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Posted: 18 years ago
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I bet that the kids are Angad's. Angad might not have a husband-wife relationship with Mishty. Maybe it's the same withh Kripa and Nishant. It sounds like that. I can't believe no one noticed when they were making eyes at each other except shabbir. God help them both if anyone else notices the sideways glances and longing filled stares. It does sound abit like Kank. I really hope not.
I can't wait to find out what happens next. I want to know what realtionship did Angad and Kripa have and why she married Nishant when she was clearly in love with Angad and vice versa.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetangel2028

I bet that the kids are Angad's. Angad might not have a husband-wife relationship with Mishty. Maybe it's the same withh Kripa and Nishant. It sounds like that. I can't believe no one noticed when they were making eyes at each other except shabbir. God help them both if anyone else notices the sideways glances and longing filled stares. It does sound abit like Kank. I really hope not.
I can't wait to find out what happens next. I want to know what realtionship did Angad and Kripa have and why she married Nishant when she was clearly in love with Angad and vice versa.
Munira

Thanks for ur analysis. I dint see KANK tho I heard a lil abt the story like two cples fell in love with each other's spouses...may be the writer of KANK has my thinking caps😛

The past coming soon why K married N and how A lost K😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part:8

"Hi! Kripa!" Shabbir wished her as soon as she enters the office. "You have your performance in four days and don't you need any practice?" Shabbir asked the reason for her being in the office.
"Main ghar jaaney ke baad practice karthi hoon. I'm fine as of now", Kripa smiled and eased Shabiir.
Both entered Angad's office. Angad is looking into files and lifted his head and wished them.
Kripa gave the list of upcoming music festivals and recommended to choose new artists for their records. In the list Angad selected to go to Pune for the nearest coming festival.
"Magar yeh tho classical singers ke liye hai na. We need to go with the latest trend and not the classical records, Kripa! Hum yahin modern singers ko lelethey hai" Shabbir reminded.
"Haan shabbir without classic touch no singer could grow in his career. We can use their talent for both classic and modern records. Actually we don't need to search for them. Once we announce about our records the singers themselves approach us with their CDs." Kripa convinced Shabbir.
Savai Gandharva Sangeet Mahotsav is celebrated with great fervor in Pune usually in December. It is held in commemoration of Pandit Rambhan Kundgolkar, the eminent Khyal singer. Pandit Bhimsen Joshi his student conducts the festival for the past three decades to observe his Gurus death anniversary. The festival nearing its 50th year of origin is an institution by itself with participation of eminent classical music artists from all over the Country. Pandit Joshi also performs at the concluding session of the festival.

Three of them decided to attend the Pune festival and after that they decided to go for auditions of the participants.

Kripa is winding up her work for the day and Shabbir bid goodbye to her and left. She locked her cabin and walking in the corridor. She noticed light is still on in Angad's room. She went to check if he is still working, wondering how come Shabbir left him alone. She knows they work together all the time. Angad is checking something listening to his favorite song "jiya dhadak dhadak…". He looked up with the noise at the door and wished Kripa.
"Aap abhi thaq yahan? Kuch kaam tha kya? Can I help you?" Kripa offered help. He nodded his head and handed over some papers,"abhi jarrorat nahin magar after your event, you could finish before we leave for Pune". She took them and left silently to place them in her cabin. Angad didn't notice and looked up to handover some more but couldn't find her in the cabin. He nodded his head and placed them aside. He finished his work half an hour later and locked the cabin and came out. He noticed Kripa is struggling to start her car at parking lot and approached her. He found the engine is dead and offered drop her home. Kripa is silently sitting in the car listening to the songs playing in the CDs.
The same song which she heard in Angad's room is continuing in the car too. She is wondering if it is his favourite song and playing all over the place.
http://www.desi-radio.com/album_Kalyug_year_2005.php


Hoton se chunley kabhi baathey labo pe likhi
Mujhko bahon me bharke mere dil mein utarkey
Pyar mere tu pehchaan hai
Jiya dhadak dhadak jaayey

Angad is observing her from corner of eyes and having rehearsals to start conversation with her. Kripa is playing with her necklace and looking out seriously as if she never came through that route. Angad changed the CD and played another song.

http://www.gayaki.com/songs-of-Lucky.html

Aankhey barlo baajuwon mein tumko hai kasam…jaan meri jaa rahi sanam….

