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Part 32




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Part 32




Naina jase ghar ke andar enter karti hain samne kuch log uske sawagat ke liye phele se he khud the...unsab ke chahre pe ek ajeeb se smile thi ya yun kahu ki woh smile nahi naina ko apne pas wapas aata dekhne ka guroor tha ...



Unme se ek aadmi aage aata hain aur naina ki taraf apni bahe phela kar usse gale lagne ka ishara karta hain...


Naina aaj itne waqt ke baad insab ko apne samne dekh kar kuch ajeeb sa mehsoos kar rahi thi...jise woh shabdo me baya nahi kar sakti ,phir se wahi sab uski aakho ke samne tha ..jo kuch usne saha woh har ek ghatiya harkat jo inlogo ne uske saath ki thi ...




Naina : (irritated) mere samne se hato shabir ...


Yeh kah kar naina shabir ke peche khade logo ke pas chali gayi ...




Naina : maine apka diya kam pura nahi kar payi ...




Un logo me se ek admi jo middle age ka tha woh aage aata hain aur bina kuch kahe naina ko kheech kar ek thapad marta hain...




Dosri taraf Gunny aur baki sab terrorist ko ek ek karke marte hue andar jaa rahi the



Raj aur baki sab jald se jald andar jana chahte the kyuki unhe pata tha unki thodi waqt ki deri naina ko unse humesha ke liye dor kar sakti thi...



Jisne naina ko thapad mara tha ...woh gusse me naina ko ghur raha tha ...

Tum janti ho na humare mission me nakami ki koi jagha nahi hain ... tumhari himmat kase hui yaha iss tarha ser utha kar chale aane ki... humare mission nakam hone ki sirf ek tum he wajah ho ...


Woh aadmi naina ko phir ek aur thappad marne he wala tha ki tabhi shabir ne aa kar usse rok diya



Shabir : yeh kya kar rahe hain aap abbujaan ... Naaz ki galti ki yeh saza sahi nahi hain isse toh hum apni tarha se saza de gaye... (usse ser se le kar pairo tak ghurte hue ) bohat khubsurat lag rahi ho tum ... tumhari pregnancy ne tumhe aur bhi jada khubsurat bana diya hain...wase sunna hain usse major ne bhi bade maze liye hain tere saath ...




Ek taraf naina ka gussa sari hade par kar raha tha uski baatein sunn kar or dosri taraf raj ne shabir ki kahi hui har ek baat sunni raj ka gussa is kadar badh gaya tha ki woh abhi shabir ko jaan se marne jaane wala tha par uske saath abhi bhi tha jisne sari baatein sunni thi usne raj ko asa kuch bhi karne se rok diya...



(Abhi or raj Terrence pe the or alekh naveen or Gunny neche ke area ke terrorist ka khatma kar rahe the )




Naina : (shabir ko ek jor ka chata marte hue) khabardar jo mere pati ka naam bhi nikala apni gandi jaban se ... tumhari tarha ghatiya insan nahi hain woh ...



Shabir or baki sab naina ke chate se haran rah gaye jo ladki unke aage apni aawaz tak nahi uthati thi aaj woh un par haath utha rahi thi aur dosri taraf raj naina ka yeh roop dekh kar khush tha ...aaj usse yakeen tha ki naina sahi main me uss sadme se nikal gayi thi jo inn logo ne usse diya tha ...




Shabir jase he naina ke karib aaya uss marne naina ne turant apni pehni hui jacket ki chain khol di jese dekh kar waha sab ghabra gaye ...
Naina human bomb bani khadi thi sabke samne ...aaj tak jo log naina ko dara rahe the aaj woh khud naina se dar ke khade the ...sabke maithe pe pasina tha ...




Shabir : (stammering) yehhh..kyaa haii nazzz..



Naina : (with victory smile) tumhari maut ka saman sabir ...


Abbu : (angrily) hosh me toh hain tu ladki pata bhi hain tu kya kar rahi hain ...agar yaha kisi ko kharoch bhi aayi toh tujhe tere bhai tere shauhar sabko khatam kar duge hum ...




