha ke aap ne toh Kashish ko bulaya hi nahi toh mein hi aap ko surprise kar doon. Toh kaisa laga mer surprise, sir?"

Kashish - "aray tum ye is ko sir kyun bula rahi ho? Tumhari toh shaadi honay wali hai na? or Raj tum ne Naina ko mere baray mein bataya bhi nahi... Not fair"

Raj - "aray Kashish suno toh, wo bus itna kuch ho gaya mujhe mauka hi nahi mila Naina ko batane ka."

Naina - "really, SIR?" she bursts out laughing

Raj - "yaar tum phir se mujhe sir bulana shuru ho gayi? "

Kashish - "aray mujhe koi bataye ga ye kia ho raha hai yahan? Ye tumhe sir kyun bula rahi hai?"

Everyone bursts out laughing and Naveen comes forward.

Naveen - "Kashish, mein batata hoon, actually, ye Naina hai meri behan, mein Raj ka dost hun.."

Raj - "salay tujhe line marne ko nahi kaha.."

Naveen - "kyun? Jealous?? Acha toh Kashish, asal mein baat ye hai ke Naina Raj ki student reh chuki hai, ye ek Cadet thi KMA mein jab ye dono mile or Raj Naina ka teacher reh chukka hai toh issi liye abhi tak adat nahi gayi is ki sir bulane ki."

Kashish bursts out laughing.

Naina - "acha ab bohut ho gayi meri baatein. Aap or Kashish itnay saloon baad mile ho kyun ne college ki purani yaadein taza kar li jaye? Whats say?"

Raj - hugs her - "thanks Naina! Aaj tum ne sach mein mujhe bohut acha surprise diya hai, I love you!"

Naina - "I love you too."

Kashish - "ahamm...ahammm. Aray tum dono apna romance room tak hi rakho.."

Everyone laughs

An orderly informs everyone that it is raining outside. Rajveer grabs Naina's and Kashish's hand and takes them outside while everyone follows them

Outside in rain-

Raj - "acha Kashish kyun na kuch yaadein hi taza kar lein."

Kashish - "definitely!!"

Naina - "Maine suna hai aap dono ka 1 bohut fav song hai jis pe aap hamesha hi dance karte thay college mein wo bhi aisi barish mein?"

Raj - "bilkul sahi suna hai, Naina!"

Naina - "toh how about a dance with the beautiful lady, sir?"

Kashish - "aray nahi Naina, nahi mein..wo..mujhe andar jana hai yahan mein puri bheegh gayi hoon, mujhe bohut jaldi sardi lag jati hai"

Naina - "aray please Kashish, mere liye?"

Kashish - "Nahi Naina, please!"

As Kashish was about to leave, Rajveer just pulls her for a dance. And a song plays in the background. (Guess which one?? You guessed it right!!)

Song - Thoda sa pyaar hua hai

Thoda Sa Pyar Hua Hai Thoda Hai Baki

Thoda Sa Pyar Hua Hai Thoda Hai Baki

Thoda Sa Pyar Hua Hai Thoda Hai Baki

Thoda Sa Pyar Hua Hai Thoda Hai Baki

Rajveer pulls Kashish with a jerk while putting one hand on her waist and other hand in his hand.

Hum To Dil De Hi Chuke

Hum To Dil De Hi Chuke Bas Teri Haan Hai Baki

Thoda Sa Pyar Hua Hai Thoda Hai Baki

Thoda Sa Pyar Hua Hai Thoda Hai Baki

Rajveer spines Kashish around and then pulls her back in. Kashish then looks into Rajveer's eyes.

Kaun Sa Mod Aaya Zindagi Ke Safar Mein

Bas Gaya Tu Hi Tu Ab To Meri Nazar Mein

Rajveer then looks at Naina while dancing with Kashish

Dil Ki Har Ek Dhadkan Tujhko Pehchaanti Hai

Meri Chaahat Hai Ab Kya Tu Nahin Jaanti Hai

Naina looks back at Rajveer and finds him staring at her lovingly.

