Short Story : Khudha na jaane [On Rosid/Aviman] [Completed]

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renuka-rosid

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Posted: 9 years ago

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waiting waiting waiting please update soon

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Shilpa

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Hey renuka,

Sorry my office started so couldn't update...
I will try to give another update ASAP.

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ranjani

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Diferent kind of intro.two people has different view regarding their family.on which situations they were pushed to leave the family or to run to that family is not known yet.suspense ...roli geting away while sid is returning how will they end up together .waiting eagerly

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Friends update can't be regular as am working and during this coming off I am lil busy.

I will try to post the update asap.

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i_am_PRASANNA

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

so 2 different worlds...how they gonna meet n what's next...very eager to know...

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renuka-rosid

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: -She-loSarun
Hey renuka,

Sorry my office started so couldn't update...
I will try to give another update ASAP.

its ok dear constraint your work
no problem we will waiting dear

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Chapter 3:

Roli looked back through the bus window and bid her goodbye to the city and vowing to never return.

Unfortunately, the bus driver was attacked with a silent heart attack during the drive leaving hundreds of souls in ache.

Sid was looking forward to see his family and as soon as he entered the city, he met with chaos due to the accident.

It took him two hours more than the normal time to reach his home.

'Ma... Papa...' Sid excitedly called out for everyone as he entered his home.

Keeping his bag on the near by six chaired dining table, he rushed into the first room to his left, not forgetting to call out his family members.

'Bhaiya ji, Saab aur madam ji apki receive karne Gaye hain...', started informing the house help, '... Aur babyji, aur chotey bhayaji, school Gaye hain.'

'Oh... I think I missed them. Main mummy papa ane SE pehale fresh hotha hoon.'

Sidhant was enthusiastically climbing down the stairs hoping to see his parents, when the door bell rung.

Asking the house help to continue with his work, he left to attend the door. What he saw left him paralyzed.

Sorry for a short update. Really busy and I was even worried on how to put my thoughts to words. So, came up with a short one.

Updates can't be regular as my working. And I can update any time of the week since I work on weekends too.