Naina : (laughing like mad girl) acha ...toh ab tu marega mere bhai or raj ko ???~ phele khud ko toh bacha le ..arre yeh maine kya bol diya ...mjhe toh yeh bolna chaheyi na ki phele khud ko bacha lejeyi abbu ...
(Angrily) abbu ??? Abbu kahti thi main tumhe bachpan se .. matlab bhi samjhte ho tum iska ??? Baap ka darja diya tha maine tujhe aur tune kya kiya jiss ladki ko bachpan se apni godh me khelaya ussi ladki ki izzat utarne se phele ek bar nahi socha ...yeh jo kuch bhi tum logo ne mere saath kiya agar koi bahar ka insaan karta toh samjh bhi aata par tum log jinke saath main bachpan se pali badi thi unhonne mere saath yeh karne se phele ek bar bhi nahi socha ... Baba ne mujhe apni jaan se bhi jada pyaar se pala par unki aakhe band karte he toh logo ne inki beti ke saath asa kiya chiii...ghin aati hain mujhe yeh soch kar bhi ki ek waqt tha jab main tum sabko apna manti thi ...



Yeh kah kar naina apne jacket me lage bomb ko activate karne he wali hoti hain ki waha Raj Naveen Abhi Gunny Alekh sab aa gaye jinhe dekh kar sirf naina he nahi baki sab terrorist bhi haran ho gaye...




Naina : (shocked) bhai??? Raj ..aap sab yaha ???


Phir woh Gunny ki taraf dekhti hain or samjh jati hain ki inhe yaha lane wala wahi hain ...



Shabir : oh! Toh iss naaz ke peche peche iska bhai or iska aashiq bhi aa gaya ...


Naveen : (angrily) naaz nahi naina aur apni gandi zubaan se meri behan ka naam lene ki koi jarurat nahi hain ...



Shabir : (smirking) meri iss gandi zubaan ne teri pyaari behan ko kaha kaha chua hain iska toh shayad tujhe andaza bhi na ho ...wase gajab ki hain teri behan ..



Jaha ab tak naina ne itni himat dekhat kar lad rahi thi ab wahi apni bare me asi baatein sunn kar apne bhai or pati ke samne uska ser jhukne laga tha



Raj ka gussa sari hade par kar gaya tha ... usse farak nahi padta tha ki kon kya bol raha hain par naina ka jhukta ser dekh ke uske gusse ne sari hadde par kar di...



Raj ne jaa kar shabir ko marna shuru kiya ... shayad raj ko bhi hosh nahi tha ki woh shabir ko kitni buri tarha maar raha tha ...aur dosri taraf shabir ke abbu chila chila ke apne aadmiyo ko bula rahe the shabir ko bachane ke liye
...par koi nahi aaya kyuki insabne phele he sare aadmiyo ko mar diya tha ...


Abhi naveen Gunny or alekh ne har ek terrorist ko mar diya tha ab bas uss kamre me inke alawa or koi nahi tha ...



Naveen : kise bola raha hain ...teri maut samne khadi hain ..ab tujhe mjhse kon bachayega...

Yeh kah kar naveen abbu ko marna shuru kar deta hain ... Naveen ache se janta tha ki yeh un sab terrorist ka leader hain..agar yeh chahta toh naina ke saath asa kuch nahi hota yeh sab kuch rok sakta tha par isne rokne ki jagha apni beti ki umar ki ladki ke saath he yeh sab kiya ...


Gunny abhi Alekh bhi sabke saath ladne lage naina apni jagha pe khadi sab kuch dekh rahi thi ... aaj woh yeh soch kar aayi thi ki apni zindagi ki kahani aaj khatam kar degi par uski zindagi ne aaj bhi uska saath nahi diya ... Naveen aur Raj ne phir se aaj uski zindagi ko ek naya rokh de diya tha ...




Raj aur shabir ladde ja rahe the ki tabhi shabir ke haath gun lag gayi usne ek firing ki jiski aawaz sunn kar uss kamre me sabhi rok gaye aur phir usne raj ki taraf dekh kar nishana lagaya yeh dekh kar toh naina ke hosh he udd gaye the ...


