***Ek Ajnabi Rishta*** rajveer naina (lrl) part 16 on 2 thread - Page 42

Hii Arthi

Hey dii

Originally posted by: sanabmw

Hii Arthi

Nice UD😳so finally naina and naveen mil gaye and shalini naveen ki GF hai.and wo ye bat naina se chupa raha hai😆abhi and raj usko tang kar rahe hai😉over all nice UD.. best of luck for ur exam dear👍🏼

thanks dear 😃

Originally posted by: agm1998

Hey dii

Sorry for d late comment

Loved it soo much

Navin and naina finally found each other

Naina feels dat she is d reason for her parents death

Aww raj just can't take his eyes off her

Naina iss soo scared to loose navin again dat she is moving around holding his hand

Loved d part where abhi nd raj tease navin nd Shalini

Plz raj naina ka thoda romance start karo na dii

Really like d way u write their romantic moments

Continue soon

thanks n its ok
RN moments will be start soon just wait ...dear 😳

**** Ek Ajnabi Rishta****



Part 6



Sab ase he baatein kar rahe the ki tabhi naina ke chikhne ki aawaze aane lagi Naveen bhag kar naina ke pas gaya aur uske peche peche baki sab bhi ...



Jab Naveen room me aaya toh usne dekha ki naina puri pasine me bhigi hue hai ...usne apne aakhe kas kar band kar rakhi thi ...bed ke ek kone me simat kar baithe thi ...aur chikhe jaa rahi thi...sayad usne koi bura sapna dekha tha ...itna kuch sahne ke baad asa hona koi harani ke baat nahi thi ...



Naina aakhe band kiye bas yahi chilaye ja rahi thi...



Naina : (scaredly shouting) haath mat lagana mujhe ...dor hatto...please chod dor mujhe please...


Naina ase pata nahi kya kya bole ja rahi thi ...yeh baat toh tai thi ki usne apne aate se juda koi sapna dekha hain...


Naveen jaldi se naina ke pas gaya aur usse samhalne ki koshish karne laga



Naveen : (samhalte hue) baccha sab thi hain ..koi nahi hain yaha... koi kuch nahi karega Tujhe...

par naina ko jase kuch sunai he nahi de raha tha wo bas chekhe ja rahi thi ...


Usne Naveen ko bhi dhaka mar kar khud se dur kar diya ...


Shalini ne jaldi se naina ki dawao me se ek injection inkal kar usse lagne gayi...


Shalini ne jase he naina ko injection lagane wale thi Naveen ne uska haath pakad kar rok diya...



Naveen : (with lots of pain in his voice) mere behen ko iss injection ki nahi mere jarurat hain shalini main khud samhaluga usse...


Shalini peche ho gayi ...Naveen aa kar naina ko samhalne ki koshish karta raha par naina wo toh kuch sunne ko taiyar he nahi thi...



Naveen : (holding her from shoulders) bacha dekh main hu tere bhai ...koi nahi hain yaha ...koi kuch nahi karega ...
(Cupped her face) mere aakho me dekh ...tera bhai hain na tere saath ab koi kuch nahi karega samjhi...ab dar mat


Naina kisi tarah shant ho gayi ...wo apni bade bade aakho se Naveen ko dekh rahi thi...jaha naina ke aakho me dar ke aasu the wahi Naveen ki aakho me apni behen ko asi halat me dekh kar uske dard ke aasu the ...




Naina jhut se Naveen ke gale lag kar jor jor se rone lagi ...



Shalini raj abhimanyu teeno waha se chale gaye ...unhe pata tha ab naina ko sirf apni bhai ki jarurat thi...


Asse dekhti he dekhte ek haft kab beet gaya pata he nahi chala ...naina me in ek hafto me kafi sudhar aa raha tha...naina ke andar ka dar ab thoda thoda Kam hone laga tha ...Naveen har pal naina ke saath uskkisaye ki tarah rahta tha ...yeh Naveen ka pyaar he tha jo naina ko uss trauma se bahar nikal raha tha ...naina ne ab halka halka muskurana shuru kar diya tha ...
Jisi dekh kar Naveen ke dil ko ek sukun milta tha...




Par abhi bhi wo kisi anjaan se milna nahi chahti thi ...iss wajah se Naveen ne kisko naina se milne nahi diya ...sirf raj abhimanyu aur shalini he milte the naina se ...wo unke saath ab thoda comfortable hone lagi thi...



Naina ke sharer (body) ke zakham toh ab bharne lage the par maan ke zakhmo ko bharne me waqt lag raha tha...


Par ek hafte me kisi ne naina se uske past ke bare me baat nahi ki...uski haalat he ase nahi thi ki wo kuch bata sake...



Naveen ne saaf saaf kah diya tha ab usse naina ka past jane me koi dilchaspi nahi hain...
Uske pas uski behen hain ab aur usse kuch nahi chaheyi...



