Seven Vows Part 3 -Part 259 Page 147 - Page 109

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Posted: 8 years ago
Loved it when vindhya said that it was the most stupid question n sudhirs reaction to it.
Tilak ko kya hua how come he has become a match maker n is nibhaying that so well. How come sudhir hasn't understood what tilak is trying to do?
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Posted: 8 years ago
@Ria when you know what is happening, and you want to support you play along
@Beautiful rajput ka band bajne ka time aa gaya

@Padma it is not time, when you use the time right way, things fall in piece. That was what Sudhir made Sree do in Jagratha. Take the pain, to eliminate the pain of many

@rakhee who can stop Vindhya. Yup ball dance is coming.

@swati Tilak has understood what Sree-Suman feels for each other. Ab he wants them to be together so what else do you expect. You think Sudhir ka dimaag working condition nahi hai. You will know in next update.
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Posted: 8 years ago
So that means next update is the conversation?
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Posted: 8 years ago
Ohh now a ball dance on its way...Excited for SreeMan romantic dance...it all started with dance only for them naa...They will almost complete a full circle with this!!!!And Rajputs time is over...it's just a matter of some days before they will lost all their pretense and will stand exposed!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
This is one dance ajay. I have one more dance planned, when everything comes out in the open 😃, I mean a real romantic one.
Edited by shruthiravi - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: shruthiravi

This is one dance ajay. I have one more dance planned, when everything comes out in the open😃, I mean a real romantic one.


Wow...that's great...Waiting...serve it fast!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: JRia

So that means next update is the conversation?



I hope it is waiting for it very eagerly
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Posted: 8 years ago

Chapter 256- The Dance Competition

" Hello everyone, now listen these are the rules of the competition. Each couple will be in a square on the dance floor. Once you do that we are going to stick these off white papers on the border of the squares. So once the music starts you are supposed to dance with your partner within the square. Once the music is over we will check the papers on the border. If we see feet mark on the paper then that couple is out. So this process of elimination will continue till we have one couple. So can everyone please move to one square" asked the DJ while some girls stood with papers to stick on the border of squares.

Sreedhar, Suman, Tilak, Renu and Sudhir, Vindhya stood in nearby squares. Suman was not even looking at Sreedhar. She kept her head bowed. Sreedhar too was nervous. He looked around. There were around thirty couples.

Seeing them like that Tilak moved towards Sreedhar and whispered

" Sree this is a dance competition. You both know dance. You are not standing here hiding anything from anyone. We all know why you are made to stand here. Don't think about anything else. Just dance "

" Suman Maa has asked you to enjoy every moment of being in Singapore. So enjoy these moments also " told Sudhir.

Suman and Sreedhar looked at them, while Tilak and Sudhir also looked at each other.

" Sreedhar the story written in eyes cannot be hidden for long. We will discuss about that post this party. I feel all four of us know what you feel about each other. And that is all that matters now " told Tilak smiling at Sudhir. Sudhir too smiled back. He was not surprised. From the moment Tilak Bhaiyya had sent both Sree and Suman in the same tram he had guessed it.

Sreedhar looked startled and Suman blushed as both Renu and Vindhya smiled at them. Meanwhile the volunteers asked them to move to their respective squares so that they can stick the papers.

Once they finished sticking the papers once again the DJ announced

" Since this party is for the Indian diaspora in Singapore we will have some Bollywood hits for this event. We will first have slow song, as the number of couples becomes less music will move faster. Rule remain the same, you have to be within the square. So I am counting down from ten, when I reach zero music will start. So get prepared"

As she started counting down Sreedhar held his hand, Suman took it, keeping her other hand on his shoulder, while he held her waist and they looked at each other. Sreedhar saw her face was glowing and Suman saw his eyes filled with love for her as the DJ shouted zero.

First song was the slow romantic number " Dheere, Dheere se meri zindagi mein aana" . Sreedhar gently groved with Suman for that. They didn't need to put much strain, it was soft music.

Meanwhile Vindhya stepped on Sudhir and he had to step back and it repeated two three times. Music stopped after the first stanza. The DJ and her associates walked around. It was obvious more than once Sudhir had stepped on the border and they were eliminated. Renu and Tilak had survived the first round.

Once outside the floor Sudhir told " It was the best oppourtunity to be romantic and you have spoiled it "

" My dear husband, we are going to see free romance watch Sreedhar and Suman standing here. Standing there and dancing is not at all my cup of tea " told Vindhya and they both laughed as the second round started.

It was " Mein Koi Aisa Geeth Gaon " a little more faster song. Sreedhar swayed Suman in his arms and she laughed as she put steps with him in perfect sync.

After second round even Renu and Tilak were also eliminated. They joined Sudhir and Vindhya and looked at Sreedhar and Suman who had moved to third round with twelve other couples.

Suman looked at Sreedhar " Sreedhar shall we get out in this round" she asked.

" Sumi Bhaiyya told just to dance, if by just dancing we get out let that be, but we are not going to get out for the sake of it" told Sreedhar as the next song started. It was a little fast number " ye Kali, Kali aankhein " from Baazigar.

Sreedhar and Suman danced together in the same round but with increased speed. Not once their feet came onto the paper, they moved in perfect rhythm and synchronization.

" Sudhir I never expected them to have such coordination " told Tilak.

" Bhaiyya this is trailer, movie mostly you will see for the last round " told Sudhir as the music stopped and only six couples remained, Sreedhar and Suman one among them.

" Now everyone in this round there is no inspection after the music stops. We have only six couples so if you step on the paper you will be eliminated. If a volunteer tap your shoulder please move out of the dance floor quietly so that others are not disturbed. Song will play till one couple remain. "

The song of final round started. It was a really fast number " Are Are ye kya hua " from Dil toh Pagal hai. When the second stanza started only Suman and Sreedhar were on the floor grooving perfectly to the music and dancing in that square only. Everyone was mesmerized and the DJ didn't stop the performance. As the song came to a close Suman did three perfect waltz and Sreedhar held her and they both were within the square.

Loud applause followed for their performance as everyone congratulated them. Mrs Mehta who asked them to come on stage told that the couple who won the dance competition was not actually couple but brother in law and sister in law. It was an irony. Suman and Sreedhar smiled. Suman told she is a trained Kathak dancer and Sreedhar told dancing is his hobby and he had danced in college. Mr Mehta handed them a small trophy and then there some more small games and then dinner.

Finally the Varma family bade good bye to their host telling that they had a wonderful time and Mr Mehta told he was happy to start this new partnership with them on both wholesale and retail.

Once they reached the room Tilak called everyone to their suite and teasingly asked Sreedhar.

" So my dear brother tell me when did you fall for your so called bhabi "

Sreedhar looked at Tilak, his eyes brimming with tears " From college " he told. Tilak and Renu looked at him stunned.

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Posted: 8 years ago
The last line ,the ans from Sree To Tilak said everything...
now more revelation for Renu n Tilak
loved the dance moments
waiting for next part

Edited by Krishna_Sourav - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow that was awesome competition and Sree and Suman won 😃
Yeah as Rakhi mentioned Sree's reply said everything to Tilak
Tilak and Renu the news would be super shock..
Tilak will know what his question would have done to Sreedhar ... phew waiting desperately for next 😊
Edited by queenbee001 - 8 years ago

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