KYPH-Meera Jaisey kahani Part 27 ,28Jan07 - Page 5

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hello everyone!! I was on vacation for last 10 days so cdnt update my episodes. I'm going to give you all treat with two epics a day..let me know if you find any prob in reading 😳

Thanks to all of you for liking it 🤗
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Part:13

Angad is humming a song and looking into some audio albums leaning his back on table when Kripa entered into his cabin next day morning.
"Hi Kripa! Anything you need?" He enquired her. She nodded her head and took an album and turned to leave. He grabbed her hand to stop her.
"Kyon Jaldi mein ho?" Angad tighten his grip when Kripa trying to pull her hand. He pulled her close and Kripa couldn't balance her self and fell in his hands. He closed his hands and whispered in her ears "Party ki pictures dekhogi?" he took some pictures from the table and showed her. He released her and she started looking at each picture. He held her from behind and tied hands around her waist and rests his chin on her left shoulder while she going through the pictures. She stunned and trying to release his hands. He pulled her closer and blow air in her ears.
"Angad! Chodo mujhe please koyi dekhega yeh office hai" she is struggling to release herself holding pictures with one hand and trying to release herself with other. "Phir kahin bahar chaley" Angad asked sounding naughty tightening his hold. She is still struggling without answering him. He turned her towards him and hugged passionately.
Her face became red with his naughty actions and closed her eyes. He kissed on her eyes.
"Ek baath bhi maami ko nahin batha payee humarey barren mein" Angad sounded sad. Kripa opened her eyes and looked into his eyes.
"Khaash batha diya hotha tho aaj …"he stopped when she rest her head and sobbing. Her hands are pressing his shoulders to control herself. He hugged passionately her and started kissing her all over the face. She lost control and hugged him too.
She came out of trance when the pictures fell from her hand and made a sound. Angad loosened his hands and Kripa released her self and tried to walk out. He grabbed her hand with his left hand to stop her and picking the pictures from floor with right hand. He placed the pictures on the table and looked at her. He slowly pulled her towards her. Kripa is staring at him with a fear of loosing controlagain. He held her palms and kissed passionately.
He smiled while caressing her nails. Kripa is surprisingly looking at him. "Yeh tumhara naakhun Nishant ko chupti nahin?" giving naughty looks to Kripa. Kripa has angrily looked at him and trying to pull her hand. He nodded his head as she won't win on him and said "mujhe tho bahut chup gaya tha us raath" He winked and kissed her hand. He continued "Aaliyah ney bhi dekha aur poocha kiskey naakhun ka nishan tha. It took 10 days to heal".
Kripa's face became red as tomatoes. He pulled her close and tied his hands around her waist. He touched her forehead with his head "abb bhi uski nishaan hai peeth pe. dekhogi". Kripa lowered her eyes with blush. "Tumhara wo ekhi nishan tha mera paas" He whispered. "Magar tumhara paas kayin jada nishaaniyan hai mera" He continued.
Kripa shocked and stared at him.
"Nahin? Suna hai tum mera tasveer rakhthi ho" he asked searching for an answer in her eyes. She lowered her eyes thinking how he knows her secret. Her thoughts initially went on to Harshini. "kahin wo isko sab bathadiya tho nahin. Nahin wo aisey nahin karegi wo meri achi si dosth hai. Phir kaun hoga?"
"Tum tasveer banathey ho? I don't remember I gave any pictures of mine. Kahin bachpan ke pictures tho nahi?" He paused for her reply. Kripa is silent and still thinking about the secret revealer.
"If you are a painter aisey ek paint mere liye banao jispe tum, main aur humarey bachey honge" He kissed her neck and hid his face in the neck curve. He is caressing her back smoothly.
Kripa is still deep in her thoughts and getting continues shocking statements from him. "humarey bachey? Yeh soch raha hai bachey uskey hai? Ya pooch raha tha ki main imagine karoon"
Angad relaxed and released her after a few minutes. Kripa is still in her thoughts and didn't realise her hands are still holding him. Angad is smiling and enjoying her status. Kripa came out of trance when the silence filled in the room. She checked herself and Angad. Angad is smiling and watching her. His hands are no more holding on her. But her hands are resting on his upper chest. She took off her hands and held together near neck and felt embarrassed. "Kyon kuch hua?" Angad bent and kissed her fists. "Tasveer banake dogi na" Angad asked pleasingly. His nose is almost touching her nose. His eyes are locked into her eyes. Her breath is becoming heavy and heart is beating fast. She lowered her eyes to hide her feelings. "I love you Kripa! I miss you" he kissed softly her lips and whispered in her ears. A wave of shiver went through her body and she closed her eyes. Angad realized her status and carried her to the couch to relax her. He got a glass of water to her. Kripa took with shivering hands. Angad rest his head on sofa's back rest besides Kripa "I'm not able to control myself Kripa!" He sighed.
Kripa finished fast drinking and ran out of the room. Angad rubbed his face and took cigarette from his pocket. Shabbir entered the room and surprised on Angad smoking. "Yeh kya office mein smoking? Not allowed." He pulled the cigarette from his mouth and threw in the bin. "Kya hua?" he enquired.
"Kuch nahin" Angad tried to become normal. "Chalo bahar chalthey" Shabbir took him out.

