* Ek Ajnabi Rishta * Rajveer Naina (lrl) 2 thread complete

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Omggg... Second thread ... Seriously????



M i dreaming well not really 😳 thanks for ur so much love guys i really hope aap sabko aage bhi yeh story itni he interesting lage jase abhi lag rahi h ...


once again thank u all for ur unconditionall love 😃



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*** Ek Ajnabi Rishta*****



Part 16


Raj : (controlling his anger)to orderlies) KMA se bahar jane wale sare raste band kardo aur Naina ko dhundhna suru karo jase he woh mile usse arrest kar lena thats my order ...



Raj ki baat sunn kar sabhi shocked ho gaye khas taur se Naveen ...




Isse phele ki koi kuch tarta ...tabhi ek aawaz aayi
"""Yaha kya ho raha hain""""


Sabne Assembly hall ke door ki taraf dekha toh Naina waha khadi thi



Naveen turant ja kar Naina ko hug kar leta hain



Naveen : (cupped her face) kaha chali gayi thi tu ...kab se hum tujhe dhundh rahe the ...


Naina : bhai main toh lake ke pas baithi thi ...



Abhimanyu : lake?????par aap waha kya kar rahi thi itni raat ko ...hum sab apko apke room me naa pa kar ghabra gaye the ...


Naveen : (gritting his teeth) thank god tu sahi time pe wapas aa gayi bacha ...(looking towards Raj) nahi toh kuch log tujhe bina wajaha arrest karne ki planning kar rahe the ...chal ab yaha se
(Yeh kah kar Naveen Naina ka haath pakad kar le jaa raha tha)




Naina shocked ho kar Naveen ko dekh rahi thi...


Raj : Naveen please mujhe meri investigation puri karne de yaar please... (To Naina) koi sabut hain tumhare pas ki tum yaha lake ke pas gayi thi ????
aur wase tum gayi he kyu thi wahaa .
Naina itni raat ko waha akele jane ka kya mtlab hain ,,... (rudely) yaa phir asa kuch hain jo tum hum sabse chupane ki koshish kar rahi ho ... Tum waha kyu gayi thi ...(little angrily) bolo...




Naina Raj ki baat sunn kar shocked toh thi he par shayad sach me kuch asa tha jo woh chupa rahi thi Raj aur baki sabse uske
...maathe(forehead) ki shikant bata rahi thi yeh



Naina : (tensed) main ...main kuch nahi chupa rahi hu apse Rajveer ji ...




Isse phele ki koi kuch bolta waha suri ji aa gayi



Suri ji : (to Raj) sir ji Naina putar ke saath main tha lake ke pas hum waha kareeb ek ghante se baithe baatein kar rahe the ...



Raj : (surprised) aap the Naina ke saath???? Par aap waha kya kar rahe the


Suri ji : sir ji maine Naina putar ko waha jate hue dekha woh bhi akele toh socha main bhi uske saath chala jata hu woh kya hain na akele waha jati toh thik nahi hota bas isliye uske saath waha chala gaya tha maine ...
(cheerfully) aur hum dono waha kareeb ek ghante se baithe gappe mar rahe the


Suriji ki baat sunn kar Raj ko thodi harani toh hue par usne kuch nahi kaha



Naveen : ab agar apki enquiry puri ho gayi ho toh kya main apne behen ko yaha se le kar jau...



Yeh kah kar Naveen gusse me Naina ka haath pakad kar usse waha se le gaya

Dhere dhere sab waha se chale gaye siwaye Raj ko chod kar woh abhi bhi wahi khada apni souch me gum tha...




Naina ne room me jaa kar Naveen se baat karne ki bohat koshish ki par Naveen ne Naina ke kisi sawal ka jawab nahi diya ...



Aaj pure KMA me ek ajeeb se khamoshi chhai hue thi ..
Jis kma me in teeno ki dosti ki gahrai dekhi thi aaj ussi kma ne inki dohriya bhi dekhli...




