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So here is the third part.
Ahesus pyar ki
part = 3
One month later.
Kashyap house
Morning 9 : 30
Anitaji is on bed due to illness. Even she can't drink water herself.
" Maine aapse kaha tha na Mrs Kashyap ki aaisi laparwahi se situations getting worse. I suggest u please admit hospital for further treatment. " Or ammm
he hagited to say
Anitaji with a sad smile " Dr time kitni hain mere pass? Kash Armaan & Ananya settled ho jate
to main khushi khushi ...
Dr thinking deeply , " Jada se Jada 6 month. But u take care of yourself. I think u should inform Sudhir. I know he will come & solved this problems easily. "
Dr uncle" how's mumma today? "says Armaan with concern
" Beta I am ok now . Is Ananya here?"
" yeh mumma I am calling her."
" Dr u may go now . I will think about it "
" Ananya where is Romit ?
I hope he is returned now. Then please call him & fixed a meeting today evening. I have no time to waste."
Ananya is speechless. She can't said Romit hasn't coming yet. He spend their one month more. Due to mother condition she can't give her new stress. Since she know Romi has changed. At first he used to call her everyday but now its ,...
Her thought is breaking by her mother voice. She nodded & think
Armaan give her a helpless look. He knows everything .She try to say
" Mumma abhi to aap thik nahi hue ho. to pahele thik hone ke baad..."
She can't complete sentences stops
" Ananya aaj hi in evening at 7: 00
& you know that Jo late aate hain wo mujhe pasand nahi."
Ananya kuch samaj nahi pa rahi what she do now? What excuses ?
In that time Armaan come into her room.
" gudiyaan kya soch rahi hain? Tu Romi se baat Kqun nahi kar lati? Accha chalte mujhe de.
" Bhaiyya maine phone KIA par he is busy voice message chodi hain. Ab kya karu?
Tu to dad se baattien kar na shayed wo kuch solutions de sake .
Ananya is happy now she know her father is best . " thank u bhaiyya & I love you. ",she kiss his chik .
Later morning at 11 : 30
Ananya is driving. She knows where her father is now . Though she never go but she knew. She stops abruptly . something is happening. She goes to see what was going on?
Chawl
Morning 10 : 30
Sudhir Kashyap Jinke pass kabhi koi bhi cheese ki kami nahi thi balki kuch jadahi thi. Aaj is chawl ke ek chote se ghar me rahete hain. Inka funda hain " nio or jine do ". Sudhir ji thode bindaas hain or zindagi ko khulke jina chahate hain . Horses ka bahut sakh hain inhe .kabhi jokey rahe chuke hain .kya din the wo bhi. Tab he met Anita & they were in love . very soon they were married . Then he joined business & the problems is started.
Now he has a stable. Stable owner depending on him .we can say behalf of owner he is running this stable. At that time he sat a tea stall & enjoyed tea. Then someone call chachaji jaldi chaliye wo ...
" kya hua ? "
Chachaji wo Kabir Bhai phir se us...
Sudhir Ji tej kadmo se chalte rahe the.
Road ke side pe kuch car khadi thi,dekh kar samaj me aa rahi thi ki wo ek garraze hain. Ek
Insaan around 24 to 26 age ek or
Insaan ki same age haath pakadke use dose de raha hain. Jis insaan ka haath pakda hua hain uske sathi jinke halat bhi kuch thik nahi kahe rahe hain
Isbaar maff kar do Kabir Bhai. Galati ho gayi .Aage se aaisa nahi hoga .
Us Insaan ne apni nazre uthayi. Or dekha ki aspass bahut veed jam gayi hain or road bhi block hain .
Us insaan ne kaha " Tinu Tinu na janne kaha chala gaya ? "
"Kabir Bhai main " ek chota 12 saal ka aata hain. Jise Kabir bahut pyar karte hain.lakin ab...
" Bhai ke bacche kahan tha tu. Ja jaldi se road khali kar .Subhe se yeh sab ...
or tu phir se kisi ladki ko
chedne se pahele samaj lena ki wo Kabir ki bahen hain."
Kabir yeh tune accha nahi kia .
Tujhe dekh lunga . yeh Rakesh ka elaka hain.
Kabir raised his eyebrows typical Rajeev style. " jarur jab chahe jaha chahe aa Jana or Jo kuch dekhna hain dekh lena."
Or Elaka kisika hota nahi wo to ..."
Uhaan khade hue sab insaan serf Kabir ko hi dekh rahe the.
Yeh dear friends he is Kabir Jo hum sabki dill pe raj karte hain . Friends I have no word for him.. In fact I think aaisa koi bhi word nahi hain jisse " KABIR " ko describe kia ja sake. He is an aura which is indescribable. So friends please
imagine him in a peach green jeans with a pair of off white round neck tea shirt.He is looking absolutely stunning.
Ananya look at him with wide eyes. Though she doesn't like that type of boy's. But she can't stop herself.She notice his iconic eye which is full of pain. In fact she can feel it. Her inner voice said He is looking outstanding .His tight jaw well toned body make him more attractive. She can't take or her eyes not even a second.
Kabir also notice this. This is not new for him. He knew he has a power any girl can fall for him. But this girl is different. . Her clear gray eyes now clouded. Something bothering her. She is cute..Her crises eyebrows & worrilines clearly said she is in trouble.