Kripa hid her face in her palms and trying to console herself from the time she came out of Angad's room. She is still thinking about the secret Angad knew about her paintings. She smiled about his wish on having paint with all of them. She relaxed after an hour and wind up the work and left for home.

"Kyon itna disturb ho" Shabbir broke the silence.
"kuch nahin. Jab Kripa samney hothey bahut acha lagtha hai. Uskey bina dil beychain hojaathi hai" Angad sounded depressed.
"Haan patha hai wo party mein tum dono bahut romantic lagrahey hai" commented Shabbir.
Angad twisted his eyebrows at Shabbir wondering how he observed the same as Dadi.. Shabbir smiled "main tum donon ko barren mein jaantha hoon tho it's obvious I observe everything between you both." Shabbir explained how he noticed them winking at him.
"Dadi bhi yehi kehrahi thi" Angad updated his conversation with dadi.
"Dadi theek kahrahi thi Angad.! Kripa abb shadi shuda hai aur usney bathaya ki wo kitney majboor they. Ussey aur tang math karo. Nishant is a nice person in her life too" Shabbir advised and seconded Dadi's opinion.
"Main kahan Kripa ki jindagi barbaad karne jaa raha hoon tum log aisey taaney maarr rahey hai? " Angad irritated.
Shabbir looked deeply into Angad's eyes.
"Okay I got you. Magar I'm not able to control myself yaar. Ussey dekthey hee aisa lagthi hai ki wo mera hai" Angad explained his helplessness.
"Ussey dekhna chod do" Shabbir teased him. Angad grinned.
"khaash wo humarey barren mein kehdiya hotha" Angad again showed his grievance.
"Kyon puranee baath doura rahey ho. Ussey kya faida? Wo majboor tha. Tumbhi chup rahey they na" Shabbir advised.
"Main kahan expect kiya tha ki wo do din mein shadi karkey chali jayegi. Socha hua tho I would have married her instantly"Angad replied.
"Aakhir hua kya hai abhi tak tum bathaya nahin." Shabbir complained.

A big smile came on Angad's face when he remembered his intimacy with Kripa.

Past:

"Angad! Baad mein ek baar office room me aajao tumsey baath karney hai" Dilip ordered Angad at dining table. Angad nodded his head while finishing his dinner. Angad looked with puzzle at Naina but she shrugged her shoulders. Kartik also nodded his head as 'no' when Angad looked at him. Kartik was learning business from his Dad while Angad was at last semester of his engineering finals. Aaliyah finished her final year of law.
"Take your seat" Dilip told Angad. Angad took a chair and waiting for Dilip to continue.
"Mom aur dadi ney tumhe singer banana chaahthey hai aur I also agreed for it. Kartik is taking care of our business so you can go for your musical profession for sometime. Naina arranged some tours through Damini's music academy so you can get some experience and recognition." Dilip explained the reason for his call.
Angad relaxed and started discussing about their plans. Angad had to go on tour for six months as soon as he finishes his final exams. Prithvi also would accompany him and Misthy would be the assistant manager for the tour through her company. Angad is excited for the program.
Next day morning Naina gave information about Kripa's dance program two days later where high celebrities also attending. Naina and Dilip got an out of town commitment so she asked Kartik and Angad to go to the programme. Angad and Kartik were not interested in going to the dance programme as Angad prefers discos and Kartik interested in business conferences. Aaliyah showed interest and finally it was decided that Angad will take Aaliyah to the program. Kartik was relieved and conveyed best wishes to both of them.
"Kripa achi naachthi hai bhaiyya!" Aaliyah praised Kripa's performance.
"haan wo naachthi hai aur uski maa ussey nachaathi hai' Naina commented.
"Tum kyon gussa hothey ho Naina! Gayatri ko classical dance pe interest hai" Dadi supported Gayatri.
"Nahin Maa! Main gussa nahin horaha hoon. Gayatri tho kabhi Kripa ki icha ki kadar hi nahin kiya" Naina showed her disappointment.
"Maami tho classical pe jaan dethi hai" Aaliyah praised Gayatri's interest.
Naina looked angrily at Aaliyah "Haan Kripa achi gaathi bhi hai magar wo Carnatic ya Hindustani ki bahar tho nahin gaathi hai" Naina expressed her desire if Kripa choose for latest trend. Kartik and Angad left there.
"Yeh Kripa ko leke humesha humarey ghar mein argument chaltha rehtha hai" Kartik smiled. Angad nodded his head without commenting further.
"Mom latest trend pasand karthi hai aur Gayatri maami purane khayalon ki hai. Mom Kripa ko aaj ki ladki jaisey dekhna pasand karthi hai aur Maami in traditional way. Maami tho uski ek baath sunegi bhi nahin" Aaliyah explained reason for Naina's irritation.
"Uski beti uski marzi" Angad smiled.
After two days Angad and Aaliyah went to Kripa's program.

