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Posted: 18 years ago
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recap------------

Surya- Hey Kripa beta I'm very sorry but im in a press conference and I cant talk to you right now so I'm very sorry please forgive me but I promise I will call you as soon as possible ok maybe I'll call you in 1 hour okay bye love you sweetheart

Click. Before angad could talk Surya had cut the phone now angad was shocked but furious at the same time

Josh- what happened what did he say?

Kripa- how about I answer that question for you he probably said " beta im in a press conference and I can't talk right now but I will call you soon ok once again I'm very sorry" am I right or am I right

Angad- why you little b****

Saying that angad proceeded towards Kripa and was going to do something

Part 7------------


Kripa started to back up

Kripa- don't you dare come close to me

Angad- why you scared that ill do something

Kripa- n.no I'm not scared

Angad- then why are you backing up?

Kripa- b...because I feel like sitting down ya I feel like sitting down

Kripa hits the wall because she backed up

Angad- so where are you going to sit? As far as I can see the chair is that way

Angad said indicating towards the furniture, then he put both his hands on the side of the wall to make sure that Kripa doesn't run away

Kripa- w…what are y…you doing?

Angad- close your eyes

Kripa- what?

Angad-I said close your eyes

Kripa- why?

Angad gets angry and shouts

Angad- I SAID CLOSE YOUR EYES!!!!

Kripa gets scared and does what she is told, angad grins very evilly and goes close to her face
Kripa can feel his nice minty and warm breath, angad can also smell the lavender coming from her hair it was so calming but angad snapped out of it and kisses both of her cheeks and says

Angad- you see if angad khanna wants then he can do anything

And then he left, leaving a shocked Kripa, he turned around and yelled

Angad- I know I'm so hot but you know you can open your eyes and like think about the kisses I gave you

Kripa just realized what happened and opens her eyes and is very furious

COMING UP- I A'INT TELLIN

QUESTIONS
~ What is Kripa going to do to angad?
~is love going to form soon or is it a nono?
~when is Linda and Surya going to find out that Kripa is missing?

hey guys im gonna continue tommorow toos kk. and please read my note and tell me your complaints ok

luv y'all

avantika_4ever

Edited by avantika_4ever - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#72
awww thats sweet lol well from my point of view lol it could have been worse like him smacking her across her face or kissing her on her lips (although thats not really a punishment LMAO) anyways continue soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#73
great part!!! 👏 but i have a complaint about the parts being too
short!!! lol!! if u can, can u PLEASE make them a bit longer????? PLEASE!!!
THANXXXXX!!!!!!! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: berkeleygirl818

great part!!! 👏 but i have a complaint about the parts being too
short!!! lol!! if u can, can u PLEASE make them a bit longer????? PLEASE!!!
THANXXXXX!!!!!!! 😃

ok ill try to continue the parts longer

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Posted: 18 years ago
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There parents will probably never find out this rate 😆 Please continue soooon! I cant wait for the next part! 👏 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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recap--------



Kripa gets scared and does what she is told, angad grins very evilly and goes close to her face
Kripa can feel his nice minty and warm breath, angad can also smell the lavender coming from her hair it was so calming but angad snapped out of it and kisses both of her cheeks and says

Angad- you see if angad khanna wants then he can do anything

And then he left, leaving a shocked Kripa, he turned around and yelled

Angad- I know I'm so hot but you know you can open your eyes and like think about the kisses I gave you

Kripa just realized what happened and opens her eyes and is very furious


part 8 -------

Kripa started to yell at angad

Kripa- HOW DARE YOU, I HAVE NEVER LET A MAN TOUCH ME WITHOUT MY WILL BUT YOU, YOU, YOU IDIOT, FREAK, WEIRDO, PERVERT….. HOW DARE YOU TOUCH ME!! IM GOING TO TELL DAD AND THEN YOU WILL GO TO JAIL YOU PERVERTED DI………

Before Kripa could say anything else Josh put his hand on her mouth to make her shut up

Josh- you know what you talk to much. Angad doesn't like people who talk a lot ok so quit it a………

Before josh could continue kripa bit his hand forcing Josh to yell and take his hand off

Kripa- WHO ARE YOU TO TELL ME ANYTHING YOU DON'T EVEN KNOW ANYTHING ABOUT ME BUT YOU SHOULD AT LEAST KNOW THAT ME, KRIPA SHARMA, DOES NOT TAKE CRAP FROM ANYONE OK SO WHO ARE YOU TO TELL ME WHAT TO DO AND NOT TO DO! AND ALSO TELL THAT DUMBA** THAT IF HE TOUCHES ME AGAIN THEN I WILL NOT LEAVE HIM!

