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Posted: 20 years ago
#21
LOL happe... for the next few parts mishti goes missing. then she will be back. can't kill her so easily. 😆
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Originally posted by: galsn3105

LOL happe... for the next few parts mishti goes missing. then she will be back. can't kill her so easily. 😆

thanx. I am happy as long as she is missing. 😆

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Posted: 20 years ago
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In the hospital

Kripa regains consiousness. The doctor breaks the news to her. She is devastated. She is crying non-stop. She burries her head in her knees and continues to cry. She refuses to take her medicines. The nurse tries to console her.

Nurse: Kripa, please aapne ko samalo! Kabhi kabhi aisa ho jhata hai. sab Bhagwan ki marze hain! Tum please aapne aap ko sazaa mat do. Aapna dawaii le lo Kripa.

Kripa refuses to even look up. She is still crying!

Nurse: Magar tum bohut lucky ho! Tumari accident tumari pati ke car se hua aur vo tuhe yahan forun lekar aaya. varna, tum mar jhate!

Kripa suddenly looks up. In a meek voice she asks: Pati?

Nurse: Haan. Tumara Pati. Bohut acche insaan hai! Puri raat bahar the. Bohut parishaan lag rehe the! Tumse bohut pyar karte hain! Aise pati iz zamana mein milna bohut lucky hota hai! Ab tum please dawaii ka lo!

The nurse gives her her medicine and Kripa takes them

Kripa to herself: Aab ye Pati kaun ho saakta hai?
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Let me post the next part as well......

Angad comes to see Kripa whenever she's asleep. He doesn't want Kripa to know about him! He feels very guilty! The nurse always notices this and tells Kripa about it when she wakes up

Nurse: Kitna ajeeb hai tumari pati. Jab tum behosh thi, tab tumari paas the. Jab tum hosh mein ho, tub tumari paas nehi hain! Jab tum sote ho tabhi tumhe dekhne ke liye aate hain! Tumari liye kuch lekar bhi nehi aate hain! Bohut ajeeb hai! Maine unse keh diya ki aagle baar jab vo aayenge, tum tumari liye kuch lekar aaye!

Kripa is very confused.

Kripa thinks to herself: ajeeb toh hai! yeh pati kaun hai? Aur aakir chata kya hai?


coming up: Angad and Kripa come face to face!

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Posted: 20 years ago
#25
If you don't continue fast and make it lengther mai tume kacha chaba donga get it fast
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Posted: 20 years ago
#26
plz continue......tum jaldi karo barna mein bhi harshitha ke thara tumhe kacha chaba dungi.......😉😉
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Posted: 20 years ago
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relax..... give me some time, i'll continue.....

ab se tum logon ko intezar karna padega! kyunki meri school monday se shuri ho rahi hai!
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Posted: 20 years ago
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👏lovely lovely. cant wait for them to meet face to face
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Posted: 20 years ago
#29
If you don't continue fast and make it lengther mai tume kacha chaba dunga get it fast
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Posted: 20 years ago
#30

ok i will continue....

Kripa thinks of Angad and what he did to her....She is very sad about thinking of her child too....And then Kripa is confused as to who this person is, who claimed to be her husband and why does he comes only when she is asleep...So, she asks the nurse...

K : Nurse, mere pati kitne baje ate hain roj...I just wan't to make sure i meet him...

N : Apke pati dopahar 1-2 ke bich ate hain....

K : Haan lunch hour mein ate honge...Vo kafi busy hote hain...Mein in daviyon ke vajase so jati hun...any ways thanks

N: U r welcome..

Kripa thinks to her self...I will just have to see today who my pati dev is....Don't know why he is hiding from me...and why he told this lie...

So at around 1 Kripa faces other side of the door and just closes her eyes...Angad as usual comes to see Kripa. He comes closer and at the same time Kripa opens her eyes.....She is shocked to see Angad there...She is angry at the same time she is not able to control her feelings for him..But remembers how he ditched her and how he insulted her so many times...

thats all for now...will post after some time

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