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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: vssdp

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yr tumhari asi shakal dekh kar mjhe ravan wali feeling aa rahi h ji kar raha h ravan ki tarha hasu ...
hahahaha ... hahahaha... 😆 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Prasu1095

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Nahi nahi mujhe nahi chahiye oh terrorists...🥱
Lagta hai aage hame aur bhi jhatka lagnewala hai...😭😭
Yaar pls Raina Ko milao...Pls don't seperate them😊


hahahaha..ok ok mat lo un terrorist ko konsa m tumhe unhe godh lene ke liye kah rahi hu 😉
yr wase truly speaking maine iss fic ka end sad socha h jasa real me hua tha 😭
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: RNforever


yr tumhari asi shakal dekh kar mjhe ravan wali feeling aa rahi h ji kar raha h ravan ki tarha hasu ...
hahahaha ... hahahaha... 😆 😆


Ya right, Vahi jo sita ki ek baat nahi maan raha tha
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: RNforever


hahahaha..ok ok mat lo un terrorist ko konsa m tumhe unhe godh lene ke liye kah rahi hu 😉
yr wase truly speaking maine iss fic ka end sad socha h jasa real me hua tha 😭

Nooo... Already serial Mae Raina ko alag kardiya...
Kamse Kam fics Mae toh unki kahani happy ending toh hona chahiye naa...Pls plsss happy ending dena😭
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: RNforever


thanks dear
I m also feeling sad fir her ...
next part me ek naya twist h just wait

i m eagerly waiting for the same...plz update soonnn
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Posted: 7 years ago
Superb update
Continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
Finally saare parts read karke ho gaye mere jo chut gaye the.. tera FF mujhe complete karna hi tha.. ab tu bhi update karde please..

har update mein tune dhamake kiye hain.. before and after evry update i holded my breath.. many times my hearts skipped many beats.. kabhi Rajveer ke liye.. kabhi naveen ke liye bahot bura laga.. lekin ab naina ke liye bhi lag raha hain jaise pehle ke chapters mein lagta tha.. 😭

You are an awesome writer.. you know the trick ke reader ko kaise pakdke rakha jaye.. 😳

waiting for an update 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
*****Ek Ajnabi Rishta****




Part 30




Naveen : no neverrr ...




Yeh kah kar naveen naina ki room ki taraf bhaga ...



Naveen bhagte hue naina ke room me aaya toh naina usse kahin nahi dekhi ... Naveen ka dil joro se dhadakne laga yeh soch kar ke kahin naina chali toh nahi gayi wapas unn terriost ke pas ...
Tabhi washroom ka darwaza khola aur naina bahar aayi uski shakal dekh kar saaf pata chal raha tha ki woh shayad abhi vomiting karke aa rahi hain ...Naina ki aakho ke neeche dark circle the uska chare ka rang pela pad gaya tha ...thakan aur kamjori dono saaf nazar aa rahi thi uske chahre pe... Aaj naveen ne kitne dino baad uski shakal thik se dekhi thi aur uski asi halat dekh kar woh maan he maan khud ko kos raha tha ...




Naveen naina ki taraf kadam badhata hain ...Naina kisi ki aahat sunn kar uss taraf dekhti hain toh naveen usse uski taraf aata nazar aa raha tha naina naveen ki aakho ne aasu dekh kar usse harani se dekhti hain tabhi uski nazar naveen ki haath pe lagi chot par jati hain...



Naina : (panicked) bhai yeh kya hua .. (naina naveen ke pas jaa kar jhut se uska haath apne haatho me le leti hain...) Itna khoon beh raha hain ..bhabhi kaha hain unhone apki chot pe dawa nahi lagayi ...rukiye mein laga deti hu ...




Naina naveen ka haath pakad kar usse bed pe baithati hain aur first aid kit le kar aati hain ...