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Posted: 18 years ago
#43
Part: 14

Surya and Gayatri's father, Shanmukha Sastry received Angad and Aaliyah warmly and seated them in front row. Well noted Carnatic musicians and classical dancers all over the country and some film industry celebrities came for the program. There are five more classical dancers and classical musicians giving performances along with Kripa. Kripa started giving her performances after big appraisal speeches for the celebrity guests and couple of performances of other artists. There was a big crowd outside and inside of the function theatre. The function delayed two hours and crowd is getting frustrated outside the theatre. Though organizers are controlling inside audience, the outside crowd was becoming impatient and driving all the attention from inside audience.
After Kripa's three dance performances further programme was stalled when the crowd became non-manageable and lost patience. The over reacted crowd from outside broke into auditorium to see their film celebrities when police tried to control them. The organizers managed to rescue all the celebrities and asked the performers to take care of their own care. Surya and Gayatri managed to bring out all the performers from green room. Gayatri's father got tensed in the situation and got hospitalized. Gayatri asked Angad and Aaliyah to help Kripa so that Surya and Gayatri could take care of her father. Angad Aaliyah agreed and took Kripa. Kripa is crying to see her grandfather hospitalized. She followed Angad and Aaliyah in her dance make-up only. They took two hours to come out of the crowd onto the road. There was a big stampede and a big line of police vans, ambulance filled the whole place and it became a big mess out of there. The big sirens were ringing in the ears.

"Angad! Angad!" Shabbir broke the past of Angad when there were a couple of ambulances and police vans surrounded the area.
"Lagtha hai bada accident hogaya tha. Chalo hum dekhkar ghar chalthey hai" Shabbir walked to the place without waiting for Angad.
Angad came out of his past and followed Shabbir. There was an accident of two cars and all the passengers got hurt. Angad and Shabbir couldn't reach the place closer so they went off home.

Presence:

Next day Kripa is already there when Angad entered his cabin. She left with some albums after wishing him. Angad remembered yesterdays instance in his room with Kripa and his heart skipped a beat. Angad smiled at her and took his seat. He opened the file Kripa left in front of him. He casually looked at and surprised to see a picture in oil paint framed nicely with a note "For Time Being". The picture has Kripa and her two kids. It looks like it was early days of delivery of the babies. Kripa has a scarf covered ears around head with side pose. Kids are too small and wrapped in a towel to identify who is who. Both leaned on to Kripa. Its Kripa bust size picture. Kripa looked weak but her eyes are bright with pride being a mother and a smile on lips. A big smile and sweet affection filled Angad's heart. He felt like to see Kripa right immediately. He got up from his chair and Shabbir came to see him.
Angad disappointed and wished him casually.
Shabbir enquired "kyon kahi jaa rahey ho? Aur kissi aur ki intezar hai".
Angad smiled "It's okay. aajao". He placed the file aside. Shabbir noticed the file and took it into his hands. Angad is watching him resting his chin on his right hand and is leaning a side of his chair crossing right leg onto left leg. Shabbir looked at the picture and lift the face towards Angad.
He twisted his eyebrows and asked "yeh kya? Kripa ne diya?" Angad is looking at him with same expression.
"She cares for me" Angad smiled with pride.
"Hmmm…"Shabbir sighed as if he understood something.
Angad stretched his hand for file.
"Yeh mera pehla pyar jo hai" Angad kissed the picture and placed in the drawer.
They finished their daily routine of looking into albums and placing them in order and going through arrangements of upcoming celebrations in Pune. Shabbir left for a meeting with some clients and Angad left alone in the room waiting for Kripa till evening to come into his room. She didn't turn up till 7 in the evening. He surprised and walked into her cabin. She is not there. Angad surprised for her leaving without saying 'goodbye' and turned back to his room.
He is surprised to see Kripa at his desk "Tum yahan? Main tumhey doond raha tha".
Kripa looked at him confusingly.
"Main tumsey milney tumharey kamerey mein gaya tha" Angad explained. Kripa nodded her head. He locked the room and suddenly lifted her and swirled in the room. Kripa shocked and held him tightly. He stopped and hid his face in her hair. Kripa is still closing her eyes with fear and held him tightly. He kissed her eyes dropping his hands around her shoulders. Kripa opened her eyes and sees Angad. Both faces are so close that they can feel each others breathe. He placed her head on his neck curve and hugged tightly.
"ThanQ Kripa! I love you. Agley baar hum charon ki tasveer chahiye" He is pressing his cheeks towards her. She kept silent for some time and moved away from him. He held her hands and doesn't want to leave. Kripa stared at him for a moment and placed her hand on his cheek "Hum shadi shuda hai Angad!" Angad moved with her soft helpless voice.
He held her face in his palms and kissed her nose and cheeks "hum janthey hai. Bus it takes time to digest the fact. Mann bahut bechain tha until I see you back here. I was ashamed of myself for not being with you and leaving you alone, Kripa!. Tumhey Nishant ke saath kushi dekh kar thodasa sukoon milgayaa hai. Magar yeh mera mann phir bhi tumharey saath rehene ki jidd karthi hai"" his eyes moistures. Kripa's eyes filled with tears.
"No Kripa! I can't see your tears. Main bahut koshish kartha hoon magar I want to be with you all the time" Angad hugged her and whispered in her ears.

They relaxed in each others hands for few minutes. Both moved away and got up to leave the office. They walked out silently immersed in their own thoughts.

