Short Story : Khudha na jaane [On Rosid/Aviman] [Completed] - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
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oh sid's love is roli only wow waiting for next update soon
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excellent!!!!!!!!!...it's really so unique n it's getting hard to guess the twists n turns...
so ROLI got injured in that accident...but how SID got to know it?...reveal the whole suspense soon dear...can't wait!!!!😃😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Super dearm eagerly waiting for next
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Khudha Na Jaane Epilogue

Can life be this interesting?

Can life be this memorable?

Can life be this unpredictable?

If you would have asked this question to her, a few months back, she would have laughed at you. For her life means, days that are full of someone's decision, order, which she has to obey without a word of objection. She was nothing more than the money machine.

Losing her childhood for some bunch of people, who can be otherwise called us, her family, doesn't pain her much. Losing her best friend for these greedy people, didn't pain her anymore.

She is felt with a numb heart which doesn't react anymore. As they say, no pain no gain. So, she started living a mechanical life. One day, she reached the limit of patience. She reached to a point, she is suffocated in this current drama. Why should she care and continue live this faade? Is it worth enough the promise she has given her Late father?

Father... He is only person responsible for all this. If that man, didn't seed those tiny moral values of being honest, true to the word, etc .., in the five year old Roli. She would have been far away from this chaos long back. Her promise to her father, to not leave his foster family, as they raised her father when he was been found in a trash bin on a rainy night, made her stay back and face hell.

Not anymore! Even if her father would have been alive, he would not want her to go through this hell. So, one day, she left the place, leaving behind the past, to start afresh.

She wondered if she should call that day as the most tragic day or the best day ever. She met with a huge accident while saving a couple from a speeding truck which led her to this wonderful life. She thought she wouldn't need to survive anymore. So, when she saw the truck, which apparently lost the control, she decided to something worth with her life.

They saw you reap what you sow. She helped someone and in return she was blessed with a beautiful life.

hey, darling... What are you doing?' Roli came out of her trance when she heard someone's whisper. So lost in the thoughts that she didn't notice her husband, Sidhant's hand around her waist from behind.

Nothing, just wondering, how come my life became so beautiful suddenly?' She replied, now facing him.

A beautiful person deserves a life more beautiful than this. Now, stop all these and come on give my morning dose. I am getting late for office.'

She leaned forward and pecked his lips, which he deepened making it more than a peck... After a long minute, they broke the kiss to breathe.

thank you angel... for coming into my life and making it so beautiful.' She said taking long breathes.

Listening his love thanking him, made him angry and he felt her and silently left for his work. Seeing him, silently walking away, she understood her folly, and ran behind him to tell him.

There, her day goes with pacifying her husband who is annoyed and then, love him more and more by the end of the day.

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Thanks for reading this.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb dear I luvd each and every part congrats for successfully completed ur story want more from u
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congratulations for successfully completing your story really interesting story loved it
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awesome dear loved it end was super sid got angry awww & now roli have to console him he he congrats for successfully completing this ss waiting for more writings from u
Edited by himani_rosid - 9 years ago
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Aww!!!!!...that's so beautiful!!!!...loved it...it's really a tiny piece but loved it...awesome job dear...it's so unique...
expecting lot n many more from you😃...


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