Deewangi - Rajveer-Naina - Page 5

Hey, Just read this fanfiction!! Its amazing..I am a die hard fan of raj and naina and have been reading old ffs all over again. I then came across this and its simply too good! Please continue the possessive raj, I wish the serial showed him that way too!

Originally posted by: pearlie

Hey, Just read this fanfiction!! Its amazing..I am a die hard fan of raj and naina and have been reading old ffs all over again. I then came across this and its simply too good! Please continue the possessive raj, I wish the serial showed him that way too!

Update soon :)

Thank you very much for appreciating my work! I too wish that the serial showed Raj's possessiveness towards Naina! I will try my best to do what I can to stand on your expectations! is there anything specific you would like to see in my fan-fiction that the original track didn't show?

Too good

Amazing update.shart to naina haarne wali hai.

Originally posted by: danish1

Amazing update.shart to naina haarne wali hai.

let's wait and watch!

Chapter 13

Rajveer leaves from BC's office and walks towards the mess. He sees Naina walking there and he thinks something in his head, smiles and follows her, grabs her arms and takes her in a room.

Naina - irritated "aray kia hai? Aap kyun mujhe baar baar yahan yoon le aatay ho sab ke samne?"

Raj- "oh madam, aapko kis cheez se problem hai? Yahan aapko lanay se ya sabke samne yoon lanay se?"

Naina - "jo aap chaho samajh lejiye. Mujhe yahan kyun laye ho?"

Raj - "shart yaad hai na ke bhool gayi?"

Naina - "je mujhe sab yaad hai or ye bhi pata hai ke aap shart harne wale ho."

Raj - walking towards her "acha itna confidence hai apne aap pe Ms. Singh?"

Naina - walking backwards "jee haan bohut confidence hai, akhir aap hi se toh seekha hai Mr. Shikhawat."

Raj - notices her walking backwards "aray tum hamesha peechay kyun jati ho? Mein tumhe kha thora hi jaoon ga?"

Naina - "aap ka koi bharoosa nahi, aap kuch bhi kar saktay hain."

Raj - "acha toh tumhe mujhse dar lagta hai?"

Naina - "jee nahi bilkul bhi nahi...aap jo bhi marzi kar lo mein aapko shart jeetne nahi doongi?"

Raj - again walks towards her "really? Kuch bhi kar loon?"

Naina - " m-mera woh mathlab nahi tha" she pushes him to the side and tries to leave but Rajveer grabs her waist from the back and hugs her tightly from the back.

Rajveer has held both of her arms with his one hand and has grabbed her waist with the other hand while hugging her tightly from the back. Naina's breathing gets heavier.

Naina - trying her best to let go of herself but in vein "sir, please mujhe choriye."

Raj - "pehle mujhe Raj kaho."

Naina - "sir, kyun zid kar rahe hain aap? Please mujhe choriye."

Raj - making his grip even tighter "pehle mujhe Raj kaho phir chooroonga."

Rajveer moves her hair to one side of her shoulder and starts making circles with his finger on her bare neck. This makes Naina to get shivers in her body. Rajveer doesn't fail to notice that. He moves his face towards her ears and whispers.

Raj - whispers "aap ko kia thand lag rahi Capt. Naina ah Singh?" while breathing on her neck and still making circles with his finger.

This is like a torture for Naina yet, a sweet torture. She wants this torture to end but at the same time, doesn't want it to end.

Naina - shivering and breathing heavily "s-sir, ye aap kia kar rahe hain? Please mujhe jaane dijiye."

Raj - "mein sooch raha hun kyun na tumhari baat maan loon."

Naina - "k-kon si baat?"

Raj - "woh jo us raat tum keh rahi thi na Titanic ke scene..."

Naina - "m-m-meine aisa kuch nahi kaha, please choriye mujhe."

Raj - "pehle mujhe Raj kaho."

Naina - "Nahi..mujhe please choriye sir."

Raj - "toh tum nahi kaho gi?"

Naina - "jee nahi, mujhe jane dijiye..."

Raj - "sooch lo Naina."

Naina- "sooch lia."

Raj - "toh tum mujhe Raj nahi bulao gi?"

Naina - "nahi bulaoon..."

As soon as she is about to complete her sentence, she stops as Rajveer places a kiss on her neck. This makes her to shiver and her eyes are wide open.