"Abb shuru karen" Shabbir asked sipping his beer.
"Kya?" Angad surprised.
Shabbir raised his eyebrows. Angad understood that he is asking to continue his past and smiled. '"main janna chahtha hoon tum Kripa ke peechey kyon padi ho" Shabbir defended himself.
"main kabhi tumsey explanation poocha?" Angad smiled. "Kripa ko main kabhi itni kareeb se nahin jantha tha. Magar wo ek incident changed me to love her to think about her. Wp Ek sunhera pal. Humey kareeb leke aayi thi" Angad is longingly remembering his past.



Past:

Angad drove out of the place and took the road leading Kripa's house. Kripa is still crying remembering the mess and her grand father. Aaliyah and Kripa were sitting back seats while Angad driving. Aaliyah is consoling her constantly. After a while Kripa calmed down. "Bhaiya yahan mujhey chod do mera ek assignment pick up karna hai aur main ghar chala jaaongi" Aaliyah stopped him on the way and got down. Angad drove Kripa home. As soon as they reached home they got call from Gayatri to enquire about them.
"Maa! Aap log kaisey hai? Hum theek hai ghar pahoonch gayi" Kripa responded the call.
"Acha hua tum chalegayi ho. Yahan tho bahut bheed padi hai. Tata ko hospital pahoonch diya. Aur doctors attend karr raha hai. Hiper tension batha raha hai. Patha nahin gab laoutengey. Tum khana pakao aur Angad s request karo wahin rahey humarey aane tak. Aur main baath karoongi ussey phone do ussey" Gayatri gave information and giving instructions for next action. She spoke to Angad also and requested to stay till they come back. Angad assured his help.
Kripa went upstairs to change her dress. Angad spent alone half an hour to reading some magazines and looking into Kripa's collection of classical albums. Kripa came down after taking head bath. She was looking fresh in long hair flowing freely after shower. She wore a long skirt with white base and brown and orange flowers all over and orange half saree. Angad never looked her so closely and his heart is beating fast thinking only they two were in the house. She left into kitchen to cook something for them. She cut some vegetables and some curry and put a pressure cooker with rice. Angad came into the kitchen and asked "main kuch madat karoon?"
Kripa smiled and nodded her head "Bus khatam hua chawal cook hona hai".
Both walked to the hall since there is some more time for rice to cook.
"You don't have any latest albums?" Angad asked sitting in front of her collections in the corner of the hall.
Kripa showed some which are a year older and stood besides him.
"Why don't you practice some new songs?" He asked.
She laughed and told "I do magar Amma doesn't like me singing any pop songs ya disco songs".
Angad also laughed "Yeh maami bhi na sudregi nahin".
"Haan main chup chup ke gaathi hoon Harshu ke saath" she blushed lowering her eyes.
Angad looked at her longingly when her hair is flowing on her forehead. He felt like put that in right place but he was not so close to her. She kept blushing while he was staring at her. Her long skirt is touching his legs and her pallu is flowing light. The fragrance of her body spray ya bath gel is mesmerizing him. It seems she put haldi on her face and sandal powder on her body. Angad couldn't make it clear as he never know anybody in his house using it. She didn't yet remove the red and green bangles that she wore for dance. Angad is observing her so keenly as he never been with her so closely. Kripa is embarrassed for his looks touching all over her body.
Suddenly she remembered about the rice and wondered as it was not giving any whistles.

"Oh Maa! I forgot to put water in the cooker" She worried loudly. Angad was confused as he didn't understand what she was talking about. Kripa ran fast into the kitchen and Angad followed her curiously. Before they reached the kitchen they heard a big thunder sound and Kripa stopped holding her ears.
"Kya hua" Angad still confused. Kripa looked at him and nodded her head. She walked slowly to the kitchen and peaked into the room. Angad also followed her. The dome of the cooker is swirling down. The cooker base was on the floor. The dish inside is tilted back and all the walls, ceiling filled with rice. Angad surprised to see this since he never know it could happen. Kripa started cursing herself "Main bhool gayi thi cooker ke andar pani bharna. Yeh theesri baar hua tha. Amma mujhe maar daalegi" she was sad and getting ready to clean it up. Angad still confused and surprised for whatever happened. Kripa tugged her aanchal around her waist, and long skirt up to below knees. Angad was watching her admiringly as this scene and she was new to him. She took a wet cloth and started cleaning the floor and walls in between confusingly looking at ceiling thinking how to clean it before Gayatri comes back. It took an hour to clean up. She piled the whole cooked rice and noticed the rice on the mandir near the pantry. She looked behind at Angad who was surprisingly watching her.
Angad came into sense and offered help"Can I do something".
"haan atlast hosh aya janaab ko" Kripa thought in her mind and nodded her head. Angad came inside and stood confusingly where to start from.
"Wo mandir clean karogey?" She showed at mandir and gave another wet cloth to Angad for clean-up.
Angad cleaned everything nicely and removed the rice added to the pile Kripa made.
"Wo haldi kumkum ki plate bhi clean karogey?" Kripa requested.
Angad nodded and took the plate in his hands and cleaned the place. He turned to put the plate into the sink and Kripa stood with the piled rice in the tilted dish at same moment. She hit the plate in Angad's hand accidentally and the haldi kumkum fell on her head and all over the dress along with plate.
Angad shocked and tried to clean saying "sorry".
Kripa stopped him when he wass about to touch her. Angad looked at her confusingly. She lowered her eyes blushing and turned other side. She threw the rice into the dust bin and washed her hands.
"Tum bhi haath dholo. Main clean karkey aathi hoon" Kripa instructed without looking at him and walked out of the kitchen. Angad understood her and smiled.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hope u njoyd ur vacations 😛 😛 😛