Par sach toh yeh tha ki Naveen sach sunna he nahi chahta tha usse pata tha ki wo bardash nahi kar payega ...naina ka wo haad se zada dhenana ateet...


Ab bas uske liye uski behen ka aaj aur aane wala kal maine rakhta hain...



Ab ek hafta ho chuka tha Naveen ko kal se apni duty join karni thi ...aaj sunday tha ...


Naveen thoda pareshan tha kyuki wo naina ko ek pal ke liye bhi akela nahi chodna chahta tha ...


Par uski ab usse duty karni thi ...usse samjh nahi aa raha tha ki ab wo kya kare naina ko akela chodna sahi nahi tha abhi...



In Naveen room



Naveen raj abhimanyu shalini aur naina ...pacho baithe the naina humesha ki taraf Naveen ka haath pakde uske pas he baithe thi ...



Shalini Naveen ko Naina se baat karne ka ishara karti hain ...par wo kya kahe usse samjh nahi aata ...


Toh Naveen ki jagah abhimanyu he naina se baat kata hain...


Abhimanyu : naina aapko pata hain na apke bhai ek army officer hain ...

Naina ne haa me ser hilaya ...


Abhi : (with little hestation) woh kya hain na kal se Naveen ko duty join karni hai ...toh ab wo din bhar apke saath nahi rah sakte ...




Naina ne yeh sunte he Naveen ko dekhne lagi usne dar ke Naveen ka haath aur jor se pakad liya ...uski aakho me dar dekh raha tha ...woh Naveen ko khud se ek pal ke liye bhi dor nahi jane dena chahti thi ...



Naveen : (samjhate hue) bacha isme panic honi ke koi baat nahi hain ...main toh humesha yahi academy me he rahuga bas kuch classes lena jaya karuga ...main yaha teacher hu na ..aur jab main yaha nahi raha karuga toh hume se koi na koi humesha tere saath rahega ...tujhe ek pal ke liye bhi akela nahi chodega ...



Tabhi room me sare cadets aaye yani ki humare best five cadets huda alekh pooja ali yudi...aate hain



Naina aur bhi jada dhabrane lagi kyuki inn ek hafte me naina iss room se bahar nikli he nahi thi aur iss room me aane ki permission nahi thi kisi ko ...cadets ko bhi nahi ...



Yudi naina ko dar dekh kar khud bhi dar gaya ...usse laga kahi naina phir se kuch fak ke na mare usse


Yudi : (little scared) come we come in sir...(yudi baat to Naveen se kar raha tha par uski nazre naina par thi ...)


Naveen : (smiling) come in cadtes ...wase bhi tumhe mere room me aane ke liye permission ki jarurat nahi hain...




Alekh : (with hesitation) sir wo apun log ko apni bulaya ...wo kya hain na apnu log ko mana kiya tha na apke kamre me aane ko ...



Raj : mana mana kiya tha cadet kyuki tab naina dari hue thi par ab wo kafi better hain...



Huda: (in ali ear) phir se toh kuch fak ke nahi maregi na ...



Raj ne huda ki baat sunn le thi aur naa chahti hue bhi wo smile karne laga kyuki aaj phele bar asa hua hoga ki cadet huda kisi janani se flirt karne ke bajaye dar raha ho ...woh bhi ek khubsurat janani se


Raj : ( controlling his smile) cadet huda ...


Huda : sorry sir...


Ali : toh sir hume bulaya kyu hain ...koi kaam hain humse...



Abhimanyu : arre phele baitheyi toh ...


Phir sare cadets naina ke samne wale sofe pe bathie hain ...naina Naveen ke pas baithe unn sabko dekh rahi thi...



Naveen : (seriously) mujhe tum sabse bohat jaruri kaam tha ...


Pooja : arre sir aap toh bas hukum kar dekheyi ...hum humare Mobile me apki pasand ka ringtone set kar le gaye ...


Naveen : (shaking his head ) kaam bohat jimedari ka hain...sirf ringtone he nahi apko apni mobile ko security lock bhi lagana hoga



Sare cadets confused ho kar Naveen ko dekh rahe the ...



Naveen : tum logo ko pata hai kal se main duty join kar raha hu ...(naina ki taraf dekhte hue) Par mujhe mere gudiya ki fikar hain main usse akela nahi choda sakta ...jab main nahi rahuga toh abhimanyu shalini ya raj me se koi na koi har waqt iske saath rahega par ...ase bohat se moke aaye gay jab hum charo ko ek saath jana padega tab main chahta hu ki tum log iske saath raho ...iska khayal rakho ...
Bolo kar pao gay yeh zimedare ka kaam ...