Angad is noticing Kripa is breathing heavily and she is trying to hide her feelings. He couldn't gather words to talk to her. He doesn't know where to start, how to start. He is silently remembering old scenes with Kripa and Nishant with Kripa and confused to either start any conversation or stay silent.
They reached Kripa's house while they are still in their own thoughts. Kripa thanked him and got down. Gayatri opened the door and noticed Kripa is dropped by Angad. She asked Kripa to invite him inside.
"Aao Angad!" Gayatri received him. Kripa explained her car condition and Angad's help. Gayatri told Nishant took kids to his aunt's house and will be back late night. Angad chatted with Surya for a while and Gayatri served some idlies for both. Kripa and Angad sat in backyard cement patio and having the food Gayatri served. Gayatri joined them for sometime and appraised Naina, Misthy and their hospitality. She expressed her wish of Kripa joining Nishant soon at Bangalore. Later she went inside leaving Angad and Kripa alone.
It's became dark outside and both finished their eating. Kripa went inside and brought two glasses of buttermilk for both. She sat besides him on the cement patio. Both are sipping the buttermilk silently watching the garden and sky and immersed in their own thoughts. Angad smiled and recollecting loudly their childhood. He is talking softly about how he used to rag Gayatri's beliefs. Kripa also smiled at those sweet memories.
http://www.gayaki.com/songs-of-Jiya-Dhadak-Dhadak-Jaye.html
bheegey hont tere, pyaasa dil mera, lage abra sa, mujhe tan tera
jam ke barsa de, muhj par ghatayen
too hi meri pyaas, too hi mera jaam
kabhi mere saath, koi raat guzaar
tujhe subah tak main karoon pyaar
vo oh oh...-4
sansen aach teri, tan aag tera
chhenain neend meri, loote chain mera
kala jadoo kare lambe baal tere
aakhen jheel teri, dore laal tere
kabhi mere saath koi raat guzaaar
tujhe suabh tak main karoon pyaar
vo oh ho.... -8

aakhen kah rahi jo na hum kahain
use sun le too jo na lab kahain
too na soye aaj, main na sooun aaj
tujhe dekhooon aaj, tujh mamin khoyun aaj
kabhi mere saath, koi raat guzaar
tujhe subah tak main karoon pyaar
vo oh ho...-4

Song is coming far away from somewhere.
Angad slowly turned his face to see Kripa and Kripa is silently lowered her eyes into her glass. Her hair is flowing on her face and she is trying to put them in place. He is thrilled to see Kripa so close. They are almost touching each other. The breeze is disturbing his mind. He took her left hand into his right . She tried to pull it back. Angad observed the shiver in her palm and he pressed it softly. "Kripa! Mujhey tumsey kuch kehna hai" Angad whispered softly. Kripa nodded her head and says "abhi nahin" and trying to pull her hand out. She is scared if Gayatri comes out and sees them. Angad put his glass aside and took her glass to and placed besides to his. Kripa is warning with eyes but it doesn't seem he cared it. He changed her hand into his left and dropped his right hand around her shoulder. Kripa is looking into his eyes with fearful looks. Angad longingly looked at her and pressed her towards him. She tighten his left hand with her right unknowingly. She hid her face into his neck curve and Angad could feel her heartbeat and shiver in her body. He's softly caressing her right shoulder "I miss you Kripa! Please mujhsey kuch baath karlo. Jabsey miley hai hum ek baath bhi pura nahin kar paya." Angad's voice is cracking. His lips are touching softly her right ear. Kripa's body is loosing sensation. Kripa nodded her head and gathered all her senses and pulled herself from him and ran inside. Angad left alone looking into the way she ran. He slowly came inside and looked for Kripa. Kripa is standing near her bedroom looking down for him. He longingly looked at her. He cannot climb the stairs as her parents are in the house.
"Khaaliya Angad? Kripa issey thoda jaas(buttermilk) dena" Gayatri came from inside and enquired about Angad and instructed Kripa.
"Nahin maami! Main leliya tha. Abb main jaatha hoon" Angad bid goodbye.
Angad looked sadly at Kripa and left.

Kripa ran into the bedroom and hid her face into the pillow. Tears are wetting the pillow.

