Hogaye Hai Mohabbat..RA Last Part (Pg:43) - Page 18

gr8 part 👏 so my guess was right 😉 but yeh aaima not happening 😕 i hate her 😡 kabab mein haddi 😡 and many more 😡 but shayan how could he 😲 maimal pe chillaya 😡 use rula diya 😭 😭 aur sadaf mein kya burai hai ❓ khud ka sach samne aa gaya to sara ilzam mianal pe dal diya aur khud bhi to bahar gaya tha woh galat nahin tha ❓ he left her crying 😭 i m feeling sad for her 😔 usne to force nahin kiya tha na shaadi ke liye to uspe gussa kyun utar raha hai 😡 i wish aaima dhoke baaz nikle 🐷 aur tab shayan ko pata chalega ki dil ka tootna kiya hota hai 😈 and ofcourse mainal ko sadaf ke saath dosti nahin todni chahiye 👍🏼 chahe shayan ko accha lage ya nahin wo bhi to uski parvah nahin karta waiting for next part 👏 i must say that i luved the concept of ur story it is fantastic superb and simply gr8😊

Chalo good that manial knows about aaima, atleast she'll have no false hopes from shayan.......

Shayan is really too much....khud awara gardiyan karta hai n manial ko daant raha hai....he's trying to hide his guilt...

But manial shouldnt have talked to him...par loved the way she answered back....

Promo- Aha!! to manial is on bagawat i see, phir bahar gayi.....hehehe....gr8.....and is baar bhi shayan ne dekh liya??? lolzz shayan iska peecha karta hai kya??? hehehe

hey who's playing umair (iqbal khan?? )....uska bhi intro karao na!!!

nice part!! continue soon.....part dekhke maine bomb diffuse kar diya...but next part jaldi post karna warna u know kya hoga 😆


luv,
vandu 😉

hey guriya gr8 part.... 👏 👏 👏 poor manial 😭 now she knowz abt aima...ye shayan bhi na wht did he think of himself....khud to maze ker raha hain aima ke saath or usse kehta hain dost bhi maat banao....finally manial ne usse kuch sunaya to sahi per kya faida kuch asar nahin huwa us per.......so in next part..wo dubara bahar jaye gi....yeh larki bhi na lagta pehli daant kha ke maza nahin aya ke dubara sunni hain...but plz cont soon ....cant wait.. 😊

thats not faair on shayan's part.... 😡 😡
just coz he dont want his frns to know that he has married manial...he cant treat manial like that... atleast be normal to her.... 😡 😡

wat wud happen if aaima knows abt manial....to beta shayan to gaya....yahan se bhi aur wahan se bhi...lolzz 😆 😆

gr8 part...updt soon dear!
👏

oh she knows the truth feels so bad 4 her 😭 it had to happen sooner or later 😕 😕 its good she knows it now 😭 but why is thiz shayan getting mad on her😡 😡 😡 hez the 1 who did the wrong thing 😕 😡 it was really good part and very emotional too 👏 especially the song part 👏 👏 loved it 👏 cont soon

continue soon!!!
kaha ho dear!!! 😛

Originally posted by: Honii

wow di awesome part toooo toooo goooood loved it awesome...and damn sad...yeh shayan apneh app koh samajta kya hai..khud awara gard karrreg aur jab manial apni dost keh saath icecream keh liyeh chali bi gaii toh ussseh burra laggga...and now usne manial ka itna dil dukhaiya bharra khudgarz insan hai shayan i hope manial ussseh badal deh... 😊 gr88 part fantastic continue sooon 👏 👏 👏