Abhi abhi toh usse laga tha ki shayad ek naya rokh uski zindagi me aane wala hain par agar raj ko kuch ho gaya toh yeh rokh kitna dardnaak ho sakta hain iska toh woh andaz bhi nahi laga sakti thi ...




Shabir ne jase he trigger badaya naina bhag ke raj ke pas gayi aur usse dhaka mar diya ...Naina ki chikh sabne suni ...
Yeh sab kuch itni jaldi hua ki koi kuch react he nahi kar paya ...
Goli chali yeh toh sabko pata tha par woh dono me se lagi kise yeh nahi pata tha kisi ko ...


Naveen toh haran khada rah gaya ek taraf uski behan toh dosri taraf uska dost jasa bhai ...




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Part 33




Shabir ne jase he trigger badaya naina bhag ke raj ke pas gayi aur usse dhaka mar diya ...Naina ki chikh sabne suni ...
Yeh sab kuch itni jaldi hua ki koi kuch react he nahi kar paya ...
Goli chali yeh toh sabko pata tha par woh dono me se lagi kise yeh nahi pata tha kisi ko ...


Naveen toh haran khada rah gaya ek taraf uski behan toh dosri taraf uska dost jasa bhai ...



Sab naina aur raj ki taraf dekhe jaa rahe the ...

Naina almost raj ke uppar the usse itni jor se hug kiye hue maano uski puri zindagi ab bas usse pe depend hain aur yeh sach bhi tha ab naina ki har khushi sirf aur sirf raj se judi hui thi ...



Sab ko laga ki shayad goli naina ko lagi hain kyuki uski body me koi movement he nahi thi ...par kuch he pal me kisi aur ke dard me karhane ki aawaz aayi ...jab sabne uss aawaz ki our dhayan diya toh dekha ki woh goli kisi aur ko nahi shabir ke abbu ko lagi thi ...


Jab shabir ne goli chali thi tab raj ke peche kuch he dori pe shabir ke abbu khade the aur jase he naina ne raj ko dhaka diya woh goli seedhe jaa kar abbu ko lagi unke dil me..



Yeh dekh kar shabir ke haath se uski gun gir gayi ki usne galti se he sahi apne abbu ko mar diya ...


Shabir bhag ke gaya apne abbu ke pas aur moka dekh kar alekh ne woh gun utha li ...


Naina abhi bhi raj ki baho me khoi hui thi sab kuch bhul ke usse bas itna pata tha ki uske raj thik hain usse jada usse kuch nahi chaheyi ...
Dosri taraf raj bhi naina ko apne itne kabir pa kar khush tha par usse abhi bhi naina ki fikar thi ...woh apne charo tarf hote har ek action ko dekh raha tha ...woh yeh dekh kar khush bhi tha ki shabir ke abbu ki maut uske apne bete ke haatho hue toh dosri tarf dukhi bhi kyuki woh khud apne haatho se usse marna chahta tha ...




Raj ne bade pyaar se naina ko khud se alag kiya naina abhi bhi aakhe band kiye hui thi ...
Raj ne sabse phele bade pyaar se uski bomb wali Jacket nikal de... Aur usse khada kiya ...



Abhi naveen Gunny sab yeh sabkuch dekh rahe the ...woh khush the finally sab thik hone jaa raha tha ...



Naveen undono ke pas jane he wala tha ki tabhi


Shabir ne apne abbu ko bachane ke liye chilana shuru kar diya ...

Shabir : (crying) abbu aankhe kholiye please abbu apne bete ki taraf dekhey... Koi humari madad karo please hume humare abbu ko hospital le jana hain ...




Naina ne uski baat sunn kar uski taraf dekha ... Jab naina ne usse uss halat me dekha toh usse samjh nahi aaya ki woh kya mehsoos kare khush ho ki aaj uska aant hua hain jisne uski zindagi barbad ki yaa dukhi ho ki aaj usse uski maut ka dukh nahi hain jisne usse bachpan me ek abbu ki tarha pyaar kiya ...
Uske marne ka dukh isliye manaye ki usse khud usse marne ka moka nahi mila yaa isliye ki woh itni asan maut mar gaya ...
Itni asan maut ???? Uski zindagi narak se bhi batar banane ke baad khud itni asan maut kase mar sakta tha woh ...