Misthy came to Angad and called him for dinner as soon as he entered home.
"Tum maanogi nahin?, mere liye kyon tumhari health spoil karthi ho? Main kaa kar aya hoon" Angad showed his annoyance. Angad went to bed room and leaned in an easy chair and closed his eyes with his elbow. Misthy stroke his hair for sometime. He opened his eyes and looked at Misthy. "Kya hua itni pareshan lag rahey ho? Main kuch help karoon? Dard koyi baantney se kum hotha hai" Misthy softly asked him. Angad nodded his head "kuch nahin bus aisy hi, tum jaakar khana kao aur please aayinda mere liye aisey wait mat karo" he pleasingly requested her. Misthy agreed with a big smile on her face. She kissed on his forehead and left the room for dinner. Angad went back into his 'Kripa thoughts".

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Kripa took day off to work to rehearsal her program and Angad understood that she wanted to avoid him.

Naina, Misthy, Aaliyah, Kartik came to see Kripa's performance. Nishant brought Surya, Gayatri and the kids for the event. After the introductory part Kripa's performance started. She is looking adorable with red Oriya silk with black temple border traditional odissi dance dress.
Kripa performed the song "Jaaorey…"with Odissi style.
Amrapali: http://www.desi-radio.com/album_Amrapali_year_1966.php


Jaaorey jogi tum jaao rey
Yeh hai premiyon ki nagari, yaha prem hi hai puja

Prem ki pida sacha such hai
Prem bina yeh jeevan dukh hai, jaao rey

Jeevan se kaisa chutkara
Hai nadiyan ke saath kinara, jaao rey

Jnan ki kaisi seema jnani
Gaagar mein sagar ka pani. Jaao rey


Angad and Shabbir arrived at the middle of the song-dance and Nishant received them and seated them at front row.
Kripa performed next 'meera bhajan'..pada gungre baandh…" in white with red border dress with mix of kathak and odissi styles..
Nishant is busy in backstage and the guests. Angad is immersed in watching Kripa. Misthy and Aaliyah are also equally enjoying her performance. Diya slept in the middle of the event in Naina's lap and Prateek in Gayatri's lap. Kartik left in the middle since he got some urgent work and asked Angad to take care of others.
After the event Misthy, Naina and Aaliyah congratulated Kripa for her great performance.
Edited by vallanki - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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http://www.gayaki.com/songs-of-Jiya-Dhadak-Dhadak-Jaye.html
bheegey hont tere, pyaasa dil mera, lage abra sa, mujhe tan tera
jam ke barsa de, muhj par ghatayen
too hi meri pyaas, too hi mera jaam
kabhi mere saath, koi raat guzaar
tujhe subah tak main karoon pyaar
vo oh oh...-4
sansen aach teri, tan aag tera
chhenain neend meri, loote chain mera
kala jadoo kare lambe baal tere
aakhen jheel teri, dore laal tere
kabhi mere saath koi raat guzaaar
tujhe suabh tak main karoon pyaar
vo oh ho.... -8

aakhen kah rahi jo na hum kahain
use sun le too jo na lab kahain
too na soye aaj, main na sooun aaj
tujhe dekhooon aaj, tujh mamin khoyun aaj
kabhi mere saath, koi raat guzaar
tujhe subah tak main karoon pyaar
vo oh ho...-4



dis song is bheegy hooth tere 4rm da film murder
not jiya dharak dharak 4rm Kalyug 😕

hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm u'v gt me hookd on2 ur FF its so nterestn

keep it up 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: ShellyB



dis song is bheegy hooth tere 4rm da film murder
not jiya dharak dharak 4rm Kalyug 😕

hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm u'v gt me hookd on2 ur FF its so nterestn

keep it up 😉

Thanks for letting me know.

But it is the site address I copied😳. Thanks for hooking up to my fan-fic😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part: 9

Nishant arranged a party in a grand manor and invited many of the well known musicians, artists, music publishers for the party. It looked more like more exposing Kripa's talent in front of all the high celebrity profiles in music industry than anything else.
Angad, Shabbir, Misthy, Aaliyah attended the party. Harshini is also invited along with her fiance. When Khannas entered the hall Nishant and Kripa are receiving guests. Nishant warmly welcomed them and introduced to other celebrity guests.
Gayatri and Surya are sitting a side and talking to the guests. Kripa left kids in Harshini's house with her parents.
Kripa is looking gorgeous in black georgette saree with gold zari work all over the saree and matching gold jewelry, wrapped hair into French bun. Nishant is in light grey suit perfectly matching with Kripa's beauty.
Misthy, Aaliyah, Angad, Shabbir went to Surya and wished them. Harshini introduced her fiance Raj Jeswani to them. Shabbir and Raj found their families knew each other. Shabbir invited them to his house..
Angad and Kripa are steeling eyes though they are busy with other people in the party. He wants to go and talk to Kripa but he is accompanied with Shabbir all the time.