Naveen Naina ko kisi tarah sula kar abhimanyu ke kamre ke jata hain jaha phele se he abhimanyu pareshan baitha tha...



In abhimanyu room


Naveen : (angrily) dimak kharab ho gaya hain iska abhi ...
woh asa soch bhi kase sakta hain meri behen ke bare me ...


Abhi : (confused) yeh toh hume bhi samajh nahi aa raha ki Raj ne asa kyu behave kiya ...
hume lagta hain jarur koi baat hain jis wajaha se unhone asa behave kiya varna Raj Naina pe ase ilzam nahi lagate ...




CHALO KOI TOH HAIN JISE YEH LAGTA HAIN KI JO MAINE KIYA WOH KISI WAJAH SE KIYA HAIN...


yeh baat sunn kar abhi aur Naveen ne door ki taraf dekha toh waha Raj khada tha




Raj ko dekh kar Naveen ne apna muh gusse me dosri taraf kar liya...


Naveen : (little childishly) isko bol yaha se jaye mujhe isse baat nahi karni,.


Naveen ka asa bacho jasa behavior dekh kar raj aur abhimanyu dono ke chahre pe smile aa gayi ...



Raj : agar koi mujhse baat he nahi karega toh main usse kase btauga ki maine asa behave kyu kiya ????
(Seriously) Naveen mujhe lagta hain Naina kisi problem me hain



Naveen : (confused) problem ??? Kasi problem...



Raj : (taking long breath) exactly toh mujhe bhi nhi pata kya aur kasi problem ...
Par kuch hain jo usse pareshan kar raha hain ...
jo woh hum sabse chupa rahi hain ...


Phir Raj Naveen ko mall me jo hua woh sab btata hain ...


Naveen : par raj asa bhi toh ho sakta hain ki woh bas yuhi thoda upset ho ...i mean aaj phele bar woh KMA se bahar nikli hain ...ho sakta hain isliye woh disturb ho ...


Abhimanyu : hume asa nahi lagta Naveen kyuki hum bhi waha the humne bhi gor kiya tha Naina ke behavior me aayi changes ko ..kuch toh hain jo humari nazro se chupa hua hain




Naveen : (angrily) tu bhi chauhan ???? Tujhe bhi lagta hain ki meri behen kuch galat kar rahi hain ???


Raj : (sternly) maine aaj raat Naina ko chup chup kar jate hue dekha tha lake ki taraf ...



Raj ki baat sunn kar abhi aur Naveen dono usse dekhne lage...

Raj : (continue) dinner ke baad mujhe neend nahi aa rahi thi toh main garden me walk kar raha tha tabhi muhje kisi ki aahat lagi... jab maine waha dekha toh Naina sabse chupte chupate lake ki taraf jaa rahi thi ...
Kafi pareshan thi woh uska chahra dekh kar koi bhi bta sakta tha ki woh kisi badi musibet me hain ...par isse phele ki main usse jaa kar koi baat karta waha suri ji aa gayi ...aur unhe dekh kar Naina phele toh ghabra gayi par phir usne aase react kiya jase usse koi problem he nahi ho ...aur woh suri ji ke saath lake ke pas chali gayi

(To Naveen) ab bata tujhe kya kahna hain



Naveen ka toh jase ab dimak kaam he nahi kar raha tha usse kuch samjh he nahi aaraha tha ki woh kya kahe kase react kare ...

Naveen : phir tune woh tamasha kyu kiya Naina ke arrest orders dene ka ... Aur agar Naina lake ke pas gayi bhi thi toh iska mtlab yeh nahi ki toh uske arrest orders de...tune khud usse suri ji ke saath jate dekha phir bhi uspe traitor hone ka ilzam laga diya ...



Raj : (irrigated) tu baat kyu nahi samjh raha hain Naveen main yeh nahi kaha raha ki naina traitor hain ...main sirf yeh kah raha hu ki kuch toh galat hain ...
(Apne apko shant karte hue)
Fine ab tu meri baat dhyan se sunn ...
Ho sakta hain ki koi aur Naina ko target karke apna kam nikalna chahta ho ????

