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Originally posted by: LIL sweetz

it was very good and nicely written "happy new year 2 every1"

Thank you! 😛

Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1

that was really really good
i loved the way kripa got jealous and the way she ran it was sooo funny
cant wait 4 the next part
your fanfic is getting really intresting part by part

lol! Thanks! 😳

Originally posted by: Numera89

that was soo awesome! continue soon! lol krips is soo jealous!!! i love it!!

Thank you! Watch Angad get jealous now! 😊And, he has two strong contenders 😃

Originally posted by: *guesswho*

she's an idiot..hehehe

I agree with you! 👏And, her stupidity really made me dislike this part. 😆

Originally posted by: armaghan0

😕😆my expressions

I don't blame you, even I had the same 😃

Thank you! 😛

Originally posted by: koolaries4

wowo... what a perfect gift on new years...
so whoz the girl angad walked in with ?? huh ??
cant wait till next saturday for u to post again.. just love urff.. though i wish the part was longer...

ooo you will see! 😉Next part will be longer – I have already cooked up a couple of scenes in my head - just need to put them down.

Originally posted by: erier101

awesome part!!! i think he wasnt kissing the girl- kripa was mistaken!! and it was real funny-kripa getting jealous and drunk 😆.. and that was teh best new years present 😳cont soon 👏

Thanks a lot!! You are absolutely right! 😃He wasn't kissing the girl. Aww you found it the best present... I actually found it a bit stupid, since I made a complete fool out of Kripa. That was my intention, but the way it turned out really made me go 'uh-oh wht did i do?'

Originally posted by: berkeleygirl818

that was HILARIOUS!!!!!!!!! 😆😆i LOVED it!!!!! but u r gonna
continue NEXT saturday, thats a looooooooong time!!!!!! i hope u continue
sooner!!!!!

Thanks! Long??? Nooo, it seems so short now.

Originally posted by: princess_101

AMAZING PART
CONTINUE SOON PLZ

Thank you! 😳

Originally posted by: Mulle

very cute - looks like some ones in love 😉😳

Thank you! 😊 And, you are right these are strong feelings.

Originally posted by: bhumishah

awesome part
cont soon

Thank you!😃

Originally posted by: brainychild92

who was the girl and why would he leave kripa unnoticed. mayb he really didnt notice her..

o well

tha was hott and wonder who said HAPPY NEW YEARS

continue soooooonnnnn

Thanks a lot!

Oh my god! I am finding it so hard to not reveal the identity of the girl! But, I won't since its going to be included in the next part. So wait up! 😳

Originally posted by: princess kiran

You know what...your thoughts are totally wrong!!!! How could you think this part was lame!!! This has been the BESTTT part, and don't regret for posting it, because it was awesome!!! 😊

Thanks a lot!!! Don't you like serious & smart characters? I do! But, I made Kripa a bit stupid, since I thought that will make it less boring, but now she is the limit to stupidity. Besides, the whole drinking, dancing & running around became a bit too much, and while writing it I wasn't too happy. I read the part again after reading your and other comments.

Originally posted by: mitali_s

Gosh...the part was absolutely fab...just luved the way kripa got jealous and reacted but her reasoning was justified... 😆😳

Thank you!! I am glad you find it justified! So many ppl liked the jealousy bit – really makes me happy 😃

Originally posted by: cute_face86

FAB ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, so cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee 😳😳😳

Thanks you! 😳

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good part can't for you to continue 👏

Thanks 😛

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Continue soooooooooooooooooonnnnn!! 😛

Next part coming today 😭

Originally posted by: nehagupta_9

Heyyyy I jus read all of ur ff, itz gr8... pls cont soon... n dnt think it is lame, it is absolutely awesome n i Know many ppl will agree wid me!!!!! Keep goin, itz excellent!!!

Thank you! Actually while writing it out – i totally felt it was lame.

Originally posted by: koolaries4

cant wait... o u going to post a part today... u could include ome romance and passion.. tht would be kewl... n angad knws kripa is drunk..

maybe u can make angad feel jealous coz of Josh ?? i mean.. u knw... a little insecure ??

anyways... plz post the part today..

n the preivio part was awesome...

Thank you! 😃 I will certainly consider your suggestions 😛

ummmm... its a bit too early for that, maybe I will include it for next part. Yes, Angad will get a little insecure b/c of Josh, but he has another person as well – he will be introduced in this part & I think you guys will love him. When I came up with the idea I personally liked it.