Naina - "ye-ye kia kare hain aap Ra..." She is about to call him Raj but stops.

Rajveer hears that and leaves her. Naina covers her mouth with her hands as she was just about to lose the challenge.

Raj - "ye kia Naina? Abhi toh tumhe shart lagaye hue 2 ghantay bhi nahi hue or tum toh abhi se haarne lagi ho. Come on Naina mein itni aasani se toh jeetna nahi chahta, zara sham tak toh wait kar leti. "

Naina - "aapne cheating ki hai. Wase bhi abhi mein haari nahi hun abhi maine aapko aapke nam se nahi bulaya."

Raj - "cheating? Kaisi cheating? Maine kia kiya? Wase bhi pyaar or jang mein sab kuch jayaz hai, toh kia hua agar abhi tum nahi haari, mein toh apna naam bulwa kar hi rahoonga who bhi aaj raat honay se pehle."

Naina - "dekh lete hain..."

Naina runs from the room while leaving a smirk on Rajveer's face.

After a while everyone gathers up in the mess

In Mess -

Huda - "kia hua? Hamay kyun bulaya?"

Yudi - "chief, zara wait toh karo."

Pooja - "oye Huda, tujhe har baat ki itni jaldi kyun rehti hai? Lagta hai tera signal har waqt gum rehta hai."

Ali - "Pooja please aap gussa mut kijiye. Or Huda bhai, zara wait kijiye."

Pooja - "ye Qaidi kahan hai?"

Aalekh - walks in the mess "apun idhar hi hai, punjaban."

Huda- " aray yaar mujhe koi bataye ga hum yahan kyun hain abhi?"

Ali - "Huda bhai zara chup kijiye."

Huda - "oye Asool, tu toh rehanay hi de."

Naina walks in

Naina - "guys, kabhi toh larna band kar diya karo tum log. Wase Rajveer sir ne yahan kyun bulaya hai hum sab ko?"

Just then Rajveer. Abhimaniyu, Naveen and Dr. Shalini walks in.

Raj - "guys, BC ne 2 din baad party rakhi hai or is party ki zeemedari hum sab ki hai?"

Naveen - "Party? Who bhi BC ne? kis khushi mein?"

Dr. Shalini - "oho Major, aap kuch samajhte hi nahi."

Naveen - "mathlab?"

Abhimaniyu - "mathlab hum batate hain, party Raj and Naina ke liye hai."

Both Naina and Rajveer looks down shyly.

Naina - "oho Naina, ab mein samjhi."

Raj - "OK guys, ab suno. is party ki zeemedari hum sab ki hai. Capt Ghai and Capt Sahani, aap dono decorations dekhege. Capt Baig and Capt Sharma aap dono khanay peenay ka in charge leinge. Capt Huda and Dr. Shalini, aap log guests ki invitation ka in charge leinge. Chauhan sahab and Naveen, tum dono security ki zeemedari logay. Or mein tum sab ko supervise karoonga"

Pooja - "or sir, Naina?"

Raj - "Capt. Aaluwalia meri help kareingi aap sab ko supervise karne mein, any questions?"

All Captions "No, Sir!"

Two hours later, everyone is busy preparing for the party. While Rajveer doesn't leave any chances to tease Naina and get close to her. While everyone is working in different places, Rajveer and Naina are both in the main hall of KMA. Suddenly, the lights turns off and a spotlight comes on Rajveer and Naina. Music starts playing and Rajveer pulls Naina for a dance.

End of Chapter

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Hope you guys enjoyed this chapter? What will be Rajveer's next step towards his mission?

Chapter 14 - Special

Two hours later, everyone is busy preparing for the party. While Rajveer doesn't leave any chances to tease Naina and get close to her. While everyone is working in different places, Rajveer and Naina are both in the main hall of KMA. Suddenly, the lights turn off and a spotlight comes on Rajveer and Naina. Music starts playing and Rajveer pulls Naina for a dance.

Naina - irritated "aray ye ab aap kia kar rahe ho? Ab aap ka ye kon sa plan hai?"

Raj - "haw? Maine kia kiya? Mein toh sirf dance karna chahta hoon?"

Naina - "please sir, yahan pe itna kaam baki hai or aap ko dance ki soojh rahi hai."