thanx lt dear 4 likng...even i hope ke woh usey badal de...😉

Originally posted by: captain_kia

gr8 part 👏 so my guess was right 😉 but yeh aaima not happening 😕 i hate her 😡 kabab mein haddi 😡 and many more 😡 but shayan how could he 😲 maimal pe chillaya 😡 use rula diya 😭 😭 aur sadaf mein kya burai hai ❓ khud ka sach samne aa gaya to sara ilzam mianal pe dal diya aur khud bhi to bahar gaya tha woh galat nahin tha ❓ he left her crying 😭 i m feeling sad for her 😔 usne to force nahin kiya tha na shaadi ke liye to uspe gussa kyun utar raha hai 😡 i wish aaima dhoke baaz nikle 🐷 aur tab shayan ko pata chalega ki dil ka tootna kiya hota hai 😈 and ofcourse mainal ko sadaf ke saath dosti nahin todni chahiye 👍🏼 chahe shayan ko accha lage ya nahin wo bhi to uski parvah nahin karta waiting for next part 👏 i must say that i luved the concept of ur story it is fantastic superb and simply gr8😊

thnx 4 likng da part n concept....aur aaima..dhoke baaz....will thnk....😉

Originally posted by: togepe30

Chalo good that manial knows about aaima, atleast she'll have no false hopes from shayan.......

hmm...so true

Shayan is really too much....khud awara gardiyan karta hai n manial ko daant raha hai....he's trying to hide his guilt...

do u think...hez feelng guilty ...lol....he n guilty....😆

But manial shouldnt have talked to him...par loved the way she answered back....

me 2...loved it

Promo- Aha!! to manial is on bagawat i see, phir bahar gayi.....hehehe....gr8.....and is baar bhi shayan ne dekh liya??? lolzz shayan iska peecha karta hai kya??? hehehe

hmm...yeh larki na....isi actually...catch me if u can..khelne ka bara shauk hai...lol......😆

hey who's playing umair (iqbal khan?? )....uska bhi intro karao na!!!

yah its been played by him only...n he had come in few parts...b4..will surely come in future parts soon..😊

nice part!! continue soon.....part dekhke maine bomb diffuse kar diya...but next part jaldi post karna warna u know kya hoga 😆

oh tu apne diffuse kardiye...thank god...mein tu abhi tak dare hui thi...😆

luv,
vandu 😉

Originally posted by: ImPrEsSiVe_Grl

hey guriya gr8 part.... 👏 👏 👏 poor manial 😭 now she knowz abt aima...ye shayan bhi na wht did he think of himself....khud to maze ker raha hain aima ke saath or usse kehta hain dost bhi maat banao....finally manial ne usse kuch sunaya to sahi per kya faida kuch asar nahin huwa us per.......so in next part..wo dubara bahar jaye gi....yeh larki bhi na lagta pehli daant kha ke maza nahin aya ke dubara sunni hain...but plz cont soon ....cant wait.. 😊

thnx dear...hmm...na yeh larki bhi na....ab keep guessing is baar shayan kya kareaga...aur shayan na...dhet hai..asar..dhetoon pe..kaam he hota hai...😆

Originally posted by: liquidfantasy

thats not faair on shayan's part.... 😡 😡
just coz he dont want his frns to know that he has married manial...he cant treat manial like that... atleast be normal to her.... 😡 😡

wat wud happen if aaima knows abt manial....to beta shayan to gaya....yahan se bhi aur wahan se bhi...lolzz 😆 😆

gr8 part...updt soon dear!
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i will pass ur suggestion of being normal 2 manial 2 shayan....ok...😉...then lets see wht he decides...😊...n abt aaima gt 2 knw abt manial...hosakta hai..nt a bad idea...lol...😆....thnx 4 likng...😊

Originally posted by: Paru_M

oh she knows the truth feels so bad 4 her 😭 it had to happen sooner or later 😕 😕 its good she knows it now 😭 but why is thiz shayan getting mad on her😡 😡 😡 hez the 1 who did the wrong thing 😕 😡 it was really good part and very emotional too 👏 especially the song part 👏 👏 loved it 👏 cont soon

am glad u liked it....n yah she had 2 knw sooner or later...iz gud she came 2 knw....will cont soon...😊

Originally posted by: togepe30

continue soon!!!
kaha ho dear!!! 😛

will cont asap dear...m jus a bit busy wid some college work...can't promise bt will try 2 cont b4 saturday...till then...u hav 2 wait...😊

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