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Posted: 18 years ago
#31
OMG

angad such a besharam he kissed kripa on da cheek n grabd her hand dat 2 inda office

my word he has guts 😆 😆 😆

cnt believe diya saw kripa's drawin 😲

keep it up, im soooooo hookd on ur ff 😉
Edited by ShellyB - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: ShellyB

OMG

angad such a besharam he kissed kripa on da cheek n grabd her hand dat 2 inda office

my word he has guts 😆 😆 😆

cnt believe diya saw kripa's drawin 😲

keep it up, im soooooo hookd on ur ff 😉

😳😳😳thanks

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Posted: 18 years ago
#33
wow awesome i just read all the 10 parts... Lovely work ... Angad is a Brat...waiting for you to write more....
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: AK_KYPH

wow awesome i just read all the 10 parts... Lovely work ... Angad is a Brat...waiting for you to write more....

ThanQ😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part: 11

Misthy came to check if Angad is ready and saw he is coming down with Diya. "chalo Angad tum tayar hogaye ho..sab pooch rahey hai tumhare barrey mein khaas kar dadi ney." By the time they entered the place where everyone gathered.
There are three separate big pandas. One panda filled with 75 different varieties of delicious dishes, Second for the main celebration where Dilip is getting ready to give a speech on his mom, Devayani's 75th birthday. Third one is arranged with a big band and Angad is giving instructions to everyone. Everywhere the closed circuit TV screens and audio speakers are displayed for guests who roam around with friends in the function.

Dadi is wearing white silk saree with red embroidered border and pearl choker and diamond ear studs, hair wrapped into a bun. She is seated in a special chair and everyone is gathered around her greeting her.
Misthy is talking to her mom Damini and brother Prithvi. Sharmas and Patels met Bose family and greeted each other. Diya is running all over the place and Prateek following her.
Naina, Kartik, Shabbir and Aaliyah are standing in a row to start the function. Aaliyah is looking gorgeous with grey color zari worked gagra and matching jewelry and Shabbir is stealing her eyes. Aaliyah is warning with showing forefinger as she will kill him if he flirts with her. Kartik is looking handsome and dignified in his white sherwani with blue chunni. He's helping Dilip all the time.

Dilip gave a big speech appreciating Devayani's moral support to the family along with their brought up till the present time and wished she long lives hale and healthy and sees great grand children generation.

After Dilip's speech one by one all went to her for her blessings, for giving their gifts.

Angad went to the band arranged at a corner and announced loudly in the mic,:
"Ladies and Gentlemen Attention Please!!(Everyone diverted their attention at Angad and kept silent to listen him) "Humara dadi aaj 75 years ki hogayi hai. Bachpan se main jaantha hoon dadi ki badi tamanna thi main ek mashoor gayak banoon aur ek equally talented ladki se shadi karoon aur mere family ek bada music bond family ho. Unki yeh tamanna ke dariya main engineering padney ke baad bhi music hi mere jindagi bana diya tha. Unki aasha to abb adhuri hi rahgaya tha magar main akela hi music ko jinda rakhoonga jabtak mere jaan hai. Mai kareeban ek saal se music concerts se jada academy pe dhyan detha raha aur dadi mujhe yeh gaaliyah dethi rahi ki main uskey saamney kayi din se gaya nahin. Aaj main unki yeh manokamna pura karney jaa raha hoon Aur dadi tho aaj ka re-mix, fast beats pasand karthi nahin aur unki jamaney ka music ko bahut pasand karthi hai. So now this evening I'm going to sing all old songs from 50's and 60's and please bear with me if I make any mistakes (He laughs and winks eye turning on the band). So shuru hojaaye…..Haan ek aur baath bhoolgayi main…Wo yeh hai ki aap sab mere saath saath dance karey aur iss musical event pe request from dadi (he paused and looked at Kripa, who is standing along with Prateek besides Harshini. He stretched his hand towards her) Mrs.Kripa Saxena, Harshini pPatel, Prithvi Bose bhi hamarey saath gana gaye. Ho sakey tho Kripa ko ek dance karke bathana hai. (Kripa is stunned and turned her eyes towards dadi and accepted the request on her directions)…SO….. Aaj ka yeh shaam mere dadi ke naam" he bowed to dadi and dadi smiled as she blessing him. Everyone started welcoming him, Kripa, Harshini, Prithvi with a big applause. He turned to the band and gave the list of his songs.