Main Tuhje Jaan Gayi Tujhko Pehchaan Gayi

Phir Bhi Teri Haan Hai Baki

Thoda Sa Pyar Hua Hai Thoda Hai Baki

Thoda Sa Pyar Hua Hai Thoda Hai Baki

Then Kashish pulls Naina towards Rajveer

Aaj Yeh Kya Hua Hai Dil Nahin Mera Bas Mein

Is Liye Sochti Hoon Tod Doon Sari Rasme

Kashish then takes Naina's hand and puts it into Rajveer's hand

Umr Bhar Ke Liye Tu Aa Mera Saath De De

Tera Ho Jaaonga Main Haathon Mein Haath De De

Naina then looks into Rajveer's eyes while putting her hand into his hand for a dance.

Haathon Mein Haath Sahi Tu Mere Saath Hi Sahi

Phir Bhi Teri Haan Hai Baki

Rajveer then picks up Naina in his arms

Thoda Sa Pyar Hua Hai Thoda Hai Baki

Thoda Sa Pyar Hua Hai Thoda Hai Baki

Thoda Sa Pyar Hua Hai Thoda Hai Baki

Naina and Rajveer are both lost in each other's eyes. They are totally wet now! They are interrupted by someone.

Pooja - "oye Naina, kya tu hamesha Sharukh ka signal pakad leti hai. Ab tum dono out of range ho jao or apnay kamray mein ja ke signal pakdo.

Kashish - "kya?"

Everyone laughs while Huda comes forward.

Huda - takes Kashish's hand - "wo kya hai na madam ji, hamari punjaban ek purani phone ki dukan se aayi hai."

Rajveer looks at Huda who is holding Kashish's hand.

Raj - comes forward - "Capt. Huda, ye baat aap hath pakde bagair bhi keh sakte hain."

Naina - "ohooo...jealous? Haan sir?"

Kashish - laughs - "aray nahi Naina, ye shuru se hi aisa hai, college mein bhi agar koi mujhse flirt karta tha na toh ye aise hi react karta tha, pata nahi Raj aisa hi hai shuru se mere sath. Mujhe kehta tha ke wo meri dosti kisi ke sath nahi share kar sakta."

Rajveer smiles and Hugs Kashish. While Naina looks at both and then looks at Rajveer who is really happy. She is really happy to see him like that. She has never seen him like that before. She knows how much Kashish means to him.

Kashish - "ab andar chale?"

Everyone goes back inside.

Kashish - "acha guys, ab mujhe jana hoga."

Raj - "kahan? Itni jaldi? Lekin kyun?"

Kashish - "aray Raj wo mujhe Airport jana hai apni mama ko receive karne, phir hamay ghar wapis jana hai."

Raj - "tum kahin nahi ja rahi ho, kuch or din yahan ruko."

Naina - "Please Kashish, aap kahin nahi jayegi."

Kashish - "please Raj force mut karo, Naina mein phir aaongi na tumhari shaadi pe, lekin abhi mujhe jana hoga!"

Naveen - "aray Kashish kal BC ne party di hai Raj and Naina ke liye, us ke liye toh ruk jao."

Kashish - "nahi Naveen, mein zaroor rukti lekin abhi mujhe jana hai!"

Everyone gets sad as Kashish leaves.

Everyone is wet because of the rain so, they go to their respected rooms. As Naina is walking towards her room, she is pulled in by Rajveer (of course!).

Raj-Naina in the room -

Rajveer locks the door while still holding on to Naina's hand.

Naina - "aray...phir se?"

Raj - "kya phir se? mein jab chahoon tumhe yoon kheench sakta hoon, samjhi!"

Naina - "acha baba samajh gayi par abhi mujhe jana hai please, mein puri tarah se bheegh gayi hoon."

Raj - "toh kapde change kar lo, maine kab roka hai, mein doon apni shirt?" bitting his lip

Naina - "haw?? Aap kuch zayada hi nahi badmash ho gaye ho?"

Raj - coming closer -"aray mein toh tumhari bhalai ke liye hi keh raha tha. Wase Naina, tumhe pata hai tum bheeghi hui kitni hot lagti ho? Dil toh karta hai ke..."