i woz getn worried finkn all sorts even fought u'v been abductd by aliens or sumfing 😆 😆 😉

tfs sweety ukno how hookd i am2 ur FF

thank goodness ur giving 2 daily doses 😆 😆
Edited by ShellyB - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: ShellyB

hope u njoyd ur vacations 😛 😛 😛

i woz getn worried finkn all sorts even fought u'v been abductd by aliens or sumfing 😆 😆 😉

tfs sweety ukno how hookd i am2 ur FF

thank goodness ur giving 2 daily doses 😆 😆

😳

I enjoyed my vacation a lot😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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I hope you enjoyed your vacation. I really missed your fanfic, though. I'm over the moon that you'll be posting an installment each day. I'm so happy. I wish that this story could have aired on KYPH as well as the one already aired. It's be so good. I would have loved to see the scenes in the office where angad grabs kripa. It was so romantic.
I am 100% sure that the twins are Angad's. That's the impression i got from these latest installments. I wonder if Nishant knows. I wonder what Angad's reaction will be when he discovers this fact.
Thank you very much.
Munira
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that was wicked keep conitnuing
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Part: 15

Angad was waiting in the hall till Kripa came down. She again took shower to clean huldi, kumkum from her head and body. She wore a white organza with black silk border long skirt with black half-saree. She looked angel for Angad's eyes. He was watching her without moving his eyes. Kripa noticed his looks and embarrassed but slowly went into kitchen to finish the left over work. Angad hesitated to follow her. She finished the rest of work and served food for both after an hour. Both are hungry and finished eating without any conversation. She cleaned all the dishes later and came into the hall when Angad is listening to Kripa's records. Kripa sat on the stairs waiting for a call from her mom. Angad is annoyed for the situation. Kripa is embarrassed to stay alone with Angad as they never been together alone anywhere so far. She understood that Angad also feeling annoyed for this situation. Angad got up and changed another record of Kripa.
Kripa came down and called Harshini to stay over so that she can send Angad home. But Harshini went to her nanny's house in Mt. Abu for a week. Kripa disappointed and went back to her usual place and waiting for the call from Gayatri. Kripa was feeling sleepy since she didn't have sleep for a week with rehearsals and practice for the program.
After an hour at last they got call from Gayatri saying that Kripa's grandfather will be discharged by early hours and both of them staying at hospital till the time. She further asked Angad and Kripa to finish their dinner and go to bed. Kripa hung the phone and arranged for beds. She arranged bed for Angad in her room and she went to her parent's bedroom to sleep. Angad is not getting sleep since it's a new place and decided to listen to some more songs. He relaxed in sofa in the hall while listening to the songs. He slowly fell asleep.
There was a sudden thunder and both got up. Kripa ran down to see what happened. There was a short circuit nearby pole and the power got cut off. Kripa tried to light a candle and went into the kitchen. Angad silently followed to help her. Kripa turned back to Angad after lighting the candle and shocked to see him suddenly and screamed. She lost the candle and lighter and Angad bent to search for it. He reached Kripa's feet and Kripa screamed again for his touch.
"Kyon itna darthey ho. Hum donon ke bina koyi hai yahan" Angad gave up searching for candle and irritated on Kripa. Kripa kept silent. Angad held her hand and walked towards stairs. Kripa frightened to climb stairs along with Angad and pulled her hand.
"Chalo yahin bhait they hai power aaney thak. Waisey bhi kuchi deir main.subah hojaayega" Angad sat on stairs. Kripa was still standing hesitated to sit with him. Angad pulled her hand and placed his right side. She sat silently praying for power. Her heart was beating fast to sit so close to Angad.. She was rubbing softly her palms. Angad was smiling in his mind for her fears.
He stretched his body and relaxed on stairs and silently observing her. The long hair was left loose to get dry. The light breeze through windows was flying her hair smoothly. He couldn't see Kripa's face or neck as the hair was covering the entire back of her. He touched the hair. Kripa felt vibration for his touch though she was not looking at him and she could feel his looks all over her. Angad got up and smelled the hair. He tied his hands on his knees and straightly looking at her. Kripa was still lowered her eyes to hide her feelings from him.
"Kuch gana hojaayetho acha hoga. Gettig bored" Angad whispered hinting her to sing. Kripa was already nervous to stay alone in the dark with him and over that he was asking her to sing.
"Please Kripa! I can sing but you know I don' get mood without band" he lied to make her sing.
Kripa was still hesitating to sing.
"koyi latest song gaao. Samjho main Harshu hoon" Angad encouraged with naughty tone. It gave tickling feeling in Kripa's heart and body. Kripa was sitting lowering her eyes.
Though it was dark Angad could feel her blushing and her heavy breathe. He was feeling something strong and strange in his mind. He was always come into controversies because of Gayatri's over protective nature towards Kripa and he stayed away from Kripa when they are growing older. She never allowed playing with them when they were young and she never sent to their house alone.
Now that Kripa was sitting and singing very close to him. His mind was playing a romantic rhythm subconsciously.
Kripa slowly set her throat and started singing.

http://www.dishant.com/album/Zeher-(2005).html

Agar tum mil jao
Zamana chod denge hum
Agar tum mil jao
Zamana chod denge hum………2
Tumhe paa kar zamane bhar se rishta tod denge hum
Agar tum mil jao
Zamana chod denge hum…………

Her melodious voice was now giving him a tingling feeling. His heart was skipping beats for every word coming out of her soft flawless voice. He was admiringly watching her neck where the song is coming from. He forgot everything around him and filling his heart and eyes with her figure. He was feeling like he was in the heaven. She continued the song without looking him. She knew he was staring at her. The fragrance of her body was mesmerizing him. He was unknowingly started getting attracted to her.