Everyone spread over the panda to make a big circle so that everyone can see the singers.
Angad started singing the old song in 60's with Dilip Kumar dance. He tied his chunni to he waist and took Aaliya's to tie on head and started dancing……….

http://www.dishant.com/album/Ganga-Jamuna-(1961).html
laagaa gori gujariyaa se nehaa humaar
hoyi gavaa saaraa chaupat moraa rojagaar
…………….looked smiling at dadi. Everyone clapped loudly. Dadi took nazaria with hands.
Oo……………………

nain lad jainhe to manavaa mein kasak hoibe kari
prem kaa chhuti hai pataakhaa to dhumak hoibe kari
nain lad jainhe
……………………………………………………………………….Grabbed Misthy's hand and brought her into the centre and dancing with her. She is blushed and moved steps along with him.

roop ko manamaa basaibaa to buraa kaa hoi hai
tohu se preet lagaibaa to buraa kaa hoi hai
prem ki nagari ma kuchh humaraa bhi haq hoibe kari
nain lad jainhe
………………………………………………………………..took Naina into the center and moved steps along with her. Dilip joined them.

hoi gavaa man maa more tirachhi najar kaa hallaa
gori ko dekhe binaa nindiyaa na aavai humakaa
phaans lagi hai to karejavaa ma khatak hoibe kari
nain lad jaihe……………………
…………………………………..grabbed Kripa's hand and swirled round and took to the center and danced..Kripa is standing still smiling with blush. He directed her with his eyes to dance but Kripa nodded her head "no".

thaik thaik thai thai, thai
dhaak dhinak dhin, taak tinak tin
dhaak dhinak dhin, dhaak dhinak dhin, dhaa
!.....He staring at her and she is keep blushing.

aa.Nkh mil gayii hai sajaniyaa se to naachan lagii hai
pyaar kii miiThii gajal manavaa bhii gaavan lagii hai
jhaa.Njh bajii hai to kamariyaa ma lachak hoibe karii
nain la.D jai.nhe……………………………………………………….
Everyone started dancing along with Angad and Kripa moved to dadi watching all the people dancing. Kids also joined along with Diya and Prateek.

nainaa jab la.Dii hai to bhaiyyaa man me.n kasak hoibe karii
thaik thaik tik thaa

hoy hoy hoy!

man le gayii re dhobaniyaa raamaa kaisaa jaaduu Daar ke
kaisaa jaaduu Daar ke re, kaisaa Tonaa Daar ke
man le gayii re dhobaniyaa raamaa kaisaa jaaduu Daar ke
man le gayii re dhobaniyaa raamaa kaisaa jaaduu Daar ke


Everyone enjoyed his singing and dancing. "Bachpan ka yaad agaya Angad!" Gayatri praised him. "To aur ek sunaoon? Magar Aap bhi mere saath nachengey maami!", Angad pulled her into the center place. Gayatri laughed and asked youngsters to dance. "Main naachoongi" Diya yelled. Angad carried her. "main bhee" Prateek peeked behind Gayatri. Angad about to take him and he ran to Surya. Everyone laughed. Angad put Diya down and started another song. Shabbir and Kartik showed their thumbs up. Kripa and Aaliyah are smiling besides them.