Originally posted by: Desi Pride

heyyy wen u gona cont? ya noe this is the only ff i read regularly 😆lolz i understand being busy, i havent cont my ff for like a month 😆but mines isnt as WOW as urs, so u have to cont now!!!!!

Oye! You write Restless Heart right? I LOVE that ff, the concept is truly unique & fascinating 👏And, you have been making me wait for the next part since so long, its good you mentioned it here – you better continue it!

Originally posted by: koolaries4

heya... r u gng to contine now ?? plz continue soon..

I will continue today.

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PLEASE continue SOON!!!!!!!!!! 😃

I will!

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aww write as soon as you can...I am dyin to know wot happens next

Okay, as soon as this is done I am typing the part up.

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r u gng to contine now ?? plz continue soon..

Yes, I will continue today.

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A big applause to everyone who sent in wondeful comments 👏

Oh my god so many expectations and here I haven't even started the next part 😭. I didn't even get time to write it, but I have come up with ideas so don't worry. I just hope that I live up to the expectations 😳 i m really scared at the moment. I will start the next part right away, and it will be posted within a few hours that is if something comes up, so please have patience the part will be posted today.

Edited by Andekhi - 18 years ago
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Part 10 – Cravings

She had never kissed anyone in her entire life, so she had no experience in this department, but the rush of feelings that she was feeling presently were scary. Her knees were weakening with his one kiss, and she felt completely weak, completely at his mercy as he kissed her like he meant it, as if she were the most beautiful creature on the planet, and he only desired to be with her, and her only. With his one kiss she felt like she had been swept off her feet, gotten everything she desired, and if this were the way she would die, then she would be happy & content with it.

She had never wanted someone this badly, but now she did. She needed this man, as without him her life would be nothing, she couldn't even imagine life without Angad, as he was her soul mate, her other half, and her everything. He meant the world to her, and with him she would gladly even walk in the hands of death.

She was scared about death, it was the one major fear she had, apart from animals. Death scared the hell out of her, maybe because she had never ever lost anyone close to her, and day after day she would fear for the worst, but with Angad by her side she would not be even fear death.

Her heart was beating rapidly and without once caring about their surroundings or without once thinking about anything. She just lived in the moment. She felt like she was in heaven, it was so pure, so blissful, so complete.

These feelings within her what were they? They had to be happiness. She felt really happy perhaps the happiest she had ever been, this made her happy, this man made her happy, and she would forever live with him as his friend, as his wife and as his child's mother.

In the beginning, she could not imagine her life within him as she thought there were a mismatch, but now she was aware that they were a perfect match. And, she would forever be thankful to god for making her meet this noble man.

As she kissed him with all her strength, for the first time in her life she gave herself completely to him, her heart was no longer shielded – she broke the shield she had placed around her self, and gave herself to him. Somehow she was falling for him day after day. In the light rain, she felt her heart dance in delight at this newfound realization.

She loved him. She loved Angad Khanna. She had fallen in love within a month only, but then since when did love need time?

It could happen anywhere, to anyone and at any time.

She did not need time to love him nor did she need a reason.

She would continue to love him till her very last breath. That's how powerful this feeling was. As she stood there kissing him, with the light rain falling on her, she realized the difference between love and crush right then, the most important being that love lasted forever and her love for Angad would last forever as well.

She had permanently lost herself to him, but that didn't scare her, as she trusted him with all her heart. No matter what he did, she would still continue to love and worship h---

"Yo Angad" said a voice

At those words instantly Angad released his hold on her and moved away, while she just groaned in disappointment. They both turned around to face the person who had ruined this important breakthrough in their relationship.

She stared in horror from behind Angad at Josh Kapoor.

He realized his blunder, as he smiled, and said, "oooh I am really sorry"

"Yes," she heard Angad say to Josh

"Kripa left her cell" Josh replied handing the cell out in his hand.

Angad took the cell from him with a frown.

"I am Josh Kapoor" stated Josh with his hand held out this time, and he noticed Angad still hadn't taken the courtesy to put his forth to have a hand shake, thus he said, "Kripa's friend – uh, college friend"

Angad nodded his head, and replied, "o nice to meet you" but he didn't quite sound like he meant it.

"Okay, then I will catch you later Krips" Josh replied scratching his head, "Bye. And, have fun" he winked and walked away

Kripa turned red at his words, and just turned around to walk towards the car.