Naina - her eyes are wide open and her face turns red -"a-ar-ara-aray choriye mujhe, sharam nahi aati aapko? Mujhe change karna hai, jane dijiye na."

Raj - leaning in closer to her and whispering in her ear - "kaho toh mein change kar doon?"

Naina's eyes are wide open at this statement. She shyly looks down and tries to leave while pushing hum off, but, he is too fast.

He catches her hand and pins her to the wall, and ...


End of Chapter


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Hey guys, how did you like this chapter? I am also a fan of Sujal-Kashish, so, I decided to give you all a surprise! To all the Sujal-Kashish fans and everyone else, I hope I did justice to their part, if not, please forgive me. I am deciding to write a fan fiction on Sujal-Kashish as well after finishing this one.


Thoda sa pyaar hua hai has always been my fav song of all times because of Sujal-Kashish! Their jodi was magical!


I really hope you guys enjoyed this part! Please comment below to let me know about what you thought about this part!


in Next Chapter -


RN romance (tons of)

The party

RN date

RN teasing each other

another twist in the story




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Superb update...so finally Raj's doubt got cleared and everything is fine between nandini and him...plzzz more of RN scenes
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Superb update...so finally Raj's doubt got cleared and everything is fine between nandini and him...plzzz more of RN scenes

Your wish will be granted soon! lots of RN scenes coming up!!!
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Chapter 17

Naina's eyes are wide open at this statement. She shyly looks down and tries to leave while pushing him off, but, he is too fast.

He catches her hand and pins her to the wall, and puts both of his hands on either side of the wall. Her breathing rate gets faster and faster as he comes closer. They stare into each other's eyes. Rajveer puts his hand on Naina wet arm and runs his hand over her arm giving Naina shiver and chills in her entire body.

Rajveer takes his hand and puts it on Naina's wet waist that is covered by her kameez, but due to being so wet, he can feel it so well and it is too close to be a bare waist. He gently puts his hand on her waist which makes Naina to close her eyes.

He also puts his other hand on her waist giving her the chills. She can feel his warm touch on her wet body. He slides his hands on her waist and then pulls her really close to him with a jerk. They can feel each other's breath.

Rajveer then looks at Naina who's eyes are still close. She gently opens her eyes and looks at him for a minute giving him the consent to continue. She closes her eyes again. Rajveer looks at Naina's lips. He takes his thumb and rubs it on Naina's lower lip gently leading her to moan.

He gently places a kiss on her checks, then on her other cheek. Moving on to the forehead, he gently kisses her forehead and then moves towards to the temple. He places a soft kiss on her temple. He moves down a bit and again rubs his thumb on her lower lip. He places a quick kiss on her lower lip. Then taking both of his lips, he gently bites her lower lip leading her to moan again. She, then, makes the kiss aggressive and passionate, literally throwing herself on him, putting one hand on his face and the other in his hair.

Rajveer is surprised by this sudden move of Naina's. As they break the kiss, they take few minutes to catch their breath. She, then, closes her eyes again. Moving downwards, Rajveer starts placing small and soft kisses all over her neck with a great intensity. Rajveer then spins her around, so now, her back is towards Rajveer's front. He gently pushes her against the wall so, he can have a greater access of her back. Coming closer, he takes her wet hair from the back and gently places it on the right ride of her shoulder, this gives him greater access of her back.

He starts rubbing his hands on her wet back leading her to moan again. He starts kissing her back all over gently and softly. Suddenly, Naina throws him on the bed. She is now on top of him, breathing heavily.

She, then, starts placing kisses all over his neck and shoulders, making him to moan. She, then, unbuttons his shirt while he opens the dori' of her kameez from the back. He suddenly pulls her under him and starts kissing her neck and shoulders again.

He suddenly realises what he is doing and suddenly gets off from the bed. As he tries to get off, Naina grabs his hand with her hand.

Naina - still laying in bed - "kia hua Raj?"

Raj - "nahi Naina, ye theek nahi hai."

