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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Mrumi

So.. finally... it is over..😭😭

I want to confess something.. please don't mind but i like this Point 1857 ka scene more than RNTMB ka scene.. honestly.. I love this more..😳

I can atleast visualize what i couldn't during the show.. his emotions.. his feelings.. his desires.. everything remained incomplete.. he was a brilliant army officer but at the end he lost everything which he truly deserved..

you have described naughty Rajveer which he actually was.. and whenever time came he proved his that side also.. when Naina shot him, that time and actually after that also she behaved really bad with him.. but he never ever changed his focus.. actually if I start i would never stop and you know that..😆😆

so i better stop here.. only one thing.. I like Kabir, Sujal, Varun , Raj.. everyone has his own flaws and they all are perfect with their own flaws... but Captain Rajveer.. he remains always special for me.. and i can experience him better only because of you.. i know, even he has his own flaws.. but love is blind.. 😳.. For me he is perfect without any flaw..😊

so thanks again.. with lots of love and hug🤗

please keep writing😊



So.. finally... it is over..😭😭

Yes! Finally it is over 😊 Nothing to feel sad about! It was just another story 😊

I want to confess something.. please don't mind but i like this Point 1857 ka scene more than RNTMB ka scene.. honestly.. I love this more..😳

First of all, why would I mind 😆 when both are written by me? 😊 Then secondly I never force one to like my works, it's your choice for sure to choose any or the both 😊 I hope I am not sounding rude because I am not being rude, I am smiling as I am writing this. 😃😊
Well I am glad to know that you liked this Point 1857 more than that one. 😳

I can atleast visualize what i couldn't during the show.. his emotions.. his feelings.. his desires.. everything remained incomplete.. he was a brilliant army officer but at the end he lost everything which he truly deserved..

Ya bingo that was my main aim to give to you all what you didn't witnessed in the original series. So that you can visualize those emotions, feelings, desires and everything else. 😊


you have described naughty Rajveer which he actually was.. and whenever time came he proved his that side also..

Hahaha! 😆Yes he was indeed naughty. Yes he indeed proved it! 😊

when Naina shot him, that time and actually after that also she behaved really bad with him.. but he never ever changed his focus..

Yes she was very rude to him, but that was justifiable. The person whom she trusted the most, broke her trust won't she be angry? She was shattered. 😲

actually if I start i would never stop and you know that..😆😆

Never mind I am a very patient listener. 😛😆 Although I am not a very talkative person but I can deal with listening 😉 Feel free to talk up to your satisfaction 😳

I like Kabir, Sujal, Varun , Raj.. everyone has his own flaws and they all are perfect with their own flaws... but Captain Rajveer.. he remains always special for me..

Frankly I love them all too. 😳 And yes for me too Captain Rajveer is special ❤️

and i can experience him better only because of you..


I am really glad to know that 😳 Thank you 😊

so thanks again.. with lots of love and hug

There is nothing to thank about. In fact I am thankful to you for devoting your time to this story and reading it. 😊

please keep writing😊

Will certainly try that. 😊

with lots of love and hug🤗

Lots of love and hug to you too! 🤗❤️
Stay blessed!
❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: yoginisahakari

Hi dear
Wow amazing
Good sweet short fic
Loved it
Pl also complete RN TMB

Love and prayer
Yogini


Thank you so much 😳 Will surely complete RNTMB as well. 😊
❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: anjali03

It was seriously a very different experience when compared to the point 1857 of lrl .. I always wanted to be that moment like u have written .. I must say u have written it better then my imagination... U have expressed the emotions .. the love.. the jealousy.. every thing so will and can say i a very different way .. i loved this ff .. and u r a awesome writer.. keep writing..

Love
Anjali


It was seriously a very different experience when compared to the point 1857 of lrl

Thank you so much! I am glad that you enjoyed it. 😳

I always wanted to be that moment like u have written

Well then I can completely understand how you must have felt after reading this story! ❤️

I must say u have written it better then my imagination...

Really? 👏 I am very happy to know that. Thank you 😊

U have expressed the emotions .. the love.. the jealousy.. every thing so will and can say i a very different way ..

Thank you very much for the compliment 🤗

i loved this ff

Thank you for liking this story

and u r a awesome writer.. keep writing..

Ok I accept I am repeating my words but each word comes straight from my heart! 😳❤️ Thank you so very much for the compliment! 🤗 I am glad you liked my work. It means a lot to me! 😳

Stay blessed
❤️


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: anju_panghal

thanks for this wonderful SS dear..

u r an amazing writer..👏
keep writing..
n also thanks for a new SS on RN bcs its holi..
take care n keep smiling 😊


thanks for this wonderful SS dear..