"Since, when do you know him?" questioned Angad from behind her.

"Umm... since four years" she replied, though she doubted whether he heard it, since she could not even bring her voice up.

"I don't like him," Angad remarked as he opened his door.

She did not care where this conversation was heading, as all she could remember was that kiss. How could this guy kiss her? And, then make it seem like nothing had happened. Honestly, was Josh this important to Angad? While, here she was going to die after that kiss, and all she felt like doing was to run away & hide under the bed or under the car seat... hide anywhere just so that she would not be anywhere near Angad Khanna.

"He looks like a flirt," she heard Angad say as he turned the ignition.

She felt like asking who, but no words came out of her mouth, and instead she just focused on the road ahead, as they drove out of the parking lot.

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The ringing of the cell forced her to open her eyes, and she looked around to notice they were nearing home now.

She stared at the screen to read Hospital.

"Hello"

"Ma'am," remarked a nurse from the other hand, "you have to come right now. A case just came up"

Kripa glanced at her watch, it was about 1-00 am, "But, Jen I can't make it tonight. Its too late," she replied

"No, Ma'am it's really urgent – the man's eye is badly damaged"

"okay. I will be there within a minute. Call up Ed as well"

"He is away Ma'am, but I left him a message on his cell"

"Just wait for me. I will be right there"

Kripa just hung up, and turned to look at Angad – he didn't look happy at all. In order to avoid talking to Angad she had pretended to be asleep, except the ringing of the cell had ruined everything. She made a fake yawn, and said, "Angad, take me to the hospital"

"You are drunk, Kripa" he argued

"So what? That does not stop me from operating someone"

"Are you telling me all doctors are allowed to operate even when they are drunk?" he asked looking at her

"Hey! I am not DRUNK. I am perfectly fine. I just had two to three glasses" and as she saw him open his mouth to argue back she added, "And, stop pretending as if you care too much about the patient. I know you don't want me to go since its LATE blah blah"

Angrily he pressed down hard on the accelerator and turned the car around.

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Kripa got down from the car, and thanked Anita for giving her a ride. After waving at her she turned around and made her way towards the gate recollecting the incident earlier.

She had barely entered the hospital when a worried Jen had come into sight. Jen had informed her about the case, while Kripa had made her way to her cabin, and changed within a matter of a few minutes. By the time she was done Ed had stepped in her room, and as soon as she had greeted him.

She heard him yell at her for coming at the hospital, and asked her to go home and rest. As she had protested he had realized she had taken a few drinks, and then he had simply barked at her, "Get out Kripa,"

After that no matter how hard she had tried to convince him to let her stay he had absolutely refused to listen to her, and shut the door on her face. In disappointment she had no other choice, but to leave.

It was all due to Angad, if only he hadn't stopped her in the first place. She kicked the stone hard, and tried hard to understand the reason for her happiness, when she recollected about the other incident of that day – the incident which instantly brought a smile on her face, and made her do a happy dance as she day dreamed about that moment again.

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The pain in her head was severe, and she felt like hammering her head – to make the pain go away. She opened both her eyes slowly, and instantly got up, but soon regretted it, as the pain in her head became unbearable. Holding her head in her hands she groaned, and closed her eyes as she couldn't even bear the bright light falling on her from the window on the side.

Headache! Headache! But, why?

She tried to look up, but again looked down, and shut her eyes, oh! I can't even bear the light.

"Awaawwwww" she screamed with her hand pressed on her forehead, and eyes slightly opened as she felt severe pain on the left portion of her head and her eyes started to water in pain.

"Here have some tea," said a voice, "you will feel much better,"

When he noticed her confused look, he stated, "you took a few drinks last night"

It was Angad with a tray in his hand.

"No," Kripa replied pushing the tray aside, and she noticed it spills a bit on the side, but she didn't care.

"Common Kripa" Angad remarked, "Have it" he was almost putting it to her lips.

She grabbed the cup, and took a sip, "Ughhh... no sugar" she replied placing the cup on the side and holding her head again.

"Kripa, you won't die without sugar" He replied angrily, "Now, common drink it"

"I DON'T WANNA DRINK I ---" she screamed, "AWWW" she put her hand on the head again and closed her eyes.

"Fine, I will be right back," he replied as he left the room.

Once she heard him go down the stairs, she opened one of her eye, then the other, and sighed.

