Rajveer and Naina: Second Chance to their love, imp note on pg 94 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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first of all thanx now i can clearly undrstnd when wil u update due to adding of chapters wid ff heading..
So naina is coming back..
Not so fair Shalini and Alekh clearly knws abt Rajveer..
Poor Naina usko b toh bolna tha..
Waiting for nxt..
Tk cr
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
interestig story and beautifully written
so raj is alive
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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superb parts
waiting to meet RN
plz jalsi milao yr
can't wait for long time
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow read ur story in one go...amazing n hopefully happy ending for RN...pm me
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no update.. Sho sad.. Writer saahibaaa update de dou plsss
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Plz plz plz update soon nd pm me
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CHAPTER 6:

naina starts her journey. She took taxi from Delhi to Ambala. She has already called up Alekh and informed him that she is coming by taxi and will directly come to KMA. Therefore he doesn't need to come to pick her up. She told him that she will directly meet him in the KMA, as she doesn't want him to miss his class just to pick her up. Her luggage has already sent to the KMA. She is carrying a backpack and a laptop bag.

She is looking outside from window. She is looking lost. As taxi is progressing towards Ambala, her heartbeat is also increasing. All her memories are coming back to her, but with the memories some strange feelings are also coming. She is feeling disturbed. She is feeling as if she is coming close to someone who is very close to her.

On the way taxi reached to the bridge from where Capt. Rajveer's car fallen down due to blast. She asked driver to stop the taxi and comes out. She is looking down from the bridge and remembers the scene of car blast, which took away her Rajveer sir from her. She remembers who she shouted his name. Her eyes are teary and she once again shout his name Rajveer sirrr...

She comes to the ambush site where Rajveer Hugged her last time, where they met last time. Where they both understood each other's unsaid words, unsaid feelings. She falls on her knees and touches the soil to feel her Rajveer sir's presence.

Kitni Baatein Yaad Aati Hain
Tasverein Si Ban Jaati Hain
Main Kaise Inhein Bhooloon, Dil Ko Kya Samjhaon
Kitni Baatein Kahane Ki Hain
Hothon Par Jo Sahmi Si Hain
Ek Roz Inhein Sun Lo, Kyun Aise Gumsum Ho
Kyun Poori Ho Na Payee Daastan
Kaise Aayee Hain Aisi Dooriyaan

She feels Rajveer's presence there. She sees him coming near to her. She too goes towards him and they both hug each other. Both are crying no one saying anything. Then after some minute, Rajveer says to Naina: "naina main tumse bahut pya".

Before Rajveer could complete his words, taxi driver blow the horn and ask Naina to come fast, as she is making him to wait simply. Naina comes out of her trance and sees that Rajveer is not there. She talks with herself aaj phir se aapki baat adhuri reh gayi. aaj phir aap apni baat puri nahi kar paaye. par aaj phir se maine apke adhoore shabdo ko samajh liya hai". Then she goes from there and sit inside the taxi.

But Naina was not alone there. There was someone who was hiding and watching Naina continuously. He was watching Naina from the time she came outside the taxi, he has heard her screaming Rajveer's name. He has seen her crying and standing in the ambush and lost in her thoughts as if she is remembering something or someone. After Naina left from there, he to left from there.

Naina reaches to KMA. She is standing outside the Kma entry gate. She remembers her first day, when her parents came to drop her, when she came with only motive, that is to prove his brother innocent. On that day she came by hiding her identity, but today she doesn't need to hide her identity, today she takes her name with full pride.

She enters the KMA, but her steps are very slow and weak as she is remembering her past, how KMAchanged everything for her. Its the place where he met him, her mentor, her love and it is also the same place which snatched him form her. It's the same place which disrespected her brother and it is also the same place where her bhaiya's respect was given back.

She comes inside and comes in front of Amar jawan jyoti. She salutes to Amar Jawan jyoti and remember her first encounter with Rajveer.

Rajveer: Fresher

Naina: yes sir

Rajveer: Naam

Naina: Naina ah singh

Rajveer: Naina ah singh, interesting name.