Naina naveen ke haatha pe dawa lagane suru kar diya naina ke aakho me aasu the naveen ki chot dekh kar aur naveen ki aakho me bhi aasu the par apne dard ke nahi apni behen ke dard ke bare me soch ke ...


Naina naveen ko dante jaa rahi thi itne careless rahe ke liye par naveen ko toh kuch sunayi he nahi de raha tha woh bas naina ko dekhe jaa raha tha ...



Naveen : apne bhai ko maaf karde gudiya ...



Naina naveen ko mafi magta hua dekh haran ho gayi ussi samjh nahi aaya ki naveen usse maafi kyu mang raha tha ...jab naina ne naveen ki shakal dhyan se dekhi toh usse aaj naveen ki aakho me na gussa dekha na nafrat jo woh pichle kuch dino se dekh rahi thi aaj uski aakho me kuch tha toh woh sirf dard aur pachtawa...




Naveen : (haath jodte hue) please gudiya maaf karde apne bhai ko... jab mujhe tera sahara bana chaheyi tha teri dhal ban kar tujhe bachana chahiye tha tab mein tujhse lad raha tha bura bhala bol raha tha ...


Naina haran ho kar dekh rahi thi naveen ko tabhi uski nazar darwaze ki taraf gayi jaha raj alekh abhimanyu aur saath me woh khada tha jiski phechan aaj tak KMA me sabse chupi hui thi...



Naina raj aur baki sabke saath Gunny ko dekh kar samjh gayi ki Gunny ne unhe sab bata diya hain...




Naina : (shocked) how could you ????




Gunny : naina mein sirf tujhe bachane ke liye kar raha hu yeh sab ...


Naina gusse me bed se uth kar khadi ho jati hain ...


Naina : (angrily) bachane ke liye ???? Kuch bacha bhi hain ab mere pas jo tum bachao gay Gunny ??? Kyu bhai aur baki sabki jaan khatre me dal rahe ho ...



Naina Gunny ki taraf apne kadam badha he rahi thi ki naveen ne uska haath pakad liya ...


Naveen : (holding her wrist) bas kar gudiya apne dard ko apne gusse me chupana band kar ...dard batne se ghata hain aur chupane se badhta hain ...ab apne dard ko kam karne ka waqt aa gaya hain bohat chupa liya tune jo tujhe chupana tha ...bohat gira liya khud ko humare nazro me ...bohat kuch kar liya tune ab humari bari hain kuch karne ki sirf tera dard kam nahi balki uss dard ki wajah ko jad (root) se ...


Naina gusse me apna haath naveen ke haatho se chudati hain...par tabhi naveen ne kuch mehsoos kiya...




Naveen : (concerned) gudiya tujhe toh bohat tej bukhar hain ...



(Naveen naina ka head pe touch karta hain toh dekhta hain ki naina ka pura sharir bukhar me tab raha tha ...


Naveen : (angrily) tujhe itni tez bukhar hain aur tu hain ki aram karne ki jagha en faltu ki baato me lagi hain...




Naina : (angrily) please bhai yeh dekhawa karne ki koi jarurat nahi hain apko ... Meri itni he fikar thi toh kyu mera haath tab chod diya jab mujhe apke saath ki sabse jada jarurat thi ... Mere bache ki maut ke liye mujhe doshi btaya jab mujhe kisi ke kandhe ki jarurat thi tab aapne mera haath thamna toh dur ki baat hain mujhe khud se itna dur kar diya ki meri aawaz bhi aap tak na pouch paye...aur ab jab Gunny ne apko sach bata diya toh aap yaha jhoota dekhawa karne ,...




Naveen naina ki baato ka bura laga par woh yeh bhi janta tha ki naina ne jo kaha bilkul sach kaha naveen ne usse rishta tod he liya tha woh toh Gunny ke sach jane ke baad uske pas wapas aaya tha ...




Naveen : (overcoming his guilt ) tujhe jo bolna hain bolti rahna main sab sunne ko taiyar hu par abhi ke liye aaram kar ...