Saying that she started to get teary and left to the living room. Somehow josh really felt hurt by Kripa's words and also started to get teary by that he started to get a flashbacks

FLASHBACK--------------------------------------------------- -----------------
(Gudiyaaa is in this flashback ok) (Josh is 6 years old and gudiyaaa is 4 years old

Gudiyaaa and josh are playing tag suddenly gudiyaaa falls down and starts to cry. Josh runs to gudiyaaa hugs her

Josh- gudiyaaa tum teek ho?

Josh starts to cry

Gudiyaaa- yes bhai main teek ho arre aap ro (cry) kyun rahe ho

Josh- kyunki mere choti Behan ko chot (hurt) ponche hai

Gudiyaaa- liken I only fell down so how did I get hurt and don't you dare cry ok or else I will cry

Josh- really but what if I'm far away like I'm in a different home and I cry then how will you know that I am crying

Gudiyaaa- simple where ever you are I will always be in your heart so make me a promise that you will never ever cry

Josh- I promise I love you a lot

Gudiyaaa- same here bhai, I love you too now stop crying

Josh- ok


FLASHBACK ENDS-------------------------------------------------------- --------------------

Josh stops crying and wipes his tears and leaves the area and goes to his bedroom while some men in black are watching Kripa. But angad sees the tears and gets angry and walks to josh and tries to talk to him but fails and then he lets it go. Meanwhile kripa feels like crying to for some reason and cries her heart out; she misses alliyah and her dad. She also misses her friends and Mrs. Wilson and Mr. Wilson because they were like her grandparents and loved her like their own child because they didn't have any children. She missed them all a lot. Angad on the other hand is punching his punching bag because he misses his mother because today was her birthday but his family is in Canada because of business. Josh also misses gudiyaa because she was his little sister and loved her a lot. He also misses his mother because she is dead…


In angads room-----------------------------------

Angad- mom I miss you so much happy birthday but it looks like you forgot me again like last year I cant believe it I loved you more than anything but it looks like you never loved me at all If you did then you would have at least called and asked how am I or am I even alive and you still wait for that sick bas**** I cant believe it you still remember him he left us when I was 2 years old and ever since then you have been waiting for him and never thought about us god just once, just once if you ever phoned me instead of me always phoning you then I would always cherish those moments but it was always him I hate him and now I'm starting to hate you too, but just for today I'm going to call you for your birthday after this I will always wait for your call

Then he punched it for at least another 3 punches and then picked up the telephone and dialed a number

Ring Ring Ring



Maid- hello

Angad- hey rosy is mom there

Rosy- hello angad baba I'm sorry but madam is not here right now she is gone for a dinner party at the Johnson's I am very sorry baba

Angad- its ok rosy but when mom comes back tell her happy birthday from angad ok

Rosy- yes baba

Angad- bye rosy

Rosy- bye baba take care

Angad- you too

Saying that he shut the phone and started to cry

Angad- why mom why , wht are you always busy that you never get time to call any of your kids I hate you I hate you a lot


Meanwhile in joshs room-------------------------------------------------------- --

Josh is looking at a picture and is also crying saying

Josh- why did I ever leave you and you know mom also left us yes mom left us and left you to live with that white b**** and me to live alone I miss you so much I wish you were with me right now but you know today after 15 years I finally broke your promise for not crying and you know what it hurts a lot that I broke your promise and I wish I never broke your promise im sorry im very sorry but I promise that from now on I will never cry I promise but im going to cry today and today only

And josh cries a lot


In the living room-------------------------------------------------------- ----------


Kripa is crying a lot and is talking too


Kripa- alliyah where are you when I need you I miss you so much, and Mr and Mrs Wilson I really want your warm brownies and love that I never got from Linda and dad I really want to have my head in your lap mrs. Wilson. Dad I know that you never had time for me but I will always love you and I hope you will seriously put Linda in jail for fraud with the money you put in my name and mom I really miss you I wish you never left me and took bhai with you I really miss both of you I wish you would come back………


And then she keeps on crying. Then all three are shown crying in different places. Now the scene ends with all three divided up and crying in different places



Coming up—alliyah and other people finding out that kripa has been kidnapped

QUESTIONS---------

~ who is gudiyaaa?
~what is going to happen when everyone finds out that kripa has been kidnapped?



Luv y'all


Avantika_4ever


Edited by avantika_4ever - 18 years ago
sidra01 thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#77
awsome its getting more interesting and mysterious with every part
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Posted: 18 years ago
#78
i think gudiya is kripa!! becuase kripa said her mom left with kripa's bhai as in josh and josh was then abandoned by their mom... idk if that makes sense but continue soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#79
great part, and thanxx for making it long!!!! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
#80
Nice part, I think (i know 😆 ) Kripa is Gudiyaa 😛 When everyone finds out that she has been kidnapped, Aaliya might look for her and she might find josh and they might fall in love 😆

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