Oh no problem at all! 😳

u r an amazing writer..👏

Thank you so much for the compliment 😳❤️

keep writing..

Thanks for your blessings and I will surely do that 👍🏼

n also thanks for a new SS on RN bcs its holi..

No problem! I hope you enjoy it too as you enjoyed reading this 😊

take care n keep smiling 😊

You too take good care of yourself and keep smiling 😊

Stay blessed!
❤️



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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: agm1998

Truly amazing

Naina tells him how and when she fell in love with him
She feels shy telling about d mud pool incident
She asks rajveer why he was soo nervous seeing her in d red saree
The love seen in raj's eyes is so innocent and pure
Raj reveals dat he felts bad dat she wore a saree bcz someone else told her
She should only get dressed for him
Loved d way he claims his rights and shows his possessiveness for her
Naina comes to know d intensity of his emotions soo well by his explanation
Great ending dii
Hope u start a new fiction soon


Thank you so much for liking all those parts 😳

Great ending dii

Thank you 😊

Hope u start a new fiction soon

Well as for now I'll complete all my incomplete fics. Then let's see when I write a new one. 😊

Stay blessed
❤️ 🤗


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: anju_panghal

awesome update as usual😊👏

bt khtm ho gyi inni jldi
koi bat ni..i hope u'll start a new ff or SS on raj naina
epilogue was very nice..
raj is so possessive for naina..well ye to hona hi h..koi kisi se itna pyar kaise kr skta h..
thanks for lovely SS
pls start a new ff on raj naina..u r very gud in writing..all d best
tc 😊


awesome update as usual😊👏

Thank you 😊

bt khtm ho gyi inni jldi

Yes it was a short story so it had to end soon! 😊

koi bat ni..i hope u'll start a new ff or SS on raj naina

Well I already have two on going fics on Rajveer-Naina will complete them now 😳

epilogue was very nice..

Thank you so much 😊

raj is so possessive for naina..well ye to hona hi h..koi kisi se itna pyar kaise kr skta h..

Well Rajveer se to ye expected hi hai! ❤️

thanks for lovely SS

Nothing to thank about, I am glad that you enjoyed it! 😊

pls start a new ff on raj naina..

Right now most probably I am taking a break from writing. So may be I won't start a new fic as for now, but will surely complete my other two fics. 😊

all d best
tc 😊

Thank you! All the best to you too for your future. 😊

Stay blessed
❤️



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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: saiaarti

Amazing update...

Raj and naina confessed their love..
Their romance is treat to read... U wrote a way better then what dey showed in show...
I wish u were d writer of dis serial...
I really liked ur story...
It's a treat to read ur story...
I m very sad ur dis story is going to end... I will try miss reading it..
U r a wonderful writer...


Amazing update...

Thank you 😊

Raj and naina confessed their love..

Yes they did at last!

Their romance is treat to read...

I am happy for you 😊


U wrote a way better then what dey showed in show...

Really? Thank you so much! 😳

I wish u were d writer of dis serial...

Hahaha! 😆 lolz... I am blushing 😳

I really liked ur story...

Thank you so much ❤️

It's a treat to read ur story...

Ohhh... glad to know that you liked it this much! 🤗

I m very sad ur dis story is going to end... I will try miss reading it..

Nothing to be sad about! See it's a happy ending here 😳 I wouldn't want my readers to be sad at any cost. 😊 Please be happy and keep smiling! 😃

U r a wonderful writer...

Thank you so much for the compliment. It means a lot to me. 😳

Stay blessed
❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
So... I hope I have replied to all the comments. If I have missed any, you can always let me know. I'll reply straight away. I hope I have replied up to your satisfaction and answered all your queries. Thank you again from bottom of my heart for reading, liking and commenting for this story. Now I shall resume my HOLI fic. Will PM you all as soon as I update that. Till then enjoy, have a great life. And... thank you for being my constant readers. Oh my God! I don't know what else to say. I am smiling and getting emotional simultaneously. Although a short one but it is indeed one of my favorite fanfics that I have written till date. Well I guess I have already shared all this in my note!
Alright I am wrapping up. It was indeed an awesome journey and you all made it awesome. Thank you all of you. Love you all a lot. Stay blessed!




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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: RNpoint1857




OK, let me first clarify that I love all of Rajeev's TV characters apart from Sharim whom I haven't watched.

<font color="#ff0000" size="5">Glad to know that! Well you should watch 'Sunn Leyna' it's a Pakistani serial. Rajeev and Aamna are the leads😊Rajeev as Sharim and Aamna as Visaal😊</font>

I even love Varun Awasthi of TB 9/11, an unsung hero !

