~~~ Ahesus pyar ki ( A Kabir & Ananya.ff) part= 6 page= 18 updated - Page 8

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Posted: 8 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: duttarimi678

Haii dear_

Hay I loved it
The way u start this ff just great.
So Kabir is an action scene
I love to watch it.
Cont soon.
Please please please pm me when update.


Haii
Di,
Thank u for commenting
Yeh Kabir is now turned action hero. I surely pm u.








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Posted: 8 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: vssdp

Finally entry of our hero Kabir

Awesome update
Continue soon and thanks for the pm


Haii
di,
Thanks.keep commenting.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: npksk8495

Superb update!!!👏
finally hero ki entry ho gayi aur heroine ke sath first meeting bhi😛 dekhte hain aage kya hota hai!!! 😛
Continue soon and Thanks for the pm!!!😛





Thanks
Di,
Humm aage to bahut kuch honewala hain.
Just keep reading & commenting.

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Posted: 8 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: Avinanda120

Haii dear,

Very well done
Kabir is now on track.
Ha ha ha so kabir is now acting in Romi 's
Character.
Good one
I really liked it.
Keep it up.
Oh ha ha ha
I can't stop my laughing.



Haii
Di,
Thank u.
Yeh Kabir is in.😆😆😉

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Posted: 8 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: akriti120

Haii

Agni
Tumhari kahani bahut hi acchi hain.
Bahut din baad koi kahani Hindi me padne ko milk.
Jo ki apne aap me mishhaal hain
Yakeen Mano aaj ke jamane me bhi mujhe Hindi me likhna aacche late hai mm.
Maine abhi abhi forum me aaye hu. Or ff bhibhag me yaatehi tumhari ff padi to mujhe bahut acchi lagi 1 se ke kar 3 part ak hi bari me pad lia .
Maine bahut hi maze ke saath padi.

Isle baad jab bhi aap naye part likho to mujhe pm bhej dena.


. . Haii
Di,
Oh I am really very happy
U know jabse yeh fix start ki
hain newbies ne first comment lie hain.
Yes di hindi me likhne ke lie meri ek dost ne mujse kahi thi.
I surely pm u.
Please keep commenting




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Posted: 8 years ago
#76





Hello
Guys
I try to update 4th part. But I can't. I tried 3 times but all in vain.Because that stupid Airtel network. I really sorry guys .
Please wait for sometime.

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Posted: 8 years ago
#77


Hii,
dear friends
I specially thanks to my all readers who praised me to write this ff.


Here is the 4th part.


Ahesus pyar
Ki

Part = 4




Coffe house
Kabir is now thought he is disturb them. He noticed they are not in that state to talk to him.So he says " uncle main baad me aata hu aaplog battien kariye. " He returned to go outside.

" Kabir please stop. Mujhe tumse ek bahut jaruri kam hain. Please be seated." Sudhir Ji said with a smile

Kabir sat down & see Ananya looked at him .But when his gaze meet her she avoid his gaze & look another side. Kabir feels she is not well. He thought Ananya doesn't liked his presence. He says in hurriedly" yes uncle aapne mujhe Kqun bulaya?"

Sudhir Ji is thinking deeply. Finally he said " Kabir u know main tum par bahut trust karta hu. Kya tum mere lie ek kam kar sakte ho? Yeh bahut hi important hain. Is lie batane se pahele main Janna chahata hu ki tum mujpe kitna trust karte ho? Main jo bhi karne ke lie kahu kya tum wo karne ke lie ready ho without doubt? "

Kabir is now restless .He knew something is not right. If he agreed then he also in deep trouble. Next moment his inner voice said Sudhir uncle ne kya kuch nahi kia tere lie. Are agar tu zinda hain to wo bhi serf uncle ki vaja se.Or darr tujhe kis baat ka darr hain is dunia me tera hain hi koun Tinu or uncle ko chodke .Jo bhi ho dekha jayega.

His thought is breaking by the sound of her mobile. She said " excuse me papa & went outside.

" Hello Romi"

Haii sweety? How'r u? How's your day?

" Romi I am not fine u know na mumma is waiting egarly to meet u. Ahh are u talk to your home ?"
" Ananya r u kidding ?This is not a game . Aree let's enjoy dear, I am coming next month then we goes to our fav place. How about a date?"