Ali : (proudly) aap bilkul fikar mat kare sir hum naina ka khayal bohat ache se rakhe gay...hum apki pareshani samjhte hai...humare bhi panch behne hai...ab se hum naina ka khayal bilkul apni behen ki tarah rakhe gay...



Naveen ali ki baat sunn kar bohat khush ho jata hai...par naina bohat uncomfortable ho rahi thi kyuki yeh sab uske liye anjan the ...""" Ek Ajnabi the...




Naveen naina ki pareshani samajh raha tha ...



Naveen : arre tum log toh naina se mile he nahi ...chalo main tum logo ka introduction kara deta hu ...


Pooja : arre sir aap rahne do hum khud he apni mobile me naina ka contact aur naina ke mobile me apna contact save kare de gay...


Yeh kah kar pooja naina ke samne aa kar khadi ho gayi ...aur handshake karne ke liye apna haatha aage badhaya ...



Pooja : (cheerfully) hiii naina ...main hu pooja ..cadet pooja ghai...kma me last year hai yeh mera phir mere moblie me bhi army ka contact humesha ke liye save ho jayega...wase pata hai jab main nayi nayi yaha aayi thi tab toh mere moblie me yaha ka network catch he nahi karte the par ab toh asa lag raha hai ki ...mera permanent connection jod jaye KMA se...



Pooja apne mobile language me bolo ja rahi thi aur naina ko kuch samjh nahi aa raha tha...wo usse ase dekh rahi thi ki maano pooja kisi aline language me baat kar rahi ho...


Naveen : (haste hue)cadet ghai...shant ho jaeyi apki koi bhi baat naina ki samjh me nahi aayi hogi...



Pooja muh bana kar naina ki taraf dekhti hai...


Pooja : (making face) tujhe kuch samjh nahi aaya...


Naina ne naa me ser hila diya aur phir sab hasne lage ...


Pooja : koi baat nahi tujhe mera naam toh samjh aa gaya na ...


Naina ne bas haa me sir hila diya ...

Yudi : hey pooja usse tumhara naam samjh aa gaya ...so please side...mujhe bhi khud ko introduce kara hain ...


Huda : chup kar yudiye...main baat karata hua phele



Phir huda naina ke samne aa kar khada ho gaya ...


Naina kisi ladke ko samne dekh kar thoda darse gayi thi aur Naveen ki or kabree chali gayi...




Huda : oye tu dar mat main kuch nahi karuga tere ko ...wase uss din ke liye sorry yaar ...huda ne kuch jada he bol diya ...par sachi mummy ji ki kasam huda jananiyo ki badi izzat karta hain ...arre dekh tu kitna bolti hain ...huda ko uska naam bhi nahi btane diya ...chal koi nahi ab bata deta hain huda apna naam (with full style) my self amardeep huda ...mummy ji ka jawan aur papa ji ka kissan...aur haa jananiya marte hain iss huda pe ...bas ek tu he hai jisne marne ki jagah kuch fake ke mara tha huda ko ...




Huda ki baatein sunn kar sabke chahre ke ek he expression the ...""iska kuch nahi ho sakta""



Phir yudi aata hain



Yudi : (with big smile) hey naina ...i m yudi ...main bhi kma me cadet hu ..you know mai. yaha apne apko prove karne aaya tha...apne dad ko yeh dekhane ki main unki help ke bina bhi kuch ban sakata hu...wase do u like latest technology... U know mujhe bohat pasand hain ...i love it ..if u want any type of help then tell me ...main jarur karuga tumhari madad ...ok



Yeh kah kar yudi chala gaya aur ali aaya ...



Ali : (polity) kase hain aap ...humara naam ali hain cadet ali begh ...hum yaha officer bane aaye hain...apne abu ka sapna pura karne ...yeh dekhane ki ek subedar ka beta officer ban sakta hain ...wase humare panch behen hain sab humse choti hain ...aap milegi na unse toh khush ho jayegi...wase aap bhi humare behan jasi he hain ...kisi chiz ki jarurat ho toh be jhijhak humse kah dejeyega


Naina bas haa me sir hila deti hain ...uske chare pe ek halki se muskan thi usse cadets se mil kar acha lag raha tha...sab ek dosre se kitne alag phir bhi ek dosre ki takat ...Naveen se iss ek hafte me bohat sunna tha naina ne aaj wo inn sabko dekh bhi rahi thi...sab usse jane pahchane se lag rahe the


Ali ke jane ke baad alekh aata hain ...
Alekh ko samjh nahi aata ki wo kya bolo naina se...

Alekh samne aa kar khada ho gaya pad kuch bol nahi raha tha


Shalini : alekh kuch bolo ...dekho naina tumhare introduction ka wait kar rahi hain ...



Alekh ne naina ki taraf dekha wo usse he dekh rahi thi...

Alekh uski aakho me uska dard padhne ki koshish karne laga ...uska dard mehsoos karne ki ...