<font size="5" color="#ff0000">I also like him, although not a big fan of Varun but I don't hate him either!😊</font>

As for Kabir, I have a soft corner for the man because I found him the most believable of the three. The most real.

<font size="5" color="#ff0000">Yes that I understood already</font>😊

But Varun again was very real.

<font size="5" color="#ff0000">I agree!👍🏼</font>

Sujal too was fallible, made mistakes but his world kinda begun and ended on Kashish.

<font size="5" color="#ff0000">Yes that makes him different from other onscreen lover boys 😊</font>

When it came to Kashish, he cared for none.



<font size="5" color="#ff0000">Very true!</font>



But
both Kabir and Rajveer had a lot riding on them. The expectations of a lot of
people to fulfil and an inner battle of their own to fight !



<font size="5" color="#ff0000">Absolutely they have a tough fight! </font>😉



But
what makes Kabir different to me is, he was one sorted man.. He knew what he
had done to whom, what he should feel guilty about and what he should be
unapologetic about ! He never felt guilty about his unintended infidelity in
his marriage with Shreya but he had confessed about feeling guilty about what
had happened to Tarini bcoz of him.. Again, when he lied to Anu about the
Kashyap case, he was sure that it was the best for her life ! He never felt
guilty for loving Ananya inspire of his association in the Kashyap case.. Or
even his past with Tarini.. Whether right or wrong, the man was sure about what
he was doing.



<font size="4" color="#ff0000">I accept all that. No doubt at all. He is indeed different. A
simple man with flaws of his own 😊 and that makes him so much acceptable
😳</font>


Rajveer on the other hand was a torn man. Torn between his own feelings. Guilty for killing Naveen inspire of knowing that he did the best for him. Guilty for loving Naina.. Trying to mask his feelings all the time.. Its actually that Kabir and Rajveer were very different in how they dealt with their challenges. You really cannot call one as superior but of course one can always like one over the other. Depends on the kind of personality one prefers.


<font color="#ff0000" size="4">See the situation can be seen in two perspectives! First the way you described. Since you prefer Kabeer over Rajveer so here Kabeer is indeed looking better than Rajveer. But now let me put it in my words.</font>

<font face="Helvetica Neue, Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif" color="#ff0000" size="4">See Kabeer had the guts to get into a relationship again although he was divorced! Although Kabeer did try to tell Ananya about her past and she was the one who wasn't ready to listen to hisexplanation. But Kabeer being Kabeer could have easily dominated her and could have told her whateverhe wanted to tell her, only if he really wanted to tell her! If I remember correctly so he even got along with Tarini? But if we talk about Rajveer, he was never exactly serious for Dr. Mishra. It was just kind of tease and may be a little of infatuation. Even if he got engaged to Dr. Mishra it was purely because of his mission, not because he had any feelings for her or stuffs like that. This shows he was more focused than Kabeer.</font>


Guilty for loving Naina.. Trying to mask his feelings all the time..

<font color="#ff0000" size="4">Well I guess it wasn't a normal relationship it was actually between A TEACHER and A STUDENT! Won't he feel a little guilty about it? Then how can he forget he killed her brother in whatever circumstances it might be but still he did kill him! So getting into a relationship with her without letting her know the truth, he couldn't do that. And I guess he must had been fighting inside, deciding to tell the truth. These all could be the reasons for him to mask his feelings all the time. And talking about Kabeer if I am not wrong he did hide about Ananya's father's truth from her. So isn't it the same thing?😊</font>


Its actually that Kabir and Rajveer were very different in how they dealt with their challenges. You really cannot call one as superior but of course one can always like one over the other. Depends on the kind of personality one prefers.

<font color="#ff0000" size="4">Yes true😊I agree👍🏼</font>


Another thing was Kabir's manipulative streak. He dealt with Shreya, Manav and Malvika in his own ways. But Captain sir was more of a straightforward person. Agar those manipulative hote to Bhargava wouldn't have lasted at KMA for long ! He was a thorough gentleman..


<font size="4" color="#ff0000">I am blushing reading this! Yes Rajveer was such a sweet❤️</font>


But I really cannot place one above the other. For me both are very special..