Raj - "oh come on Naina! 1 dance hi toh hai, please?"

He then takes his hand out towards Naina and says in his own charming style "May I have the pleasure?" (exactly like he said in the scene when he was teaching Naina the dance steps, remember?)

Naina accepts his offer and puts her hand in his hand.

He says "thank you!"

He then takes her one hand and puts it on his shoulder, takes her other hand in his and puts one of his hand on her waist which gives her the chills again, he then pulls her with a jerk.

Raj - "shall we start?"

Naina nods in a yes!

Hua hai aaj pehli baar - (sanam Re) song plays in the background.

hua hai aaj pehli baar
Jo aise muskuraya hoon
Tumhe dekha toh jaana ye
Ke kyun duniya mein aaya hoon

Rajveer steps side with his left foot while Naina steps side with her right foot while looking in each other's eyes!

Raj - still dancing "Naina, tumhare liye 1 surprise hai aaj!"

Naina - "surprise? Kaisa surprise sir?"

Hua hai aaj pehli baar
Jo aise muskuraya hoon
Tumhe dekha toh jaana ye
Ke kyun duniya mein aaya hoon

Now Rajveer Steps back with his right foot while Naina step forward with her left foot.

Raj - "aray surprise hai...thora toh wait karna parega na madam!"

Naina - "aray, please bateye na sir."

Ye jaan lekar ke jaa meri
Tumhe jeene main aaya hoon
Main tumse ishq karne ki
Ijaazat Rab se laaya hoon

Now Rajveer spins Naina around

Raj - "nahi, tumhe thora wait toh karna hi parega!"

Naina - "per kyun sir? Kyun mujhe itna tadpa rahe hain aap?"

Zameen se aasmaan tak hum
Dhoondh aaye jahaan saara
Banaa paaya nahi ab tak
Khuda tumse koi pyaara

Now Rajveer pulls Naina back with a jerk

Raj - "acha toh ab mein tumhe tadpa raha hun? Jo tum mujhe tadpa rahi ho uska kia?"

Naina - "maine aap ko kab tadpaya?"

Baaton mein teri hain badmashiyan
Sab bewajah ki hain taarifiyaan

Now looking back into each other's eyes, still repeating the steps!

Raj - "tumne abhi tak mujhe Raj nahi bulaya, ye tadpana nahi toh or kia hai."

Naina - teasingly "ohh, toh ye baat hai, is ka mathlab aap apni haar mante hain?"

Main likh doon aasmaan par ye
Ke padh lega jahaan saara
Huaa na hoga ab koi
Yahan hum do sa dobara

Now spinning her again

Raj - "jee nahi meri soniye, itni aasani se Rajveer kabhi shart nahi harta, Raj toh tum mujhe bulao gi woh bhi thori dair ke baad."

Naina - "acha jee? Aisa aap kia karne wale hai?"

Now picking her up in his arms

Main duniya bhar ki taarifein
Tere sajde mein laaya hoon
Main tumse ishq karne ki
Ijaazat Rab se laaya hoon
(Rab se laaya hoon.. Rab se laaya hoon..)

He then puts her down

Raj - "woh tum khud hi dekh lo."

Suddenly, the whole place becomes dark for few minutes. Then, there is again a spotlight on Naina. Naina does not find Rajveer there. She, then, suddenly looks down and is surprised and shocked to see what's in front of her.

There are rose petals everywhere around her and Rajveer is sitting on his knees with a diamond ring in his hand.

Suddenly, all the lights come on and Naina finds the whole place decorated around her and she finds all her friends, Naveen, Abhimaniyu, Dr. Shalini and everyone else is present there.

She then looks back at Rajveer who is still sitting on his knees with the ring in his hand.

Raj - "Naina..."

Naina's heartbeat increases and she has tears in her eyes.

Raj - "Naina, kia tum mujhse shaadi karogi?"

Naina is left speechless, not because anything wrong is happening, but because the amount of love she has seen in Rajveer's eyes for her.

Naina then takes her hand out in front of him and says "yes, mein aapse shaadi karoongi."

Rajveer puts the ring in her finger. She feels something coming on her. She looks up and sees the shower of roses on her. Everyone else claps with happiness around them.

Rajveer gets up and and says

Raj - "I love you Naina! I love you very much!"