Naina bhag kar uske pas gayi aur uski saase check karne lagi uski shakal pe pareshani saaf dekh rahi thi ... Sab naina ke ase behavior se haran the shayad shabir bhi ...



Sabko laga ki naina ko uss aadmi ki fikar ho rahi thi par agale he pal jab naina ne bolna shuru kiya toh sabko pata chala ki woh naina ki fikar nahi uski nafrat aur gussa tha ...


Naina : (holding his collar ) tum ase nahi mar sakte (gusse me chillate hue) meri puri zindagi barbad karne ke baad khud itni asam maut kase mar sakte ho tum ...


Yeh kah kar naina uski lash ko marne lagi paglo ki tarha ...abhi usse chate marti toh kabhi usse hila kar uthane ki koshish karti ...

Shabir ko yeh dekh kar gussa aa gaya woh naina ko marne ke liye uske gale pe haath rakhne he wala tha ki Gunny ne uska haath pakad liya ...


Gunny : (angrily) ek aur bar usse haath lagane ki koshish ki toh tujhe jaan se mar duga ...


Naveen aur Raj Naina ko samhalne me lag gaye ...Naina bas ek he baat bar bar bole jaa rahi thi ki jis insaan ne uski zindagi narak se batar banayi woh khud itni asani se kase mar sakta tha ...



Dosri taraf shabir aur uske kuch bache hue saath bach nikalne ki koshish karne lagi ...



Aur iss bar raj ne naina ko khud se kuch pal ke liye dor kiya aur shabbir ko marne laga ...



Kamre me charo taraf bas yahi nazara tha sare officers terriost ko marne me lage the aur naina uss aadmi ke samne baith kar sirf uski kash dekhne me lagi thi aaj jab usse khush hona chaheyi phir bhi woh khush nahi thi ...


Kab kya hua naina ko pata he nahi chala usse tab hosh aaya jab shabir uske pairo me aa gira ...
Naina ne jab nazar utha ke dekha toh room me bache hue terrorist bhi mar chuke the bas ek shabir he bacha tha aur woh bhi apni jaan ki bheekh maang raha tha naina se ...



Naveen : (naina ke kandhe pe haath rakhte hue) aaj apna badla lele bacha ...aaj yahi issi waqt apne andar ke dard ko khatam karde ...aaj ke baad koi dard nahi bachna chahiye tere andar ...



Tabhi Raj Naina ke samne aaya aur ek gun naina ki taraf badha di ...



Raj : aaj apne andar ki aag bujha lo naina ... just finish him ...



Naina ek bar raj ko toh ek bar gun ko dekh rahi thi aur dosri taraf shabir naina kr pairo me gir ke maafi maage jaa raha tha ...


Iss bar naina ne bina kuch soche raj ke haath se gun le aur sari ki sari goliya shabir ke seene me utar de goliya khatam hone ke baad bhi naina bar bar trigger badaye jaa rahi thi ...
Uska gussa uski frustration uski nafrat sab kuch jase ek saath bahar aa raha tha ...


Naina ki halat dekh kar raj ne jabardasti naina ke haath se gun chini jisme ab goli toh nahi thi par phir bhi naina uski trigger itne gusse me badaye jaa rahi thi mano woh mare hue shabir ko ek nahi hazar maut marna chahti thi ...

Naina naveen ke gale lage rooye jaa rahi thi ...aaj naveen aur raj dono ko laga ki shayad pheli bar naina bina kisi fikar ke bina kisi planning ke bina yeh soche ki dosro ko kya btana hain kya chupana hain ...kitna sach kitna jhoot bolna hain ...har ek baat se befikar bas apna dard bate jaa rahi thi ...


Naina ko pata he nahi chala ki woh kab rote rote behosh ho gayi ...


End of part 33



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