Naveen ne iske aage Naina ko kuch bolne he nahi diya uska haath pakad kar jabardasti usse bed par leta diya aur alekh ko shalini ko buland ke liye bheja ...




Room me ek aaj
Jeeb se khamoshi thi koi kuch nahi bol raha tha par sabki aakhe bohat kuch bol rahi thi ...
Naina jab jab raj ki taraf dekhti toh raj usse he dekhta hua nazar aata par jase he dono ki nazre milti raj sharam se apni rahte nechi kar leta ...



Naina : (smirked) kya baat hain Major shekhawat aap apne nazre kyu chura rahe hain ... kahi isliye toh nahi ki apne mujhe mere mare hue bache ka ek bar chahra bhi nahi dekhne diya uss bache ka jisi mein mahino se apne kokh ne paal rahi thi yaa phir isliye jo uss din apne hospital me kiya tha ...


Raj Naina ki baatein sunn raha tha ser jhukaye usske muh se ek lafz bhi nahi nikal raha tha aaj ...woh janta tha anjane me he sahi usne kitna bada gunha kiya hain...kitni badi nainsafi ki hain naina ke saath ...




Naina : (sadly smiling) don't worry mein apko blame nahi kar rahi hu jo kuch bhi hua uske liye ...wase bhi mere aur mere bache ka kuch asa he aant hona tha...jab uske baap ka he aata pata nahi tha toh woh iss duniya me aa kar bhi kya karte ...usse bas logo ki baatein he sunni padti jase ab uske maa har kisi ki baatein sunn rahi hain...



Raj Naina ko kuch bolne he wala tha ki shalini waha aa gayi ...




Shalini ne naina ka check up kiya aur usse medicine khila kar sula diya ...



Shalini gusse se raj aur baki sabko dekh rahi thi ...
Usse yeh toh nahi pata tha ki kya problem hain unsabke bech par itna jarur pata tha ki jab naina ko inke support ki sabse jada jarurat thi toh in sabne muh phire liya tha usse pechele 4 din me kisi ne naina ki taraf dekha bhi nahi thi ...




Shalini ne sabko bahar jane ke liye kah diya aur sab bina kuch kahe waha se chup chap chale gaye ...



Aaj pheli bar raj apne aap ko gunehgaar mehsoos kar raha tha... Usne jo naina ke saath kiya hospital me usse woh khud ki he nazro me gir gaya aaj usse khud me aur unn terriost me khuch khas farak nazar nahi aa raha tha unlogo ne apna ego satisfy karne ke liye naina ke saath woh sab kiya aur raj ne khud ke andar ka gussa nikalne ke liye ...
Mana ki raj ne sahi waqt par apne kadam rok liye the par yeh bhi sach tha ki usne apne aur naina ke bech ke rishte ke uss pakh dhage (thread) ko tod diya tha ab bhagwan he jane ki naina usse kabhi maaf karegi bhi yaa nahi ...
Aur usse bhi bada gunha usse naina ko uske bache ki shakal na dekha kar hua tha jiske liye naina usse maaf kare ya na kare woh khud ko kabhi maaf nahi kar paye ga ...


Raj jaha apne guilt me mara jaa raha tha wahi naveen bhi ser jhukaye woh sab pal yaad kar raha tha jo usne naina ke saath bataiye the ...


Pure din kisi ne naina ko disturb nahi kiya raat me bohat himaat karke jab room me gaya toh room khali tha naina kahi nahi thi ...
Table pe ek kagaz ka tukda tha jispe aaj raj ki zindagi ka fasla likha hua tha ...


Letter padhte he raj ki duniya ek pal me khatam ho gayi ...



I AM SORRY ...

bas yahi lekha tha uss letter me par raj ache se janta tha ki yeh kisne aur kyu lekha hain ...aaj ek pal me he sari duniya tabha ho gayi thi unki ...



End of part ...



part 31


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Edited by RNforever - 7 years ago
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Emotional update. Naina kaha gyi

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