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Posted: 18 years ago
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Great part and continue soon plz
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Posted: 18 years ago
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guys i have decided i will continue every day but if i dont then that means i will continue later that day or the next day any time sometimes if im in a writing mood then i might continue twice ok if u have any ideas then plzzzz pm me TODAY 😳


AND THANK YOU FOR YOUR COMMENTS
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i haven't read this FF for a while, but i just caught up!!!! AWESOME part!!!!!!! 👏 👏 hope u continue soon!!!! 😊


p.s. whenever u update, could u PLEASE update the pg no. and ch. in the title thingy so i know u have updated it!!! THANXXXX!!!!!!!! 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#34
great fan-fic and part!!! when i read the first like 2 parts i had a feeling the guy was angad...lol kripa screamed so loud 😆..lets see what happens .. cont soon 😛 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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you guys im sooooo sorry that i couldnt continue can i start to continue on friday cause today i have to work on ma math and english and i promise i will try to write a relli long part or 2 regular sized parts ONCE AGAIN I AM RELLI SORRY!!!!! plzzzzzzzzz forgive me😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
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its ok yaar alteleast u informed us its more than enough ur fic rocks
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Posted: 18 years ago
#38
yeah cant wait! thanks for telling us when though! lol! i thought the jean guy was angad lol josh needs to give them some alone time LMAO! i feel really bad for her though! i wonder what they are planning and what is with the money? i wonder if angad is the boss... angad better be!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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next part in 20 minutes

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Edited by avantika_4ever - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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recap

Kripa- AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!

josh and angad jumped and were shocked that a girl that beautiful could scream so loud


TODAYS PART OF PART 4 -----

kripa screamed loud but Angad was to quick he turned around very fast and grabbed kripa by her waist and held her very tight. Kripa tried to get away but Angads grip was kept getting tighter tight that kripas waist had his handmarks on......

Angad- Your not getting away that easily. no one can run away from "THE ANGAD KHANNA"
kripa- LET ME GO I DO DO ANYTHING, said kripa with tears forming in her eyes

Josh started to melt down when he saw Kripas tears. Some how he felt connected to her and like flashbacks of a little girl kept coming infront of his eyes

FLASHBACK--------------------------------------------------- ------------------------------------------------------------ ----------------------------

GIRL- BHAI SAVE ME, HELP, LET ME GO
MAN- CHUP HE WONT BE ABLE TO HELP YOU NOW YOUR ALL MINE
JOSH- GUDIYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA (doll)

END OF FLASHBACK--------------------------------------------------- ------------------------------------------------------------ -----------

Josh- GUDIYA

angad and kripa stopped yelling and looked at Josh

Angad- Josh are you okay; still holding on to kripa

KRIPA thinking- how does he know, is he related

Josh- let her go angad, like tie her up but don't hurt her

Angad- Josh??????????????????????????????????? is that you???????????????????????

Josh- NO ANGAD ITS MY GHOST, he said sarcastically(spelling) now will you please let her go

Angad- but josh wat if she runs away

Josh- I have a feeling that she wont, he said eyeing kripa

Kripa on the other hand was staring at josh as if she had a connection with him, just then Kripa had a flashback tooo

FLASHBACK-----------------------------------------------

KRIPA- OMG bhai i love it thank you so much im going to name it payal
BOY- ok

and then all of a sudden it gets dark and you see kripa screaming a name

KRIPA- BHAAIIIIIIIIIII, DONT LEAVE ME ALONE IM SCARED

END OF FLASHBACK----------------------------------------


srry guys its to small rite

preview- more flashbacks and angad and kripa have more fights

QUESTIONS----------------

~What flashbacks did josh have and why did he have them
~Who is GUDIYAA? Is it a doll
~Why did kripa have flashbacks?
~Who is payal?
~Who is bhaii?
~Why was Kripa screaming "BHAI DONT LEAVE ME, IM SCARED"in her flashback

Edited by avantika_4ever - 18 years ago

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