Naina while saluting amar jawan jyoti says, Capt. Naina Ah singh reporting sir.

There is one person who is watching Naina and also hear what Naina said. He is having tears in his eyes.


Donon Ke Dilon Mein Chhupa Hai Jo Ek Anjana Sa Gham
Kya Ho Payega Wo Kam, Koi Kya Kahe
Donon Ne Kabhi Zindagi Ki Ik Mod Pe Thi Jo Paayee
Hai Kaisi Wo Tanhai, Koi Kya Kahe
Kitna Veeran Hai Ye Sama
Saanson Mein Jaise Ghulta Hai Dhuan
Kaise Aayee Hain Aisi Dooriyan
Kitni Baatein Yaad Aati Hain
Tasverein Si Ban Jaati Hain
Main Kaise Inhein Bhooloon

Suddenly she feels someone's hand on her shoulder, she turns and sees its Shalini. Both Shalini and Niana has tears in their eyes. Both hug each other. Shalini knows whom Naina was remembring. Shalini too remembers him, afterall he was her friend more than colleague.

Shalini: Kaisi ho tum Naina. Aur tumne mujhe bataya nahi ki tum aa rahi ho. wo to mujhe Alekh ne bataya aur BC ne bhi inform kiya.

Naina: wo main actually tumhe surprise dena chathi thi, par bhul gayi ki tumse koi baat kaise chupi reh sakti hai.

Shalini remembers Rajveer's words. Rajveer used to say her the same thing ki us se koi baat kaise chupi reh sakti hai.

Naina: Acha main pehle BC ko report kar ke aati hu. phir tum se milti hu. Aakhir itne time baad mil rahe hai. bahut si baatein karni hai.

Shalini: Thik hai tum unhe report kar aao. Main infermery main tumhara wait karti hu. Phir baad main tumhari help bhi kar dongi tumhari unpacking main. ok

naina: ok, c u den

Naina goes from there and shalini sees her with teary eyes.

Naina was going to Bc office, but before that she comes to wall of fame. She sees her bahiys's pic there. she caresses the pic and salutes to the pic. But later what she sees makes her angry. She called the orderly who was passing by there. Naina is very angry and calls the orderly.

Naina: Yaha par Capt. Rajveer Singh Shekhawat ki pic thi. Ab wo yaha par kyu nahi hai?

Orderly: mam wo actully saaf karte time wo galti se gir gayi thi aur uska glass tut gaya tha. Isliye wo yaha par nahi hai.

Naina: kya aap mujhe batayenge ki ye kitne din pehle ki baat hai.

Orderly: mam kuch 15-20 din pehle ki.

Naina: To aap mujhse ye kehna chahte hai ki pichle 15-20 din se capt. rajveer ki pic yaha nahi hai. Kya aap mujhe batayenge ki ek glass lagwane main kitna time lagta hai. Ek glass lagwane ke liye aapko kitne din chaiye. she shouts.

Orderly: mam wo actually hum sab busy the to kisi ke pass time nahi tha pic ko repair karvane ke liye.

naina gets angry after hearing that. she shouts at orderly.

Naina: Time nahi tha aapke pass. Buy the aap sab. aap jante hai kihum soldier apni jaan dav ar laga kar desh ki hifajat karte hai. Aap jante hai capt. rajveer singh Shekhawat bina time ki parvah kiye apne desh ke liye apni jaan jokhim main dal dete hai. Aur aapke ke pass time nahi hai unki tasveer to thik karvane ka. yeh wall of fame sirf dikhane e liye nahi hai. yeh wall of fame isliye hai taki yaha jo cadets aate hai, wo yaha lagi tasveero se inspiration le sake unke jaisa bane ki, unke jaise apne desh ke lie apni zindgi daav par lgane ki, taki wo jaan sake ki agar aaj unka desh surakshit hai to wo kin logo ki wajah se hai. Aur aapke pass time nahi hai. Jo soldier apni life ki parwah nahi karta apne desj ke liye aapke pass time nahi hai, unki tasveer ki thik karvane ke liye. Itne konse busy rehte hai aap. har soldier ka ek sapna hota hai, apni tasveer ko wall of fame pe dekhne ka, aur apki carelesness ki wajah se Capt. rajveer ki tasveer yaha nahi hai.Do you now how disrespectful this is.