Nishant entered and praised the song. Dilip received him and took to dadi. He greeted her and touched her feet. Angad wished him. Nishant went and wished Shabbir and Kartik.
"Aap bahut der kardee" Kartik enquired. "haan flight late hogaya tha" Nishant answered. Kripa came to him and hugged him. Prateek came running to him while Diya is enjoying singing and dancing.
Prithvi took mic and started singing another old song:

http://www.dishant.com/album/devar-(1966).html

Aaya Hai Mujhe Phir Yaad Woh Zaalim
Guzara Zamaana Bachpan Ka
Hai ye Re Akele Chhod Ke Jaana
Aur Na Aana Bachpan Ka
Aaya Hai Mujhe .................................
Angad hugged him. Misthy also joined them. Harshini and Kripa watching Prithvi standing besides dadi..

Woh Khel, Woh Saathi , Woh Jhule
Woh Daud Ke Kehna Aa Chhule Hum
Aaj Talak Bhi Na Bhule
Woh Khwab Suhaana Bachpan Ka
Aaya Hai Mujhe...

Iski Sab Ko Pehchaan Nahin
Yeh Do Din Ka Mehmaan Nahin 2
Mushkil Hai Bahut Aasaan Nahin
Yeh Pyar Bhulaana Bachpan Ka
Aaya Hai Mujhe...

Milkar Roye, Fariyaad Kare
Un Beete Dino Ki Yaad Kare
Aye Kaash Kahin Mil Jaaye Koi
Yun Meet Puraana Bachpan Ka
Aaya Hai Mujhe..

Angad gave the mic to Kripa to start. Kripa is hesitating and thinking. Harshini gave warm-up to her by starting the song……….

http://www.dishant.com/album/dhool-ka-phool-(1959).html
Jhukti ghata gaati hawa sapne jagaye
Nanha sa dil mera machal machal jaye …hoho…2

Kripa took over Harshini and started singing. Dadi came to Kripa and dropped her hands on both Kripa's and Harshini's shoulders. Kripa and Harshini started dancing. They became little girls and remembering their old days.

Hahahah lalalala
Mehke hue beheke hue mast nazare
Mikiri hue bhikire hue rang ki dhare
Aaj gagan hoke magan Unko bulaye

Jhukti ghata gaati hawa sapne jagaye
Nanha sa dil mera machal machal jaye……..2


Angad took his part and continued…Kripa is joining her voice. Their eyes locked sometimes and both forgot the other people around them. Dadi's mind alarmed something suspicion.


Hmmm…….. jawa ki choti si kasthi hawaonki rukhh se
Nadi ki dhaar key Manna hi geet gatha hai
Tumhare jism har ek lehre pe dhakel they
Mere shareer nigaahon mein jhool jatha hai

Kripa forgot herself and immersed in singing. Dadi is surprised to see Kripa in that state.

jism mera jaath meri tereliye hai
Pyar bhari duniya saji teri liye hai
Aankho pe hi chaye tere jalwoon ke saaye


Kripa still under trance and Harshini joined at end. Both Angad and Kripa came into presence when they hears high appreciation with claps. Angad continued the songs without waiting staring at Kripa. Kripa is feeling embarrassed fearing if anyone observe the samething what she's feeling.

http://www.dishant.com/album/Saraswatichandra.html

chandan saa badan chanchal chitawan
dheere se teraa ye musakaanaa
muze dosh naa denaa jagawaalon
ho jaaoo agar main deewaanaa……………….
Kripa lowered her eyes, rubbing her neck with left hand, right hand folded and hold left elbow and embarrassed if anyone noticing his feelings. Shabbir is observing both Angad and Kripa and looked for Nishant.and Nishant is busy with Dilip and some other guests. It looks like Dilip is introducing Nishant to someone. Angad went to Misthy and brought her to dance.

ye kaam kamaan bhawe teree
palako ke kinaare kajaraare
maathepar sindooree suraj
hothhon pe dahakate angaare
saayaa bhee jo teraa pad jaaye
aabaad ho dil kaa wiraanaa

He went to dadi and dropped his right hand around her shoulders and steeling eyes from Kripa. Kripa is keep blushing. Dadi decided something in mind to take care later.