"WAIT " From when did he read someone' s eye ? & that too a girl whom he met only 5 minutes ago? What's the problem? He also knew that particular girl is not like him . She thinks he is nothing but a " Sadakchap Gunda"
He chided himself & said
" Abe Tinu jaldi kar na. Or aap side pe khadi ek young & beautiful
girl ko dekh kar kaha
" Aap kya soch kar aayi thi yehaan .janti nahi yeh koi ghumne ki jaga nahi. Or yeh kapde ... he shakes his head
Madam yeh chawl hain chawl. Shopping mall nahi. Aage se insaan ko parakh kar dosti kijie varna Rakesh jaisa hi ..."
I am extremely sorry. Thank u so much. If u not here then... She is in tears."
Tabhi uhaan Sudhir Ji aa gaye
Kabir ki halat dekh kar
" Kya hua Kabir ? tune phirse ladai ki . Main tujhe kitnibaar kaha hain inke muh nahi lagte ,par tu hain ki...
Chal yehaan se Dr ke pass chalte hain tujhe medicine ki bhi jarurat hain. Us ladki ko dekh kar aap bhi ghar chale jaiye."
Ananya dekh rahi thi . Apni.dad ko dekhte hi bahut hi emotional ho gayi thi .She has a verge of tears.
" papa , papa " she cried out &,run.
Sudhir Ji used to meet her near a coffee shop. He doesn't think even on dream ki Ananya his princess come to met him in chawl . He alarmed something is not right. He embressed his daughter & try to come her down.
Kabir is drumstruck. He also can't speak .stay in silence. A mixed imotion is playing in his face. He think give them some privacy.
" Tinu road clear kia .Ab chal yehaan se."
Kabir Bhai Dr chacha ke pass chalo.Ek minute main Rashi di KO bulayi hu .
" Are nahi nahi us nakchadi ko maat bula.Aate hi bhashan chalu karegi."
" Kqun re Kabir kya main hamesha ladti hu? Kya main humesha bhasan deta hu?
Thik hain deta hu to hu par meri
baattien yehaan sunta koun?" One beautiful girl with pink salower
said in anger. She very firstly come & clear his wound & dressing.
Kabir with his signature smile said" Aare nahi re tu to meri sabse acchi or ladaku dost hain.Jo mera har bakhat khayal rakhti hain.
Rashi is melting. Her anger is vanish. She is now happy. She thought how he managed her everytime. She said with smile " Raat ka khana main bana rahi hu Teri pasand ki "Bengan bharta "
Kabir with broad smile "accha tab to roti bhi Jada banana. Tinu aaj to bahut maja aayega."
Tinu is also happy . He is abondoned by her father after his mothers death. Since then he always with Kabir.
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Here Ananya told everything to Sudhirji . He is in deep thought now. They sat in a coffee shop.
Ananya is restless. " please say something papa. What do we do now? Mumma ko tension nahi de sakti. Or such bhi bata nahi sakti. Agar such pata chali mumma kabhi meri saadi Romi se nahi hone denge. I love him papa. "She is in tears.
Sudhirji is so sad . He also think Romi is not right for her.Jis insaan ke pass apni honewali wife ke lie kabhi time hota hi nahi.wo insaan kisiko khush kabhi nahi rakh sakti. Lakin afsos aahi hain Anu ise samaj nahi rahi hain.
He also knows this time if he said her something against Romi she couldn't understand. Because she has a false. cover on her eyes. Sudhir Ji wants Ananya realize this herself very soon. She then also realize what acctually real love is?
That time an idea click in his mind .He smiles & said " Ek idea hain , lakin kya tu use except karegi? "
" kya papa ? She asked with concern.
" dekh tune abhi kaha ki Romi ko kisi ne nahi dekha . Na Armaan or na hi Nita ." she nodded in yes.
" to aaisa karte hain abhi ke lie teri kisi dost ko samjakar Romit Agarwal ke hisaab se introduce karwa de.
" What papa ? Are u crazy? She raised her voice.
"Shhh!!! Anu princess cool down. Dekh Nita ko mujhse Jada ache se koi nahi janta. Agar tu aaj
Romi se nahi milwaya to teri Saadi Nita kabhi nahi hone degi. "
" lakin papa I ..."
" koi jaldbazi nahi.Acchi tara se soch le." He smiles innerwardly .
Ananya thinking deeply but can't solve this problem. At last she surrendered " OK papa i am with u , but mumma knows all of my friends. What if she knows in first meeting that Romi is not real? Whom do u suggest ?
Sudhir Ji pretend he is thinking . After some time he said in deep voice " ek ladka hain meri nazar me agar tum chaho to main baat kar sakta hu ?" Lakin wo...
" To kijie na papa. I hope aap jisse choose kar rahe ho wo man Jaye Romi ki role play karne ke lie.Waise yeh hain koun?"
" Kabir " I think he is the best. I know him very well. He used to call me uncle .
" par who is Kabir papa ? What did he do? Did I know him?
"Sort off. He is currently working under me.Ahhh jab tum yehaan aa rahi thi tab wo kisiko sabak shikha raha tha. "
" wo gunda " she looks in disbeleif. papa how could u ? He was just a ..." U think he can do it ? "
" ANANYA ! STOP " bina Jane kisine bare me aaisa nahi kahete .
OK dusra koi hain tumhari nazar me ? "
She nodded in no. " thik hain aap bulaiyee Kabir ko. She said slowly.
" . Good very good . How's Nita ?
Then he send someone to Kabir.
" Mumma is not ok . She is suffering since one month. In fact mumma is bedridden. Papa please come back . She is crying now.
Sudhirji now almost in tears.
" Aapne mujhe bulaya tha uncle" a very worm voice said.
Ananya turned & see Kabir is standing behind her.
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Edited by Agnishikha007 - 8 years ago
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