Naina - "lekin kyun Raj? Is mein burai kia hai?"

Raj - "Naina, is mein koi burai nahi hai lekin, ye sab mein shaadi se pehle nahi karna chahta."

Naina - "per Raj, shaadi bhi ho hi jayegi, mein janti hoon ke aap kitna control karte ho, isi liye mein ye sab karna chahti hoon, aap ke liye, abhi."

Raj - cups her face with his hands - "Naina, men janta hoon tum ye sab mere lye karna chahti ho, lekin mein bhi tumhare liye wait kar sakta hoon. Yakeen mano Naina, mein kuch bhi aisa nahi karna chahta jis ke wajah se tum sharminda ho, mein is night ko special banana chahta hoon."

Naina - hugs him - "Thanks, Raj! Mein issi liye aapse itna pyaar karti hoon! Or mein us din ka besabri se wait karoongi jab hum ye sab complete kar sakein!"

Raj - hugs her back tighter - "mein bhi, Naina!" , kisses her forehead and suddenly sneezes.

Naina - "aray aap bhi itnay geelay ho chuke hain, aap please change kar lijiye."

Naina takes a shirt out from Rajveer's closet.

Naina - "mein bhi ab chalti hoon ab change karne."

She walks toward the door when Rajvver calls her from the back.

Raj - "Naina, suno."

Naina - turns around - "jee?"

Raj - "kal sham mein tumhe party ke liye 8 bjy lene aaoga, tayar rehna."

Naina smiles, nodes in a yes and leaves. Rajveer and Naina both change in their rooms and then decides to sleep.

Somewhere in KMA -

Person - over the phone - "je aap fikar mut karo, ab wo mere jaal mein puri tarah se phas chuki hai. Ab dekhna mein us ka kia hal karta hoon, us ki itni beizati karron ga ke wo kisi ko bhi muh dekhane ke kabil nahi rahegi."

The person hangs up the phone

Next Morning -

Next Morning, everyone is busy with their lectures and classes. At 5, everyone leaves to their rooms to get ready for the party with is held at 8pm.

As soon as Naina walks in her room, she sees a box lying on her bed. When she opens the box, she sees a beautiful silver and black saree. Her eyes are wide open and there is a shine in her eyes seeing that beautiful saree in front of her. Not just that, there is matching jewellery and heals for her to wear for the party. She finds a note in the box, she opens the note and starts readying it.

The note:

"Tumhari nainoo ki chamak toh kahi zayada hai is saree ki chamak se, mein chahta hoon ke aaj tum ye saree pehan ke aao."

-Raj

She closes the note and looks at the saree again, "it's beautiful", she mumbles with an amazing smile on her face.

By now, it is 7:55pm, everyone is ready. As Naina opens the door of her room to go out, she sees Rajveer standing in front of her.

She is taken aback. At that time, she is forced to imagine their wedding night by looking at Rajveer who is looking extremely hot. "He is hot", she mumbles. She takes a deep breath and walks towards him.

As he sees her walking towards him, it is now his turn to be amazed. He is amazed by her looks, "she is beautiful", he mumbles. Naina is wearing the same silver and black saree given by him. Naina is wearing matching jewellery, black and silver bangles in her arms, silver heals and her hair are in soft curls and are left loose on her back covering her silver saree blouse.

She walks towards him and he also walks towards her. They are both speechless looking at each other.

Raj - "Wow!! You are beautiful!"

Naina looks down shyly and looks back at him.

Raj - offering her his hand - "chale?"

She pulls him closer to him, he is surprised by her sudden attack!

Naina - running her fingers on his face, giving him the chills - "And you look HOT!" Rajveer is taken aback with her comment. He can't help but smile.

Naina - in a flirtatious tone - "waise, itni bhi jaldi kia hai jane ki?

He puts a hand on her waist and pulls her closer and says "waise mujhe koi jaldi nahi hai!"

As he leans to kiss her, they are interrupted by someone who is clearing their throat

Person - "ahahmmm,,,,ahammm"

They both pull back and they see Naveen standing in front of them with a serious look on his face.