Nishant announced Kripa's instrumental performance along with other guest celebrities.
Kripa took her sitar and started playing bhoopali raag along with some other instrumentalists.

http://www.dishant.com/album/Various_Artists_-_Dusk_To_Dawn. html

Angad is mesmerized and watching Kripa without blinking his eyes. Gayatri is expressing her excitement with Misthy. Aaliyah and Harshini are also praising her performance along with other artists. Nishant is proudly looking at Kripa.

Later everyone requested Kripa to sing a vocal and she started sing the song:

http://www.dishant.com/album/Guddi.html


bole re papeeharaa, papeeharaa
neet ghan barase, neet man pyaasaa
neet man pyaasaa, neet man tarase……
……….Nishant is staring at her standing in front of her with his hands in his trouser pockets. Kripa is smiling at him with a spark in her eyes.

palakon par yek boond sajaaye
baithhee hoo saawan le jaaye
jaaye pee ke des mein barase
neet man pyaasaa, neet man tarase
……….She is steeling eyes from Angad where Angad is hypnotized by her voice and longingly staring at her. All guests are mesmerized by her voice.

saawan jo sandesaa laaye
meree aankh se motee paaye
jaan mile baabool ke ghar se
neet man pyaasaa, neet man tarase
………. Nishant walked to her and praised by dropping his hand on her head with loads of affection.

After some other singers performances everyone head for dinner.
Nishant brought a plate for Kripa when she is on the phone enquiring about kids. "Kaisey hai bachey?" Nishant asked. "They are fine khana kaa kar sogaye they. Diya tho jaldi friendship karlethi hai . Lagtha hai Prateek Diya ki saath hi raha" Kripa answered taking plate from him.

Misthy got a plate for Angad and Shabbir for Aaliyah. All four are standing at a corner and chatting while finishing their dinner. Kripa came along with Nishant to Harshini and Raj. "To Harshini! Kabb hai shadi?" Nishant asked. "agele mahiney aath tareek aap jaroor aana mere shadi pe" Harshini answered. Nishant promised and left them to see other guests.

Kripa went to Gayatri and enquiring their status. Misthy and Angad came to bid goodbye. "Arey Angad aaj tumhara gana nahin sunaya" Surya reminded. "Phir kabhi mamaji!" Angad smiled and answered giving side glance to Kripa.
Misthy praised once again Kripa's talent.

Everyone took leave from Nishant and Kripa.

Kripa is tired and took two days off from work. Nishant left for Bangalore promising to attend for dadi's 75th birthday party.

