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Posted: 18 years ago

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getting jealous of a 3 yr old isnt healthy.. haha

but why is she scared.. i mean cmon, its normal!!!

well u gotaa continuee.. n lemme tell u.. htat was one heck of a part.. really long and funny so i really enjoyed it!!
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Posted: 18 years ago

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Originally posted by: mansi1219
hey
i think this is the first time i m commenting.. sry about that.. i think ur ff is great.. yes it was a long part.. omg it was hilarious.. poor kripa embarrassed herself so many times.. i was laughing adn smiling throughtout the whole part.. the end was funny with adi and krpa hiding.. 😆hope we wont have to wait too long before the next LONG part(hint 😉) lol neway.. great job..
mansi 😛

Oh don't be sorry! Thank you for commenting! 😳I am glad I could make you smile! And, yes I like your hint, but I can't say at the moment whether the next part will be long or not, but I will try.

Originally posted by: *guesswho*
yippie that was a long part!!! 👏Luved it!! I absolutely luv Angad...He is nuts officially!! Adi sounds like such a cutie...I can just imagine him tryin to be like Angad 😆...hahahahaha Kripa "the chocolate chor"...awesome part...continue as soon as you can!! 😃😃

Thanks! I love Adi too...😃

Originally posted by: mitali_s
omg...dat was soooooooooooooooooooo amazing and funny and cute and romantic and everything.... 😉... god i just luved it...angad getting jealous of a 3 yr old and god...the kid is so smart...angad certainly have a competion... 😆

angad uncle kripa aunty ke paas nahi aa sakte 😆😆😆

Thank you! 😛 Yes, I am so glad you guys loved Adi. I really wanted to add a bit more to his scenes, but sadly after writing so much I just wanted to finish the part as soon as possible 😭

Originally posted by: sameira-90
👏great Part 👏

Originally posted by: Numera*
omg yeah wow that was long and AWESOME!! omg absolutely loved it!! continue soon hun!

Thanks! I am pretty sure I must have set the record in the fan fiction section for the "longest part" in a ff! 😆

Originally posted by: armaghan0
so cute and adoreable why was she scared and the competition was dam cute and hilarious 😆

Thank you! 😛 You mean scared in the end? She gets scared because it's unexpected – that Angad found her. Besides, she was on a bet with him that she would stay without chocolate cake for a day, so she really din't want him to find. I will read the part, and maybe edit this.

Originally posted by: berkeleygirl818
that was sooooo CUTE!!!!!!!!!! 😳😳GREAT part!!!!!!! 👏👏continue soon!!!!!!!!!! 😃

Thank you! 😊 Hopefully, I will continue on Saturday.

Originally posted by: koolaries4
oh my goshh... tht was awesome n amazing.. it practically the 4th time i m reading thi chapter coz love it sooo much...
it was sooo embarassing for krips when angad anwered mishty's phone.. i would ve died if i were in her place.. oh gosh!!!
btw, did Angad not read pregnancy books in the beggining ?? o he hould know about her cravings though!!!
N i mut say the worth was wait it !!! the part was kewl.. n long... so yh thanks for updating.. .ur story is awesome n plz contnue sooon...

Thanks! Fourth time? 😲😲Omg here I barely manage to even go through one time, and you read it four times... Yes, even I would have died too – just imagining made me really bad for her...

Now, the question about pregnancy books – oh yes, he did read them, in fact while writing that out I was unsure since he should be aware of that right? But, then I thought I barely manage to remember the scenes – how will the readers manage to remember so I din't bother w/ any explanation. My reasoning will be that he is aware of it, but just that he gets so involved in work that it totally slips from his mind – except now since he catches her like this – he will definitely understand its "cravings".

Originally posted by: Desi Pride
u r amazing!!!!!!! i luv this happy go lucky ff n the humour is fab!!!! i luv Kripa, n the way she is...n Angad is sooo cute!!!! but umm considering that i didnt read this ff from day 1, how did AK get pregnant? like i know HOW, but i mean how?

Thank you! I am a fan of serious stories... most of the ff's in this section are either serious or they leave you in thought... I decided that maybe I should write a happy go lucky ff – it will be a nice change for the readers & for me as well 😎

She gets pregnant due to one night stand. The night Angad and Kripa met for the first time... they both were drunk... They do not quite remember anything from that night. The next morning when Kripa wakes up she sees him, but she leaves the room before he can even notice her. He wakes up to find only an earring. I promise that I will get this in the last part! 👍🏼

Originally posted by: nehagupta_9
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!! Dat was soooo sweet, n i us luved da length of it, amazin!!!! N angad is soooo cute hes jealous of josh n havin a competition wid a 3 year old 😆- sooooooooooooo sweet!!!! 😳

Thank you! 😳 Adi is my favourite character!

Originally posted by: yasmin20589
i just read your entire fan fic, and it's so amazing and hilarious. plus i love the fact u wrote about Prison Break because i absolutely LOVE that programme, Micheal is fit. Angad got jealous naa?

(if u like Prison Break, have u seen season 2)

Thanks! 😛 Prison Break is the only thing in this ff besides rats (which I am scared of) that I have taken from my life! I love that show & you are right Angad is jealous.

Originally posted by: candyprincess
great part loved how angad & the kid compition 😆do cont soon

Thanks a lot! I love it too!

Originally posted by: bhumishah
awesome part the kid part was hilarious
cont soon

Thank you! 😃

Originally posted by: brainychild92
getting jealous of a 3 yr old isnt healthy.. haha

but why is she scared.. i mean cmon, its normal!!!

well u gotaa continuee.. n lemme tell u.. htat was one heck of a part.. really long and funny so i really enjoyed it!!
wikid partt
continue soooonn

Thanks! lol! Kripa is an ediot – as someone correctly mentioned it earlier.
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A bear hug to everyone who sent in comments 🤗& I am so glad that some new readers also commented! Besides, I loved it as to how many of you sent in long comments 😃. As far as the silent readers are concerned... I hope that I can post a part that can finally get you out of "silence" and make you say things.

The next part will be posted on Saturday, till then keep the comments coming! 😊

Edited by Andekhi - 18 years ago