By that time, many cadets comes there, BC, Dr. Shalini, Suriji, Alekh also comes there.

BC comes near Niana.

BC: Capt. naina Singh allhuwalia, what's the matter.

Naina: Capt. naina singh allhuwalia reporting sir and she salutes him.

BC: at ease capt. kya aap mujhe batayengi ki kya problem hai.

Naina: Sir yaha Capt. rajveer ki tasveer nahi hai. Aur orderly ka kehna hai ki, wo tasveer 15- 20 din pehle tut gayi thi aur inhe tabse time nahi mila us tasveer ko thik karvake yaha wapis lagane ka. Sir mujhe aapko explain karne ke jarrorat nahi ki ek soldier ke liye wall of fame kya importance rakhti hai.

BC: i very well kow Capt. Main kuch dino se yaha nahi tha isliye mujhe iss bare me pata nahi tha. Mujhe khud bahut gussa aa raha hai. But you relax, main orderly ko kehkar abhi wo tasveer re[air karvane bhejta hu taki jald se jald wo hum yaha laga sake.orderly jao aur jaldi tasveer thik karvake lao. he shouts on orderly.

Naina: Sir if you allow me then, i am having Capt. rajveer's portrait with me. if you don't have any problem then we can hang that one, because i don't want want to wait any longer for seeing capt. rajveer's pic on Wall of fame, as it's his right.

BC and other faculty members were surprised but they also knew that how much Naina respect Capt. rajveer , how much he means to her and she can do anything for his pride and respect.

BC: Sure capt. that will be good. I don't have any problem but i want you to hang capt. rajveer's pic there as we all know that nobody respect Capt. rajveer more than you and if anyone is having the right to hang his pic on wall of fame then it's you.

Naina: Thank you sir.

Naina then takes out Capt. Rajveer's portrait from her bag and hang it on wall of fame. She then salutes the pic. With her everyone else also salutes. Naina is having tears in her eyes but she hides her tears.

Bc then asks her to come to his office to report. Naina goes from there with BC. But before going she turns around. She is feeling something strange. She is feeling as if someone is watching her. She sees around but then goes to BC office.

Shalini, Alekh, suriji has tears in their eyes by seeing Naina's love for her mentor and by seeing her conditions.

On the other side cadets are confused by her behavior and have questions in their mind that why she cares so much for capt. rajveer and why she was carrying his pic with her.

Among all this, there was one person who was seeing all these from far. When Naina turns around to see someone, he hides himself. He too was having tears in his eyes but there was also pride and amazement in his eyes for Naina.

Alekh comes near to that person.

Person: so yeh hai aapki Capt. Naina singh Allhuwalia.

Alekh says proudly: Yes sir, yeh hai Capt. Naina Singh allhuwalia, meri behen. Aur abhi abhi aapne jo dekha us se aapko yeh andaza to ho hi gaya hoga ki Naina ke liye Capt. Rajveer kitne importance rakhte hai aur uske man main unke liye kitni respect hai. Wo kuch bhi bhul sakti hai par Capt. Rajveer Singh Shekhawat ko nahi. I hope ab aap apni galt dubara dohrayenge nahi?

That person sees to Alekh with some guilt in his eyes and says nahi main dubara wo galti nahi karoga. Waise chalo mere room main chalte hai waha baat karte hai. Mujhe kuch Important information share karni hai. yaha baat karna thik nahi hai. come lets go.

Alekh: Yes sir

Both alekh and that person enters in one room. Outside there is a name plate on which Major. Arjun Rathore is written. (yes that person is Major Arjun Rathore.)

(mujhe pata hai aap Rajveer ko expect kar rahe the, par Rajveer itni jaldi to nahi aane wala, par shayd agar aap comments karo to aa bhi sakta hai )

Arjun: Alekh tum ache se jaante ho ki humara mission kya hai aur ab kyunki Naina aa chuki hai to hume careful rehna hai. Tum jante ho ki Naina kitni important hai iss mission ke liye.