Naveen - "ye kia ho raha hai yahan? Tm dono ko sharam nahi aati yoon yahan pe, ...akele mein karna chahiye na"

Naina - scared - "bhaiya, wo mein, I am sorry Bhaiya."

Raj - "Naveen, wo hum, sorry, wo"

They both look down embarrassed and then suddenly, they both realise Naveen's last sentence "akele mein karna chahiye na". They both look at him surprised who is laughing so hard at their faces.

Naina - "Bhaiya...aap bhi na"

Naveen - still laughing - "but now seriously guys, ye yahan aise nahi chale ga, tum dono ko shaadi tak ka wait karna hoga, samjhay tum?"

Both of them nod in a yes.

At the party -

The party is held in the mall hall of KMA, everyone is there except for the bride and groom.

After few minutes, Rajveer and Naina both walk in with a "dhamakedaar entry" (remember the entry of Raj and Ritu for the fresher's ball?), while everyone cheers and claps for them.

BC approaches both of them.

Raj - saluting him - "Major Rajveer Singh Shikhawat reporting, sir!"

Naina - saluting him - "Capt Naina Singh Shikhawat reporting, sir!"

Naina realises what she has said "Shikhawat" as her last name, she shyly looks down while Rajveer looks at her and is unable to hide his smile.

BC - "At ease, major and Capt ahamm Shikhawat."

They both look down embarrassed while BC looks at them with a smile!

BC - "aap dono ko itna formal honay ki koi zaroorat nahi hai, ye ek unofficial party hai! Wase Major, aap kia kisi dhamake ke bagair entry nahi le saktay?" smiles

Raj - "kia karoon sir? Ye dhamakay mera peecha hi nahi choortay!"

After BC congratulates both of them, he walks towards the stage to make an announcement.

BC - "ladies and gentlemen, may I please have your attention? I would firstly like to congratulate Major Rajveer and Capt Naina, then, I would like to thank you all for coming here to join us for the party. Now, I would like to say few words for the bride and groom! Mein pehle ye kehna chahoonga ke aaj mein bohur khush hoon Rajveer and Naina ke liye. Inh dono ne aaj apni bahaduri ke sath sath ye bhi sabit kar dia hai ke soldiers bhi romantic hotay hain", Naina and Raj smile, "Mein salute karna chahoonga Naina Singh Aaluwalia ko jo is academy mein 1 bohut hi pakay iraday se aayi thi as a cadet, apnay bhai, Naveen Singh Aaluwalia ko begunaah sabit karne. Aaj mujhe ye kehte hue bohut proud feel ho raha hai ke jis maksad se Capt. Naina aayi thi, wo maksad us ne bakhoobhi tarah se pura kiya, ye 1 bohut hi bahadur soldier ban gayi hai aaj. Mein aaj bohut hi proudly kehta hoon ke Capt Naina Sngh Aaluwalia, Major Rajveer and Major Naveen KMA ke pass out hain." Everyone claps and cheers

BC - "Waise Major Shikhawat, mujhe ek baat samajh nahi aayi, aap Naina ko Naina ah' Singh kyun bulatay ho? Please come on stage and explain"

Rajveer comes on stage

Raj - "Thank you very much for your kind words! Wo kia hai na sir, pehle baar jab mein Naina se mila, toh kuch aisa hua tha jis ki wajah se mujhe ussay Naina ah' Singh bulana parah!"

Flashback

Naina is standing in from of the wall of Fame

Raj - "Fresher?"

Naina - turns round - "ah..yes sir?"

Raj - "Naam?"

Naina - hesitantly - "Naina ah' Singh"

Raj - "Naina ah' Singh? Interesting!"

Flashback ends

Everyone laughs as Rajveer tells everyone the reason for calling her name like that. For a while, everyone is enjoying with each other, making small talks and drinking soft drinks!

Suddenly, all the lights are off and there is a flashlight on the stage and we see Naveen standing. Naveen goes up to Raj and Naina, takes their hand and drags them on the stage and drags everyone else on the stage to dance. All the lights come back on.