Kripa is scribbling something laying down on bed, folding her legs close, placing the drawing pad on knees. Harshini cat walked to her and Kripa didn't notice her. Harshini snatched the pad from Kripa and looked into it.
'Harshu! yeh kya bachpana hai? Dedo mere pad mujhey" Kripa got up from bed and stretched her hand to get the pad. Harshini is running all over the room looking seriously into the pad and Kripa is chasing her. She stunned and stopped at one place and Kripa approached her. Harshini gave back the pad and seriously looking into Kripa's face. Kripa lowered her eyes and turned back.
"yeh kya hai Kripa!" Harshini stopped her by putting her hand on Kripa's shoulder and turned towards her. Kripa sat on bed silently.
"Yeh tera imagination hai yah such much kuch hua tha?" Harshini lifted Kripa's chin sitting besides her.
Kripa is silently staring at Harshini's eyes. Harshini again took the pad and looking at the picture. It's the scene where Kripa hid her face in Angad's neck curve two days ago in the backyard. Kripa sketched it for two days since Angad left. Kripa's face is not shown clearly but by her dress style one can make it as Kripa. Angad's face is side way touching her ears with lips.
Harshini knows how good and expressive Kripa's drawings are. And she also knows Kripa could imagine the scenes in perfect shape as well as could sketch the actual scenes very descriptively. Harshini is now scared if Angad and Kripa bond in close relation.
"Bathao Kripa! Yeh kya ho raha hai? Tum bhoolgayi ho tum donon shadi shuda hai aur yeh sab paap hai? Nishant ko kya jawab dogi" Harshini started scolding her. Kripa nodded her head and stopped Harshini in the middle "kuch nahin hua Harshu! Bus wo mujhse baath karna chahthey hai".
"Is tarah" Harshini infuriated showing the drawing.
"Main sambhal nahin paayi, iskey aagey kuch nahin hua, aisey math satao mujhe", Kripa got tears.
"pagli! Main kahan sata rahi hoon? bus mujhe darr hai ki tum pyar mein kuch kar baithey. Wo kya baathey karna chahthey hai? Waisey bhi tum dono office mein ek saath hi kaam karthey hai na? Phir Ghar aakar? Wo bhi iss tarah? Tum bahut galathi kiya tha Angad ke office join karke." Harshini worried.
"Hum personal baathey nahi karthey office pe. Wo Shayad mujhe miss karr rahey they" Kripa interrupted Harshini..
"Missing you? Tum dono itna paas kabhi they? Phir achanak yeh kya? Tum kuch chupa nahin tho raha hai mujhse?" Harshini showed her suspicion.
Kripa nodded her head as "no".
"tum kuch bhi kaho Kripa! Yeh Angad ke drawings band karo. Tumhari shadi shuda jindagi mein kabhi aag lagayegi yeh tumhari deewanapan. Bachpan mein jo kiya wo gujar chukka hai. Tab tho tum chup rehthi thi. Pyar ki baathey door tum aur Angad kabhi miley bhi nahin. Aankhon ke saamney pati aur mann mein kissi aur ka roop shobha nahin dethey" Harshini warned Kripa.
"Mama! Akka took my chocolate." Prateek ran into the room and complained on Diya.
"Nahin mamma! Yeh Prateek share nahin karthey" Diya defended herself.
Diya is 5 minutes older than Prateek and Prateek calls her 'akka'(big/older sister). If anyone asks Diya about her name she answers as 'akka' as if it's her actual name and Kripa took long time to make her understand the difference between her 'actual name' and 'relation'.
Harshini carried Diya in her lap and convinced her to return Prateek's chocolate. Diya pouted and ran down with Kripa's pad. Harshini is laughing at kids' fighting and Kripa is worried for her pad. Kripa ran behind Diya to get her pad back. Diya crashed into Angad who has just entered into the house along with Shabbir. Diya clung to Angad and grinned at Kripa. Angad carried her and asked for her anger. "Harshu mami mera chocolate Pratek ko dediya" Diya answered with tears in her eyes holding the pad to her chest and put another hand around Angad's neck.
"wo mera hai tumhara nahin" prateek yelled from a corner of the room.
"but you have to share with me" Diya grinned at Prateek rolling her big eyes. Angad and Shabbir are waiting for Prateek's reply. He helplessly looked at Kripa and said "mama mein akka ko nahin doonga". Kripa is silent and fastly thinking how to get back the pad before it changes hands. Angad and Shabbir having the fun with smile.. Harshini came behind and seated them. She is about to take Diya from Angad but Angad warned "rehne do Harshu" and placed Diya in his lap. Diya looked at him pleasingly. "yeh kya hai bathao mujhe" Angad is trying to take the pad from Diya. Diya is still hodling the pad firmly to her chest. "Main tumhey aur big chocolate lakey doonga, Promise!" assured Angad. Kripa ran to him and snatched the pad " main coffee leke aathi hoon" She left fast into kitchen. Angad is surprised for Kripa's act and Harshini gave a pale smile and followed Kripa into kitchen. Angad and Shabbir looked into each other face.
Gayatri and Surya came into hall and wished them. Angad gave an invitation card for dadi's birthday celebration and invited them formally for the party. "bahut grand way mana rahey hai", commented Gayatri looking at card. "haan mami! Papa ka icha tha" Angad explained the reason. Diya is still sitting in Angad's lap while Prateek went to Surya.
"Kripa! Coffee leke aao Angad aur Shabbir ko"Gayatri yelled. Kripa is making coffee in the kitchen.
"Yeh mujhey dedo main upar rakhdoongi" Harshini asked for the pad.
"It's okay Harshu! Main rakhdoongi tum coffee leke jao", Kripa seriously concentrated in making coffee without giving the pad.
"Main issey nahin khaoongi", Harshini teased her.
Kripa smiled "wo baath nahin hai coffee leke jao" she poured coffee in four cups.
Harshini carried the coffee tray to the hall and Kripa standing in the kitchen looking into the drawing she made.
Harshini served the coffee and Surya asked,"Kripa kahan hai? Kaho yahan aayen".
Kripa heard it and came with no alter. She is leaning on the wall between kitchen and living room. She twisted her loose hip long hair and hold to front. Some hair is hanging down limply in waves across her forehead. Simple white Bengal cotton saree with green border is adding beauty look to her body. A pair of gold bangles on each hand, gold ear hangings and a gold chain with mangalsutra hid inside the saree simple but elegantly suited to Kripa's soft personality. Shabbir is staring at her beauty and appreciating why Angad is crazy about her.
"Yeh mausi ki birthday party pe bulaney ke liye aye hai" Surya explained the reason for their visit and gave the invitation card to Kripa. Kripa took it and looking deeply into it. She took back her original place and steeling eyes of Angad. Angad and Shabbir noticed she is not reading it. Harshini poked Kripa with her elbow to bring her into presence. Kripa warned her with eyes.
Diya is slowly rubbing Angad's left ear with left hand and sucking her right middle fingers leaning back on his shoulder. Angad came into presence and caressed her. "neend aarahi hai?" Angad asked dearly. Diya nodded her head and "nahin chocolate kab dogi?" asked holding the fingers with teeth. Angad smiled and kissed her cheek. "mere saath chalogi?" Angad asked softly rubbing her cheek. Diya nodded her head without taking out the fingers. "Main issey lejaoon? I'll drop her later" Angad asking permission from Kripa. Kripa is confused and Gayatri answred him,"abhi nahin Angad wo aisey hi zidd pakadthi hai". "koyi baath nahin mami! Main lekar aoonga baad mein" Angad trying to convince Gayatri. Angad carried her and took leave from everyone. Angad about to leave and remembered Prateek and looked behind to Surya. Gayatri understood and says,"wo nahin ayega Angad. Uskey saath tho uskey mummy ko bhi aana padega. Wo pura ki pura Kripa pe gaya hai. Bahut sharmila hai". Angad smiled and took Diya with him.
Edited by vallanki - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#27
great part
i'm thinking that the kids are angads and kripa's and they are twins
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Originally posted by: IndianCutie13