<font color="#ff0000" size="4">I</font><font size="4" color="#ff0000"> can absolutely understand what you want to convey😳It happens sometimes when you can't place one above the other. I guess I feel the same for Sujal and Rajveer.😳</font>

<font size="4" color="#ff0000">Well for the situation here I feel like saying "chehra ek naam anek..."😉</font>

<font size="4" color="#ff0000">
</font>

<font size="4" color="#ff0000">At last done with this reply😆 I loved it!😳❤️</font>

<font size="4" color="#ff0000">Thank you so much for this reply of yours.👏</font>

<font size="4" color="#ff0000">Stay blessed</font>

<font size="4" color="#ff0000">❤️
</font>




And I absolutely loved reading your reply ! 👏 Indeed, chehra ek aur nam anek ! And all roles played with utmost conviction !
One thing I really wanted to say about Tarini, but never really got to say it somewhere.. For me, she's the unsung hero of Reporters. By the end of it, it was only Ronnie who got worshipped by the audience but for me, Tarini stands at the position if not higher ! The moment , the one night stand was revealed, Kabir and Tarini's friendship was belittled but what we forgot was Tarini herself was a case of unrequited love.. Love that ruined everything she had but she couldn't even profess that love to the one she loved ! Ronnie undoubtedly had been an epitome of selflessness but even he had not suffered any professional or personal losses for being in love with Ananya. Tarini on the other hand had been shunned by the society , her career ruined for allowing herself to stand by the person she loved without him even knowing it !
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And I absolutely loved reading your reply ! 👏 Indeed, chehra ek aur nam anek ! And all roles played with utmost conviction !
One thing I really wanted to say about Tarini, but never really got to say it somewhere.. For me, she's the unsung hero of Reporters. By the end of it, it was only Ronnie who got worshipped by the audience but for me, Tarini stands at the position if not higher ! The moment , the one night stand was revealed, Kabir and Tarini's friendship was belittled but what we forgot was Tarini herself was a case of unrequited love.. Love that ruined everything she had but she couldn't even profess that love to the one she loved ! Ronnie undoubtedly had been an epitome of selflessness but even he had not suffered any professional or personal losses for being in love with Ananya. Tarini on the other hand had been shunned by the society , her career ruined for allowing herself to stand by the person she loved without him even knowing it !

I know after reading this reply of mine KAYA fans might feel like throwing stones on me 😉 but anyways MAIN KISI SE NAHI DARTI 😆 lolzz... jokes apart the thing is I always had a fascination for Kabeer-Tarini more than KAYA 😉 if you read my KAYA fanfic I think in KAYA THE FIRST MEETING fanfic I showed holi scene in which I showed a scene between Tarini and Kabeer if I remember correctly, and truth be told I just love that scene 😉 While writing it I was feeling like kash inn dono ka pair hota in the serial 😆 I used to love Tarini's simplicity. She wasn't fake and never showed off. She was sweet and caring. 😳

And I absolutely loved reading your reply !

Glad to know that 😊

Indeed, chehra ek aur nam anek ! And all roles played with utmost conviction !

Absolutely! 👍🏼

One thing I really wanted to say about Tarini, but never really got to say it somewhere.. For me, she's the unsung hero of Reporters. By the end of it, it was only Ronnie who got worshipped by the audience but for me, Tarini stands at the position if not higher !

I felt the same while watching the last few episodes. I was waiting that they'll show at least something about her as well but sadly they didn't. And I don't like this fact even today 😕

The moment , the one night stand was revealed, Kabir and Tarini's friendship was belittled but what we forgot was Tarini herself was a case of unrequited love.. Love that ruined everything she had but she couldn't even profess that love to the one she loved !

I so agree with you. I am actually blushing, knowing that I am not the only one who thought this way. Uuff... seriously I wanted them to show more of them 😕 You know what, I was disappointed with something. See Kabeer treated her as his best friend so did she. They had a one night stand. She had feelings for him then how could he not have feelings for her? I felt it weird! I couldn't accept this fact. It's not that simple to get into a relationship that too a relationship in which you crossed your limits and then act that you are friends JUST FRIENDS and then that girl is actually helping you to get you a girlfriend? Like seriously? Frankly it was difficult for me to digest the fact. 😕

Ronnie undoubtedly had been an epitome of selflessness but even he had not suffered any professional or personal losses for being in love with Ananya.

Frankly they actually didn't deal with topic. It went so smoothly I guess. They showed just a little of it that Ronnie was avoiding her for sometime and then everything went normal. I kind of liked it actually because I used to love their friendship. Just like Alekh and Naina's friendship I respect Ronnie and Ananya's friendship too. 😊

Ronnie undoubtedly had been an epitome of selflessness but even he had not suffered any professional or personal losses for being in love with Ananya. Tarini on the other hand had been shunned by the society , her career ruined for allowing herself to stand by the person she loved without him even knowing it !

This is literally very ironic. You pointed it out too well 👍🏼👏

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