SS : Rajveer-Naina Point 1857!*EPILOGUE* Pg 32; A/N Pg38 - Page 32

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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 4th... Sooo Kabhi gussa nd kabhi pyaar vali situation hai
Let see age kya hota hai
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: RNpoint1857


Aftee reading dis i jst want to say 1 word "Wowww"

<font color="#ff0000" size="5">😳Thank you😊</font>

U r an amazing writer

<font color="#ff0000" size="5">Really? Thanks for the compliment. But I really don't think so!😛
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I hv tonnes of assignmnt to cmplete bt all m doing is reading dis SS

<font color="#ff0000" size="5">Oh god! You should really complete your assignment then😕I don't want you to read this over doing assignments!😕</font>

U made me addicted to it

<font color="#ff0000" size="5">Hahaha! 😆Lolz...😉</font>

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Yaa cmpleted part 4th.. M jst going to cmpkete my work otherwise professors will show me point 1857
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: elrein_2046


Yaa cmpleted part 4th.. M jst going to cmpkete my work otherwise professors will show me point 1857


Well in that case I will suggest you to keep your work incomplete 😉😆
Edited by RNpoint1857 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Finally finished reading your this SS.

Just amazing and perfect. 👏 👏 👏

I have already told you that you are a brilliant writer and you mix your FFs with perfection. I mean in your FFs we find every emotion and feeling. Raj and Naina didn't get much time to fulfill our demand of romance but our FFs make it possible. You know we love to see romance and you filled this SS with perfect romance.

Naina's zid that she has to go at Point 1857 and Raj's indirect denial as he knew that very well if he goes with Naina there he will not be able to control his desires more. But he didn't have to control his feelings any more and now he should not have to as she also loved him. She said it directly to him and now he understood that she too wants that.

Raj and his shy nature which also give him very less chance to romance. Point 1857 is very special place for them and so as for us. We always wanted to enjoy the romance at that place but never got that opportunity. Finally they kissed too and it was a sort of trust they have started to do on each other. I know you do a lot of work but I would suggest you to write on RED SAREE scene as well.😉 😉 😉

Well done please do write more such beautiful stories. 😊 😊 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
lovely & fabulous.the point 1857 scene iski beauty iski simplicity hai ye scene one of the most romantic scene Ho sakta tha lekin show waalon ne pahle duptta wala part edit karke baad me scene ko abruptly end karke dil hi tod Diya is scene me jab captain sahab naina ko bench pe baith ke intense look de rahe the aise lag raha tha Ki after mud scene jaise wo bonfire ke samne baith ke imagine kar rahe the waisa yaha bhi kuchh romantic sa imagine karenge yaar lekin ye bhi nahi Hua but thank god apne wo saari kami aur kasak Puri kar di for this kisses & tight hug love you
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Finally finished reading your this SS.

Just amazing and perfect. 👏 👏 👏

I have already told you that you are a brilliant writer and you mix your FFs with perfection. I mean in your FFs we find every emotion and feeling. Raj and Naina didn't get much time to fulfill our demand of romance but our FFs make it possible. You know we love to see romance and you filled this SS with perfect romance.

Naina's zid that she has to go at Point 1857 and Raj's indirect denial as he knew that very well if he goes with Naina there he will not be able to control his desires more. But he didn't have to control his feelings any more and now he should not have to as she also loved him. She said it directly to him and now he understood that she too wants that.

Raj and his shy nature which also give him very less chance to romance. Point 1857 is very special place for them and so as for us. We always wanted to enjoy the romance at that place but never got that opportunity. Finally they kissed too and it was a sort of trust they have started to do on each other. I know you do a lot of work but I would suggest you to write on RED SAREE scene as well.😉 😉 😉

Well done please do write more such beautiful stories. 😊 😊 😊


I will reply to this comment in detail later as for now I want to tell you that I have already written on RED SAREE scene please check 😊
Edited by RNpoint1857 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: RNpoint1857


I will reply to this comment in detail later as for now I want to tell you that I have already written on RED SAREE scene please check 😊



Got your pm and will read and comment on it soon. 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha



Got your pm and will read and comment on it soon. 😊 😊 😊


Sure 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Finnnaalllyyy I cmplete dis story.. actuly ws caught wid sm imp. Things..
Rajveer ws typicaly behaving lyk a BF. Light out ke baad milne ane ke khyal se hi I ws blushing nd wen it happn only i knw hw it ws feeling.. loved reading dis demanding nd possesive Raj.
U r an Amazing writer.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: elrein_2046

Finnnaalllyyy I cmplete dis story.. actuly ws caught wid sm imp. Things..
Rajveer ws typicaly behaving lyk a BF. Light out ke baad milne ane ke khyal se hi I ws blushing nd wen it happn only i knw hw it ws feeling.. loved reading dis demanding nd possesive Raj.
U r an Amazing writer.


Finnnaalllyyy I cmplete dis story..

Great! 👏

actuly ws caught wid sm imp. Things..

Oh no problem 😊

Rajveer ws typicaly behaving lyk a BF. Light out ke baad milne ane ke khyal se hi I ws blushing nd wen it happn only i knw hw it ws feeling..

Hahaha! 😆😛

loved reading dis demanding nd possesive Raj.

I am happy that you enjoyed the read 😊

U r an Amazing writer.

Thank you so much for the compliment! 😳

Stay blessed!
And keep loving Rajveer-Naina ❤️

Edited by RNpoint1857 - 9 years ago

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