tan bhee sundar, man bhee sundar
too sundarataa kee murat hai
kisee aaur ko shaayad kam hogee
muze teree bahot jarurat hai
pahale bhee bahot main tarsa hoon
too aaur naa dil ko tarasaanaa

Angad still ataring at Kripa and Kripa is keep blushing. Harshini noticed it and pounced her with her elbow. Kripa looked into her eyes and she enquied Kripa with her eyes. Kripa lowered her yes. Dadi is keep changing her stares on both. Angad gave the mic to her to sing another song and he didn't take back the hand after she took. Kripa is embarrassed and about to leave the mic. Angad realized his mistake and took out his hand. Kripa started singing……….

http://www.dishant.com/album/amar_-_1954.html

jaanewaale se mulaakaat naa hone payee……………….Nishant came to her as soon as he heard the song and put his hands around her. Angad understands the pain in her song. Dadi is still startled at their feelings.
dil kee dil hee mein rahee baat naa hone paayee

chaandanee khil naa sakee, chaand ne muh mod liya
……….Kripa staring at him without blinking eyes and singing immersely….Angad's eyes got moistured.
jisakaa aramaan thaa wo raat naa hone paayee

dil tufaan uthhe, dil kee jubaann khul naa sakee
badaliyaan chhaa gayee, barasaat naa hone payee


O..jaanewaale se mulaakaat naa hone payee……….Angad moved from there to hide his tears from everyone nearby him. Kripa and dadi noticed him. Harshini pressed her hand silently for consoling her. Angad is happy at last she opened her mind and he decided to cheer her up. He went to the band and gave the direction to next song…….


http://www.gayaki.com/songs-of-Aamne-Saamne-[1967].html

O mere bechain dil ko chain tune diya - 2, shukriya - 4

He started dancing in shashiikapoor's style and winked at Misthy but steeling eyes from Kripa. Kripa moved far from his site with Harshini.

ho tera ehsaan hai jo pyar tune kiya - 2, shukriya - 4

kabhi khwaabon maine aa aa ke teri neend churaai raaton mein
kabhui uljhaya kabhi suljhaya teri zulfon ko mulaakton mein
teri zulfon ko mulaakton mein
ho meri gustaakhiyaan ko tune maaf kiya - 2, shukriya - 4


He's dancing with Misthy and Dadi and kids but his looks are at Kripa all the time………………….

har waqt samaai rehti thi mayusi meri nigaahon mein
main bhatak jaata main behak jaata gir jaat main in raahon mein
gir jaat main in raahon mein
ho mere saathi mujhe tune thaam liya - 2, shukriya - 4


He took Kripa's hand and pulled to the center…
…..

maujone teri he baate ki taarone tera hi naam liya
jab gulshan se hua tera gujar phoolune bhi daaman tham liya-2
o tune jaane jaha dil mujako diya-2 shukriya - 4

Angad announced a duet and requested Kripa to join him. Kripa is startled and trying to avoid but Nishant also requested her to sing and gave a mic.. Angad gave side glance to Kripa and gave instructions to the band. Diya is jumping and clapping. Prateek and some other kids joined her. Dadi, Shabbir, Harshini, Nishant and all others are watching them with a smile.

http://www.gayaki.com/songs-of-Pakeezah.html

chalo dildaar chalo chaand ke paar chalo ………Angad bent a little onto Kripa which gave a shiver in her spine and started singing……….
hum hai tayaar chalo ……….Kripa lowered her eyes to escape naughty Angad's looks……………….She continued the whole song sticking her eyes to the floor but she could feel Angad's excitement in having her on his side. Her face is becoming red with blush how hard is it trying to hide.

aao kho jaaye sitaaron mein kahin - 2
chhod de aaj yeh duniya yeh zameen, duniya yeh zameen
chalo dildaar chalo chaand ke paar chalo hum hai tayaar chalo

hum nashe mein hai sambha lo hamein tum - 2
neend aati hai jaga lo hamein tum, jaga lo hamein tum
chalo dildaar chalo chaand ke paar chalo hum hai tayaar chalo

oh oh, oh oh, oh oh, oh oh oh - 2
zindagi khatm bhi ho jaaye agar - 2
na kabhi khatm ho ulfat ka safar, ulfat ka safar
chalo dildaar chalo chaand ke paar chalo hum hai tayaar chalo –


"ThanQ" Angad whispered which could be heard only by her in the big noise of claps from the audience.