Cursing herself she picked up her purse from the side, and opened it. After a few minutes of searching through it, she emptied its contents on the bed, and finally spotted Aspirin.

Picking up the tea from the side in one hand, and the Aspirin in the other, which she was about to toss it in her mouth when someone caught her hand, and stopped her.

She looked up to see Angad, who cooly replied, "You are not eating that,"

"Why?" she asked rubbing her eyes

"What if it affects the baby?" he said in a concerned tone

"It won't" she replied still eyeing that Aspirin

"I am not taking any chances, so I am calling Nisha" he replied lifting the phone from the side

"WTH MAN Let me eat it! You are such a MORON! I am suffering in pain and your acting so smart... oh Mr. knoe-it-all oh-something-may-go-wrong! Just leave my hand & let me eat it"

Holding the receiver he took his own sweet time before replying, "You were much better last night"

"What do you mean?" she asked taking a sip of the tea

"you were murmuring in your sleep"

"W...hat.. diddd I saayy?" she asked nervously gulping down the tea

"You said, you thought I was the cutest, sweetest & best guy you ever met, and you also admitted that I am cuter than that Kovac + Michael guy"

"IDID NOT! YOU R LYING!" she yelled as she got up, but instantly felt the severe pain in her head, so she put her hand up on her head.

She did not hear a response from him, but only saw him smirk, and that irritated her even more, before she could respond she heard him speak to Nisha.

She closed her eyes, and put her head in her laps for a while with the hope that might help, when it didn't she had no other option, but to rely on Mr. knoe it all.

Once he placed the phone down. She looked up, and asked, "What did she say?"

"You can eat it," he replied sounding a bit defeated

"SEE! Jerk face" she yelled punching her hand in the air

He ignored her, and said, "Where was I?" and she noticed that mischievous tone was back.

"Kripa, you want to know what happened to your clothes?"

"My clothes – what happened to them?" she asked looking at them

"Umm... Who changed your clothes?"

"Obviously me" she replied, until a second later her eyes widened and she went, "who changed my clothes?"

"oh" he replied with a smile, "me of course"

"You what?" she yelled as she got up

"changed your clothes" he replied with that smile still

"B---ut that's impossible... "

His smile gave it all away. And, she hated that smile – she felt like ripping that smile right off his face it was starting to irritate her.

"HOW DARE YOU?" she screamed as she pointed a finger at him, and went close to him, "HOW DARE YOU TAKE ADVANTAGE OF ME?" she was pulling his collar now.

He cooly replied, "oh la la the drunk Kripa is so much more better – she talks about me in the night – allows me to change her clothes & the best part of all even does happy dances" with the smile still there on his face

If there was one thing she realized was that Angad had never changed her clothes. He had the sense of not doing that. Then, why she had gone all-hyper for no reason? Why did she love to jump to conclusions right away?

The colour losing from her face she replied, "best part what?" still not sure if she had heard it right

"Happy Dance," he replied picking up the towel

"I don't believe you," she replied placing her one hand on the other, "You are a liar"

"Want me to give you a demonstration of your happy dance?" he asked

She just looked at him not bothering to answer, but daring him to do it through her eyes.

And, to her horror he did the happy dance right in front of her singing her favourite tune forcing her mouth drop open in shock.

She was completely embarrassed by the time he was done, but still she firmly replied, "Everyone does their happy dances like that – no BIG deal! You are just making it up"

"Honey, I can prove it," he replied looking at her

"Oh ya? And, what's your proof you goof"

He threw something at her, and a second later she realized it was his cell, she heard him say, "Check the videos"

Holding her breath she went to videos, and clicked it only to see herself do a happy dance! Completely embarrassed by now she felt like hiding under the bed or running away.

Satisfied with her look Angad entered the washroom and closed the door behind him.

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Was it any wonder that she swore never to drink again?

She sat in the hospital cabin unable to concentrate on a single thing as her mind kept replaying the incident from earlier today. The first thing she had done as soon as Angad had gone to take a shower was to run out of that house, and so she had come to the hospital, hopefully to do something, but now thanks to him she could not do anything.

Why did he have to come and haunt her everywhere?

Besides, that dream she had been quite disturbing in the dream apparently she had realized she had fallen in love with Angad, and then they were kissing in a parking lot.

This was getting completely out of hand! Of course as soon as she had woken up she had barely any time to even think about that dream, since her headache had been killing her, and once she had taken Aspirin and come out of the house that's when she had remembered about it.