Alekh: yes sir. Aap tension mat lijiye apun Naina ka pura dhyan rakhega. Naina sirf iss mission ke liye hi nahi mere liye bhi bahut important hai. main usse kuch nahi hone donga.

Arjun: Main janta hu Alekh. mera wo matlab nahi tha. Mission ke liye hi nahi waise bhi Naina bahut important hai. Main jo kehna chatha hu wo yeh ki ab humara mission actual me start hota hai. Ab se hume har choti choti baat ko bhi notice karna hai. Aur hume yeh jald jald se pata lagana hai ki KMA me wo spy kon hai aur us ke liye Naina itni important kyu hai.

Alekh: yes sir. main samajh raha hu. Waise sir abhi sirf do din hue hai naye batch start hui. Maine cadets pe nazar rakhna suru kar diya hai par abhi tak koi bhi suspicion me nahi hai. waise kuch aur Cadets abhi aane wale hai. Suna hai ki kuch special cadets hai.

Arjun: hmm, maine bhi suna hai. mere pass aaj raat tak unki information aa jayegi, humme unpar bhi nazar rakhni hogi. waise info mili hai ki kal Academy me koi yoga teacher aane wali hai. Faculty me waise to baki sab purane log hi hai isliye ye jo new faculty member aa rahe hai hume us par bhi nazar rakhni hogi. Waise ek aur baat hai, aur wo yeh ki bahut jald tumhare baaki ke dost bhi KMA aane wale hai.

Alekh: aapka kehne ka matlab hai Huda, pooja, ali, yudi

Arjun: haa wahi sab.

Alekh: par sir aapko nahi lagta ye sab bahut jaldi ho raha hai. Apun ne aapko pehle hi sab bata diya tha. Naina aaj hi aayi hai, wo abhi thik se settle bhi nahi ho payi hai aur aise me baki sab ka aana. Aur phir sir Capt. Abhimanyu rai Chauhan bhi academy me bahut jald wapis aayenge. abhi to yeh nahi pata ki Naina unko dekh kar kaise react karegi, aap jante ho sab sir.

Arjun: Main janta hu. Tumne mujhe pehle hi bata diya tha. Par Naina jitni jaldi ye sab adjust kar le unta hi acha hai, iss mission ke liye bhi aur uske liye bhi. Hum yaha sirf mission ke liye nahi hai. Hum yaha Naina ke liye bhi hai. To jitni jaldi Niana ki personal life sort hogi, utna acha hoga. kyunki phir hum sab mission pe puri tarah se focus kar paayenge. Aur mujhe lagta hai ki ab waqt aa gaya hai sabko ek baar phir se saath me lane ka aur Niana ke yahi dost uske saath honge Capt. Abhimanyu Rai Chauhan ko face karne ke liye. aur phir Naina ke saath tum ho, Dr. Shalini hai.

Alekh: aur aap?

Arjun smiles a little: tumhe abhi bhi doubt hai. To main tumhara doubt clear kar deta hu ki main bhi Naina ke saath hu. Main to uske har kadam pe saath rehna chatha hu, par wo mera saath kabul karegi ya nahi bas yeh nahi pata. Wo to sirf Capt. Rajveer ka saath chathi hai. waise yeh sab chodo, mujhe lagta hai ki ab tumhe Naina se milne jana chaiye, usse tumhari jarrorat hogi.

Alekh: aur aap kab mil rahe hai Naina se?

Arjun: bahut jald. and Arjun starts thinking.

Note: .I hope you will like the chapter. Tell me how is story going and whether you are liking or not. If you are not happy with my story then i will discontinue it because i don't want to bore all of you.

Enjoy reading and give me feedback.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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I seriously wanted dat to b raj...
Plz get him back soon
We wanna see a lot of romantic scenes between rajveer and naina. ..
Nd ya plz do pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
great update
par ye arjun kon hai
expected it to be raj
continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hii
Its my first comment on ur story, and its such a great attempt like the plot very much plz continue as i m a big follower of raj naina and only like to read ff based on them,

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