Kripa's mind is jumping and finding difficult to control herself. She moved from there and went to Harshini. Nishant came to her whispered something in her ears and gave mic. She blushed and nodding her head from left to right. Nishant pulled her to dadi and requested to everyone's attention. Kripa started singing. Angad dropped his left hand around dadi's shoulder and watching her. Kripa's eyes met his eyes and disturbed her mind.
http://www.dishant.com/album/yahudi-(1958).html

Meri jaan, meri jaan
Pyaar kisi se Ho hi gaya hai
Hum kya karen ………………………………….
She gave naughty looks to Angad pretending put her hair in right place and handed over her mic to him. Angad is startled and his jaw drawn down and heart is going Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm… …..
Kripa took steps towards Nishant and held his hands and swirling and continued singing in old Meena Kumari style……..
Meri jaan, meri jaan
Pyaar kisi se Ho hi gaya hai
Hum kya karen …………………………………..
She took Harshini and both dancing and singing………….

Hum kya karen haye Koi kya kare
Dil jo diya hai Hum kya karen
Meri jaan, meri jaan

Bhuli thi mein haye kya thi khabar……
Aa aa aa aa
Aa aa aa aa
Lootegi yun mujhe oonki nazar
Aa aa aa aa
Aa aa aa aa
Bhuli thi mein haye kya thi khabar
Lootegi yun mujhe oonki nazar
Na hote mukabil na dil haarte hum
Yeh apni khata hai
Gila kya karen

Meri jaan, meri jaan Pyaar kisi se
Ho hi gaya hai Hum kya karen
Wai wai wai wai
Meri jaan, meri jaan Pyaar kisi se
Ho hi gaya hai Hum kya karen
……….She is dancing around Nishant giving naughty looks steeling Angad's eyes in between. A big smile with excitement filled her face, becoming red with blush. Nishant is enjoying keeping his hands in his pockets and longingly looking at her.

Dil ki nigahon ne ghayal kiya
Aa aa aa aa
Aa aa aa aa
Lenge oonhi se dil ki dava
Aa aa aa aa
Aa aa aa aa
Dil ki nigahon ne ghayal kiya
Lenge oonhi se dil ki dava
Na hum muskurate na woh paas aate
Usi ki mili hai
Saza kya karen

Meri jaan, meri jaan Pyaar kisi se
Ho hi gaya hai Hum kya karen
Wai wai wai wai
Meri jaan, meri jaan Pyaar kisi se
Ho hi gaya hai Hum kya karen

Kripa finished dancing, hugged dadi and stared into Angad's eyes Angad is totally mesmerized and pining for her. Dadi took her face into her palms and kissed her forehead. Everyone applauded her dance and singing. Kripa blushed and again giving eye locks to Angad. Dadi got some alarms and surprising to her excitement too. Dadi caressed Kripa's cheeks……….
Kripa went to the band and gave some instructions for a song and started song surprising Angad and Dadi………….
.
http://www.dishant.com/album/amar-deep-(1958).html
….
mere mann ka baavara panchi kyon baar baar dole -2
sapanon mein aaj kis ka vo bahake pyaar dole
mere mann ka ... ……………………………….
She gave longing looks at Angad and moved to Nishant. She took his hands into her and singing admiringly. Nishant is surprised for her excitement and giving teasing looks which making Kripa blush more.

