Deewangi - Rajveer-Naina - Page 3

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Originally posted by: Kool11

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Chapter 8

Rajveer's room

Raj - "aray Naveen, tu bahir kyun khada hai andar aa."
Naveen - comes inside "chale Raj, sangeet shuru hone wala hai."
Raj - "haan chal"

They both walk towards where the sangeet is held.

It is the day of Naina and Huda's sangeet.. The sangeet is held in the main hall of KMA. Everyone is present there except for Naina. All eyes are at the stairs and everyone is waiting for Naina to come down. Mostly Rajveer, he is dying to see her "honay wali biwi". Suddenly all the lights go off. Suddenly someone appears on the stage, and it's none other than our great Captains, Ali and Yudi.

Yudi - "Hello mere pyaare bhaiyoo and Ali ki behno, thank you very much for being here and attending our beloved friend's Sangeet. "
Ali - "Now we present our handsome Dulha - Huda bhaiii" Huda is seen coming down the stairs, the spot light is on him with a lot of claps.. Huda comes on stage and takes a seat.

Now, it's time for our coolest Captain, Alekh, our 2 majors, Major Naveen and Major Abhimaniyu, and our Dr. Shalini to come on stage. They all come on stage and says at the same time, "Now, presenting you the beautiful and Gorgeous Bride Naina!!!!"

Naina is seen coming down the stairs. The spotlight is on her while everyone is clapping. Naina is wearing a beautiful golden lehnga, her hair tied up in a bun with few pieces of hair out on her face. To add to that, she is wearing matching long ear rings with beautiful high heals. Everyone is amused to see her. All eyes are set on her especially our Major Rajveer's eyes. Rajveer is amused to see such a beautiful lady. He knew she was beautiful, but today, it felt like she came from heaven like an angel.

Rajveer is unable to take his eyes off her. He says to himself, "ye ladki aaj mujhe mar hi dalegi apni is khoobsoorti se." As soon as Naina comes down, she immediately makes eye-contacts with Rajveer. She sees nothing in his eyes, but love, lots of love for her. She shyly looks down. Rajveer notices this with a huge smile on his face.

Naina comes down and sits beside Huda.

Now, pooja comes on stage wearing a beautiful green sari.
Pooja - "aaj meri best friend ka sangeet hai jis ka connection Huda se jurne wala hai. Aaj ka sangeet koi aam sangeet nahi hoga. Bhalke aaj hum 1 game khele ge."

Ali come on stage and asks "game? Kaisi game?"
Pooja - "game ye hogi ke 1 line mein boys hoonge or doosri line mein girls jis mein hamere dulha dulhan bhi shamil hoonge. Girls ki aankhoon pe pati bhandi jayegi or girls ko apna partner choose karna ho ga."
Ali - "wow, Pooja aap ko ideas to bohut achay aatay hain. So ladies and gentleman, please 2 line baniye 1 boys ki and 1 girls ki."

Everyone gets up, including Naina and Huda. A cloth is tied on all the girls eyes. All the girls stand on one side while all the boys stand on the other side.

Pooja - "jab mein 3 tak gino toh sab larkiyaan aagay aaye or apne partners choose kare randomly. Aaj dekhte hain kon kis ke sath dance karta hai."
Ali - "Pooja, us se pehle mein aapse poochna chahta hun ke kia aap mere sath dance kareingi?"
Pooja - " Of course, Ali! Chaliye everyone ready?? 1...2...3..and go."

All the girls starts moving towards the guy's side. Dr. Shalini chooses Huda, while Neelu chooses Aalekh. Simran chooses Yudi and all the other people are choosen. Now left our beloved Naina and Rajveer. Blindfolded Naina walks towards the guy's line and touched a man's shoulder. Without taking her cloth off, she asks him, "may I have the pleasure?" The person says yes and Naina realizes it's Rajveer.

Naina takes the cloth off and shyly looks down. Rajveer takes Naina's hand and puts it on his shoulder. He puts his hand on Naina's bare waist (because of lehnga and chooli). As soon as his hand touches her waist, she gets the chills and sparks in her body. Rajveer doesn't fail to notice that, he smiles. He pulls her really close to her.
Raj - "shall we start?" Naina nods in a yes.

Khuda jane song plays. Everyone starts dancing. Rajveer looks in Naina's beautiful eyes and they start dancing.

Sajde Mein Yun Hi Jhukta Hoon
Tum Pe Hi Aa Ke Rukhta Hoon
Kya Yeh Sab Ko Hota Hai

Naina looks deeply in his eyes with lots of love.

Hum Ko Kya Lena Hai Sab Se
Tum Se Hi Sab Baatein Ab Se
Ban Gaye Ho Tum Meri Dua

Rajveer spins Naina around while still looking in her gorgeous eyes.