Ananya is now confused .She can't stand this.He knows her mother is not well till he think his enjoyment He I fact doesn't interested how her mother is ? She cut the phone.


Here in coffee house Sudhirji told him hole history. Kabir look into Sudhirji eyes which is now moist.

Kabir main bus itna chahata hu yeh jo pyar name ki black cloth meri Anu ki face ko cover karke rakkha hain use hata do. Use yeh ahesus hone do actually "Pyar ka Ahesus" hota kya hain? Kabir tumhe " Romi" banke Nita se milna hoga."

Kabir is stunned. . He can't think even in dream that Sudhir uncle said him. He stands abruptly & turned ." sorry uncle main... .this is not possible. "


That time he see Ananya is coming . The last thing he wished to see is she being so disturbed. It somehow hurt him. Her eyes are so lost so void it irked him . He is confused why he can't see her in that situation ?
Sudhir Ji notice his restlessness when he see Ananya . He smiles innerwardly.

" Kabir I know this is crazy idea but please seat down. I have no choice. Main use istara nahi dekh sakta. OK main tumpe zor nahi deal sakta. Main or kisise yeh kum karva Sakta par har koi Kabir nahi. Ahhh sorry for waisting your precious time. Anu beti chal dekhte hain or koi rasta nikalta hain kya.

Ananya is now on anger. Her mood is not right. Anybody can clearly figure out this. She said
" papa see Maine aapse kahi thi na
that he is..."oh he is nothing but a back boneless man . "

Kabir is now on fire. He think ok madam I will teach u how to behave a person.

He said with a smark." Oh madam pahele insaano se battien karna to shikh lo phir aa Jana help mangne, help tumhe chahiye mujhe nahi. Wo to uncle ne mujse madat mangi hain isilie."

" How dare u? Do u know who am I? Tumhari himmat kaise hui ? Papa papa let's go."


" oh madam aapki yeh English me baattien aapne pass hi bacha kar rakhye aapki us boy friend ke lie. Or rahi baat aapki to aap ek ziddi , ghamandi , bade gharki bigdi hui ladki hain jisse logo se baattien karne ki tarika bhi nahi aati."
" you ? She said in astonished. Kabir is the first person who said this tough word for her. She is pampered most by her brother & father.
" u uncivilized , brut, I will kill u.How did u said this? PAPA PAPA please go. I can't stay here for 1 sec.
Let's find someone actor who can act this role."


Sudhir Ji who stay silent & watched
This time he speak " stop Anu I say just stop. Yeh kya tum dono bacche ki tara kqun lad rahe ho.Itna bhi khayal nahi yeh coffee shop hain log dekh rahe hain."

At this they looks their surroundings & Kabir turned to go outside.

" Kabir stop. Wohi ruk jao. Tum mujhe apni papa mante ho na. Then stop.Samaj lo papa ki order hain." Kabir is now stop but his back is facing Ananya.
" Ananya Sudhir Ji said in rude tone shayed tumhe yeh nahi pata ki aaj ek strike ki vaja se koi bhi actor kum pe nahi aaya. Phir bhi agar tum kisiko dhund sakti ho to dhound lo. "

Ananya is now in big trouble. She knew that she can't do this herself. . she think " oh papa bhi na pata nahi ab is Kabir ko to arrrhhh ...uski to.dekh lungi isse huhhh .mujse aaisi ... Jada mat soch ek hi din ki to baat hain."


" Ananya what do u think ? Are u ready to work with Kabir?"
" yeh papa .I have no choice .
but papa can he convince mumma ? U know na ..."

" Kabir are u ready for this ?

Kabir turned & carefully takes a look on her face. She is smarked at him. Clearly challenging him. His heart swelles as soon as his eyes met hers.

He agreed . He loves challenges. He try to teach her with her own language. " Ok uncle main try kar sakta hu. Par main Romit ke bare me kuch nahi janta pahele janna chahata hu."

Sudhir Ji is overjoyed now. " Ahh Kabir wo sab tumhe Anu samjha degi . Don't worry . Anu beti chale mere gharme chalte hain. Wohi sab clear kar lena."




Sudhir ji ' s room

Well dear friend I can't describe this home .Its a bachelors room. Some photos of Ananya , Armaan' s were hanging in wall. Ananya first time come to his room." Papa mumma ki photos nahi hain she said in curiosity. "

"Ananya beta Jo humesha aapne same ho uski photo ki kya jarurat?"