Bina tere koyi dilkash nazara hum na dekheinge…….2
Tumhe na ho pasand usko dobara hum na dekheinge
Teri soorat na ho jis mein……….2
Woh sheesha tod denge hum
Agar tum mil jao……………..

He started caressing her hair and putting the hair from her forehead in right place. Kripa was shivering with his feather touch and closed her eyes and turned her face away from him. He touched her left ear with his right fingers. Kripa felt ticklish. He took her hands into his and pressed.


Tere dil mein raheinge tujhko apna ghar bana lenge….2
Tere khwaabon ko beheno ki tarah khud par saja lenge
Kasam teri kasam…….2
Taqdeer ka roog mod denge hum
Agar tum mil jao…………………………… Angad slowly dropped one hand around her shoulder and moved close touching her. Kripa's was feeling her body flying in the air. Some tingling feeling filled all over the body but she continued singing.

Tumhe hum apne jism-o-jaan mein kuch aise basa lenge….2
Teri khushboo apne jism ki khushboo bana lenge
Khuda se bhi na jo toote…….2
Woh rishta jod lenge hum
Agar tum mil jao…………….

Angad tighten his fist along with her palm. His feelings were taking a shape slowly and started developing an interest in her.

Tumhe paa kar zamane bhar se rishta tod denge hum
Agar tum mil jao
Zamana chod denge hum……………………………………

He joined her and finished the song along with her.
She slowly turned her face to him and looked into his eyes. He asked with his eyes if the song is about him. She blushed. He kissed her hands. She closed her eyes and her voice started shivering.

"Aaj tak hum kabhi itna kareeb sey tumhey dekha nahin. I'm feeling strange" He whispered rubbing his cheeks to hers and holding her with two hands.

Tumhe paa kar zamane bhar se rishta tod denge hum
Agar tum mil jao
Zamana chod denge hum……….

He kissed her neck as soon as she finished her song. She shivered with tingling feeling all over the body. He moved to her eyes. Both laid on the stairs. Angad bent on her. He took her entire hair and rubbed his face.
"Yeh kushbhoo kya hai" He asked her softly kissing the hair.
"Shikakai" she answered murmuring.
"I never know this smell. I can recognize shampoo smell" he smiled. He pressed his left hand on her waist and right hand under her neck and kissed her neck on right side. Kripa was loosing her control with his touch and forgot to resist. Her silence provoked him to continue further.
"yeh badan ka kushboo kya hai?" He whispered in her right ear.
Kripa was in trance and didn't answer. He raised his head and looked into her eyes. She blushed. He was waiting for her answer. She replied ,"Herbal powder. Amma makes at home with nine herbals and uraddal powder" she answered with shy.
"Hmm yeh maami bhi na. But it smells so good. Tumharey gaal aur honte isiliye itna nazook hai?" he winked and touched her cheeks and lips with his lips.
Kripa smiled and hid her face in his neck curve. He cuddled her strongly.

Kripa broke her sleep when someone strongly banging the doors. Angad was resting on her bare body. Kripa muttered "Amma". Angad broke his sleep and looked around. "Amma aagayi" Kripa got up fast to move out. He stopped her and gave her naughty looks. She checked herself and covered fast with the bedsheet with blush and lowered her eyes.
"Main dektha hoon tum dress up hojaao" Angad smiled and kissed her cheeks and went down grabbing his dress. He put on clothes while climbing down as the person at door was impatient."Kripa! Kripa! Darwaja kholo hum hai" Gayatri's voice yelling.
"Aaye maami! Ek minute." Angad delayed on purpose to give some time to Kripa.
Angad opened the door after seeing her climbing down.
"HI Maami, Maama! How r you all?" he tried to hide his excitement and set his hair in right place. All of three people came inside.
"Amma!" Kripa ran down tying her hair into a knot and hugged Gayatri.
After formalities, Surya went into the room to freshen up. Shanmukha Sastry relaxed in the sofa and Gayatri walked into the kitchen. The milk man brought the milk cursing about the power off last night in the area. Kripa took the milk and followed Gayatri. Gayatri was enquiring about the mess in the kitchen and Kripa giving the last nights' details. The conversation was going in telugu so Angad couldn't understanding except some words like cooker, rice, cleaning. Shanmukha Sastry enquired about the power off.
Gayatri was scolding Kripa for negligence and made coffee for all of them. Angad was chatting with grandfather but his eyes are looking for Kripa.
Surya and Gayatri took seats opposite side of Shanmukha satry and Angad while Kripa having coffee standing near the wall. Her eyes were steeling Angad's eyes but Angad couldn't look at her since her parents were right in front of him. Gayatri went into kitchen after finishing coffee and Surya into the room. Shanmukha Sastry took the day's newspaper. Angad got chance to look into Kripa and she at him. He got up and reached Kripa and Kripa is shocked for his approach. He leaned to the kitchen door dropping his left hand to squeeze kripa's left hand and talking to Gayatri"Maami! Mai chaltha hoon". Gayatri didn't move from kitchen platform and turned to him "Okay Angad! Thanks for everything. Main thodasa busy hoon aaj kuch Kaam hai".
"Koyi baath nahin Maami! You carry on. Aur thanks ki jaroorat nahin. It's my duty to help you" He still squeezing kripa's hands and covered her so that Gayatri won't see their hands. Kripa was smiling and enjoying his touch and looking longingly at him. Angad looked at her and directed silently to bid him bye at the entrance. He walked away after taking leave from Shanmukha Sastry who was busy with his newspaper. Angad held Kripa's hand till the door though Kripa was trying to pull it out fearing anyone could notice it. Angad left her hand when he saw Surya coming out of his room. Surya stood besides Kripa and bid him bye. Angad went into the car cursing for Surya's presence. He adjusted his rearview mirror to see Kripa until he turned away from the road. Kripa stood smiling till he disappeared.