Toh khud he soch
Ek din achanak tujhe teri behen mil jate hain jiske milne ki umeed tune barso phele chod de thi ...
Woh behen tujhe milti tab hain jab tu kma ek secret mission pe aata hain ...un triggers ki hifasad karne ke liye jinke peche na jane kitne desh ke dushman pade hain ...
Naina tut chuki thi hum sabne kisi tarah usse wapas purani Naina banaya ...
Phir achanak Naina ke bartav me change aa jata hain woh humse kuch chupane lahti hain ...

Humsab jante hain ki bhele he uska confidence wapas aa gaya ho par woh abhi bhi akele kahi jane se darti hain ...phir woh akele aadhi raat ko kasi lake ke pas chali gayi ???? Tab usse dar kyu nahi laga????


Aaj he kyu triggers ki security todh kar triggers churane ki koshish ki gayi thi ????
Woh bhi tere card se ...
Tera card tere room me hota hain ya tere pas ...aur card churana yeh sirf wahi insan kar sakta hain jo tere kareeb ho..

Naveen kuch gadbad hain par kya hume yeh pata lagana hain


Main yeh nahi kah raha ki jo main kah raha hu woh sab kuch sahi hain ...ho sakta hain main jarurat se jada soch raha hu ... Ho sakta hain do alag chizo ko jod raha hu ...


Ho sakta hain sach me Naina aur iss hadsa ka koi connection na ho sab kuch mere dimak ka khele ho ...par Naveen kuch toh hain Naina ke saath jo sahi nahi hain ... May be koi usse blackmail kar raha ho ...ho sakta hain ki koi usse dara dhamak raha ho ...
Yaa ho sakta hain ki inme se kuch bhi na ho ...


(With pause) Tujhe jara bhi idea hain Naveen agar aaj triggers galat haatho me chale jata toh kya hota ????
Teri puri zindagi barbad ho jati desh khatre me aa jata ...aur Naina woh bhi shak ke daire me aati


Naveen bas ek bar bhai ki nazar se nahi officer ki nazar se dekh ...
hume humara farz kisi pe aakh band karke bharosa karne ki izzazat nahi deti apne pariwar pe bhi nhi...



Aur mera ase behave karni ki ek aur wajah hain ...
(Abhi Naveen raj ko dekhne lagte hain) agar yeh do alag baatein hain aur main bewajah Naina ko shak ke daire me la kar khada kar raha hu toh jo asli mujhrim hain jisne triggers churane ki koshish ki woh befikar ho jayega may be befikari me woh koi galti kar jaye



Naveen : (angrily) tu meri behen ko chara bana raha hain ?????



Raj : (sochte hue) shayad haa..


Abhimanyu : Raj apki har ek baat sahi hain ... Ho sakta hain Naina kisi pressure me ho ya ho sakta hain asa kuch bhi na ho ...ho sakta hain unhone he Naveen ka card leya ho par jab security todne ki koshish ki gayi toh Naina suriji ke saath thi isliye yeh bhi ho sakta hain ki woh koi aur ho jisne yeh kiya maybe koi asa jo Naveen naina ko target karne ki koshish kar raha hain



Raj : exactly !!!! Main bhi yahi kah raha hu chauhan mujhe Naina pe doubt nahi hain par ...
Koi hain jo Naina Naveen ko fasana chahta hain ...
Maybe koi asa jo triggers bhi chahta hain aur naveen Naina ki barbadi bhi ...
Kyuki agar triggers Naveen ke cards se chori hote toh Naveen aur Naina dono he musibet me pad jate ...




Naveen ke to bolti he band ho gayi usse kuch samjh he nahi aa raha tha ki kya sach hain kya jhoot kis baat par yakeen kare ya kis baat par yakeen na kare ..