kis ke khayal mein ye nazarein jhuki jhuki hain -2
dekho idhar bhi lab par aahein ruki ruki hain -2
tum ho qaraar jis dil ka -2
wohi beqaraar dole
mere mann ka ...

dil ko lagan hai uski meethi nazar hai jiski -2
ham paas hain tumhare phir dil mein yaad hai kis ki -2
tum jo nazar milaao -2
dil mein bahaar dole
mere mann ka ...

kab se khade hue hain kah do to laut jaaye -2
tumhe duur hi se dekhen har din na paas aaye -2
aankhon mein zindagi bhar tak -2
tera intazaar dole
mere mann ka ... …………………
…….Kripa finished singing staring at Nishant. He put his hand on her head and raised his eyebrows. She got tears of excitement and lowered her eyes. He hugged her and kissed her head. Everyone gave again a big applause.

Kartik came and announced "it's time for dinner" and everyone disbursed to dining panda.

Edited by vallanki - 18 years ago
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Part: 12

Kripa took kids to feed them. While feeding Diya ran with her plate and Kripa is yelling behind her "Diyoo! Kahan jaarahey ho gir jaaogi slow down". She is feeding Prateek and finding difficult to chase Diya. Nishant came to her "Kya hua Kripa?"
"Dekho Nishant Diya bhaag gayi plate lekar" Kripa showed her helplessness.
Nishant assured her and went to get Diya. Diya is running and got Angad where he is talking to some people. He saw Diya running with plate and took her. "Kya hua Diya! Aisey kyon bhaagey aa rahe ho"Angad stopped hr. "U feed me" she gave plate to Angad sniffing. "Kyon cold lag gaya?" Angad took plate from her. She nodded as 'no'. Nishant reached them when Angad is redy to feed her. He gave the plate to Nishant and told Diya "Daddy will feed you mujhe kuch kaam is that okay?" Diya nodded and went with Nishant. Nishant carried her with one hand holding the plate with other. Angad became busy with the people watching Nishant, Kripa and kids in between.
"Mamma is bad roj khana dethi haina" Nishant trying to make friendly with Diya. Diya nodded her head and eating without noticing she's eating. Nishant smiled at Kripa.
"Tum bahut bigaad de rahey ho bachi ko" Kripa complained.
"Come on Kripa! Humarey bacho ko pamper nahin karey tho kisko karey" Nishant defended himself and asked Diya "haina baby?" Diya giggled. Kripa smiled.
Nishant is feeding Diya placing her in his lap. Prateek is sitting in a chair and Kripa feeding him while talking to Nishant. He felt happy to see Kripa with the family.
"chalo Kripa humara khana hogaya" Nishant said on behalf of Diya. Kripa smiled. Diya still is not happy for Angad not feeding her but kept silent. They both finished feeding the kids and went to cleanup them.
Kripa and Harshini took their plates and eating at a corner talking to each other. Angad is busy with the guests.
All guests took off from Khannas.
Dadi called Angad to meet her at night after everything is done.
Angad went to her bed. Dadi is relaxing on bed. He sat besides her and pressing legs. "Kaisey ho dadi? Happy? Liked the celebration? Kush ho Kripa ki gana sunliye na?"
Dadi got up and caressed his cheeks, shoulders. She nodded her head."Haan Angad main bahut kush hoon. Prithvi, Harshu, Kripa aur tum sab milke gana gaye bahut acha laga." She paused and continued a few seconds later "Main ek baath pochu?"
Angad looked into her eyes and turned his face "Kripa mera pehla pyar tha dadi"
"Angad!" dadi startled at his answer without her questioning him.
"Mera mann aap jaanthey hai aur main nahin jaantha aap ka? Main samaj gaya ki aap ne humey pakad liya" Angad smiled and blushed.
"Mere saath saath aur bhi samajney lagey aap donon ko", Dadi gave a hint of warning.
"Kaun" Angad surprised. "Maa?" Misthy?" he questioned.
"Nahin. Gayatri maami"Dadi solved the puzzle.
"Samaj mein nahin aatha kyon maami ne uski shadi itni jaldi kar diya", Angad showed his grievance.
"Pehle yeh bathao tum yeh baath kyon chupakey rakha tha? Angad" Dadi enquired.
"Jaroorat nahin pada Dadi! I didn't expect she gets married so suddenly" Angad got tears. Dadi consoled by rubbing his shoulder.
"Wo dance tour pe jaaney ke do din pehle hi hum ek dooserey ko pehchanliya tha"
wahi akhri din hogaya humara mulakhath ka", Angad explained. "Maami ne bhi Shayad Kripa ko kuch kehney ki mouka nahin diya hoga", Angad again blaming Gayatri.
"Haan. Naina bhi isiliyeh naaraz tha Gayatri pe. Magar kya patha uskey saath kya hua tha. Uskey beti uskey marzi" Dadi consoled herself too.
Angad remembering the day when Naina got furious on Gayatri when she heard about Kripa's wedding.