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Angad went home thinking all the way about Kripa. He was experiencing unknown satisfaction and was feeling he won the whole world.
"Chacha kaisey hai?"Naina enquired as soon as Angad came home. He updated briefly and climbed fast to his room. He swirled in the room stretching his hands wide. He was feeling like shout 'Kripa's name out loudly and tell everyone about their commitment. He finished his shower humming Kripa's song "Tum agar miljaaye" and smiling himself. "Ooch" he looked into the mirror when something hurt his back. There were a bunch of deep scratches on his back. He was surprised and smiling thinking Kripa must have done them last night.
"Itna dard hua kya? OR was it excitement" He blushed remembering the night.
He came down to the dining room for breakfast and found none there. He looked at Aaliyah who was about to leave for college.
"Aloo! Sab kahan gaye?"Angad questioned.
'Kitney baar kahan 'Aloo' math kaho? Sab apne kaam par chaley gayen "She showed her anger.
"ek baar yahan aao" Angad grabbed her to upstairs ignoring her scolds.
"Kya hua? Kahan keench ke leke jaarahe ho?" Aaliyah kept on asking till they came to Angad's bedroom.
"Hmm……. yelo thodasa lagao Please dard ho raha hai"Angad handed her an ointment and turned back pulling up his shirt.
"Skin ointment? Kyon? kya hua?" Aaliyah showed her anxiety. "Oh My God? Billi sey ladkar aye ho kya?" she surprised seeing the scratches.
He turned his face over neck "Tum chup chaap lagakey jaao. Enquiry math karo".
Aaliyah turned to walk out after applying ointment. She stopped and looked naughtily at Angad.
"Bhaiyya! Tum last night Kripa ke paas they naa? So…. she did it? Kya hua? woi ….woi?"She raised her eyebrows rolling her eyes and showing her right forefinger. Angad blushed and threw his shirt on her "Tum jaao gi ki nahin?"
Aaliyah left and Angad turned to look into the mirror. "Kripa! Kya kiya tumney. Aaj dekhloonga tujhe" he stroked his hair and kissed himself in the air thinking about Kripa.
He went to the college and couldn't control his impatience to meet Kripa in the evening.
He heard an old song "mukesh song in 'Nrutye bina bijili"………….as soon as he switched the engine.
He dint change it as his routine to change to his own CDs but heard the whole song

taaron mein saj ke, apane sooraj se, dekho dharatee chalee milane
zanakee paayal mach gayee halachal anbar saaraa lagaa hilane

hai ghataaon kaa, do nain mein kaajal
dhoop kaa mukh pe daale sunaharaa saa aanchal
yoo laharayee, lee angadaee, lagee jaise dhanak khilane

aag see lapate, jalatee huyee raahe
jee ko dahalaaye, bechain toofaan kee aahe
naa daregee, naa rukegee, dekhe kyaa ho, kahaa dil ne

He felt the song is so appropriate and meaningful to his feelings now.
"Kripa! Ek milan mein tum mujhe badal diya" he smiled and surprised for his liking of old songs.

He was disappointed to see the lock when he reached her house in the evening. He enquired about her at neighborhood and they said they took grandfather to the clinic for further checkups. He waited there till night 8 and they didn't turn up. He went home disappointedly and called at 10 in the night but didn't get any response. The next morning around 9 he went to her house as he was already missing her. The neighbors updated him that they went some other town and didn't know when they return. Angad was disappointed and enquired for Harshini. Harshini's mom told that she woud come back three days later and would call him after return.
Harshini gave him call after three days and told she had no clue about her. After two days Harshini again called Angad and told that Kripa went on a dance tour for a month as she got a good offer for her last performance. Angad requested Harshini to ask Kripa to call him as she didn't left any contact details with him. After a week Harshini called Angad to meet her urgently.