great part
i'm thinking that the kids are angads and kripa's and they are twins

hmmmmm u neva know ifink sum1 else also suggested dis

dat'l b a really gud twist imean u can sense ders sum big twist around da corner

mayb dats y he's bonded a lot wid da kids especially diya coz prateeks shy 😛

Edited by ShellyB - 18 years ago
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On the way back Angad invited Harshini family for the party. Shabbir checked Diya at back seat and she is silently observing outside with half eyes open and sucking her fingers. "lagthi hai neend agayi hai yeh bachi ko" he conveyed to Angad. Angad looked back a second and nodded his head.
"Uncle hum kahan jaa rahey hai" Diya asked looking at Shabbir removed her fingers from mouth.. "Ghar" Shabbir answered. "No I want chocolate" Diya told and started sucking again after she has done conveying. Shabbir smiled and said "bahut ziddi lagtha hai". Angad also smiled.
"Chalo chocolate dekar ghar chod ayengey" Shabbir told Angad.
"Kyon? humarey ghar lejana chahtha hoon", Angad showed his interest.
"nahin Angad! Abb nahin, wo sojayegi, aur humey bhi kaam par jaana hai" Shabbir reminds about their pending work. Angad agreed.
They went to a store and bought milk chocolate for her. She asked another for Prateek which gave a big laugh to both friends. Angad carried her back to the car and shabbir followed them. By the time they reached car Diya already went to sleep on his shoulder.
"Very determined" Shabbir applauded the little girl's courage to stay awake for a chocolate. Angad kissed her cheeks and placed her on back seat and fasten seat belt. They came back to Kripa's house to drop Diya. Angad brought Diya inside while Shabbir stayed in the car. Kripa opened the door and took Diya from his hands. He gave the chocolates to Kripa and took leave. Kripa thanked both of them.
"kya soch rahey ho?" Shabbir asked to break the silence on the way back. Angad gave a glance and kept silent remembering Diya and Kripa till they reached home.