She could not dream about kissing Angad. God, was she that desperate?

"Hell No", screamed her mind, satisfied with its answer she got up to walk around and examine a few patients.

By the time she was almost done through about a hundred people she heard the nurse call out for her.

"Yes, Jen what did you want?"

"Ma'am phone"

"For me?" she frowned

"Yah"

"Who is it?" she asked as she approached the nurse

"Hmm... I asked and the guy said your boy friend"

"MYY WHAT?"

"Umm ma'am boy friend" she whispered in Kripa's ear

A bit confused she answered the phone only to hear her "boy friend"

"Hi Honey!" replied to her so-called "boyfriend"

"Hello Jaan," Kripa teased

"So, how are you?"

"Fine... just a bit of a headache"

"I am sure you will be fine..." he replied, "Kripa, what was up with Angad yesterday?"

"What do you mean?"

"He doesn't seem like a nice guy"

"Why?"

"You saw how he was behaving with me. He didn't even shake my hand"

"oh common Josh... wa...it.. what?"

"You know after you were making out"

"WE WERE WHAT?"

"Kripa, making out"

Kripa's eyes instantly widened, as she just replied, "josh i got to go. I will talk-to-you-later" and put the phone down in shock.

After two painful hours of cursing herself and calming down of her nerves she picked up the phone, and dialed Mishty's number.

Kripa was now practically sweating, as she did not know what to do mainly because so much had changed after that one kiss. She sat painfully listening to the voice at the other end, she paused for a while, then with certain amount of hesitation she muttered, "Ccconnect me to Mishty please"

She had to take this out of her system or else she would die. And, the best way was Mishty, as it is the girl had not shown up to work today.

She heard the ringing of the phone... once... twice... thrice... and after twenty times she slammed down in frustration.

She was pacing up and down in her cabin unable to think of anything. She quickly picked up the phone and decided it was best to leave a message, she dialed the number and waited as she heard a female's voice at the other end, then she muttered "Connect me to Mishty please". She heard a beep at the other end and the line was connected, but again it went to the answering machine, she heard a voice that said, "This is Mishty. I am unable to answer your call leave a message and I will get back to you as soon as possible" then there was a beep, Kripa hesitated before she said, "Mish--- you ok..ay? umm... I want to talk to you about something important," she could her breathing as she said, "please call me back as soon as possible".

After that was done she sat down on her chair, and put her down. A few minutes later she had a distant ringing of the phone only to realize it was the phone beside her instantly without a thought she picked up the phone, and said, "You totally won't believe what happened yesterday Mish. We KISSED last night" she added quickly, "And, hayeeeeeee he is a damn good kisserrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr" she squealed in delight

"Gee thanks, Kripa" said a male voice.

It was Angad!

****And, Kripa dropped the phone from her hands...

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Kripa went home that night, and sat in the couch reading a book in order to take her mind off things, by the time she was done it was almost 8-00 pm.

She placed the book on the side, tied her hair in a ponytail, and made her way down the stairs.

She entered the kitchen and greeted Rosy only when the front door flew open, and in stepped Angad loosening his tie. She took the glass of water from Rosy's hand, and entered the living room to give it to him.

She placed her hand in front only to hear him say, "I didn't know you wore glasses"

"I don't wear them often, since my number is only –1"

"Hmmm" he replied drinking the water

She was about to take the glass back when he caught her hand, and pulled her in front.

Run Kripa Run! Screamed her brain, but she had no energy to even move with his tight grip, and his touch which was weakening her, so instead she replied, "oyee! Mister get your hands off me" as she pushed him lightly away except he didn't get pushed, and just looked at her.

"What was the hospi----" he replied in that teasing tone, and dangerously advancing towards her.

"Oyee!" she hit him and said, "We need to first settle things about yesterday"

"What?"

"Who was that ugly little ***** you were kissing?"

She noticed his eyes turn black, as he replied, "My cousin, Aliyya Khanna"

She closed her eyes out of embarrassment and worry. God, what was wrong with her?

"And, I wasn't kissing her. In our family we have a tendency to hug each other & kiss each other's cheeks – you know like Iraqi people"

Oh my God! If only the earth would crack open, and she would fall right into at the moment or just run away from here. This was so embarrassing! She had made a complete fool out of herself today.

"Next time it might be a good idea to look carefully... not just assume things & run away" he replied coming towards her.

