Short Story : Khudha na jaane [On Rosid/Aviman] [Completed] - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice starting dear interesting please update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice start...waiting for next updates :)
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Chapter 2: A Page in his Diary
'Oh God... I can't bear this loneliness anymore...
I want to go away from here...


Why am I filled with this loneliness?
Every time, I look at my friend's family, why am I filled with this melancholy ache?

I can't take it anymore...
Five years, five years,... Shouldn't it be long enough to get used to loneliness?

But no, a person once knows the meaning of family and life will never ever wish to be alone in his life time...

Yes, the only way to get rid of this ache is to go back to my home...

I won't stay here anymore.
Ma, Papa, raju, Rajni... It has been so long since I saw you all...
I can't wait to see you all..

You all know what?

I am graduating next week and coming back home in fe w days...

I will never ever leave you all...

Maa... It has been so long since I ate your handmade food...
Can't wait to taste it anymore...

I spent the last five years but couldn't wait for few more weeks...

Missing you all...

Love you all...'

-Sid
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi,
Thanks for your comments.

Happy to see you people liking this...

Thanks for reading this story.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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superb...roli want to leave all...n he want to come to his family...waiting fr their meet ...do upd soon dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update dear sid pov just opposite from roli eagerly waiting for rosid meet
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Posted: 9 years ago
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sid feeling loneliness n want to go home just opposite to roli thoughts how both will meet
waiting fr rosid meet
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Posted: 9 years ago
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super update dear waiting for next
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Woww roli hates family and sid love his family..intresting ..eagerly waiting for next updates and thanks for the pm :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow sid loves his family while roli hates her family sid is going to his family while roli leaving & going away from her family interesting loved it waiting for Rosid meet update next soon thanks for pm

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