Naina - tears in her eyes "I love you too Raj! Mein bhi aapse bohut mohobatt karti hun!"

Rajveer just realises that she called him "Raj."

Raj - "tumne abhi mujhe kia kaha? Raj? Tum shart haar gayi ho Capt. Naina ah' Singh."

Naina - "aise shart harne ke liye mein hamesha tayar hoon, Raj!"

Raj - wipes her tears "chahe ye aansu khushi ke hoon, lekin meri Naina kay nainoo mein main kabhi ansu nahi dekhna chahta, samjhi aap?"

She is not able to control herself anymore and just hugs Rajveer tightly. He, too hugs her back with the same force. They are lost in each other that they don't even know the surroundings around them.

They both come back to their senses with a voice.

"aham...ahamm"

They looks around and hear Naveen clearing his throat on purpose.

Naveen - smiling "sharam nahi aati tum dono ko? Or tu Raj, mere samne hi meri behan ke sath romance kar raha hai?"

Raj - "abay oye salay, teri behan meri bhi honay wali biwi hai, toh is hisab se mera poora haq banta hai."

Naveen - "oye gali kyun deta hai? Sala kis ko bola?"

Raj - "gali nahi mere salay, mein tu tujhe sirf rishta bata raha hoon!"

Naveen - "acha, phir theek hai."

Naveen then takes Rajveer's hand and puts it into Naina's hand.

Naveen - "aaj mujhe pata chal gaya ke koi or bhi is duniya mein hai jo meri behan ko mujhse bhi zayada pyaar karta hai. Ab mein sakoon se mar sakta..."

Naveen didn't finish his sentence as Naina and Rajveer both punched him.

Naina - "khabardaar Bhaiya jo aaj ke baad aapne kabhi bhi aisi baat ki kabhi, nahi tu mein aapse kabhi baat nahi karrongi."

Raj - "oye salay, agar dobara aisi baat ki na, sab se pehle mein tujhe maroonga."

Naveen is surprised to see the love Raj and Naina had for him.

Naina - "aisi baat kabhi apni zabaan per mut leke aana dubara warna mein mar jaoo..."

Rajveer suddenly puts his hand on her lips, grabs her shoulders tightly and says:

Raj - "NAINA...aaj ye baat keh di, ainda mut kehna."

Naina - "I am sorry Raj, mein ainda kabhi aisi baat nahi karoongi. Raj mujhe dard ho raha hai."

Rajveer leaves her shoulders and hugs her tightly with tears.

Raj - "Naina bhagwaan na kare kabhi aisi nobat aaye, mein tumhare bagair jee nahi sakta. Tum meri zindagi ban chuki ho, mein tumhe apnay se door nahi jane doonga, kabhi nahi."

Naina - wipes his tears "mein kabhi aapse door nahi jaoongi, Raj"

Naveen - "tum dono phir se shuru hogaye? Ye sab yahan nahi chale ga, yar thora wait karo, shaadi toh honay do phir kar lena jo karna hai akele ek kamray mein."

Naina is surprised by Naveen's comment as he never talked to her like this ever before. Both Rajveer and Naina look down with embarrassment and red faces. Everyone laughs at Naveen's remark.

Everyone is happy and suddenly everyone is shocked hearing a loud clap'. Everyone looks towards the direction of the clap.

Rajveer, Abhimaniyu and Naveen are all shocked to see the person clapping.

Abhumaniyu - "NANDINI..."

End of Chapter

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The role of Nandini will be played by Shritama Mukherjee (remember the the girl 'Jai Nandini' from Dekha ek Khawab?) - Sorry I don't know how to post pictures here.

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Hey guys, I hope you enjoy this chapter! Also, Please do comment with more suggestion on how you would like to see the story to be. This is my first fan fiction so, I would really appreciate if I had more comments! I just need to know if you guys are liking my fan fiction or not. any suggestions or complains you guys may have? Please do comment more with suggestions.

Anyone wants to guess what will happen next? Will Nandini try to create problems between Raj and Naina? or will she be a positive character.

Zabardast update.. nandini's entry..New twist.. Waiting for next update

Hello! I have decided that I will not be continuing this fan-fiction due to not getting enough comments. Wish you all a very great future ahead, Bye

Hey don't do that...this is ur first story and readers and commenters will come...