He came & stood right in front of her, and prepared herself for a slap – maybe not, but at least... ummmm.... a kiss this one in her proper senses except it didn't happen as Angad simply shrugged his shoulders, and said, "As far as the happy dance is concerned. You and I both know the reason for your happy dance" and as she blushed he smiled at her and walked away.

****************

After that remark of his... he had not spotted her at all... She had royally managed to disappear, and now she was no where to be found. He noticed the door to the guestroom closed, and he knocked on it a couple of times after which he heard, Kripa scream, "Go to sleep man"

"Kripa, what are you doing in there? Now come out & sleep in our room"

"Just leave man. We will discuss this tomorrow"

He yelled, "Kripa" a couple of times, but she never answered.

Angrily he went to their room, and shut the door behind him. He tried to keep his eyes open in case Kripa woke up in the middle of the night, and had trouble or something, but sleep overcame him in the end, and he fell asleep on the couch.

The next morning Kripa woke up feeling fresh and walked out of the room. The first thing she did was to go and check on Angad, except when she didn't spot him on the bed she got confused about where he could be, until her eyes fell on the couch, where he had fallen asleep. Smiling brightly she entered the room, and put the covers on him when she noticed pictures on the side.

She had gone through them already, except she hadn't seen his childhood pictures, and she had asked him about it a few days back, and he had mentioned them to be in the black cabinet.

After glancing at Angad once she tiptoed towards the cabinet, and carefully opened it. She located the album, and quickly opened it right there in excitement.

The first picture showed a lady with a small kid in her hand. It definitely looked like Angad, and he looked so CUTE! He was this cute chubby little baby! Awww!! If only their child went in looks department on Angad, and in brains department on both of them, in sensible department totally on Angad & in stubbornness department on both of them.

She looked through the album with a smile on her face, as some pictures were really, while some were extremely funny especially one in which Angad was completely bald, and he was sitting angrily with his arms folded. He looked like he would go and make the barber bald.

She heard Angad moving on the side, hastily she placed the album back in the cabinet, and literally ran out of the room.

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Angad walked out of the room wearing his dress feeling a bit proud of his accomplishment of removing the lock from the guestroom, which he had done a few minutes ago, and now he was eagerly waiting to see the face of his beautiful wife.

He entered the kitchen to spot Rosy, he said, "Rosy, where is Kripa?" as he picked up the apple and took the first bit, "She didn't go to work today did she?"

"No, Angad baba. She is outside"

"She has an appointment with Nisha today" he lifts two more apples as he walked out of the kitchen.

Kripa sat with a chair by the pool with her new friends. She couldn't wait to see Angad's face when he saw her friends, and that's when she spotted him come out.

He threw an apple at her, while she asked, "what's this for?"

"Eat its good for yo-----" he moved aside as something came in the middle. It was more like someone came in the middle, and that's when he looked to the side to notice a bunch of them.

"What the...? Since, when did we open a pre-school?" he asked looking at Kripa

She smiled brightly and replied, "oh I love them" as she picked one of the little ones up.

"What are you baby sitting?" he asked

"Yah, to escape from the clutches of my evil husband" with a smile

"Oh ya? Really? Where is my morning kiss honey?" he asked dangerously advancing towards her.

"Angad, these are little kids" she yelled, but his words had no affect on him as he came closer to her, until the kid on her lap yelled, "Aap aunty ke nazdik nahin aa sakte/ You can't come near aunty" as he lifted the googles from the side, and put it on - Angad realized the kid was trying to copy him.

"Why is that?" Angad yelled, "I am Uncle, so I can go to Aunty"

"Nahin aap aunty ke paas nahin aa sakte... chalejayeea yahan seh aap/ No, you can't come near Aunty... leave this place"

Angad angrily walked out of the place giving the kid an angry look, and he even motioned his hand in a way so that it made it seem, as he would slap the kid. The kid immediately pointed fingers at him and started to cry out loud, and complained to Kripa, who just kissed his cheek, and he stopped crying. The kid barely looked 3 years old, but he seemed smarter than that.

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As soon as Kripa entered the party someone caught her hand from behind, and she turned around to notice Angad.

He looked really angry.

"Hey!" she greeted in a sweet tone

"Where the hell were you?" he said angrily keeping his tone low

"I went to doctor's appointment" she replied looking at him.

"Why did you go alone?" he questioned

"Relax Angad, I went with Josh"

"WHAT? THAT FLIRT!" he yelled

"Yah--- what? Angad!"