Song - Mere yaar ki shaadi hai

Naveen sings while dancing and pointing towards Raj and Naina.

Dholak mein taal hai paayal mein chan chan ...(2)
Ghoonghat mein gori hai sehre mein saajan
Jahan bhi yeh jaayen bahaare hi chaaayen
Yeh khushiyaan hi paayen mere dil ne duayen di hai
Mere yaar ki shaadi hai

Mere yaar ki shaadi hai

Abhimaniyu joins Naveen and sings

Dholak mein taal hai paayal mein chan chan ...
Ghoonghat mein gori hai sehre mein saajan
Jahan bhi yeh jaayen bahaare hi chaaayen
Yeh khushiyaan hi paayen mere dil ne duayen di hai
Mere yaar ki shaadi hai

Mere yaar ki shaadi hai

Huda comes forward and sings

Pyaar mila preet mili mere yaar ko
Badi pyaari jeet mili mere yaar ko
Khush hai jo dil O O O maine mehfil

Khush hai jo dil maine mehfil Jeeto se saja di hai
Mere yaar ki shaadi hai

Mere yaar ki shaadi hai

Rajveer goes up to Huda and sings

Haar nahin jeet nahin yahan pyaar hai
Jis main haar jeet ho woh kahan pyaar hai

Haar nahin jeet nahin yahan pyaar hai
Jis main haar jeet ho woh kahan pyaar hai


Huda sings

Lag ja gaale O O O yaar mere O O
O Lag ja gaale yaar mere maine dil se sada di hai
Mere yaar ki shaadi hai.

Mere yaar ki shaadi hai

Rajveer and Huda hug each other.

Suddenly, Naina comes from the back and walks towards Naveen singing.

Saathi sakhiyaan bachpan ka yeh angna
Gudiya jule koyi bhi to hoga sang na
Chupaungi aasoon kaise bege ge kangna


Saathi sakhiyaan bachpan ka yeh angna
Gudiya jule koyi bhi to hoga sang na
Chupaungi aasoon kaise bege ge kangna

Saathi sakhiyaan re

Naina cries

Naveen comes forward and takes Naina's hand.

Saathi sun le bole jo yeh angna
Yeh mann jeevan pyaar ke hi rang main rang na
Has degi teri chudi khankegi kangna
Saathi sun le re...

Naina and Naveen hug each other.

Now, everyone sings while Raj and Naina are in the middle and everyone else sings while making a circle.


Mere yaar ki shaadi hai

Mere yaar ki shaadi hai

Mere yaar ki shaadi hai

Mere yaar ki shaadi hai

Everyone enjoys the rest of the party. It is now 12pm and everyone decides to go to their rooms.

Naina walks towards her room when Rajveer grabs her hand, pick her up and forcefully takes her to the jeep, while Naina screams "Kon hai?" as she does not know it's Rajveer.

In Rajveer's jeep -

Naina - looks at Rajveer - "Raj aap? Aapne to mujhe dara hi diya, mujhe laga pata nahi kon hai. Waise hum yahan kia kar rahe hain is waqt?"

Raj - "aray kitnay sawal poochti ho, khair aaj hum date pe ja rahe hain."

Naina - excitedly - "really? Kahan?"

Raj - "yes, really! Wase hum aaj tak kisi date pe nahi gaye hain toh maine soocha kyun na aaj ho jaye."

Naina - "Wow! Kahan ja rahe hain hum?"

Raj - "Wahan tum pehle bhi gayi ho."

Naina - "Really? Kahan?"

Raj - "have some patience, baby! Tumhe jald hi pata chal jayega!"

Naina kisses Rajveer's cheeks and says, "I love You!" Rajveer kisses her back and says "I love you, too!" smiles and starts the jeep to go to their date!


End of Chapter


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So, did you guys enjoy this chapter? Who do you think was the person speaking over the phone? What is he/she talking about and who is he/she talking to? What will he/she do? What is the twist? Where do you think Raj will take Naina for the date?


Lots of things coming up in next chapter! Any suggestions from you guys?


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