Kya sach me naina ne asa kuch kiya hain jiska shak hain Raj ko ya phir bas Raj do alag kadio ko jod raha hain ????
Ho sakta hain asa kuch na ho ya yeh bhi jo sakta hain ki sab kuch wasa he ho ...


Par ek baat toh raj ki baat se sabeet hoti hain ki naina pareshan hain par kyu ?????

Ab sara sach jhoot shayad Naina ke iss pareshani me he chupa hua hain ...


Naveen kuch nahi kahta bas chup chap yaha se chala jata hain ...



Abhimanyu Naveen ke peche jane wala tha ki Raj ne usse rok liya



Raj : kuch waqt usse akela rahne de chauhan...



Abhimanyu : (tensed) Raj hume dono ki chinta ho rahi hain
...kuch samjh nahi aa raha ki kya sahi hain aur kya galat
Apko kya lagta hain Naina ke bare me jo aap soch rahe hain woh sach hain ya bas ek waham...




Raj : (taking long breath) Naina ko KMA aaye 3 mahime hone ko hain chauhan hum sabne usse tute, bekhare, khud ko phir samhalte dekha hain jis halat me woh hume mile uski jo halat thi usse dekh kar toh Naina pe shak karne ka sawal he nahi banata ...
Par achanak se Naina ka behavior change hona aur phir yeh triggers churane ki koshish ...
main khud bhi confused ho par sach kahu (with sweet smile) mera dil kahta hain ki woh galat nahi hain ..woh ho he nahi sakti galat ...may be kuch aur hain jo usse pareshan kar raha hain ...
(With sad smile) par mera farz meri wardi (uniform) mujhe mere dil ki baat sunne ki izzat nahi deti ...


(With determination ) par agar koi tesra hain jo inhalato ka faida utha kar ""MERI NAINA "" ko nuksan puchana chata hain toh usse mujhe koi nahi bacha sakta ...


Abhimanyu : (smiling) apka dil kabhi galat ho he nahi sakta Raj ...(teasingly) woh bhi ""APKI NAINA"" ko le kar toh kabhi nahi ...




End of part 16




Sorrryyy
Mjhe pata h ki maine ek he sceen lekha h iss part me but i just want to make it clear ki kya ho raha h kya nahi jo raj soch raha h ya jo uska dil kah raha h woh sahi h ya phir Naveen ki uski behen galat nhi kar sakti




Plz mjhe aap sab ke jawan chaheyi apko kya lagta h ...
Give ur feedback
N i will update next chapter on next Sunday

Part 17



Edited by RNforever - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update di
I loved raj's last statement
Mujhe lagta somebody is framing naina and naveen ya fir agar aap un mysterious writers me se ek ho to vo naina hogi hi nahi uski hamshakal hogi 😉
Continue soon di and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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😭 😭 😭
Itna chhotu SA part 😭
But awsm
Loved it
Raj is truly right
Naveen samajh nhi rha but Raj Sahi h
Mind blowing scene tha
Mate PLZZ cont soon with real.long part
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👏 👏 👏
New thread bahut bahut Mubarak ho 😃
⭐️ 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was Amazing Part.😊
Raj part was so Nice.😊
Naina Part was so Interesting.😊
Naveen and Abhimanyu Conversation was so Interesting.😊
Raj doubts on Naina but still he thinks that she can't do like that,it was so Nice.😊
Even Raj want to trust Naina but he can't do it,it was so sad.😭
I Hope everything will be fine.😊
Please Update Next Part soon.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
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update...raj KO naina par dout hai but Naveen manne ko tayaar nahi...aur Ho bhi kise behan hai uski...plzzz ab jaldi RN Ki love story start karo...can't wait for it
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sorry I forgot , congratulations for the new thread🥳
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Nice one update soon ... please ... and yup do PM..
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Congrats on the new thread.
It's a single scene but with clarity
Naina ki pareshani dur hojaye aur Raj se apni dil ki baat batade.
Take care and update soon

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