Khuda Jaane Ke Mein Fida Hoon
Khuda Jaane Mein Mitt Gaya
Khuda Jaane Yeh Kyun Hua Hai
Ke Ban Gaye Ho Tum Mere Khuda

Now pulling Naina towards him.

Dil Kahe Ke Aaj To Chupa Lo Tum Panahon Mein Ke Daar Hai Tum Ko Kha Doonga
Dil Kahe Sambhal Zara Khushi Ko
Na Nazar Laga Ke Daar Hai Mein To Ro Doonga

Now Both are extremely close to each other, feeling each other's breath. Naina looks back into Rajveer's eyes

O Karti Hoon Sau Vaade Tum Se
Baandhe Dil Ke Dhaage Tum Se
Yeh Tumhe Na Jaane Kya Hua

Now suddenly Rajveer picking Naina up in his arms

Khuda Jaane Ke Mein Fida Hoon
Khuda Jaane Mein Mitt Gaya
Khuda Jaane Yeh Kyun Hua Hai
Ke Ban Gaye Ho Tum Mere Khuda

Rajveer and Naina are lost in each other's eyes while not knowing the surroundings around them. Suddenly everyone starts clapping. They both realize that the spot light is on them and everyone is watching them. They let go of each other. Naina is amused by the love she has seen in Rajveer's eyes for her. But she is helpless. Rajveer notices her vulnerability and says in his head, "its okay Naina, bus kuch time or, phir hum dono ko 1 honay se koi nahi rook sakta."



End of Chapter 8

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So, how was this chapter guys?

Great story

Great update ya.How dis raj get to know?

Originally posted by: danish1

Great update ya.How dis raj get to know?

about Naina's majboori?? He doesn't know it exactly. He is just guessing it because remember he had a talk with Naveen when Naveen said "shayad Naina ki koi majboori hogi".

Amazing update...sangeet Huda n naina ka but bazi mar li Raj ne... Waiting for next update

Chapter 9

In Naina and Huda's Sangeet -

Everyone is enjoying the sangeet. All are dancing while Naina goes up to the stage and sits by Huda. She suddenly sees Rajveer dancing with Pooja. She gets shocked and keeps staring at Rajveer. She gets up from the stage and walks down the stage while still looking at Rajveer with jealousy. Rajveer notices her coming towards him, to make her more jealous, he pulls Pooja closer while dancing.

Rajveer likes the look on Naina's face. Whereas, Pooja gets confused by his behavior
Pooja in her head - "ye Sharukh ke signal ko ek dam kia hua. "

Rajveer looks at Pooja and understands her confusion and says "Capt. Ghai, please cooperate, ye bhi 1 mission hi samjhiye."

Pooja gets confused but smiles and says "ok sir lekin sir, agar mere ranjhay ne dekh lia na, woh aapka or mera dono ka signal kat dega."

Raj - smiles and says "don't worry Capt. Ghai. Us ki nobat nahi aayegi, wase ye ranjha mathlab Ali?"

Pooja shyly looks down and says "g sir"

Naina notices this and instead of coming towards Rajveer, she grabs Huda's hand and forcefully dances with him. Now it's Rajveer's turn to get jealous.

Naina then goes towards the waiter, grabs 2 glasses of wine and drinks it. Naveen notices all that and is shocked because Naina never drinks. Rajveer understands the situation. Naina starts dancing like crazy because of the wine.

Before Rajveer can go up to Naina, Neveen goes up to Naina and grabs her hand.

Naveen - "Naina ye kia kar rahi hai, chal yahan se."
Naina - drunk and pushes him off "aray bhaiya choro na mujhe, abhi toh mujhe dance karna hai woh bhi bohut saaaraaa." she spins around.

Naveen - in his head "Raj ke bachay ye sab teri wajah se hua hai. Meri behan ne aaj sharab bhi pi li, tujhe choro ga nahi main." Then to Naina "Nain chal yahan se, kia scene create kar rahi hai."

Naina - "nai nai nai..mujhe dance karna. MUJHE DANCE KARENE DON mujhe dance karne dona."
she starts singing and dancing around while everyone stares at her.

Naveen goes up to Rajveer and says - "Raj ke bachay kis ne kaha tha tujhay Pooja ke sath dance karne ko, dekh meri behan ne kia kar lia. Ab tu hi sambhal usay. Chal ja."

Rajveer goes up to Naina and says "Naina sab dekh rahay hain, chalo yahan se."

Naina - "1 shart pe."
Rajveer - "kon si shart? Tumhari har shart manoga mera ma pehle chalo yahan se."
Naina - "nai agar mujhe leke jana hai toh mujhe uth ke leke jao."
Rajveer - shocked "k-k-kia mathlab?"
Naina - "suna nahi? Mujhe apni bahoon mein uthao."