Angad was shocked to see a letter from Surya to Harshini's parents informing about her marriage with "Nishant Saxena" at Tirupati. Surya wrote that it was a good match, the groom is the only son and lives in USA; groom's mother and Gayatri were childhood friends. Gayatri's father helped Nishant's parents for their marriage since it was an inter-caste marriage. Nishant's parents were impressed with Kripa and wanted to make her their daughter-in-law. The marriage was taking place in no time because Nishant's mother was seriously ill.
Angad got tears and checked for the date and it was already past a day. Harshini was also shocked for the news and consoled Angad. Angad walked to the car flabbergasted.
"Angad!" Harshini stopped him "Tum Kripa ko chahthey they?" a sorrowful tone.
Angad nodded his head and tried to hide his tears "Kya karogi jaankar". He drove home with heart broken.

The atmosphere at home was serious when he reached home. Naina was taking big steps in the hall and Dilip trying to cool down her. Kartik, Aaliyah and dadi were sitting silently watching her. Aaliyah came to Angad and took him a side.
"Patha chalgaya?" Aaliyah asked seeing his red eyes. Angad confused and looked into her face. "Kripa ki shadi hogayi" She updated as Dilip received the letter from Surya after the wedding date.
Angad, Kartik, and Aaliyah went upstairs and sat in Angad's bedroom.
"yeh Kripa ko leke humarey ghar mein hamesha arguments hotha hai" kartik irritated.
Kartik left after some time and Aaliyah was sitting alone with Angad.
Aaliyah pressed his shoulder and Angad turned his face away from her to hide his tears. "Bhaiyya! I'm so sorry. Ab hum kya karen? Kripa ki halath soch kar mujhe pareshani ho rahi hai. Patha nahin wo bechair maami se kehpayee ki nahin. Wo Nishant kaisa ladka hoga? Kripa ko sukhi rakhega ki nahin? Wo tho ek baath bhi juban par kabhi nahin le aathi." Aaliyah showed her concern with deep sad voice.
Angad hid his face in his hands and started crying. Aaliyah pressed his head on her shoulder. Angad controlled himself after a few minutes.
"Abb bus bhool jana hi humarey haath mein hai. I know it is damn difficult but koshish karr sakthey hai" Aaliyah sat with him for some time and left.
"Aaliyah!'Angad stopped her before she leaves the room. "yeh raaj hum donon ki beech mein hi rahengey"
Aaliyah came to him and promised with her hand and kissed his forehead and left.
Angad met Harshini when he got a call from Harshini after a week.
"Kya hua Harshu!"Angad asked entering into the hall.
Harshini grabbed his hand and took him onto the terrace. "Kripa aarahi hai. Yahi ek hafthey tak rahegi." Harshini updated him.
"Wo mujhey phone kyon nahin karthi?" Angad disappointed tone.
"Kaisey karegi? Karegi tho bhi kya baath kahegi?" Harshini asked.
Angad nodded his head"wo aayetho bhi main kya karoonga?" kabb aarahi hai?
"Shayad kal uski door ki riste daar parsu ayi huyi hai ghar tayar karney ke liye aur kal maa mujhe ney bathaya tha"Harshini detailed.
"Hum mil sakthey ussey?"Angad enquired.
"Kiss sey? Ristey daar sey? Jaroor. Chalo" Harshini took him to Kripa's house.
They met her and she updated them that Kripa's mother-in-law passed away so they might not be coming.
Angad felt sorry for her and disappointed for not going to meet her now.
Harshini promised that she will update him timely..
Harshini was kept giving updates about Kripa. Kripa stayed two months in Bangalore and her parents came back. Gayatri was happy for Kripa as Nishant and family are very nice family and take good care of Kripa. Kripa might visit them before she leaves for US.

Angad finished his final exams of engineering in those two months and was getting ready to go on international music tour through Damini's company. Naina called Angad and gave a news that Damini wanted to marry Misthy to Angad. Everyone at home were shocked.
"Naina! Yeh kya tumhara dimaak kharab hogaya? Abb Angad ka shadi ka kya jaldi hai? Aur uskey bada bhai Kartik ka shadi hui nahin" Dilip irritated on Naina's news.
"Main kya karoon Dilip? Damini wanted to give Misthy's hand in Angad's aur ismey bura kya hai. Abb engagement karengey aur tour se aaney ke baad shadi" Naina tried to convince as if there was nothing much to worry.
"Magar maa Misthy tho bhai se ek hi mahiney choti hai" Aaliyah knew Angad doesn't like the match and took his side.
"To kya hua abb sabhi apney se chote umar vale se bhi shadi karr rahey hai" Naina seemed not to change her decision. Angad got annoyed and walked silently out of the house. While he was driving he got call from Harshini that Kripa was coming. Angad diverted his car towards Kripa's home.
Harshini again took him onto terrace and asked him to wait and went to enquire about Kripa. Harshini came back with news that Gayatri and Surya left for Bangalore to bring Kripa and Kripa was pregnant. Angad was stunned and left telling her he won't be coming back anymore as he was going on music tour and going to get married with Misthy. Harshini felt bad for Angad and told him that she was happy for him for moving with his life.

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"Isskey aagey kya hua tum jaanthey ho"Angad came out of past and concluded.
Shabbir's eyes got moisture and he patted softly Angad's back. Angad smiled "Abb bhi lagthi hai Kripa mera hai. Bus us ek raath ka milan mujhey yeh ehsaas dilaathi hai."Angad took last puff of the smoke and walked to the car. Shabbir followed.



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Posted: 18 years ago
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oh grt part thanks for the update

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