She think " kya Romi bhi mujhe utnahi pyar karta hain kitna papa mumma se karte hain? "

Anu beti time bahut kam hain .Tu Kabir ko abhi samjha de jara main bhi to jaanu Romi kaisa hain?"

" huh ? Ok papa . To Kabir u know Romi bahut stylish & handsome hain. Ladkiyaan usne piche pagal hain. U know he is just ..." He loves me
only. etc etc. Well friends I know u also not interested in him.


Kabir is not ready to listen Romis
virtue's. He is irreted
" pagalkhane se bhag kar aaya hain kya?"

" what ???"
" Hain pagal ke piche hi to log bhagte hain madam use pakardne ke lie. " he said sercustically.

She make a face " very funny" .OK to tumeh mumma se yeh kahens hain ki A. G industry ki current V. C. ho. Or tum Romit Agarwal ho. Father A.G. Agarwal hain etc . "

Kabir is thinking deeply . He notice how her hole face glittering when she say about Romi. Did he do something wrong? How is it possible that she forget Romi which Sudhir uncle wanted?


" Kabir tum sun rahe ho na? Apni mind me rakh lo.Agar thik se ready nahi hue na mumma jhat se catch kar lengi ki tum Romi nahi ho.
" Ji madam Ji or kuch kahena hain aapko ?" He said with a smile.

" Arrrh yeh kya ? Papa dekho na ? "
" Are ab kya hua? Maine to kuch bhi ..."

" Oh tum na ekdum dumphead ho . Are yeh ji ji kya laga rakkha hain. Koi apni " girl friend " ji madamji kaheta hain kya? Call me " Ananya , or Any or Anu " jaise sabhi kahete hain. " She said irritatedly.

Kabir's heart skipped a beat when she said " girlfriend " . He felt a unknown pleasure in his hurt.

" ok ahh main kaushish karunga or kuch."

" irrmm tumhare pass to blazer ya Reymond shirt ya denim to hoga hi . U know Romi is always
looking trendy.

She looked carefully & touched his soft hair. " Hay u need a haircut."

" kya ?? Oh madam break maro. Tum to bina break ki gadi ki tara chalte hi ja rahe ho. Na to mere pass wo tum kya kahe rahi thi ha denim hain or na mujhe meri hair cut karani hain. Main jaisa hu tumahre same hu." He is now angry.
She is startled.
" ahhh kabir tum samaj nahi rahe ho. Tumeh hair cut karni hi hogi."

" pyar se Ananya . Pyar se kahogi to soch sakta hu."

" Huh !!! Kya kaha tumne ? "This
is the first time when he called her by her name since they met.She is astonished.


Kabir with slight smile." Arre tumne abhi abhi to kaha ki tum meri girlfriend ho. To koi apni boyfriend se is tara baat karta hain kya ? "
This time Kabir's turn & he always win.

Ananya is now speechless. She can't found an appropriate word to answer him. After sometime she said
" Are bah u are a good learner. To Kabir dear please kya hum gents parlur chal sakte hain taki thoda change ho jaye."

" Humm ok " he agreed. Uncle aap bhi chaliye na."
" Haan papa aap bhi chalo na .Orbit mall me chalte hain kuch dresses bhi lene pardenge."

Sudhri ji said to himself " apni beti ke lie kya kya Karna padta hain.main shayed wo pahela father hu jo apni hi beti ko usnee k boyfriend se chudane ke lie dusri boyfriend la raha hu. Oh God in dono ko hi sambhal Lena or Nita ki gusse ko thoda sa hi sahi kam rakhna."


In Mall

Ananya buy a sky blue tea shirt or navvy blue danim & Navy blue blazer for Kabir.

After sometime when he is ready in his new attair Oh he looks outstanding. Every body looks at him with wide eyes. Friends please emazine him in that dress . I know I make u hard work but its ok isn't it?

When Sudhir ji notice him he is overwhelmed & murmurs " wow Kabir is the best choice for my princess."

When Ananya sees him her hurt also skipped a beat .He is looking awesome. Every girl in that mall is praising him. She can't speak just stairs him without winking.


.

OK my dear readers aaj ke lie it nahi. Please stay tune & keep commenting with pleasure.








Edited by Agnishikha007 - 8 years ago
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