Rajveer gets shocked and looks at Naveen and thinks "ye ladki mujhe apnay bhai ki hathon marwaye gi, ab mein kia karoon. Sahi kehta tha tu Naveen, teri behan bohut ziddi hai."

Seeing Rajveer's face, Naveen understand him and bursts out laughing. Rajveer lifts Naina in his arms and starts walking towards the room.

Naina keeps looking at Rajveer. Naina puts a hand on Rajveer cheeks. Rajveer gets shocked.

Naina - "aapke ye cheeks kitnay achay hain. Dil karta hai ke is ko mein bus...or aap kitnay hot ho. Aapki ye body wahh, bilkul Salman types."

Rajveer gets stunned and thinks "is ladki ke asaar kuch theek nahi lag rahay. Mein ab kia karoon? Kahan phasa dia mujhe tune Naveen?"

Naina - yells in his ears "RAJVEERRR!! Mein aapse baat kar rahi hoon. Toh hum kahan thay? Haaannn!! Yaad aaya aapke ye hont dil karta hai ke inh ko bus zoor zoor se..."

Rajveer - in his head "aray yaar ye ladki aaj kia sooch rahi hai? Is ke iraday kuch theek nahi lag rahay. Kahin meri izzat ka faluda to nahi banne wala aaj?"

They finally reach Naina's room. He opens the door and makes Naina lay down on her bed. He is about to leave when Naina pulls his arm, he falls on Naina. Naina gets on top of him.

Naina - "aray aap kahan ja rahe ho? Dono sath sath sotay hain na."

Rajveer - trying to get up but in vein "k-k-k kia mathlab tu-tu-tumhara? Sath so-so-sotay hain mathlab?"

Naina - pushing him back on the bed "aray aap ye saanp ki tarah su-su-su kyun kar rahay ho. Mein ye keh rahi thi hum dono ek bed pe."

Rajveer - "Naina kyun meri izzat ka faluda bana rahi ho? Yaar mujhe janay do na."

Naina - "nahi...nahi...nahi... aapko woh sab karna hoga."

Rajveer - "k-k-kia?"
Naina - "aray woh jo ladka or ladki titanic mein kartay hain. Woh movie maine bhaiye ke sath dekhi thi."
Rajveer - in his head "Naveen ke bachay tujhay sharam nahi aayi aapni behan ko adult movie dekha ke. Meri Naina ko toh ye sab pata bhi nahi hoga."
Naina - shouts "RAJVEEERRR SIIRRR"
Rajveer - "aray meri ma mein yahin ho, kyun mere kaan ka parda pharna hai."
Naina - "mein aapko kabse bula rahi ho, aap pata nahi kahan kho gaye ho."
Rajveer - "Naina..tum so jao, mein chalta hoon."
Naina - pulls him "NAHI MUJHE NAHI SONA...Mujhe woh sab karna hai jo us movie mein kia tha us ladka or ladki ne, or woh bhi aapse ke sath" she starts to unbutton his shirt.
Rajveer - scared and grabs his shirt and pulls back "ye-ye-ye tum k-k-kia kar rahi ho? Dekho Naina hum sab woh zaroor karegi lekin shaadi ke baad, abhi nahi meri maa mujhe maaf kar de."

He quickly gets up from the bed. He was about to leave the room when he heard Naina's scream. He looks back at her and sees her standing.

Naina - "ABHI AP NAHI JAOGE. MERE KAPRE TOH CHANGE KARO."
Rajveer - "m-m-mein tumhare kapde? NAHI"

Rajveer in his head "dekh Naveen dekh, dekh apni behan ko, jis ko tu seedha saadha kehta hai, dekh ussay kaisi baate kar rahi hai. Aaj toh meri izzat mitti mein milne wali hai. WOH BHI RAJVEER SINGH SHIKHAWAT KI. Teri behan mera faida uthana chahti hai."

Then he looks at Naina, turns around, smiles and thinks "Naina mujhe pata hai abhi tum hosh mein nahi ho. Jab tum subha utho gi toh mujhse baat toh kia nazre bhi nahi mila sako gi. aray yaar kyun meri mushkil badha rahi ho? Mujhe apne aap ko control karna mushkil ho jayega. Mein ye sab zaroor karna chahta hoon lekin jab tum pooray hosh mein ho."

He comes out of his thoughts hearing Naina's voice. He turns around, quickly puts his hand on his eyes and yells "NAHI NAINA.."

End of Chapter
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Hey guys, so sorry for the late update. I have been so busy with studies and then moving at the same time. I will try my best to update.
How did you guys like this chapter? Please avoid my mistakes - didn't proof read it.

Wow interesting part.