After they left Kripa took Diya into her parents room and again changed her mind and climbing stairs to her room.
"Kripa! Kyon Diya ko upar leke jaa rahey ho?" Gayatri stopped her.
"Nahin maa wo kuch nahin kaye they beech raath mein uthgayi tho kuch kila doongi", Kripa answered and went upstairs. She tugged Diya under blanket. Prateek was sleeping with Gayatri. Kripa switched off all the lights and laid besides Diya. The bright moonlight through the window is spreading all over the bed.. Her hair braided loose and placed gravely through the curve between breasts towards stomach. She took the unfinished drawing of their picture and staring at and remembering Harshini's warnings. Kripa hugged the pad and thinking about Angad. "kyon mere yaadon mein rehthey ho? Kyon mere mann ko kabil mein nahin rakh paathi?" she placed her lips on the picture memorizing the sweet glimpse of the night in the backyard. Diya tossed and put her arm around kripa's neck. Kripa caressing her hand and kissed her palm. "yeh haath tumhey chuliya Angad!" She turned to diya and kissed her cheeks imagining she kissed Angad's kiss. She hugged Diya closely and fell asleep.


Next day Kripa reached the office a little late. She heard Shabbir already left to see the arrangements for the upcoming party in Khannas house after handing over the days work to her assistant. Kripa became busy till lunch time. Angad came to work around lunch time and called Kripa into his cabin. Angad is piling some files folding up his light blue slack sleeves. Kripa came inside and is waiting for him to see at her. Kripa is looking beautiful asusual with light blue chiffon plain saree with matching printed blouse, loosely braided hair. Angad stood up and gave her some profiles of the auditions in Pune.
When Kripa is about to leave he stopped her. "Tum lunch karliya?" Angad asked. Kripa turned around and replied "no".
Chalo hum dono milkar khalethey" Angad walked to her and offered to take her out. Kripa didn't answer. Angad noticed Kripa is hesitating.
"main tumhey kuch nahin karoonga promise" Angad bent a little on her and his tone is sounding mischievous. Kripa felt a spark of shiver through her body and lowered her eyes. Angad lifted her chin and looked into her eyes. He tried to read her eyes. Before she says something he kissed her cheek. "main kya karoon? Mere mann mere baath maanthi nahin. Bus ek baar khul kar baathey karlo yeh tanha mit jayegi" He whispered. Kripa is confused to react and thinking the way to escape him. "He just promised that he won't do any mischief but what is this he did now?" She is cursing her shyness.
"Main tumhe satana tub choddoonga jub tum mere saath jee bhar kar baath karogi" he is longingly staring at her. "Kya baath karoon? Akhir Chahtha kya hai yeh? Bhagvan! Yeh kya pariksha hai?" Kripa is praying silently in her mind. She slowly gathered her guts and removed his hand from her chin. Angad immediately tighten her palm in his fist. Kripa fierce fully looked at him. "tum itna darthe kyon mujhsey" Angad asked softly. Kripa lowered her eyes thinking in her mind "darr? Sharm?". He kissed her hand and released it. "chalo khana kaakey aathey hai" he left without waiting for her. She followed him. They both finished lunch without any more mischief from Angad.

In the night Kripa scribbled again something on her pad totally immersed in dreams about Angad and fell asleep at early hours. She woke up and found the notepad besides to her. She checked it. It's the scene where Angad kissed her in the office. A big smile came on her face "yeh pagalpan kabhi mitegi nahin" she kissed the drawing.

Angad and Shabbir became busy with party preparations and couldn't show off in the office and Kripa managed all the work.

The evening of the party…everyone at Kripa 's house getting ready. "Mama hum kahan jaarahey hai?" Prateek asked when Kripa combing his hair. "Buddhu! Hum badi dadi ki happy birthday pe chal rahey hai" Diya spread her hands wide and rolling her eyes explained to Prateek as if she knows everything. Kripa smiled and odded her head as Diya is right. Diya showed her attitude to Prateek. Prateek wore maroon Indian suit. Diya wore a light sky blue sleeveless puffy frills frock with pearl ear droppings and a thin chain with a pearl pendent. Her shoulder length hair tied behind loose with a hair clip. Kripa put a tear drop shape bindi on forehead and put eye liner. Gayatri insists all girls to wear bindi and kajjal. Gayatri wore a mustard yellow kanchivaram saree with dark blue border with matching jewelry and Surya with cream Rajasthani suit. Kripa is getting ready in dark blue with light blue border work sari. She wore light blue opal two row necklace and matching ear studs, matching light and dark blue bangles along with gold bangles in between them. She braided loose her hair and put a red rose on side. She checked herself once in the mirror and climbing down the stairs. Nishant called and informed her that he will join them directly at party.
Harshini and Kripa families started together to the party.

