Rajveer and Naina: Second Chance to their love, imp note on pg 94

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Arti Gupta

@RNforever

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

really nice
y don't u pm me i was waiting for it
well its nice part plz bring raj back soon
i want to see them together soon
update soon

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Arti Bhardwaj

@saiaarti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: sonamiglesias
Wow read ur story in one go...amazing n hopefully happy ending for RN...pm me

Tqqq for liking my story and appreciating it...

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Arti Bhardwaj

@saiaarti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: prerna1
great update
par ye arjun kon hai
expected it to be raj
continue soon...

Tqqq for liking d update. Will reveal soon who is dis Arjun and where is Raj... will try to update soon..

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Arti Bhardwaj

@saiaarti

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: RNforever
really nice
y don't u pm me i was waiting for it
well its nice part plz bring raj back soon
i want to see them together soon
update soon

Tqqq for liking it.. and sorry I didn't pm u 😭 but from next time I will pm u definitely. ..😊

Will try to bring raj back soon but u need to wait for sometime but I can assure u he will come back afterall it's RN love story. ..😊

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Arti Bhardwaj

@saiaarti

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: mylifereality
Hii
Its my first comment on ur story, and its such a great attempt like the plot very much plz continue as i m a big follower of raj naina and only like to read ff based on them,

Tqqq for liking my story. .. will try to update soon..

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Shah Sair Hassan

@ShahSAIR

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Chapter 6
finaly u updated..
Ok finaly suspence khtm that person is Captain Arjun but but y i m feeling he is Captain Rajveer Shikhawat but in disguise of Arjun.. Waiting for pardah phaash..
But ye Chauhan Sahab ka kya locha hai.. M i missing something..
No need to discontinue it bt pls jaese hai waesi rehne dou.. Intresting and widout dragging.. Coz usey readers b oop jaatey hai..
Full Gang is Coming.. I m waiting for their comeback.. KMA mai phir se jashn hoga..
N why Naina's life is in danger typ.. Means why someone is behind NAina.. Kya usney b dushman paal liye or phir se serial ki trh yaha b waps enemies ka comback hoga.. Hope aesa na ho..
Will wait for next..
But pls update soon..
Hugs n Lovd dear

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Arti Bhardwaj

@saiaarti

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: ShahSAIR
Chapter 6
finaly u updated..
Ok finaly suspence khtm that person is Captain Arjun but but y i m feeling he is Captain Rajveer Shikhawat but in disguise of Arjun.. Waiting for pardah phaash..
But ye Chauhan Sahab ka kya locha hai.. M i missing something..
No need to discontinue it bt pls jaese hai waesi rehne dou.. Intresting and widout dragging.. Coz usey readers b oop jaatey hai..
Full Gang is Coming.. I m waiting for their comeback.. KMA mai phir se jashn hoga..
N why Naina's life is in danger typ.. Means why someone is behind NAina.. Kya usney b dushman paal liye or phir se serial ki trh yaha b waps enemies ka comback hoga.. Hope aesa na ho..
Will wait for next..
But pls update soon..
Hugs n Lovd dear

Nahi enemies ka comeback nahi hoga.. par ho sakta hai ki ye enemies Naina ya pgir capt. Rajveer past se related ho.

Major Arjun Capt. Rajveer gai ya nahi yeh dekhna hoga..

Abhimanyu ka kya chakar hai yeh jald hi pata chal jayega..

Yes whole gang is coming to party to banti hai boss.. 👏

I too don't like dragging my story and I like to write simple and straightforward. . Just few hidden things other then that my story will be straightforward ... tqqq for liking my story.. keep giving ur suggestions to improve my story as it's my first time... 😊

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Shah Sair Hassan

@ShahSAIR

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: saiaarti

Nahi enemies ka comeback nahi hoga.. par ho sakta hai ki ye enemies Naina ya pgir capt. Rajveer past se related ho.
Major Arjun Capt. Rajveer gai ya nahi yeh dekhna hoga..
Abhimanyu ka kya chakar hai yeh jald hi pata chal jayega..
Yes whole gang is coming to party to banti hai boss..👏
I too don't like dragging my story and I like to write simple and straightforward. . Just few hidden things other then that my story will be straightforward ... tqqq for liking my story.. keep giving ur suggestions to improve my story as it's my first time...😊

enemies from past.. Captain Rajveer n Naina k b.. I think Dimag k ghodey dhodaaney padengey bt ryt now they r on vaccations.. Aatey hi kaam pe laga lungi.. :p

yahi simplicity hai jisney mjhey attract kiya hai..
So Chauhaan sahb se kuch pardah hai.. Koi nhi..
N don't worry jaha mjhey lagega u r going wrong way raastey pe laa dungi waps.. Raj Veer's promise..
Stay blessed.. Tk cr

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Arti Bhardwaj

@saiaarti

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: ShahSAIR
Chapter 6
finaly u updated..
Ok finaly suspence khtm that person is Captain Arjun but but y i m feeling he is Captain Rajveer Shikhawat but in disguise of Arjun.. Waiting for pardah phaash..
But ye Chauhan Sahab ka kya locha hai.. M i missing something..
No need to discontinue it bt pls jaese hai waesi rehne dou.. Intresting and widout dragging.. Coz usey readers b oop jaatey hai..
Full Gang is Coming.. I m waiting for their comeback.. KMA mai phir se jashn hoga..
N why Naina's life is in danger typ.. Means why someone is behind NAina.. Kya usney b dushman paal liye or phir se serial ki trh yaha b waps enemies ka comback hoga.. Hope aesa na ho..
Will wait for next..
But pls update soon..
Hugs n Lovd dear

No purane enemies wapis nahi aa rahe par ho sakta hai ki yeh jo enemies hai wo naina ya phir caot. Rajveer ke past se related ho. .

Yes whole gang is coming.. to party to banti hai boss..👏

Capr. Abhimanyu ka chakar bhi jaldi pata chal jayega..

I too don't like dragging. I like to keep my story simple and straightforward. Just few suspences which will be ckeared out very soon.. after that my stort will be simoke and mostly about RN...

Keep giving ur suggestions as it's my first time in writing. 😊😊😊