Alekh naina ke samne apne knees pe baith gaya ..kisi ko samjh nahi aa raha tha ki alekh aakhir kar kya raha hai ...



Alekh : wooo...wo bole toh apun ka naam alekh hain ...apun jail se aaila hain ...(naina haran ho kar usse dekhne lagi) apun ko wo kya kahte hai...haa sudharne ke vaste yaha bheja hain ...



Alekh ko samjh he nahi aa raha tha ki wo kya aur kase bole jab bhi wo naina ki aakho me dekhta usse sirf dar he nazar aata ...jo kahi na kafi uske dard ko jaga raha tha ...


Alekh : tere ko pata hai apun bohat chota tha jab apun ki maa mar gayi ...apun ke baap ne mara tha usko...saala sharabi tha roj sharab pee kar maa ko marta aur ek din itna mara ki wo mar he gayi...apnu se bardash nahi hua apun ne bhi apne baap ko mar diya ...saale ne maa ko mara tha apun ne usko he tapka dala ...

(Sab bohat haran the kyuki aaj tak akekh ne kabhi kisi se apni maa ke bare me baat nahi ki thi ...sab jante the ki wo apni maa se bohat pyaar karta hain par kabhi kuch kahta nahi tha wo )


Alekh : tere ko pata hain aaj apun phele bar kisi ko apun ki maa ke bare me bata rela hain... Pata hain kyu ...(alekh ki baat sunn kar Naina ke aakho me aasu aa gaye the...naina ki tarah alekh ne bhi apni maa bachpan me he kho de thi)

kyuki apun tere aakho me ek dard dekh rela hain ...jo apun ki aakho me bhi hain ...shayad wo dard apun log ki maa ka he hain ...Apun ki maa kahti thi ki humesha aurat ki izzat karne ko...kyuki wo sirf ek aurat nahi hoti ek maa ek beti ek biwi ek behen ek dost hoti hai...apun ne humesha apni maa ki baat manta hain ...apun janta hain ki tere saath bohat galat hua hain ...apun bas itna kahega ki kabhi haar mat mana kyuki jis din tumne har mani...tu bhi mar jayegi apun ki maa ki tarah...



(Alekh naina ke ser pe haath rakhta hain bohat pyaar se ...with full of love n affection )

Apun humesha dua karega ki jis himat se tu aaj tak ladi hain woh himat humesha bani rahi ...tu humesha khush rahi ...aur yaad rakhna kabhi tere ko jarurat hue toh tu apun ko apne saath payegi ...(with painful smile)



Yeh kah kar waha se uth kar jane laga ...jase he alekh muda usne kuch asa sunna ki usse yakin he nahi hua apne kaano pe...


FRIENDS?????

Alekh ne peche mud kar dekha toh naina ne apna haath aage badhaya tha dosti karne ke liye ...



Naina : (with small smile) friends??? Bole toh tu apun se dosti karega ????



Naina ki baat sunn kar room me pura sannata cha gaya ...sirf ek nahi do do jhatke diye the naina ne phela toh usne khud dosti ka haath aage badhaya tha ...jo naina kisi se baat nahi kar rahi thi usne dosti ka haath badhaya woh bhi ek ladke ki taraf ????


Aur dosra jhatka yeh tha ki naina alekh se uski bhasha me baat kar rahi thi ...bole toh tapaori...


Room me sabki nazre naina pe tiki thi ...


Naina : (innocently) bolo ???nahi karni dosti


NIna jasi he apna haath neche karti hai alekh jhut se usse haath mila liya...


Alekh : (with shocking smile) bole toh aaj se apun log dost



Pooja : (shocked) oye tu bolti bhi hain ...aur wo bhi tapori???? Humate quadi ki tarah...


Naveen : (happily shocked) bacha tu...


Naveen ko kuch samjh he nahi aa raha tha ki wo kya bole naina se...



Ene of part 6



Love Arti

Wow great update. Hahah naina n in tapori language. Pooja ki baat toh mobile se chalo hoti hai. Huda ko dar bhi lagta hai hahahaah

Yipeee,finally naina bole mere ko lga hi tha ki jo koi nhi kr pata wo apun ka alekh kr deta hai,or alekh or naina ka rishte ka ye side to aap jarrur dikhaoge,
A perfect use of title ajnabi,yes all are ajnabi for naina bt bt rishte ki shuruwat to ho gyi hai,pehle alekh phir hmare hero ke sath,ankho hi ankho mein ishare to start ho hi gyr hai dheere dheere dil se jubaan tk bhi pahoch jayega.
Bt usse pehle me want to se the love affection care of Alekh towards naina or apne neveen to hai hi.
Bt abhi next part ke liye mere se wait nhi ho rha dear jldi kuch kro


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Shweta

Awesome update

an equal parts awesome n funny one...great :)

Awesome update 👏
And funny one also 😆