Khannas house is beautifully decorated all over the place with lights reminding the day light. There are already some guests coming to the party. Naina and Dilip are warmly receiving everyone at the entrance only. Naina is wearing a pink kanchivaram embroidered saree and matching jewelry. Dilip is wearing a dark blue Rajasthani suit.
Kripa took out the wheel chair and placed Surya in it. Though Surya able to walk at home he needs chair whenever he goes out. He is still dragging his legs. Dilip and Naina warmly welcomed Sharmas and Patels. Inside it was totally decorated with different flower garlands, balloons. The sweet jasmine fragrance is mesmerizing the guests.
"Bahut acha sajaya aapne" commented Surya praising Dilip. "yeh sab Angad's choice hai Surya bhayya. Wo sab kuch 75 varieties banvaya, flowers, color lights, sweets, dishes. Everything is in 75 varieties to resemble Mom's 75th birthday" Naina appraising Angad's taste.
"Dadi! Angad kahan hai?" Diya asked Naina pulling her pallu. She surprised and hold her cheek. "Angad?" naam se pukarthey ho badon ko?" Diya grinned and released her cheek
Gayatri says"Angad uncle kahon Diya!". Diya looked at Kripa and Kripa instructed with her eyes to say it. Diya felt helpless. Diya ran yelling "Main Angad hi kahoongi" when she saw Angad climbing down stairs. He is still in his jeans and white shirt. "Angad!" Diya ran to him and Angad carried her. "kaisey ho?" he kissed her cheek. "Kya hua chilla kyon rahey ho?"When Angad asked Diya put her hand on cheek and blushed. "Wah bahut khoobsurat lag rahey ho" he squeezed her cheek. She nodded her head as if it is true. He and others laughed at her act.
Angad wished everyone. "Tum abhi tak aisey ho?" Naina asked. "abhi tayar hokar aatha hoon" he asked everyone to excuse him and trying to drop down Diya. But diya folded her legs and tightly hold his neck. Angad surprised and decided to take her with him.
All others make themselves comfortable in the celebration.
Angad dropped Diya on bed "main abhi change karkey aatha hoon tum yahan baitho".
Shabbir came out of the bathroom and getting ready with grey Indian suit. He turned at them and surprised to see Diya with Angad. "Yeh yahan?"
"haan Sab Maama ka family aayey hai" Angad answered. Shabbir nodded his head and seated besides Diya. Diya smiled at Shabbir as wishing him. "To tum chocolate khaaliya? Prateek ko diye ki nahin?" Shabbir enquired her.
"Main achi ladki hoon share karthi hoon magar Pratek nahin karthey" Diya started her version of complaining. Shabbir smiled at her smart answer.
Angad is about to go into bathroom and Diya stopped him "Angad! Tum kya pehnthey ho?" Angad confused and looked at Shabbir.
"Tum bhi yehin pehenlo acha lagthey ho"Diya suggested showing Shabbir's dress.
Shabbir raised his eyebrows at Angad. "baath bahut karthi hai"
"Meri paati bhi yahi kehthi hai" Diya grinned.
"Paati kaun?" Shabbir asked.
"Meri naani, ammamma", answered Diya sitting in Shabbir's lap.. Angad and Shabbir nodded their head.
"Wo kehthi hai Angad jaisi ussey satha thi hoon" Diya complained.
Shabbir and Angad looked into each others face and Angad shrug his shoulders.
"Okay sweety!" Angad kissed her and is about to turn towards bathroom she stopped him and kissed back on his cheeks. When Angad looked back at her as praising she blushed and hugged Shabbir. Both laughed at her.
Angad left to take shower.
Diya got down Shabbir's lap and walking around the room to find out her interesting subjects till Angad came out. He is getting ready with his pink and gold sherwani Diya is silently observing him sucking her fingers. When Angad noticed her she blushed and turned her face. He came to her and removed her fingers from mouth "kya dekh rahey ho?" Angad asked her.
"tum bilkul mummy ki tasweer jaisey ho" Diya answered. Shabbir and Angad didn't understand her and asked jointly "kya?" Diya is scared for their question and kept silent. Angad eased her and again diverted her attention in his dressing. Angad took his 'chunni' after finishing dress-up and carried Diya. She smiled at him as appreciating his make-up. Kartik came and enquired if they are ready and took Shabbir with him. Angad wants to enquire about the comment made by Diya but changed his mind as enquiring kids is not a good idea.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: IndianCutie13

great part
i'm thinking that the kids are angads and kripa's and they are twins

Dint I mention in the past that the kids are twins😉 and if they are AK's or not you will find out when story runs forward😳

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