HOSTAGE - Page 6

hey dont u dare sorry no offence stop this fic i loved it but i kinda lost it n for ur comments guess u dont con consistently thats why readers dont exactly know when u con n ur parts are a bit short am sorry if i offended u but really ur fic is interesting

~What flashbacks did josh have and why did he have them
something happend that kripa got kidnapped.. rite
~Who is GUDIYAA? Is it a doll
a doll!! haha.. its kripa!! i no it!!
~Why did kripa have flashbacks?
she got kidnapped... dunno if she remembers but still
~Who is payal?
payal is a doll.. a memory that now josh has
~Who is bhaii?
josh is bahiii
~Why was Kripa screaming "BHAI DONT LEAVE ME, IM SCARED"in her flashback
it was dark and scaryyyyyyy and thy wre lost

either they are bro/sis or they are like bro sis.. ritee

well either wayy continue soooooooooooooooooooonnn

i really like your fan fic! continue soon!!! 😳 😳

yes itz been really long..... 😳 😳

Originally posted by: brainychild92

~What flashbacks did josh have and why did he have them
something happend that kripa got kidnapped.. rite
~Who is GUDIYAA? Is it a doll
a doll!! haha.. its kripa!! i no it!!
~Why did kripa have flashbacks?
she got kidnapped... dunno if she remembers but still
~Who is payal?
payal is a doll.. a memory that now josh has
~Who is bhaii?
josh is bahiii
~Why was Kripa screaming "BHAI DONT LEAVE ME, IM SCARED"in her flashback
it was dark and scaryyyyyyy and thy wre lost

either they are bro/sis or they are like bro sis.. ritee

well either wayy continue soooooooooooooooooooonnn

YES NO MABE SO i ai'nt tellin 😆

Hey you guys ive been relli busy and ill continue tommorow cuz my mommys home and she doesnt like it when im on the computer when she is home so i will continue tommorow kk

luv y'all 😳

Recap---

FLASHBACK-----------------------------------------------

KRIPA- OMG bhai i love it thank you so much im going to name it payal
BOY- ok

and then all of a sudden it gets dark and you see kripa screaming a name

KRIPA- BHAAIIIIIIIIIII, DONT LEAVE ME ALONE IM SCARED

END OF FLASHBACK----------------------------------------

PART 5

Kripa gasps really loud and has tears in her eyes but she wipes them before anyone can see them but josh saw the tears

Josh thinking- why is she crying, and why do I give a damn

Angad- hey Josh where are you lost

Josh- huh… oh nowhere

Angad- ok, so let's call her parents now

Josh- ok lets call now who should we call first

Angad- lets call her mom first and at least let them know that she has been kidnapped by the most dangerous gang in like all of India

Josh- ok

Kripa smirked that statement that Angad made it was just hilarious; they were going to call her mother that was a sight that Kripa just had to see. "Do they know what is going to hit them" thought Kripa.


Ring Ring Ring

(Kripa's mother- Linda)

Linda- KRIPA WHERE THE HELL ARE YOU DO YOU EVEN KNOW WHAT TIME IS IT? YOU WERE SUPPOSED TO BE HERE 2 HOURS AGO!!!! I DON'T WANT ANY EXCUSE I WANT YOU HERE IN 5 MINUTES OR ELSE THINK THAT YOUR OUT OF THIS HOUSE!!!! YOU THOUGHT YOU WERE GOING TO MISS MY WEDDING, IN YOUR DREAMS, (muttering) little b****, f***** w**** I hate her and her father!!!!!! As******

Click the phone went dead, leaving a shocked Angad and Josh and a laughing Kripa


There you go guys I'll continue the next part tomorrow okay


Luv you

Avantika_4ever

omg what a cruel mom kripas got 😕
😆 anyways nice part so plsss continue soon 😳

lol that was hilarious continue soon 😛

It was a good part.Please continue soon!

haha... kripa mom is funny.. 😆 😆 😆
awesome part! 😳 😳 😃