Past:

"Naina! Ek jagah baitoh. Kyon itna tension le rahey ho? Shayad acha ristha hoga. Isiliye Gayatri ney tair karliya hoga. Aur tumhey bhi patha hai wo Kripa ko lekey kitna protective hai", Dilip is consoling Naina but Naina is taking big steps all over the hall to blow out her frustration.
"Ho saktha hai Dilip! Magar itni jaldi? wo bhi Tirupati mein karney ki kya jaroorath hai? Dhoom dham se karlethi Hum bhi hai yahan haath bathaney ke liye." Naina showed her concern.
Dilip knows Naina is interested in Kripa but never opened her mind coz of Gayatri's prejudice. Kartik, Angad, Aaliyah are just watching them silently. They got the wedding invitation letter from Surya and Gayatri a day after the actual wedding date. That irritated Naina more for not letting them know before hand. Surya wrote a letter as there was no time for printing cards and marriage was taking place in Tirupati on groom's mother's request.
"Gayatri itni orthodox they phir yeh Saxena family kahan se milgaya un logon ko? Kahin Kripa ki love marriage tho nahin." Naina showed her suspiscion.
"Nahin Naina! Kripa aisi ladki nahin hai. Surya ne bathaya tha na wo Nishant ki maa Gayatri ki cousine hai", Dilip explained.
Angad heard the news from Harshini also at the same evening and had come home with broken heart. He left them for his bedroom followed by Kartik and Aaliyah.
"Yeh Kripa ko lekey humarey ghar mein harbaar aisey hi tension ho jatha hai" Kartik is showing his irritation.
"Ma Kripa ko chaahithi thi bhaiyya aur maami ney uski shadi bina bathaye kardiya. Wo bhi Tirupati mein na shore na hungama ek hi beti hai uski phir acha karsakthi haina." Aaliyah supported Naina.
Angad is sitting silently on bed covering his head with his palms. Aaliyah and Kartik sat on both of his sides. Angad is remembering Kripa and worrying what should have she been going through "Ek contact bhi chod diya hotha".

Presence:
Dadi shook his shoulder and brought into presence.
"Jao sojao raath bahut hogayi aur bhool jao sab. Kripa kushi hai apni jindagi mein. Acha sa pathi aur bahut pyarasa bachey hai uski jindagi mein. Nishant acha ladka lagtha hai aur ussey bahut pyar bhi kartha hai" dadi adviced.
Angad looked at her and is remembering the scene where kids were fed by both Nishant and Kripa. He bid GoodNight to dadi and left for sleep.
Misthy stopped him "Kya hua? Dadiney kyon bulai?"
"Kuch nahin uski kushi bathana chaahithi thi" Angad answered and climbed up to the room.

