Arshi FF: The Broken Hearts#4 LAST CH Pg144 dt.10.8.17

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monalisa911

@monalisa911

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#871

Hey rose today I came across ur story the broken heart ...must say it is a marvellous piece of writing..couldn't stop before the end...i hv read more than 1000 stories on arshi but nothing as beautiful n heartwarming as this one ...take my good wishes n keep up ur good work ..bye

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jasbin

@jasbin

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Posted: 8 years ago

#872

That was a mind blowing story.

Read the whole story in one go.

Wish to read it again and again.

Kisi ne sach kaha hai, ke kuch khokar hi us cheez no keemat pata chalti hai. Zindagi kisi kisi ko hi dubara mouka deti hai. Par us no ehmiyat ko samajhna ya NAHI hamare haath me hai.

Bus yehi dua hai ke kabhi BHI kisi ko koi itna na tode ke who kabhi juud na paaye.

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Anitha

@anitha.b

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#873

A very beautiful story Rose. You are a wonderful writer and your writing involves very deep emotions and human flaws and how nothing is perfect but one can find what they need and be happy.

My heart rose with all different emotions reading the story and could not stop till I finished all in one go.

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Sneha

@neasya

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#874

nice story dear loved reading it...

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Srivalli

@Srivalli.t

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Posted: 8 years ago

#875

Awesome story!!

Loved it.

Very beautifully written.

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amoo

@gurfanz

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#876

Where is last chapter.. I can't see .. plz updates I be waiting for long time.. I can't wait for new ff to star again.. with new concept

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sukanksha

@sukanksha

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#877

Duniya k saare k saare appreciation wale adjectives soch lo.. that are for the last part.

Arre ek hi toh maang thi hmaari bhole bachon ki ... a Lengthy Epilogue. . Woh bhi humse cheen li gayi... nahhhiiinnn

Ok toh I will ask for something else. . When are you going to start a new story???????

Bcz I can't live without ur stoies now.. even though it's once in a month sometimes

Edited by sukanksha - 7 years ago

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sukanksha

@sukanksha

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#878

Originally posted by: gurfanz
Where is last chapter.. I can't see .. plz updates I be waiting for long time.. I can't wait for new ff to star again.. with new concept

The one on the page 144 is the last chapter

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zeest_14

@zeest_14

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#879

👏 wonderful job Rose.I must consider it another jewel of your writing treasure.Balanced pace of story with beautiful words,every update was so nice and as a whole its a complete package.👍🏼

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sonali

@Sonalikarhi

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#880

outstanding story...loved it so much...i think in all of your stories this will be the best ever story you have written..you have grown so much as a writer..hats off for writing such beautiful story..one thing i like about your stories is that you dont write things typical way..its always feel as realistic as possible..there are stories except 2 or 3 where if arnav hurts and leaves khushi, khushi will somehow turns another form of asr, rich and arrogant..its not like its bad but all the people doesnt become successful just because they have bad past. there are people who will not get that far...you really write very unique story.but loves the way you have turn this story so beautifully...every emotions of arnav and khushi write so apt ..loved sia so much..she is so cute ..loved it and it will be my favourite one always.thanks for writing it .

Edited by Sonalikarhi - 7 years ago