"What did I say yesterday?"

"What?"

"I don't like that guy! And, I don't want to hear you going anywhere with Josh! Especially, doctor's appointment since I have every right to go there with you – i am the kid's father okay? I need to be there – not some flirt – you better stay away from him"

"Angad, why are you so HYPER?" she asked angrily

"HYPER MY FOOTT! I DON'T LIKE THAT GUY! KRIPA, BEFORE I COME AND KNOCK HIM DOWN TELL HIM TO LEAVE YOU ALONE"

"But, Angad he is such a nice guy"

"OHHH DON'T YOU GO AROUND PRAISING HIM!"

"He is a jaan, Angad" and when Angad looked angrily at her, she explained, "he calls me honey, and I call him jaan"

"He called you HONEY! I don't like that guy one bit, and you better say away from him"

Kripa just ignored him. Angad had lost it! The guy definitely needed some anger management classes.

They walked around talking to people from the colony when Angad spotted that kid again. Instantly he flung his arms around Kripa's waist, and looked at the kid, who gave him an angry glare.

Unable to understand why Angad had held her tight Kripa looked at him, and then the place where he was looking... only to spot Adi.

"Adi" she said in delight, "come here" she waved her hand indicating him to come near

Except, the kid stood there frozen the spot glancing at Angad. She looked at Angad's angry face, and said, "Angad woh sirf ek bacha hain/ Angad, he is only a kid" Kripa remarked

"Bacha?/ Kid?" Angad frowned as he looked at her, "Its not normal for a kid to behave this way" looking at the kid angrily

"Angad, he is not your age! Okay? He is a three year old"

"He sure does not look like one" replied Angad looking at the kid

"And, what makes you say that?"

"He likes you & hates me! He wishes I just disappear from here"

"Oh please!" she replied rolling her eyes.

Angad was jealous of a three-year-old. It sure sounded a bit too stupid!

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A month later

Their usual arguments continued, and nothing major happened between them. Josh had found a girl friend, and Angad was highly pleased with that. Meanwhile, Adi continued to ruin Angad's every day as he kept copying Angad, in fact one day he showed up wearing a suit similar to Angad's.

Angad was so furious that he literally complained to Adi's mother, who in turn found it highly amusing - she & Kripa spent a good five minutes sitting & laughing over Adi's competition with Angad.

Meanwhile, Kripa had started to get these weird cravings, and quite recently only she was dying to eat chocolate cakes. However, Angad was not familiar she had these cravings, so one fine day as he fell asleep on the couch reading a book.

Kripa sneaked out of the room, and ran to the kitchen to eat that delicious chocolate cake. The image itself forced her mouth to water. She ran to the kitchen & opened the fridge - just for one piece, but one piece was soon over - and, she was onto her second one, soon it was her third one, fourth one, and fifth slice - and by the time she could go to her sixth slice. She heard Angad calling out her name.

As Angad entered the room the first thing he noticed the lid of the box - the cake box sitting on the counter top. It meant only one thing there was some burglar in the house stealing a chocolate cake - and, he was very well familiar with that person. He called out Kripa's name again, until he noticed a thin fabric sticking out of the cupboard.

He smiled as he opened the cupboard to see the sight of his wife with a entire slice stuffed in her mouth with her nose & mouth smudged with chocolate cake, and she stared in horror back at him.

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I hope this part was long enough for you, it sure was for me! I don't even remember what I put down in here - i mean there is so much. As usual please ignore all the mistakes, since I never reread the parts there are bound to be grammatical errors.

I had to go out for a while, and I just returned a few minutes ago, so I just finished it. Hope you had a wonderful weekend!

Please do leave comments! I will be waiting to read them! 😃

Edited by Andekhi - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey
i think this is the first time i m commenting.. sry about that.. i think ur ff is great.. yes it was a long part.. omg it was hilarious.. poor kripa embarrassed herself so many times.. i was laughing adn smiling throughtout the whole part.. the end was funny with adi and krpa hiding.. 😆 hope we wont have to wait too long before the next LONG part(hint 😉 ) lol neway.. great job..
mansi 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
yippie that was a long part!!! 👏 Luved it!! I absolutely luv Angad...He is nuts officially!! Adi sounds like such a cutie...I can just imagine him tryin to be like Angad 😆 ...hahahahaha Kripa "the chocolate chor"...awesome part...continue as soon as you can!! 😃 😃

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