At Sharma's house:

"Wo Angad se toda door rehna?", Gayatri advised Kripa when came down to get something from kitchen after she put kids on bed.. Kripa is surprised and looked at Gayatri. "Uski chaal mujhe acha nahin laga. Na kabhi pehle lagtha tha na abb. Tum uske saath kaam karthi ho Harshu ne bathaya, magar door raho ussey. Tumharey shadi shuda jindagi barbaath nahin karo." Gayatri actually does not like Kripa staying away from Nishant. Kripa nodded her head went upstairs.
"Kya hua?" Nishant asked on seeing Kripa's fallen face lifting his face from the book he reading.
She updated him Gayatri's fear. Nishant smiled "Wo tumhari bahut fikar karthi hai".
"Main Bangalore aajaaoongi" Kripa sobbed.
"Kyon aunty ki baath boora maan gayi" Nishant asked holding her chin.
Kripa's eyes got moisture. She nodded her head remembering Angad's naughty behavior at office.
Kripa slept remembering Angad at the function.

Next day:

Angad is bending and looking into some records on his table along with Shabbir when Kripa entered the room. He lifted his face and smiled at her as welcoming her. Kripa reciprocated and wished Shabbir. Shabbir updated about some meetings with the artists who already sent their albums. Angad is silently observing her all the time and Shabbir observing both. Kripa felt embarrassed for his stares and left without any eye locks.
Kripa came to Angad to take leave Shabbir gave some angry looks at Angad after Kripa walked off. "Abb main kya kiya" Angad grinned.
"kyon pareshan karthi ho bechari ko?" Shabbir scolded softly.
""Pareshan? Main? Aur Bechari? Mujhe huk hai ussey jee bharkey dekhne ka" Angad defended himself.
"Haan wo Nishant ki huk na tumhara."Shabbir reminded him that Kripa is married.
"Tho? Wo kissey bhi shadi karley. Uspe pehla huk mera hai" Angad smiled winking at Shabbir. Shabbir nodded his head as Angad won't change.

Nishant came to pick up Kripa along with kids. Nishant and Prateek went to Kripa's cabin after leaving Diya in Angad's room on Diya's request. "Hi Angad! Yeh aap sey milna chahthi hai" Nishant met Shabbir and Angad in Angad's room.
Angad carried her and says "No problem Nishant!"
"Kya baath hai gudiya raani? Yeh kya hai?" He placed her on the table and took a paper from her hand. Diya is blushing sticking her tongue out.
It's a picture with a tall figure and two small figures.
"What's this?" Angad is puzzled to trace out the picture.
"Me, bhai and Dad" Diya answered with shy.
"Wow that's cool" he praised the picture to encourage Diya. Shabbir also looked into and praised Diya.
"Hi Angad! Yesterday we had nice party yaar. Why don't we meet quite often? Ghar aajao kabhi" Nishant invited them entering into his room with Kripa and Prateek. Kripa is cursing Nishant in her mind remembering Gayatri's warnings last night and thinking "Issey kya huk hai humara ghar bulaney ki."
Nishant understood her "Chalo kahin restaurant pe chalethey hai aur Misthy jee ko bhi leke aana" Nishant corrected himself.
"Chalo Diya! Chalthey hai "Nishant called Diya.
"Nahin main Angad ke paas rahoonga" she refused to come.
"Baad mein abb Angad ko kaam karney do" Kripa took her before Angad says something and walked out holding Nishant's hand.
Shabbir pounced Angad and directed at their hands holding each other wth his eyes "Isko huk kehthey hai".
Angad grinned at Shabbir "Mainey kub kaha wo huk nahin".
Both left for their usual place to have some drinks.
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wot can i sey sweety

gr8 part as usual 👏 👏 👏
Edited by ShellyB - 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: ShellyB

wot can i sey sweety

gr8 part as usual 👏 👏 👏

i agree the best fan fic

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey! it's really good and keep on writing quickly! i love it! 👏
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This fanfic is absolutely fab. I am dying to read the next bit. Please let me know as soon as you post the next installment of this story. Thanks
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